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|Psychology and health - they both are intricately connected
3 - Steph, there is a bigger and far greater problem in your essay than just the simple structure and missing...
Writing Feedbackmushimushi - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 16, 2019
|IELTS; The advertising has been widespread in the world. A complete restriction necessary?
2 - Tran, good job on the direct response to the extent essay. Further applause is required because you knew well...
Writing FeedbackDung Tran - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 16, 2019
|Advantages and disadvantages when comparing pubic transport with private cars.
6 - @TJLuschen Thanks for your detailed correction. This is actually the second I wrote this sort of "quotation essay", as...
Writing Feedbackgviiivayh - Feb 15, 2019 / gviiivayh - Feb 15, 2019
|IELTS - The controversial law that protects the person who is being accused of a crime.
3 - Thanks TJLuschen! I really agree with your comments. As for the last body paragraph, I probably got distracted and...
Writing Feedbackngokhoa99 - Feb 14, 2019 / ngokhoa99 - Feb 15, 2019
|Young people should learn what the world is doing.
4 - @Lilittt I think you misunderstood the meaning of the word "world's business" in the conclusion, or may be I...
Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - Feb 12, 2019 / trvaanh - Feb 14, 2019
|The older generation tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think, behave
2 - Zichen, you should not wrote more than 300 words for this essay. You do not have enough time to...
Writing Feedbackbobbyw - Feb 13, 2019 / Holt - Feb 13, 2019
|Internet and food - has it improved the way people live?
3 - M'hammed , I am sorry but I cannot continue to review this essay based on the 4 scoring bands....
Writing FeedbackMedKabbaj - Feb 12, 2019 / Holt - Feb 13, 2019
|Discuss the effects of modern technology. IELTS essay
3 - Phan, each type of essay has a specific number of reasoning paragraphs to present in the body of the...
Writing Feedbackcoke - Feb 12, 2019 / Holt - Feb 13, 2019
|Government budget for art is argued by a few as a waste of money - rightly or wrongly?
5 - Yes. A reverse paraphrase represents the new discussion that was created by your reasoning paragraphs, based on the provided...
Writing Feedbackriteshsinha - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 13, 2019
|Technology and Crime Rate - IELTS Writing Task 2- Opinion Essay
2 - I partly agree with the view while I also believe that ... benefit from the technological developments too. enable...
Writing Feedbackthekingmindaugas - Feb 12, 2019 / riteshsinha - Feb 13, 2019
|IELTS: Supermarket versus local community stores
Writing Feedbackriteshsinha - Feb 3, 2019 / eddies - Feb 12, 2019
|Birth control policy - IELTS writing task 2 practice.
3 - Ching, this is a direct question essay, which requires a direct response be delivered to the questions in the...
Writing FeedbackVimini - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 12, 2019
|The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income in five countries over Europe
2 - Pham, please remember that your noun phrase must represent the proper number reference for your item. In this instance,...
Writing Feedbackphamnguyen - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 12, 2019
|What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child's education?
2 - Claudya, you have not followed the correct format for the discussion requirement of the essay. This is an advanced...
Writing Feedbackabclaudya - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 12, 2019
|Experience is the best teacher or reading books is more important?
3 - Hi Holt Thanks for your kindly message I wrote this as an IELTS essay practice, I know it has...
Writing Feedbackparisaaa - Feb 10, 2019 / parisaaa - Feb 11, 2019
|In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of being a member in a large family?
7 - you have to concern about the (s) if it is singular. for instance : The more economy develops, the...
Writing Feedbacksiatina - Feb 10, 2019 / abclaudya - Feb 11, 2019
|Young Leaders or Old Leaders for better business prosperity?
2 - Hello, I've enjoyed reading what you've written but what about your conclusion? I see that you've started your essay...
Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen2002 - Feb 10, 2019 / Ghaidaa - Feb 10, 2019
|The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990.
2 - Hi, I liked your report. Expenditure means spending, so you spend on something, not in or of something, and...
Writing Feedbacklin0208 - Feb 9, 2019 / TJLuschen - Feb 9, 2019
|ielts task 2 : essay about health problems (causes and measures)
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Feb 9, 2019 / TJLuschen - Feb 9, 2019
|The information about integration problems for people (all age groups) moving to other countries.
4 - @Holt thanks for your comments i recognize maybe i depended on models and forgot other factors as sources, measurement,......
