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|Why is cycling not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
2 - You are being asked 2 direct questions at the end of the original prompt. You are required to give...
Writing Feedbackthiendep123 - Mar 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 8, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2 - THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH POLITICAL ACTIONS TO STOP GLOBAL WARMING
6 - Hi @juliachung As far as I know, the primary cause for global warming is not overconsumption of plastic...
Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 21, 2021 / LadyOfClockwork - Apr 7, 2021
|Universities should focus on specialist subject - this is a much better choice. IELTS Writing task 2
5 - Hi @CBQ. I'd love to discuss the sentence "it leads to undergraduates' poor motivation..." I don't think the...
Writing FeedbackCBQ - Mar 24, 2021 / LadyOfClockwork - Apr 7, 2021
|Is society's overall success more important than individual well being?
Writing Feedbackanubhavkaro - Apr 1, 2021 / Holt - Apr 2, 2021
|Writing task 1 the alteration of country's export of several products for one year from 2015
2 - Your information in the first sentence is incorrect. First of all, there are two images represented, a table chart...
Writing FeedbackNMU123 - Mar 29, 2021 / Holt - Mar 30, 2021
|Self-employment became popular among the majority of people. Why is that?
Writing FeedbackMsC - Mar 25, 2021 / MsC - Mar 29, 2021
|To afford a house instead of renting one is tremendously essential for people in some nations
3 - @Holt Firstly, I want to thank you for giving me those comments. Secondly, I want to make this clear....
Writing Feedbackgiangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021 / giangkc1811 - Mar 29, 2021
|Possibility of space tourism and its impact on astronomic
Writing Feedbackphong4703 - Mar 29, 2021 / Holt - Mar 29, 2021
|Writing task 1: The chart show households in renting and owning accomocation in English and Wales
NEW - Houses owned vs rented 1918-2011 The chart illustrates how purchasing and renting houses of people in England and...
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|Going to school or homeschooling
5 - The way that you are using to divide your essay is inappropriate. There should not be just one sentence...
Writing Feedbackmiraitowa - Mar 19, 2021 / giangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021
|NZ International businesses - Is this a well thought out Introduction and Thesis Statement
2 - You cannot jump from first to last without representing the discussion topics in between. You have the right idea,...
Writing Feedbackkartstar113 - Mar 27, 2021 / Holt - Mar 28, 2021
|Future people will not buy printed newspaper or books, they will read everything they want online
3 - Hi, I think you could diversify your presentation by using synonyms for 'printed newspaper" instead of the word itself....
Writing FeedbackHodiep - Mar 23, 2021 / LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
|The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in million tonnes from four different sectors
5 - Hi. As a reader, I'm not happy with the "enormous change" sentence. First, I think you could make...
Writing Feedbackngockhanh181107 - Mar 19, 2021 / LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
|Some are born with talents. Some are not. But an appropriate approach can help.
2 - You have an almost perfect presentation here. The only problem, is that you used your personal opinion as a...
Writing Feedbackhungprovip0089 - Mar 25, 2021 / Holt - Mar 26, 2021
|Topic: Some people believe that children are required to obey the rules of their parents and teacher
2 - A prompt restatement is always helped by a clear opinion being presented at the end of the final thesis...
Writing Feedbackthanhvo - Mar 25, 2021 / Holt - Mar 26, 2021
|My Demon - The verdict of my diagnoses
NEW - THE VERDICT The pain in my shoulder had not changed by the time of my appointment with Dr. Reed....
Writing Feedbackmjdmartin - Mar 24, 2021 / — -
|In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family
2 - There is an unnecessary discussion point in your restatement. The part about the main reasons why people would spare...
Writing FeedbackTri An - Mar 23, 2021 / Holt - Mar 24, 2021
|New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers
3 - Thanks for your feedback. 1. I totally agree with exceeded word limit comment. I will work on limiting it...
Writing Feedbackdipsy07 - Mar 22, 2021 / dipsy07 - Mar 24, 2021
|Discuss both views: joining university or leave school to get a job
4 - @lynguyen2912 Here's a structure you can use for this which works everytime with this question prompt: INTRO: Restate...
Writing Feedbacklynguyen2912 - Mar 21, 2021 / Ahmed adobewan - Mar 23, 2021
|Personal Essay: History - a concept, theory, or topic you have explored.
2 - You told the reviewer what topic is of interest to you. It was explained quite well. The reason you...
Writing FeedbackPocket Friend - Mar 22, 2021 / Holt - Mar 23, 2021
|SHOW HOW THE WORLD HAS CHANGED SINCE THE INVENTION OF THE MOBILE PHONE
2 - If I am right and the original prompt of this essay was based on how people's interaction has changed...
