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Name: Sabi Thapa
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Sabi Thapaa   
Jul 4, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing task 2 - Some people say that the Internet is making the world [5]

Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

Now we are in the era of technology, the massive revolution on internet sector help people to connect with each other. I believe that easily available internet and cheaper gadgets indeed enhancing communication between people. Internet added the plus point for the globalization as well as it is supporting to the international trade and other activities, for instance, education & communication.

This world is becoming extremely smaller due to the globalization, the businesses are not confining only in a country's boundary. One of the main reason is swift growing of internet. The distance education is another symbol of evolving of internet & technology. We can easily contact to foreign universities, it does not matter how far you are, we can continue our study from home by attending online classes.

Nowadays, communication is very cheap, everyone has internet access on their gadget. However, by internet, people can easily connect to their friend and family with reasonable price and it is also inexpensive then GSM and land-line phone. Similarly, there are many social sites and messengers, which really help to make new friends from the different parts of the world. They can share their culture, traditions, feelings and emotions by online. Which is indeed help to inception of universal peace and integrates the world in one thread of love. However, some people are misusing this facility and involve in criminal activities such as online bank robbery, Blackmail, frauds and etc.

In conclusion, internet is making the world very smaller and helps to familiar with different communities and culture. Meanwhile, updating personal information on internet and become a friend with unknown people we should be careful and chasing the privacy policies.
Sabi Thapaa   
Jul 4, 2014
Writing Feedback / ielts essay about water shortage [12]

Fresh water scarcity is problem at a staggering rate of growing population. Although water covers seventy percent of the Earth's surface, lack of clean drinking water impacts on billion people every day.

In my view, water scarcity can be attributed to human activities like agriculture and industry. For example, today agricultural irrigation accounts for two thirds of global water use, which is the largest portion of water in consuming.So, depleted was water resources. that they were unable to meet ever stronger demands with agriculture, despite of the fact that water is considered a renewable resource in many parts of the world.
Sabi Thapaa   
Jun 22, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK - 2 Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men [5]

Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.

Now we are in the era of trade, where every individual want to achieve high level position in their work place. However, the most of the organizations prefer male candidates to be managerial level even though there are more than halve of the employees are woman. People think there should be reserve some portion for female. Hence, I believe that the main goal of companies is to earn profit rather than allocating the men and women.

In 21st century, men and women are equally engage to take the responsibilities of business organization and perform as a good team together. To lead the company, employee should have some special qualities. For instance, leadership, communication, and good educational background such kinds of skills are necessary to compete for managerial level position. But the scenario is little different, most of the company prefer male candidates on the higher position. Since, male staffs have adequate time to perform their duties in office. On the other hand, women have more obligations toward their family and our society have very narrow concept towards working woman. They believe that only men can able to handle the financial and decision making part of company.

However, some of the companies have very positive view regarding working women. They give equal priority to women in such higher position. They thought that women can better understand employee emotions and their obstacles, they can motivate them to be honest and enhance the work efficiency. Similarly, women have more perfection and dedication then men towards their work.

In conclusion, men and women are the part of a same coin. They have their own qualities and specialties. I believe that there should not be any discrimination between male and female by their gender on the process of selecting employees. The qualification and abilities should be give as first priority rather than gender.
Sabi Thapaa   
Jun 22, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS - Life in Big Cities Vs People's health [4]

Environment pollution is one of the primary reasonsreason why life in cities is becoming worse than ever before. Exhaust from transportation, especially cars, and factories' tosix fumes can lead people to face with various respiratory deseasesdiseases .
Sabi Thapaa   
Jun 14, 2014
Writing Feedback / In many countries there has been increase in social problems involving teens [6]

In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children. To what extent do you believe this is true?

Nowadays, the youth's participation on community issue has enhanced day by day, some people's believe that massive changes in living standard is one of the main reason for the involvement of juveniles on social issues like alcoholism, enhancing criminal activities, lack of qualified workforce and etc . However, I strongly agree that if parents have less attention and less care towards their children, it will be increasing the chances of teen's involvement on such social issues.

This is the era of modernization, people are spending more time with their work and busy in maintaining their status on society. Among these, they don't have adequate time to monitor children. Consequently, there will be a high chances of bad accompany of friends since they have more freedom. This will insist them to involve on such criminal activities and enhancing the social violence by including in illegal drug, alcoholism, and smoking etc.

Children are the future of country, so parents should provide conducive environment to boost their self confidence and support them to get quality education. As teenager, they are vulnerable emotionally and not ready to take right decision about their life. In such situation, they will not give that much important to their studies and career. However, in near future, the society will face lack of efficient and educated workforce, as a result it will directly effect to the development of country.

In conclusion, parents are the first teacher of children and it's an obligation of guardian to show the correct way and help them to be a part of society. Modernization is demand of time. However; we should not negligence to the children needs, this will affect their growth and increase the social issues. Parent should always give first priority to their children for their bright future and to create civilize society.