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|The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money
2 - @KAURNAVI Hello. It's great to see how enthusiastic you have been with all of this. I hope you find...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1(GENERAL) an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes
2 - @KAURNAVI Hi. Thanks for returning here! I hope to provide you with writing feedback for your essay. The...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|Writing IELTS TASK 1: World Meat Production, 1950-1990
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 14, 2019
|Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news
Writing Feedbackluuly24052002 - Aug 14, 2019 / Trinh Duy Hung - Aug 14, 2019
|Task 2: Internet problems and needed solutions like more rigorous regulations
3 - @Maria Thank you for spending time with my essays and giving me feedbacks! I really appreciate it...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Aug 13, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Aug 14, 2019
|(150 words) support the argument that secondary school students shouldn't play too much
2 - ... students are had not better not to waste their time ... There are tons of some undeniable...
Writing Feedbackieltsforbest - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.
2 - In this globalization era, it can be seen that the number of students choosing to ... countries who study...
Writing Feedbackflinny_soll - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful
2 - You wrote the essay very good and also used uncommon words, such as triumphant, vehemently espouse, etc. I...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|The pictures illustrate how Meadowside Village and its neighbouring town Fonton have developed
Writing Feedbackmoon812 - Aug 13, 2019 / moon812 - Aug 14, 2019
|What does matter more: teaching domestic or international history?
3 - @vulong79 Hello there. Seeing as you are new here, I welcome you to the forum! I hope you find...
Writing Feedbackvulong79 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Job satisfaction. Is it possible to achieve this by all employees?
2 - @min0822 Hi there. Welcome back here to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Food waste is one of the biggest problems facing mankind today
2 - @Anthony VuNguyen Hello. Here to give you feedback on this essay. I hope you find this helpful and keep...
Writing FeedbackAnthony VuNguyen - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Causes and Results of Rising Global Population
2 - @jocelyn wang Hello. I hope you're learning from the feedback you're gathering here. I'm here to provide you with...
Writing Feedbackjocelyn wang - Aug 11, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS2- READING BOOKS VS COMPUTER & TV
2 - I think you should focus more on why you agree that reading is better for children. The second paragraph...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 13, 2019 / min0822 - Aug 13, 2019
|More physical education lessons in schools to control the obesity
Writing Feedbackhusimplicity - Aug 12, 2019 / husimplicity - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2- global warming - cause and solution
Writing FeedbackTienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019 / Tienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Car ownership in Canada; how many citizens owns one car or more
Writing FeedbackA Jhaveri - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS task 1: sales of fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas
3 - Try to post the picture on your article next time~ In your introduction, try to rephrase the sentence...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|Solving traffic problems by taxing people who possess a car
2 - For the intro, you should: first, paraphrase the question. for example: Governments raise private car taxes and use the...
Writing Feedbacknguyenduc - Aug 12, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019
|The amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 included road, water, rail, pipeline
Writing Feedbacktienphuoc287 - Aug 11, 2019 / tienphuoc287 - Aug 12, 2019
|The number of queries collected by the Tourist Information Office over six months - IELTS1
Writing Feedbackhohatrang2002 - Aug 10, 2019 / hohatrang2002 - Aug 11, 2019
|Vocational training. There is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers.
2 - Hi Chaule, I suppose the topic is vocational traning not vacational training. There are some spelling mistakes and...
Writing Feedbackchaule_17897 - Aug 11, 2019 / jocelyn wang - Aug 11, 2019
|Ielts 10 test 1 Australian household energy use - charts work
2 - 1.You can paraphase the question at the beginning of the essay 2. ... other appliance also account for ......
Writing Feedbackcarolwong625 - Aug 11, 2019 / min0822 - Aug 11, 2019
|You can buy everything from internet nowadays. Online shopping phenomenon.
2 - @angelvyle Hi there. Welcome! I'll provide you with writing feedback here on your essay. Firstly, I highly recommend...
Writing Feedbackangelvyle - Aug 11, 2019 / Maria - Aug 11, 2019
|Books and experience are fundamental tools to gain knowledge
3 - @hhhaye Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing endeavors. ...
Writing Feedbackhhhaye - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS2- problem/solution essay: Not enough students choose science subjects in universities
3 - @s410377088 Hi there. Welcome back to the forum. I hope you find the feedback you see here to be...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 9, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|Global climate change: individuals and government role
2 - @Winter Hello. It's nice to see you again here! I'm here once more to provide you with writing feedback....
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 10, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|An essay about discussing when it's better for children to learn a new language.
2 - @JackieMahamn Hi there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I'm happy to see you here again! Keep being an...
Writing FeedbackJackieMahamn - Aug 9, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity
2 - @amira11545 Hi there. Thanks for being back here! I'm here to give feedback on this essay. I hope you...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 1: Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place now
2 - @thuithuidangiu Hello there. You're welcome in advance! Just reach out to us if you have any other concerns or...
Writing Feedbackthuithuidangiu - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|Effects of detailed crime descriptions
2 - @Winter Hello ! hope you find comment helpful: The overall structure is clear. Just little suggestion here. Undeniably, crime...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 7, 2019 / htc - Aug 9, 2019
|New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children.
2 - I actually just have some feedbacks to your writing. - Introduction paragraph: + " better" should go after "it",...
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - Aug 8, 2019 / JackieMahamn - Aug 9, 2019
|Railway transportation will improve traffic congestion and reduce air pollution problem
Writing Feedbackhtc - Aug 3, 2019 / htc - Aug 9, 2019
|Toefl Writing - What does it mean to be a good neighbor?
2 - @pitheson Hello there. Seeing as you are new here, welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback...
