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|The energy used for various purposes and the amount of gas emitted in average Australian household
2 - Refer to the number of pie charts and enumerate the divisions seperately for a clear summary overview. Assume the...
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|The population numbers in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon over 60 years
Writing Feedbacknhatdeptrai - Sep 3, 2021 / Holt - Sep 4, 2021
|Toefl writting for beginner: Why go to the university?
2 - There are 2 things that seperate the TOEFL and IELTS essay tests: IELTS requires a prompt restatement + opinion,...
Writing Feedbacktrucanhtran - Sep 3, 2021 / Holt - Sep 4, 2021
|The chart below shows the Japan's population by different age groups 1960-2040
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|The notion that oral transmission is more effective than written language is a matter of controversy
2 - This is unclear in reference to information. Which particular side do you partially agree with? Why? Complete the...
Writing Feedbacklinhlinh2111 - Sep 3, 2021 / Holt - Sep 4, 2021
|The task below shows reasons migrants have for moving from rural to urban areas, in one country
2 - The summary overview needs more work. The writer is required to outline the divisions of the image to inform...
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|WRITING TASK 2: HOW CAN SOMEONE ACHIEVE HAPPINESS?
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|International travel is becoming more and more affordable for everyone, even for the ordinary people
2 - It is important that the writer preserve the original presentation topic by not adding a personal opinion in the...
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|WRITING TASK 1 Given are maps which illustrates the plan change of Islip town and its current layout
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|Residents living in their buildings start researching the history of them
4 - People can easily finding newspapers the workplace to feel proud of it You could read more essays which are...
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|Some people think that video games are really bad and should be completely banned (view 1)
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|What are the advantages and disadvantages of living near work? Use specific reasons and examples to
NEW - living adjacent to the workplace Some people prefer living near the workplace, while others do not. In this...
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|Teaching only academic subjects that will be useful for students' future careers
4 - @NEWBIE LOVE A common structure to follow is - Introduction - View 1 - advantages, examples, problems - View...
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|Argument Essay: The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the ...
3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it! It is true that I have been struggling with better...
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|Essay about whether criminal is a human nature and ways to stop a kid from becoming criminals.
3 - I would like to provide the entire topic : According to scientists, studying the behavior of a 3-year-old child...
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|Many people believe that rather than railways, the authorities should invest their money on roads
2 - The writer has not provided an extent response as representative of his opinion as required for the restatement +...
Writing Feedbackhongtwee - Aug 31, 2021 / Holt - Sep 1, 2021
|Getting new information on the internet is much more popular than reading in books or magazines
2 - The writer has over-extended the restatement + opinion section in an incorrect manner. The paragraph should only reference the...
Writing FeedbackLAnh123 - Aug 31, 2021 / Holt - Sep 1, 2021
|IELTS Cambridge Book 1, Test 3, Writing task 1 - the weekly expenditure on 3 fast food
Writing FeedbackSaraOm - Aug 28, 2021 / ieywa - Sep 1, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2-Essay about citizens should only consume local food and drink
2 - I am not sure what essay topic the writer has developed here. Whatever it is, the presentation is incoherent...
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|The importance of natural talent and training - different levels of ability in sport, art and music
2 - The topic restatement is inaccurate and does not reflect the 2 points of view as referenced in the original...
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|The illustrations detail changes that occurred in the town of Langley from 1910 to 1950
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|Essay about the advantages and disadvantages of having school uniforms
3 - While putting on this might reduce ... ( negative effect change with your opinion, this sentence is to general)...
Writing Feedbackthuylinh2806 - Aug 27, 2021 / Fatimatuzzahro - Aug 31, 2021
|Task 1: The diagram elaborates on the breakdown of making chocolate
2 - The writer does not give an accurate identification of the image provided. Each type of basic description has a...
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|Learning through screens are less beneficial than in a classroom with a group of student
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|IELTS writing task 2: ...To what extent do you think consumers influenced by advertisement?...
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your opinions! Actually I was still confusing about the differences of between advertising,...
Writing Feedbackkoawancha - Aug 30, 2021 / koawancha - Aug 31, 2021
|IETLS: Violence on TV and in games impact negatively on people's manners (Opinion essay)
4 - Hello, You may differ my opinion, but it seems that both your supporting paragraphs tend to lack strong support....
Writing FeedbackBetty2000 - Aug 24, 2021 / Kyaw Ye Thu - Aug 31, 2021
|The sense of competition in children - Writing Task 2 Academic
2 - Discuss both views AND give your personal opinion. The discuss both views aspect is separate from the personal opinion....
Writing FeedbackSo Ri - Aug 29, 2021 / Holt - Aug 31, 2021
|Whether TV channels should balance the time of sport shows for both genders, or not
2 - The writer does not have an established response line for the questions provided. A discussion of pros and cons...
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|The line graph article. IELTS task 1. Railway trips time in UK
2 - The overview presentation is misrepresenting the line graph. The graph represents the number of trips that passengers took. It...
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|Comparisons between the efficiency of studying in class and that of learning online
2 - This extent essay worked quite well in the beginning. Allowing the restatement to deliver a strong opinion basis and...
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|The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.
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|The sales and rentals volume of films in four different categories from 2002 and 2011
3 - @killashaw Hi, I just wanna give a little feedback. If I was you, I would presented one by one...
