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|IELTS1- the forecast increase in world oil production
3 - @s410377088 Hello, these are my comments which perhaps offer improvement for your writing. 1. Your overview is overload because...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Oct 6, 2019 / Ali20 - Oct 8, 2019
|IELTS - the amounts of waste produced by three corporations from 2000 to 2015
3 - @vancandoit Hi, there. I would like to give you some advice about your introduction and overall. 😁 1....
Writing Feedbackvancandoit - Oct 2, 2019 / roswita116 - Oct 7, 2019
|Should schools be entertaining or educating?
4 - Hi renzito, I think there're some aspects you need to work on more to make your essay better. ...
Writing Feedbackrenzito - Oct 2, 2019 / athachng2002 - Oct 7, 2019
|"media have a greater influence over people's lives than politician" What is greater influence
3 - Hi~ I think your opinion is quite clear from your first and last paragraph, but I just feel it's...
Writing Feedbackanne127 - Sep 28, 2019 / Asphodel - Oct 7, 2019
|Tendency to replace old products with the new ones. Why?
3 - Hi Maria, Thank you for your feedback. It has certainly boosted my confidence and proved that I am...
Writing Feedbackloveya - Oct 5, 2019 / loveya - Oct 7, 2019
|Will the children benefit from the additional income? Or will they lack support from their parents?
2 - Okay, first things first, I will like you to correct some grammatical errors in your write up. For example...
Writing Feedbacktheamazingshao - Oct 6, 2019 / Xphire99 - Oct 6, 2019
|The bar - the percentage of Australian working out
3 - 1. The bar graph "depicts" the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular exercises in 2010. -->your first...
Writing Feedbackbagongcamen - Oct 5, 2019 / s410377088 - Oct 6, 2019
|Governments ought to allocate their budget to railways rather than roads
4 - @sharkonguyen Hey, welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing; I hope it helps! First...
Writing Feedbacksharkonguyen - Oct 1, 2019 / Maria - Oct 3, 2019
|The Red River Delta And Reasons Why It Is An Ideal Place For Rice-exporting
2 - @Havanle Hey, welcome back to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors. If it...
Writing FeedbackHavanle - Oct 3, 2019 / Maria - Oct 3, 2019
|IELTS - public transport, money on faster or other priorities
2 - @thunguyen92 Hi there. Thanks for approaching us again! I'll be happy to assist you in going through this essay....
Writing Feedbackthunguyen92 - Oct 2, 2019 / Maria - Oct 3, 2019
|The table illustrates data about changes in types of travel in Britain over a 15-year period
3 - @Maria Hi Maria, can you further explain the meaning of 'For instance, the introductory phrasing of the first paragraph's...
Writing Feedbackalice1426 - Sep 29, 2019 / alice1426 - Oct 3, 2019
|Many children these day have an unhealthy lifestyle - it's the government problem
3 - this is no academic essay , your 1 paragraphs should introduce the topic and refine the question + your...
Writing FeedbackAnh Pham - Oct 2, 2019 / renzito - Oct 3, 2019
|How the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the minute information on the climate
3 - Thank for your most trustable feedback@Maria Even when I'm writing the body of this task, I still get confused...
Writing Feedbackkatori - Oct 2, 2019 / katori - Oct 3, 2019
|Benefits vs drawbacks - start their own business instead of working for company or organization
Writing Feedbacktandat - Sep 29, 2019 / renzito - Oct 2, 2019
|Nowadays modern people can lead a much longer life. How this phenomenon can be judged?
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Oct 1, 2019 / renzito - Oct 2, 2019
|The proportion of people in Australia who did physical exercises frequently
Writing Feedbackvanmaianh - Oct 1, 2019 / vanmaianh - Oct 2, 2019
|People act differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree or not?
4 - 'people act differently when ...' should be replaced by ' people show strange behaviour because of the different clothes...
Writing FeedbackGlearning - Sep 30, 2019 / julius234 - Oct 2, 2019
|IELTS/ TASK 2/ Advertisements are good or bad for the society
2 - The first sentence of the second paragraph should be "on the one hand" "parents always ... thing which is...
Writing Feedbackjulius234 - Oct 1, 2019 / thunguyen92 - Oct 1, 2019
|Famous sports athletes should earn a lot of money
2 - @renzito Hey, welcome once again. I'm here to provide you with feedback on this essay. I hope this somehow...
Writing Feedbackrenzito - Sep 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|Child- caring should be handle by relatives or child- caring centres. Discuss and give opinion
2 - @conchocon Hi, welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes helpful to your learning of English. If you...