Writing Feedbackpitheson - Aug 5, 2019 / Maria - Aug 9, 2019
|Essay about duty in environmental problem
2 - Well, it's well written but I think I'll challenge your topic by saying that individuals have a vital role...
Writing FeedbackRachel1809 - Aug 8, 2019 / Vickspring - Aug 8, 2019
|The graph: million tonnes of gods transported by road, water, rail and pipeline in the given country
3 - @phmixu27 This is my first time to practice IELTS writing test. My grammar is awful. Thanks a lot for...
Writing Feedbackmeat0509 - Aug 6, 2019 / meat0509 - Aug 8, 2019
|A rising trend nowadays that urban residents live in small families instead of large families
NEW - IELTS Task2 - Small Family Unit In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in...
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Aug 8, 2019 / — -
|IELTS essay Task 2: Criteria for successful country
2 - @qromj19 Hello there, Here are my suggestions for you: 1. "Some of them are health, education and..." In...
Writing Feedbackqromj19 - Aug 5, 2019 / rivathh - Aug 8, 2019
|Range of subjects which system is appropriate
3 - I think you should cut down the number of redundant words in other to give more space to strengthen...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 3, 2019 / suong1510 - Aug 8, 2019
|People and technology - advantages disadvantages of internet
Writing Feedbackwannaimprove - Aug 5, 2019 / suong1510 - Aug 8, 2019
|WRITING TASK 1: AUSTRALIAN EXPORTATION STATISTICS
2 - @ngotrancamtu There are some things I show you below, please give a feedback to me if you think I...
Writing Feedbackngotrancamtu - Aug 7, 2019 / phmixu27 - Aug 7, 2019
|More and more children no longer have creative thinking - is it because of technology development?
Writing Feedbackweiweiyan - Aug 7, 2019 / Maskeb - Aug 7, 2019
|IELTS Task 1: Average daily maximum temperatures in New Zealand vs UK
5 - Sorry if my comment is wrong, or not right. I just want to give some question and comment and...
Writing Feedbackneumotngayem - Aug 3, 2019 / phmixu27 - Aug 7, 2019
|IT Aspects - IT ENABLES PEOPLE TO DO THEIR WORK OUTSIDE THEIR WORKPLACE - IELTS Task 2
3 - introduction: you wrote 3 sentences to transfer the concept of the topic but it is to some extent vogue....
Writing FeedbackMaskeb - Aug 3, 2019 / SeyedHasan - Aug 7, 2019
|Some people have been prominent in music and sport since they were born
Writing Feedbackthaolinhnguyen - Aug 3, 2019 / Toan dep trai - Aug 7, 2019
|Task 2: Example 17: Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. Agree or not?
3 - Hi, I think you already made an amazing essay. However, I'm gonna help you correct some minor errors Besides,...
Writing FeedbackHuy hoang - Aug 6, 2019 / amira11545 - Aug 6, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Both sides opinion : Should elderly people be forced to retired or not?
5 - There are lines that are unnecessary and should be removed or replaced. Like this one "Nowadays, as the population...
Writing FeedbackSnoopy Jr - Aug 2, 2019 / Toan dep trai - Aug 6, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Professionals and non-professionals are equal and should get paid equally?
Writing FeedbackToan dep trai - Aug 5, 2019 / Toan dep trai - Aug 6, 2019
|Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies do
2 - Hi, I'm here to try my best to give you feedback on this essay. However, it's just my personal...
Writing FeedbackJasmine283 - Aug 5, 2019 / amira11545 - Aug 5, 2019
|Art and music in today's modern societies.
2 - @conmasieuquay_4, Good essay with few grammatical errors like scientific-related science-related jobs and irrelevant words like thanks to some...
Writing Feedbackconmasieuquay_4 - Aug 3, 2019 / qromj19 - Aug 5, 2019
|Wild animals have no use in the 21st century - is preserving them just a waste of resources?
3 - some unnecessary words --> It seems there is a little element truth in it... It will be better...
Writing Feedbacklucy1990 - Aug 2, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 5, 2019
|IELTS task 2 practice: The relation between poverty and crime
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Aug 3, 2019 / vuthuylinh2611 - Aug 5, 2019
|ielt writing task 2 History and Technology as two different subjects at school
NEW - Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world,...
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|Should education be free for all vietnamese children until they finish high school?
Writing Feedbacktranbaohan22 - Aug 3, 2019 / tranbaohan22 - Aug 3, 2019
|Changes to price of food products from 1978 to 2009 - IELTS 1
Writing Feedbackhelloitsdlinh - Aug 1, 2019 / helloitsdlinh - Aug 3, 2019
|Physically hitting students in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour.
3 - Hi @martinasp, i think her idea in these sentences is that after students are hit by teacher, they will...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 3, 2019 / ththao_99 - Aug 3, 2019
|IELTS1- table (five countries): consumer spending on different items / products
2 - I think that the last sentence of last paragraph should be removed to the second one The statistics in...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 3, 2019 / Winter - Aug 3, 2019
|Travelers and Visitors - Review my IELTS task 1: The line graph
2 - hello~ You need to rephrase your first paragraph since some grammatic issue happens in your sentence. You...
Writing FeedbackThang Nguyen Duc - Aug 2, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 3, 2019
|The connection of using energy and releasing greenhouse gas in Australia
Writing FeedbackThanggggg - Aug 2, 2019 / Thanggggg - Aug 2, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Knowledge taught at school
4 - @nimbus2k2 HI,there, I found many grammar mistakes,for instance, "The knowledge students receive at ..." receive should be proofed into...
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 31, 2019 / lucy1990 - Aug 2, 2019
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