Writing Feedbackkillashaw - Aug 29, 2021 / ieywa - Aug 30, 2021
|The average proportions in typical meals of three different nutrients in the USA
3 - @maisuonguaena Hi, I think it would be best if you show us the charts, so we would getting confused...
Writing Feedbackmaisuonguaena - Aug 29, 2021 / ieywa - Aug 30, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The graph shows the percentages of people going to cinemas in a country
6 - firstly, you should use more relative clause which makes your report more exciting for example The bar chart illustrates...
Writing Feedbackjaneee - Aug 11, 2021 / thien le - Aug 30, 2021
|Instead of books, the Internet has become one of the main storage of knowledge
Writing Feedbacktranbaotran112 - Aug 24, 2021 / ongong - Aug 30, 2021
|A belief that a country's national budget ought to be used to develop railways rather than roads
3 - @Holt Thanks so much for your great help! Please could you advise which band score this essay can receive...
Writing Feedbackongong - Aug 28, 2021 / ongong - Aug 30, 2021
|The argument over whether local history or world history should be given priority in school
2 - The student makes a compelling restatement of the original topic. His presentation makes the reader think about the validity...
Writing Feedbackthuthaotd123456 - Aug 29, 2021 / Holt - Aug 30, 2021
|Stress has become an ubiquitous phenomenon in society and everyone suffers from it
3 - Hi, I think your writing is great. The vocabularies are academic and also are the structures. The clarity through...
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|Writing task 1 - the chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
Writing Feedbacklinhnpt19 - Aug 27, 2021 / linhnpt19 - Aug 29, 2021
|Writting task 1 for ielts: the percentage of internet users
4 - Moving on, ... 20% more than THAT (=the number of internet users) in Canada, at only about 10%.(I think...
Writing Feedbacknavy83 - Aug 27, 2021 / Goldengoat - Aug 29, 2021
|TASK 2: Contradictory ideas whether organizing international sporting event is advantageous or not
3 - In my opinion, you use a variety of academic words in your essay. However, you should give your opinion...
Writing Feedbackuyenmy2504 - Aug 28, 2021 / Goldengoat - Aug 29, 2021
|Writing task 2: Some people believe that technology has made man more social. Do you agree or not?
4 - In the first sentence, I think you should use either enhance or improve otherwise there will be a redundancy....
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|[ Writing task 1 ] The number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city by gender
4 - Over the period of 20 years, starting in 1995. I think that clause "there were considerable increases" is wrong....
Writing Feedbacktheunknownalex - Aug 24, 2021 / So Ri - Aug 29, 2021
|Percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test
Writing Feedbackaanh1009 - Aug 24, 2021 / aanh1009 - Aug 28, 2021
|IELTS Cambridge Book 1, Test 2, Writing task 1 (Weather forecast)
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|Children are often told that they can conquer everything as long as they do their best
2 - Where exactly did this reference come from? There is no supporting evidence to show that this was prsented...
Writing Feedbackngcamthi1509 - Aug 27, 2021 / Holt - Aug 28, 2021
|IELTS writing task 1-The chart shows portion of men and women who passed the driving test 1980-2010
2 - Tense usage and referencing is a clear problem for this writer. She must review her tense usage lessons and...
Writing FeedbackJuliavang - Aug 27, 2021 / Holt - Aug 28, 2021
|The survey in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones
2 - The writer indicates the plural form of a pie chart, which is pie CHARTS. However, the information provided does...
Writing Feedbackphuongpp - Aug 27, 2021 / Holt - Aug 28, 2021
|Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this?
3 - Oh thanks, but i really don't know how to answer exactly the second question to meet the requirements of...
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|Some people think international sports event is good for the country. Others think it is bad.
2 - Any writer who does not use a discussion outline prior to drafting his response essay will find himself writing...
Writing FeedbackGoldengoat - Aug 26, 2021 / Holt - Aug 28, 2021
|The rates of crime and how these rates altered in three different places in Panama city
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|Space traveling - any influence on people? (Writing Task 2)
2 - For accuracy purposes, avoid making mention of any names in relation to the space program. This is to avoid...
Writing Feedbackzerozero - Aug 26, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|The advent of the Internet cause working from home. Dicuss both advantage and disadvantages
2 - The writer is not being asked to provide a personal opinion pertaining to the topic. This is not a...
Writing Feedbacknhungnhung2004 - Aug 26, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|Businesses' huge marketing systems and money to hire media companies to popularize their products
2 - The restatement is a bit roundabout in presentation but it eventually made it back to the original point. Next...
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|What are the positives and negatives of learning a second language as a child?
2 - It is not a matter of exploring the discussion topic. There was a clear question asked, upon which the...
Writing Feedbackkimngan3110 - Aug 26, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|The proportion of US people who had meals in fast-food restaurants in three separate years
Writing Feedbackjemm - Aug 25, 2021 / SaraOm - Aug 27, 2021
|Help me draw the outline of the essays enclosed in the appendix : Games and life
NEW - Games Teach Us Real Life Lessons The young of most mammals, including humans, likes to play. Scientists claim...
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|The table illustrates the television viewing numbers for tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics
3 - I prefer if you add the countries in the introduction. Please refer this correction as a suggestion. " The...
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|SOP for a mechanical engineering master's at KFUPM
2 - The essay misses out on the whole point of the statement of purpose. What is the purpose of the...
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|Citizens in several parts of the world research the origin of their accommodation buildings
2 - Feng Shui does not have anything to do with the history of the house or building. Feng Shui refers...
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