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|THE PROBLEM OF USE PLASTICS AND REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE
2 - When you review related literature, you do not cite these informations ources as if you were writing the introduction...
Writing Feedbackedsielbernados1 - Dec 7, 2021 / Holt - Dec 8, 2021
|Essay about the argument of TV purpose, for entertaining or education and information
4 - When students start looking for help on the Internet. They end up on a lot of writing services. But...
Writing FeedbackKhoahoctunhien - Nov 30, 2021 / Liana2021 - Dec 7, 2021
|[IELTS Writing Task 2] Growing concensus on banning children usage of phones in schools
2 - What did you do in the prompt restatement? You changed the discussion foundation so much, the topic you present...
Writing Feedbacktienhao123 - Dec 6, 2021 / Holt - Dec 7, 2021
|The advantages of English spreading as a global language will continue overweight the disadvantages.
2 - There is no reference to dual opinions regarding the topic in the original prompt. The fact that you...
Writing Feedbackdao nhu quynh - Dec 6, 2021 / Holt - Dec 6, 2021
|Ielts 1 - The total of British home and overseas scholars learning Computer Science at an University
3 - @Holt thanks for the feedback, and what is your email so I can privately know my score? @Holt...
Writing FeedbackSonny Tran - Dec 5, 2021 / Sonny Tran - Dec 6, 2021
|Does the Earth Melt? The pervasive ramification of climate change
2 - There is something missing in the reference point of the first paragraph. It does not make any sense....
Writing Feedbackedsielbernados - Dec 5, 2021 / Holt - Dec 5, 2021
|International sports events - good or bad? - IELTS Writing Task 2
2 - The prompt restatement+opinion is totally incorrect. You failed to restate both public opinions in individual sentences, then offer your...
Writing Feedbacktcheung - Dec 5, 2021 / Holt - Dec 5, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: Open plan office no walls, no barriers. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
2 - You cannot use a rhetorical question to represent the restatement of the original prompt. Use a direct statement...
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|Writing IELTS Task 2: The importance of History vs Science and Technology in school
Writing FeedbackSolarni Nguyen - Dec 4, 2021 / Solarni Nguyen - Dec 4, 2021
|Writing task 1 about the percentage of people's coffee & tea drinking habits in 5 Australian cities
2 - The column chart. Help the reader get an idea as to how the measurements are presented in the...
Writing Feedbackminhoang855 - Dec 3, 2021 / Holt - Dec 4, 2021
|From my point of view, i firmly believe that the merits of Internet far outweight its drawbacks
2 - Okay, you have presented the discussion based on general observations of the given topic. Acceptable, but could have been...
Writing Feedbackpromesus - Dec 2, 2021 / Holt - Dec 3, 2021
|AUSTRALIA - DESTINATION FOR THE JOBSEEKERS
2 - While this reference does indicate the number of years covered by the measurement, it does not accurately portray...
Writing Feedbackdodoyt - Dec 2, 2021 / Holt - Dec 3, 2021
|TASK 2: More and more students choose to study abroad to have a better education and environment
2 - When I give a student advice in an essay to help improve his writing abilities and scoring potential in...
Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Dec 2, 2021 / Holt - Dec 2, 2021
|Task 2: The idea of whether or not to accept the social convention of a host country
Writing Feedbackhienpham123456 - Dec 2, 2021 / nhidinh1231 - Dec 2, 2021
|Ielts writing: Why is global warming a problem? How can reduce the dangers of global warming?
2 - You understood the question, but cast too wide a net in terms of discussion topics. In fact, the discussion...
Writing FeedbackMeilsn8804 - Dec 1, 2021 / Holt - Dec 2, 2021
|Writing task 1 line graph - The changes in the rates of birth and death in New Zealand from 1901
4 - hello , i think you have a good introduction because you paraphased some words like shows,... i think you...
Writing Feedbackzang - Nov 30, 2021 / tdl - Dec 2, 2021
|Task 1: The maps elaborate on the layout moderations of an art gallery's ground floor
2 - A user cannot dictate specific review requirements unless the user requests for private paid review services. Only general review...
Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Dec 1, 2021 / Holt - Dec 1, 2021
|Life in high-rise apartments provides a much better sense of community than life in houses
2 - Hi, as a general format essay based on a solid personal point of view of both statements, the essay...
Writing Feedbackcattho2001 - Nov 30, 2021 / Holt - Dec 1, 2021
|Topic: "If you were the mayor of your town or village, what would you do to improve the quality "
3 - Secondly, there are ... You did not mention the first your logical cause, but went straight to "Secondly". ...