Writing FeedbackNguyenMy19055 - Mar 22, 2021 / Holt - Mar 23, 2021
|The line chart below shows the percentage of Internet users in 3 countries from 1999 to 2009
2 - - What kind of graph? Be specific. The reader cannot see the image. Show your familiarity with the...
Writing Feedbackngockhanh1811 - Mar 22, 2021 / Holt - Mar 22, 2021
|Writing task 1 - the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 to 2006
2 - You still have room to make the report more informative. You have only written 169 words. The target word...
Writing Feedbackvanhoa - Mar 21, 2021 / Holt - Mar 22, 2021
|An argument about whether the country should be the host for a worldwide sports event or not
3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Can I ask you what is the right pattern for comparative discussion? I'm quite...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngocanhthu - Mar 20, 2021 / nguyenngocanhthu - Mar 21, 2021
|Writing task 1 - Safety condition of endangered plants and their different living places
2 - For starters, you are not writing enough words to merit a high TA score. While the minimum word count...
Writing Feedbackpeter4904 - Mar 21, 2021 / Holt - Mar 21, 2021
|Usage of margarine, butter, low fat and reduced spreads - IELTS TEST
2 - - Ending when? The information is incomplete. The summary must include the start and end date of the...
Writing Feedbackalexrussso - Mar 20, 2021 / Holt - Mar 21, 2021
|iELTS essay about the internet which has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years
4 - Hi friend, I have taught that we should avoid using generalization in the essay. "nobody can deny the fact...
Writing Feedbackhphnngcquan - Mar 18, 2021 / juliachung - Mar 20, 2021
|IELTS Writing task 2 - Discussion - The effects of international tourism to local countries
2 - Good work on the 2 restatement sentences. You covered the interpretation excellently. However, the need for the thesis statement...
Writing Feedbackbeloyal - Mar 19, 2021 / Holt - Mar 20, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2 - WHAT ARE THE CHALLENGES WHEN MOVING TO NEW PLACES AND STRATEGIES
2 - Yes, you wrote it within 40 minutes. However, you are still over explaining and using useless sentences that do...
Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 18, 2021 / Holt - Mar 19, 2021
|Some people believe that owning a home is more important than renting one.
3 - Hi friend, firstly, I believe to get a higher band, your introduction should be paraphrased, not copied from the...
Writing Feedbackcecilisabella - Mar 14, 2021 / juliachung - Mar 18, 2021
|Museums and art galleries are not needed today, because of technology
3 - Hi Long231312, I think there has been an unclear idea in your statement. Although you claim to be partially...
Writing FeedbackLong231312 - Mar 18, 2021 / juliachung - Mar 18, 2021
|IELTS General Writing Task 1: Seaside Hotel Booking
4 - Dear All, I took some online course and tried to rewrite this part 1. I believe my writing still...
Writing Feedbackroy_leung - Mar 5, 2021 / roy_leung - Mar 17, 2021
|Nowadays many ecosystems in the world are experiencing problems
2 - - Whose extinction? What is this discussion about? What is the purpose of this essay? The original prompt...
Writing Feedbackpeggyhan - Mar 16, 2021 / Holt - Mar 17, 2021
|fossil fuels are the main sources of energy,alternative energy should be encouraged for used
2 - The original prompt for this essay asks if you think this is a positive or negative development. Since your...
Writing Feedbackminhngan - Mar 16, 2021 / Holt - Mar 17, 2021
|The potential damage for children when they are overusing computers. Write 250words
3 - Sorry, an important exam of mine is coming and I have to prepare quickly by writing two simultaneously. Thanks...
Writing FeedbackBlackrain - Mar 15, 2021 / Blackrain - Mar 16, 2021
|Traffic jams and traffic accidents are big problems in Vietnam
2 - This is a 4 paragraph essay that utilizes only 2 reasoning paragraphs. One for the causes and one for...
Writing FeedbackBlackrain - Mar 15, 2021 / Holt - Mar 16, 2021
|The difference between men and women who did daily physical activity in Australia
NEW - fit people in aUSTRALIA The bar chart provides information about how difference between men and women who live...
Writing Feedbackchunxmi - Mar 15, 2021 / — -
|From a long time psychologists claim that colors can affect people's feelings. IELTS 2
3 - Hi, I think to strengthen your argument, you need to give some counter argument first then your rebuttal. Maybe...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Mar 5, 2021 / juliachung - Mar 15, 2021
|IELTS writing 2 - Topic: pros and cons of public transport
2 - You are not being asked to discuss why public transportation is so popular and some negatives of using it....