Writing Feedbackconchocon - Sep 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|Intro Paragraph of a Pros and Cons of Globalization essay help
2 - @Invisibledemon Hey there, welcome to the forum. Globalization does not need to be capitalized firstly. Others have done...
Writing FeedbackInvisibledemon - Sep 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|Computer technology. Work and study from home. Positive or negative?
2 - @thunguyen92 Hey, welcome to the forum! I'm here to provide you with feedback on your writing. I hope this...
Writing Feedbackthunguyen92 - Sep 29, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|Essay camparion the influence of family and friends on teenagers
2 - @Kewtkewt Hey, welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes helpful for you while you are learning. Don't...
Writing FeedbackKewtkewt - Sep 28, 2019 / Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather punished
4 - @pavant96 "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" is a question that already gives you one view and...
Writing Feedbackpavant96 - Sep 28, 2019 / alice1426 - Sep 29, 2019
|IELTS task1 / Bar Chart / Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activities
Writing Feedbackalice1426 - Sep 27, 2019 / alice1426 - Sep 29, 2019
|What is the difference between work and fun?
4 - @ayumiike Hey, welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback helps you in your writing endeavors. If it does...
Writing Feedbackayumiike - Sep 26, 2019 / Maria - Sep 27, 2019
|How to obtain the practice license in Vietnam
3 - @Maria Many thanks Maria, I really appreciate your feedback, It's very clear and helpful, And could you give me...
Writing FeedbackDoMinhTam - Sep 23, 2019 / DoMinhTam - Sep 27, 2019
|The birth, death and the population growths of Scotland in 1940 with projection towards 2020
4 - @Thaophuoc Hi there. Besides describing the three lines separately in 3 paragraphs, you can also make comparison between the...
Writing FeedbackThaophuoc - Sep 26, 2019 / alice1426 - Sep 27, 2019
|IELTS task1 / Bar Chart / Destination of UK graduates and postgraduates after leaving college
Writing Feedbackalice1426 - Sep 25, 2019 / alice1426 - Sep 27, 2019
|The maps illustrate three prospective positions for constructing a new hypermarket in Pellington
Writing FeedbackHarleydao - Sep 26, 2019 / alice1426 - Sep 27, 2019
|IELTS/ TASK 2/ More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past
Writing Feedbackjunskku - Sep 27, 2019 / junskku - Sep 27, 2019
|IELTS 2 - The importance of age among candidates for crucial positions in governments
2 - @roseat88 Welcome. We always love having new people join the forum. If any of this feedback resonates with you,...
Writing Feedbackroseat88 - Sep 25, 2019 / Maria - Sep 26, 2019
|Task 1/Bar chart/ Australian men and woman who exercised frequently in 2010
Writing Feedbackwinniethepooh - Sep 20, 2019 / winniethepooh - Sep 26, 2019
|IELTS WRITING- Pie chart- electricity Generation
2 - @Khanh1234 Hey, welcome to the forum. If you find this feedback helpful, you are more than welcome to come...
Writing FeedbackKhanh1234 - Sep 23, 2019 / Maria - Sep 26, 2019
|Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions
2 - "generally accepted" "tourists" remember the "s" "Aim of visiting..." Just write " Therefore, the increase in ticket prices for...
Writing Feedbackrenzito - Sep 26, 2019 / Thaophuoc - Sep 26, 2019
|People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (new experiences, career)
3 - "provide people with an ideal..." "to get information from" Let consider my sentence "Whereas, in universities and colleges, with...
Writing Feedbackthao03 - Sep 24, 2019 / Thaophuoc - Sep 26, 2019
|A rising trend nowadays that urban residents live in small families instead of large families
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Aug 8, 2019 / renzito - Sep 26, 2019
|Lawbreakers, who haven't committed serious crimes, ought to be assigned non remuneration social work
2 - @mathew123 Hey! I hope that the feedback you receive here becomes beneficial for your learning and grasping of...
Writing Feedbackmathew123 - Sep 22, 2019 / Maria - Sep 24, 2019
|IMPROVED MEDICAL CARE HELPS THAT PEOPLE ARE LIVING LONGER AND LIFE EXPECTANCY IS INCREASING
2 - @Trieu Duong Hey, welcome to the forum. I hope that you learn something from this essay for your future...
Writing FeedbackTrieu Duong - Sep 22, 2019 / Maria - Sep 23, 2019
|Essay about education with the on-screen sources
2 - Hello I have some suggestions for you. Firstly, it seems that the question and the content of your...