Writing FeedbackHammy - Feb 8, 2019 / Hammy - Feb 9, 2019
|Which is more important family or friend
Writing FeedbackPhuongbo - Feb 2, 2019 / lin0208 - Feb 9, 2019
|The line graph elucidates the percentage of inhabitants aged 65 and more in three nations
3 - Ni, you should be more careful with the way you spell and use certain words. Spelling mistakes the wrong...
Writing Feedbacklin0208 - Feb 8, 2019 / Holt - Feb 9, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 2 - comparing talents from birth and trained musicians/athletes..
Writing Feedbackkristieetran - Feb 8, 2019 / Holt - Feb 8, 2019
|Must the newly constructed homes retain the similar architecture with the old houses from this area?
Writing FeedbackDo Ha Thu - Feb 6, 2019 / Holt - Feb 7, 2019
|International help for developing countries - what kind of help is the most needed? / IELTS essay
6 - Hi there, I have some opinions about your essays. Hopefully, It helps. Your writing appeared to have had...
Writing FeedbackViktoriaKaliu - Jan 23, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Feb 5, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK2: Advertising Discourages Personalities
2 - Ziming, congratulations on writing a very well developed paraphrase of the original prompt, as well as the fantastically accurate...
Writing FeedbackZiming82222 - Feb 3, 2019 / Holt - Feb 4, 2019
|Goods delivered in the United Kingdom by 4 different methods of transport in the period of 1974-2002
Writing Feedbacklin0208 - Feb 3, 2019 / Holt - Feb 4, 2019
|IELTS task 2 - It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places.
4 - Sun, the first thing that i noticed with this essay is that you failed to properly address the task...
Writing Feedbackg890714 - Feb 2, 2019 / Holt - Feb 3, 2019
|IELTS 2: Grouping students in regard to their behaviour
4 - @gbhanjana Thank you for your assessment. I will try to improve on the points you have mentioned....
Writing Feedbackriteshsinha - Jan 29, 2019 / riteshsinha - Feb 3, 2019
|Restrict drivers to drive to large cities.
Writing FeedbackHanNguyen0510 - Jan 30, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Jan 31, 2019
|IELTS writing task 1. The topic is about speed cameras.
2 - Ngo, you have written too many words for this essay. You will lose editing time when you write more...
Writing Feedbackngothanhnam2211 - Jan 30, 2019 / Holt - Jan 31, 2019
|IELTS 2 - The values have been replaced with social status and wealth in how people see others
4 - Fitri, please make sure that you always spell your words properly using the United Kingdom version of the word...
Writing FeedbackLegecy - Jan 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 29, 2019
|IELTS 2: Getting into a profession on the grounds of gender is not at all acceptable.
4 - Ramus, this essay will receive an automatic failing score because you have written less than the 250 minimum word...
Writing Feedbackraamusaatheesh - Jan 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 29, 2019
|IELTS Essay: In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem
4 - Geetika, there is no such reference as "past one decade". The correct term is "past decade". A decade covers...
Writing Feedbackgbhanjana - Jan 27, 2019 / Holt - Jan 28, 2019
|Write a paragraph about mathematics
4 - it is a quite clear paragraph, maybe you could add some words to make the whole process cohesive. Like...
Writing Feedbackmaithanhthuy - Jan 23, 2019 / youngnmax - Jan 27, 2019
|High salary or a good work atmosphere. Discursive Essay IELTS
Writing FeedbackIoneskoanna - Jan 23, 2019 / Ioneskoanna - Jan 26, 2019
|Modern communication have transformed people's time to contact with their friends
4 - There are many grammatical errors and wrong word choices . I'd suggest you to strengthen your language first before...
Writing FeedbackBaovan0811 - Jan 18, 2019 / Yaq - Jan 25, 2019
|Whether a leader is supposed to be young or old should depend on various factors
5 - Avoid using any informal expressions such as " pros and cons", "in a nutshell " Your position is...
Writing Feedbackspeedkevin - Jan 16, 2019 / Yaq - Jan 25, 2019
|The extinction of animal species such as land and marine animals results from human activities IELTS
3 - Huu,, as a direct question essay, you are required to present your simplified response to both questions, in this...
Writing FeedbackPear45 - Jan 23, 2019 / Holt - Jan 24, 2019
|Nowadays, going abroad for studying has been more and more popular, also among Vietnamese students
3 - Hello Margaret, The essay is very good as it addresses all part of the question. Most ideas are given...
Writing FeedbackMargaret 2019 - Jan 15, 2019 / xuancuong - Jan 22, 2019
|Group study or self-study, which is better?