Writing FeedbackBanana79 - Nov 30, 2021 / nhidinh1231 - Nov 30, 2021
|More people become well-known for their scandals and wealth, instead of their exceptional talent
2 - You are over discussing this essay to the point where you will not be able to complete all the...
Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Nov 30, 2021 / Holt - Nov 30, 2021
|Some people have chosen to take a holiday trip away from home to other provinces
2 - What is the cultural relevance of Tet beyond marking a season? This reference has to be further explained...
Writing Feedbackngoanhhhhh - Nov 30, 2021 / Holt - Nov 30, 2021
|The percentage of household with electrical appliances and the number of hours of housework per week
2 - The importance of the number of images indicated cannot be overemphasized. The number of images and what each...
Writing FeedbackStony - Nov 29, 2021 / Holt - Nov 30, 2021
|IELTS 1: Languages, other than English, that British students at a university in England can speak
Writing Feedbackbabygrandma - Nov 29, 2021 / nhidinh1231 - Nov 29, 2021
|Many people prefer to work for the same company all their whole time-life of working
3 - The prompt asked you to give your opinion, but you did not mention it in your opening. Your opening...
Writing Feedbackhiennhingo - Nov 29, 2021 / nhidinh1231 - Nov 29, 2021
|Living in a foreign country can cause serious social problems
Writing Feedbackanduyen0212 - Nov 28, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|The diagrams show the flooding area and two solutions to cope with that.
2 - Please work on creating more understandable sentences for your essays. In this particular essay, you truly have a problem...
Writing Feedbackgreencoconut - Nov 16, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|CHILDCARE BY AN EXTENDED FAMILY OR PARENTS?
2 - Reviews for essays based on IELTS band descriptors are done in a private capacity already. Right now, we only...
Writing FeedbackPhuongnguyen256 - Nov 13, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|Essay about replacing Art, Sport and Music subjects with subjects such as Information Technology
Writing FeedbackWintermarchen - Nov 21, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|Employers should give longer vacations to employees ( writing task 2)
2 - The prompt restatement + opinion is incorrect. It does not contain the original reference points for the topic basis....
Writing Feedbackirvan - Nov 21, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|IELTS 1 - Next year developments in an airport are illustrated in the maps provided
2 - Please get out of the compressed idea presentation per sentence mindset. The more information you try to add to...
Writing FeedbackQuang Bao - Nov 22, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|The chart below show the average proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in meals
2 - We do not rate the essays based on the IELTS considerations for free. For sectional scoring and assessment, you...
Writing Feedbackhana146 - Nov 23, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|Mandatory history courses for students? Relying on the outcomes of the past events is not useful.
2 - This phrase made your opinion statement less than convincing. You are uncertain of your opinion in a set...
Writing Feedbackfarzanehhh - Nov 27, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|The graph shows the amount of money earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002
2 - Incorrect writing format. You cannot use the task 2 essay format for the task 1 essay. The task 1...
Writing FeedbackCheeseQuang - Nov 27, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|IELTS Task 1: the information taken from a report on the energy consumption in the USA since 1980
2 - In reality, your summary sentence is not changed enough to be considered an information restatement on your part. This...
Writing Feedbacklingwang - Nov 27, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|These days people in some countries tend to live a lavish lifestyle
2 - Use of a memorized phrase will be a score deduction in the TA section. Avoid using place holder...
Writing Feedbackhahihe15 - Nov 27, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|The consumption of sugar based drinks is on the rise. How to tackle this problem?
2 - Incorrect. These are the writer's personal opinions, which are not referenced at all in the original...
Writing FeedbackJoey1805 - Nov 26, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|It is argued that schooling from early age would be ideal for the children' development
2 - While the prompt restatement and opinion is not grammatically accurate, it is still understandable enough for an ENL. Your...
Writing Feedbackhanguyen79 - Nov 26, 2021 / Holt - Nov 27, 2021
|" It is beneficial for teenagers to receive pocket money from their parents". Do you agree?
2 - There are several problems with your opening statement. The first, is that you used a direct cut and paste...
Writing FeedbackHoang Trieu - Nov 25, 2021 / Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|IELTS writing task 2. Should students pay for their colleges' tuition fee, or government?
2 - This is highly non-academic in reference. Avoid using too much everyday English words that are informal in presentation....
Writing Feedbackbaudgy - Nov 25, 2021 / Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|IELTS Task 1: The price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne
2 - Two things are missing from your summary overview. The first is the number of charts. The second, is the...
Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Nov 25, 2021 / Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|IELTS Writing task 2: Children with mobile phone discussion
2 - As a basic rule, you must not begin the discussion of your opinion in the prompt restatement + opinion...
Writing Feedbacksaklovesyao - Nov 25, 2021 / Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - ESSAY ABOUT ECONOMICS
2 - Your summary is well developed. It properly enumerates the markets involved and the trends that the collective comparison...
Writing Feedbackdaiton - Nov 25, 2021 / Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|The tables give information about the temperatures and daylight hours in 4 cities during same week
Writing FeedbackZarutopath - Nov 25, 2021 / Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|Large public places and parks are significant for cities' residents
2 - Do not begin the discussion of your opinion in relation to the topic in the prompt restatement + opinion...
Writing FeedbackHarry Yang - Nov 24, 2021 / Holt - Nov 25, 2021
|GENERATION GAP IN LIFESTYLES, VIEWPOINTS AND BEHAVIOURS
2 - The question was , "To what extent?" The extent is missing in this response. You should have stated...
Writing Feedbackkirarara - Nov 23, 2021 / Holt - Nov 24, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Adults and students are working and studying from home
2 - Wrong reasoning. This question tests your knowledge of current events. How you relate the pandemic, Covid - 19,...
Writing Feedbackdanh55162 - Nov 23, 2021 / Holt - Nov 24, 2021
|Should we encourage the youth to engage in unpaid community work?
2 - There is a difference between ordinary community work and free community service. The difference is basesd on remuneration....
Writing Feedbacktenhquameo - Nov 23, 2021 / Holt - Nov 24, 2021
|(IELTS WRITING 1) PIE CHART The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source
Writing Feedbacksherry2345 - Nov 11, 2021 / sherry2345 - Nov 24, 2021
|Should the government put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat more healthily?
Writing Feedbackxinhgaisomot - Nov 20, 2021 / xinhgaisomot - Nov 23, 2021
|GENDER - Writing Task 2 - Several renowned organizations are headed by men
3 - @Holt @Hana146 Thanks for your feedback! This is my first essay IELTS Writing Task 2 and I made a...
Writing Feedbackhunnguyenle - Nov 22, 2021 / hunnguyenle - Nov 23, 2021
|Essay about should the goverment funding for school fees
Writing FeedbackJean Jatarin - Nov 22, 2021 / Holt - Nov 23, 2021
|Nowadays people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games
2 - The techonology is not changing, which is the meaning of "alteration". Rather, the techonology is "developing" from the...
Writing Feedbackquynhanh200832 - Nov 22, 2021 / Holt - Nov 23, 2021
|Children's success depends on their parents
2 - To provide a stronger thesis statement. Indicate your agreement with a sense of reasoning. Rather than saying "for...
Writing Feedbacknavy8303 - Nov 22, 2021 / Holt - Nov 23, 2021
|Writing - How to write an effective formal email
4 - @Holt Thank you verry much for your feedback. I have mistaken the writer name. Kamal Satinder is the writer...
Writing FeedbackQuyenhuynh - Nov 18, 2021 / Quyenhuynh - Nov 22, 2021
|The number of women aged 16-25 in particular country playing sport or watching sport
Writing Feedbackchoutwo - Nov 19, 2021 / kenna007 - Nov 22, 2021
|The activity of cycling is admittedly no longer popular. How to change this trend?
2 - Good discussion with a few grammar and cohesive discussion problems for you to take note of. The errors stem...
Writing Feedbackthunthun - Nov 21, 2021 / Holt - Nov 22, 2021
|Essays about Causes of stress in modern society and ways to reduce this problem
2 - The essay presentation is actually good, if I were not to consider the scoring requirements of the task 2...
Writing Feedbacknguyenminhhuyen - Nov 21, 2021 / Holt - Nov 22, 2021
|NOWADAYS, SOME PARENTS PUT A LOT OF PRESSURE ON THEIR CHILDREN.
2 - This is not a part of the orginal topic presentation. The writer must keep his opinion to himself...
Writing Feedbackashley_pham - Nov 21, 2021 / Holt - Nov 22, 2021
|A prediction that drivers would be unnecessary in the future due to the development of technology
2 - Wrong word usage. The negative representation of merit is demerit. Contrasting features is not a normal representation for...
Writing FeedbackLamahaf - Nov 21, 2021 / Holt - Nov 22, 2021
|Allowing to visibly carry a gun in public places
2 - Why? The discussion response is complete, but the thesis outline is messing. Clue in the reader as to...
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