Writing FeedbackThanhquyen - Sep 22, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Sep 23, 2019
|Writing Ielts - the amount of money spent on books in different countries from 1995 to 2005
Writing FeedbackEstelle133 - Sep 22, 2019 / Estelle133 - Sep 23, 2019
|IELTS 2: Constructing a rapid railway system or improving the existing mass transportation?
3 - @Maria Thank you for your kind suggestion! I really appreciate that. However, can you please give me more...
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Sep 7, 2019 / rivathh - Sep 23, 2019
|My Friendship - a setback that you have faced. How did you resolve it? - CBEST
Writing FeedbackNorbsidy - Sep 19, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 23, 2019
|Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal, eg. cooperative skills
2 - Lack of cohesion and lexical resource observed, to get higher band more complex structure is required. Conclusion needs more...
Writing Feedbackvanhung1234 - Sep 22, 2019 / mathew123 - Sep 22, 2019
|Your family - who are you most similar to, what it takes to be a good parent?
2 - For speaking practice it is better to record your script in mobile and listen it again and again. Writting...
Writing Feedbackmyduyen95hv - Sep 22, 2019 / mathew123 - Sep 22, 2019
|Why do so many road accidents occur in Vietnam. What do you think of some possible effects.
Writing Feedbackphuongvn98 - Sep 21, 2019 / phuongvn98 - Sep 22, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Writing - Compulsory military service for unemployed youth
3 - Hi! I think this topic is needed care, which you took interest. If you have more time, you should...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Sep 21, 2019 / Estelle133 - Sep 22, 2019
|Compare the influence between parents and friends on teenagers
2 - @hoanglinh0510 Hey, welcome. As I always tell others, I hope this feedback becomes helpful for you. Don't hesitate to...
Writing Feedbackhoanglinh0510 - Sep 21, 2019 / Maria - Sep 21, 2019
|Who should be responsible for teaching children good manners: school or family?
2 - @thuonglt Hello there. Welcome to the site! Since you are new here, feel free to venture and interact with...
Writing Feedbackthuonglt - Sep 21, 2019 / Maria - Sep 21, 2019
|Life has become more stressful. As a result, stress-related illnesses are on the increase
2 - @phuong1604 Hey, dear. Welcome here. I hope that you find the feedback you are looking for in this forum....
Writing Feedbackphuong1604 - Sep 21, 2019 / Maria - Sep 21, 2019
|COMPARE TRADITIONAL - MODERN FAMILY IN VIETNAM
2 - @mimichangchang Hey, welcome! I hope that you appreciate this feedback. If you like what you see in this forum,...
Writing Feedbackmimichangchang - Sep 20, 2019 / Maria - Sep 21, 2019
|In the past museums stored information about culture and history. Nowadays everything is online.
Writing FeedbackMaaposman - Sep 19, 2019 / quavius - Sep 21, 2019
|Holiday in Vietnam - writing ielts 4.5
Writing FeedbackLinlincoi - Sep 20, 2019 / Linlincoi - Sep 21, 2019
|Writing Ielts - Chart about the figure for urban people in developed regions and developing regions
2 - @Estelle133 Hi, there. I would like to advise you some tips about your IELTS writing. 1. Be careful...
Writing FeedbackEstelle133 - Sep 20, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 21, 2019
|The unemployment level in Australia 2012 (IELTS Writing Task 1)
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Sep 12, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 21, 2019
|Writing IELTS Task 1/Bar chart/ Economic sectors in the UK in the 20th century
2 - The bar graph compares the percentages of each of three sectors contributed in Britain economy from 1900 to 2000.Overall,...
Writing Feedbacknguyenha1999 - Sep 20, 2019 / Maaposman - Sep 20, 2019
|Teaching job - time in your life when you had difficulty making an important decision. CBEST
Writing FeedbackAdam_zain - Sep 19, 2019 / Adam_zain - Sep 20, 2019
|Environmental problem and increasing the price of fuel
3 - You have some good points. I have few observations- Avoid so many long sentences. Secondly, always make each topic...
Writing Feedbackpleiziii - Sep 13, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 19, 2019
|Nomination essay (As a language enthusiast) // preservation of Language
3 - @Maria Thank you maria for the response. Can you be specific about what you have said ? 'Because of...
Writing Feedbackheyhehe - Sep 19, 2019 / heyhehe - Sep 19, 2019
|TOEFL - What to do if the teacher of meeting leader says something incorrect
Writing Feedbackyui meow - Sep 19, 2019 / Maria - Sep 19, 2019
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