Writing Feedbackbaochau123 - Mar 14, 2021 / Holt - Mar 15, 2021
|IELTS TASK 1; The rate of employed British people based on genders in various working fields in 2005
Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 14, 2021 / juliachung - Mar 15, 2021
|Do you like living with wealthy people or those who come from different social class?
3 - The writing might be too short for some people, like me. You should demonstrate more aspects of the problems...
Writing Feedbacklogin - Mar 8, 2021 / Blackrain - Mar 15, 2021
|Spending money just when earn it or saving them for some future plans?
3 - @yasinb1377 hi there, "... but also learns us how ..." i think in this sentence it better for you...
Writing Feedbackyasinb1377 - Mar 7, 2021 / baochau123 - Mar 14, 2021
|Due to the development of the internet our life has improved, but users may face some problems
3 - @Lilychau382 hi there, i think you should use :" children use internet excessively" and "people should use it in...
Writing FeedbackLilychau382 - Mar 12, 2021 / baochau123 - Mar 14, 2021
|Fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
4 - Hi @grassil, I think you have misunderstood the main point of the question. It is to prove which side...
Writing Feedbackgrassil - Mar 13, 2021 / juliachung - Mar 14, 2021
|IELTS Writing 2 - Rich Countries aid to Poorer Countries
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I just wondering if my conclusion is clear enough? In your opinion, will I...
Writing FeedbackFarfarisca - Mar 14, 2021 / Farfarisca - Mar 14, 2021
|Child care from centers or blood relatives
2 - You have presented an opinion in the first sentence that is not part of the original prompt presentation. You...
Writing Feedbackmeomeomeodhsa - Mar 13, 2021 / Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|IELTS Task 2 - A majority of mature people are preferring to live with their families
2 - Wow! 496 words, way over the number of words that you can actually write within the 40 minute time...
Writing FeedbackSophienguyen - Mar 13, 2021 / Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|The boss very important do work
2 - A formally written essay / sentence never begins with the conjunction "because". That is due to the word more...
Writing Feedbackchauthang5995 - Mar 13, 2021 / Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|IELTS essay about advantages and disadvantages of changing career.
Writing Feedbackbaochau123 - Mar 12, 2021 / Farfarisca - Mar 14, 2021
|[WRITING 2 IELTS] In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. Ageing societies.
2 - In the restatement sentence, do not mention "fact" since there is no reference to such in the original prompt....
Writing Feedbackainekuraine1134 - Mar 12, 2021 / Holt - Mar 12, 2021
|The high volume of traffic - the numbers of cars, motorbikes are increasing significantly
2 - In your desire to immediately respond to the question, you changed the discussion topic from: OT: In cities...
Writing Feedbackzanzan295 - Mar 11, 2021 / Holt - Mar 12, 2021
|Problem and Solution essay - diet / lifestyle
2 - Presenting 324 words may prove to be a problem for you during the actual test that only allows for...
Writing FeedbackTino2307 - Mar 11, 2021 / Holt - Mar 12, 2021
|The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
2 - Remember that you are reporting based on an image that the reader will not be able to see. Therefore,...
Writing FeedbackThao Vy - Mar 10, 2021 / Holt - Mar 11, 2021
|It is unreasonable to say that a wild animal has no place in the 21st century. IELTS 2
4 - Hi! I would like to have some feedbacks on your writing. 1/ You should never write about others'...
Writing Feedbackkakangocthien109 - Mar 6, 2021 / phatblack - Mar 11, 2021
|Should governments impose more tax on fast food to avoid health problems on people - IELTS Writing 2
Writing FeedbackNgocHuy1707 - Mar 10, 2021 / NgocHuy1707 - Mar 10, 2021
|Are consultants required in companies or should they simply listen to their employees?
2 - Scoring = Premium Service. Please contact us privately. Student Scoring = Ban! The discussion itself lends highly credible...
Writing Feedbacka1shverma - Mar 10, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Describe a memorable celebration that I never forget
2 - The use of simple English in this presentation is good. The simplicity of your language presentation makes the topic...
Writing Feedbackzenybt - Mar 10, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|The best food in the world IELTS Task 2 Academic
2 - It appears that you are immediately discussing the topic that was provided for the task. Which is good but,...
Writing Feedbackjessie138 - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|IELTS - Writing Task 2 - Home Owning is by far more popular than House Renting
Writing Feedbackquykhoaa - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Museums and art galleries? Everyone can observing artifacts and artistic creations in the internet
2 - Having written only 259 words, I do not feel like you have fully reached the potential of this essay...
Writing FeedbackLinhh2407 - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 9, 2021
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