7 - When presented with a the above instruction for the discussion, you must present each point of view as an...
Writing Feedbacksandholly - Jan 19, 2019 / Holt - Jan 21, 2019
|Skills of any individual cannot be observed by his appearance.
Writing Feedbackpiyush_anand - Jan 13, 2019 / piyush_anand - Jan 20, 2019
|Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed
Writing Feedbacknhieu18082001 - Jan 17, 2019 / sandholly - Jan 19, 2019
|The characteristics of society and studying major cities
2 - Manish, I believe you have written an essay that could fall within the baseline score of 4. I have...
Writing FeedbackManish766492 - Jan 17, 2019 / Holt - Jan 18, 2019
|The chart below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
2 - Quoc, the good news is that you wrote the perfect number of words for this report to gain maximum...
Writing FeedbackSherk - Jan 17, 2019 / Holt - Jan 18, 2019
|Ielts Writing Task 1 line graph: Crude oil prices US dollars per barrel
Writing Feedbackhallynguyen13579 - Jan 15, 2019 / Sherk - Jan 17, 2019
|E-market has become an ever-increasing trend and gradually overtaken in-store shopping. Pros & cons.
2 - Duong, without the prompt, I cannot assess the responsiveness of your essay. So this review will only be based...
Writing Feedbackthuduong19 - Jan 16, 2019 / Holt - Jan 17, 2019
|Effects of technology (impact on users and on different industries). 250 word essay
4 - @mona21khan There are quite a lot grammatical mistakes in your writing, for example its discovery it is well-known for...
Writing Feedbackmona21khan - Jan 12, 2019 / thuduong19 - Jan 16, 2019
|Writing IELTS task 1 - the variation in types of food which, were consumed by Europian people
Writing Feedbacktramanh - Jan 15, 2019 / tramanh - Jan 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2. Encouraging children to live separately from parents
3 - Anna, the discussion you have presented does not properly represent the dual point of view and personal opinion discussion....
Writing FeedbackIoneskoanna - Jan 15, 2019 / Holt - Jan 15, 2019
|The school curriculum - sport activities for students?
2 - Nguyen, good work with the paraphrase and response. Bad work adding the reasoning sentence at the end. Remember, if...
Writing Feedbacktinhnguyen - Jan 14, 2019 / Holt - Jan 15, 2019
|There are many instances nowadays where younger individuals are becoming increasingly popular
2 - Frooti, you should always remember to change the verb form after an auxiliary presentation. So when you say "a...
Writing FeedbackFrooti - Jan 13, 2019 / Holt - Jan 14, 2019
|Speaking essay about FAMILY - the most important thing of your life
3 - Quang, the essay lacks a proper introduction for every family member. Remember that you are introducing your parents to...
Writing Feedbackquangduy2110 - Jan 12, 2019 / Holt - Jan 13, 2019
|PROS AND CONS OF TRAVELLING TO REMOTE NATURAL ENVIRONMENT
Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen2002 - Jan 10, 2019 / linhnguyen2002 - Jan 13, 2019
|Technology in Education Programs is the Future? - IELTS WRITING TASK2
3 - Your introduction does need to be tweaked a little bit beginning with the omission of '"nowadays". Also, I think...
Writing FeedbackRosi akira - Jan 12, 2019 / charleto9 - Jan 12, 2019
|IETLS Task2: The power of advertising, and its influence on consumer buying - agree or disagree
Writing FeedbackJean Lin - Jan 11, 2019 / Jean Lin - Jan 12, 2019
|Online courses in university vs campus classes - impacts on students' learning outcomes
2 - Pham, this being your first post at this forum, I would like to focus first on the most common...
Writing Feedbacktonystark - Jan 11, 2019 / Holt - Jan 12, 2019
|Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspaper and TV should be banned.
3 - Thank you Mr./Mrs. Holt for your precious assessment. In my next essays, I will pay more attention to the...
Writing Feedbackpanzerwarfare - Jan 10, 2019 / panzerwarfare - Jan 11, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUES AND SOLUTIONS
Writing FeedbackRed Moon - Jan 8, 2019 / RIA123 - Jan 11, 2019
|SHARING INFORMATION IN SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH, BUSINESS - DISSCUSS AND GIVE OPINION
2 - Hoang, the prompt for this essay asks you to discuss both public points of view first. You are required...
Writing Feedbackcb25288 - Jan 10, 2019 / Holt - Jan 11, 2019
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