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|The pie charts illustrates how many people took part in organizations voluntarily (2008 and 2014)
Writing Feedbackuyen2028 - Jun 5, 2022 / danielsmith - Jun 20, 2022
|The chart compares the proportion of students who come from China, Japan and India to North Dean Un.
3 - The chart compares (...) and India who enrolled at North Dean ... ... Chinese and Indian students, while ......
Writing Feedbackahihihu - Jun 19, 2022 / danielsmith - Jun 20, 2022
|Today, women no longer feel the need to get married due to strong financial capability. Do you agree
2 - Do not overstate the opinion presentation by using an emotional response. This is not an extent response essay. Use...
Writing Feedbackglish27 - Jun 18, 2022 / Holt - Jun 18, 2022
|Some say that because many people are living much longer, the retirement age should be raised
2 - The writer did an almost excellent job in the prompt restatement and personal opinion. The topic presentation uses enough...
Writing Feedbackdoanhly - Jun 18, 2022 / Holt - Jun 18, 2022
|Effects of science on the food we eat
2 - This is not an academic sounding phrase. Since the writer is practicing to write academic papers, informal English...
Writing FeedbackManaro - Jun 17, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|Vietnamese eating habits from the past and now
2 - It is incorrect to use 2 successive punctuation marks. One cannot use a comma and ellipses successively, or any...
Writing FeedbackManaro - Jun 17, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|Too much money has been used in conserving wild animals - IELTS test
2 - Do not overemphasize the opinion presentation unless asked to do so in an extent essay. Always ensure that the...
Writing Feedbacklilxlys022007 - Jun 17, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|Students should know the science of food? IELTS TASK 2 - Discuss opinion
Writing Feedbackkhalepro - Jun 17, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|In this era, while choosing the job, money has inevitably been the most essential component
2 - This essay has several problems that will lead to a failing score. The first of which is the over...
Writing Feedbackyousha64 - Jun 16, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever?
2 - The prompt restatement totally messes the point. When the mention of "rule of law" was committed in the rewording,...
Writing Feedbackdanielsmith - Jun 16, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|Today, there are more men's than women's sports on TV. Why? Should TV give equal time for them all?
2 - Good topic restatement. It shows a good English comprehension skill. I wish that this skill in English thinking was...
Writing Feedbackthinh3110 - Jun 16, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|Some people claim that doing the same things is a way to keep a good habits. Others, however..
2 - The original prompt does not indicate any controversy surrounding the given topic. This is an unwarranted exageration that altered...
Writing Feedbackphamminhchau - Jun 16, 2022 / Holt - Jun 17, 2022
|Living in a horizontal city is probably the best option, but others tend to live in a vertical city
2 - Give a clear reason why you support the latter opinion in your personal point of view statement. By adding...
Writing Feedbackthanhtu - Jun 16, 2022 / Holt - Jun 16, 2022
|A reflection essay about crowds effect
2 - This is actually a paper about group social behavior rather than crowd behavior. The title of the paper maybe...
Writing Feedbackteamatcha - Jun 15, 2022 / Holt - Jun 15, 2022
|Foods shipping from afar - IELTS score
2 - The opening sentence presents an opposite meaning from what the writer actually meant. The sentence indicates that the country...
Writing FeedbackDavid Tran - Jun 15, 2022 / Holt - Jun 15, 2022
|The ancient outlooks IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 2
2 - There are 2 opposing points of view in the original prompt that refer to specific groups. These groups must...
Writing Feedbacksandranguyenanh0 - Jun 15, 2022 / Holt - Jun 15, 2022
|Technology has made man dumb
4 - @Holt I think there is some misunderstanding here, this is not an IELTS essay! It is an ACCUPLACER essay...
Writing Feedbackanmolwrites - Jun 14, 2022 / anmolwrites - Jun 15, 2022
|Why do people risk their lives in extreme activities, and do you think this is a good trend?
Writing Feedbackcharlieyang207 - Jun 9, 2022 / charlieyang207 - Jun 15, 2022
|IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 2: Adverts to persuading potential buyers
Writing FeedbackMinhhh2005 - Jun 12, 2022 / Minhhh2005 - Jun 14, 2022
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Framed pictures and photo sharing websites
2 - Do not focus on over-explaining the reasoning paragraphs. Remember that the 40 minute task only allows foI the following...
Writing Feedbacknhmt - Jun 14, 2022 / Holt - Jun 14, 2022
|Writing Task 2 - Problem and Solution - Young people live in major cities.
2 - This is an essay was written without the benefit of time constraints. Had the writer practiced with a timer...
Writing Feedbackquynhtotrd - Jun 14, 2022 / Holt - Jun 14, 2022
|Some people think we should have one job, but others think we should do more than one job.
2 - The writer needs to provide a more detailed prompt restatement and personal opinion presentation. This first paragraph does not...
Writing FeedbackTopmo - Jun 14, 2022 / Holt - Jun 14, 2022
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Pie charts - transportation to travel to a university
3 - not a professional but you can improve by using advannced phrase: upward/ downward trend,... balenced 2 pas...
Writing Feedbackieltslover_1 - Jun 13, 2022 / johnny sins - Jun 13, 2022
|Damage due to Hurricane Katrina
2 - Word capitalization rules were not followed in the writing of this statement. A capital letter cannot follow a comma...
Writing FeedbackBHUMIK_DEV - Jun 13, 2022 / Holt - Jun 13, 2022
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 The amount of money spent by british parents on their children's sports
2 - The summary overview is quite confusing to the reader. It fails to clearly state the number of line graphs...
Writing Feedbackahmadsalim - Jun 13, 2022 / Holt - Jun 13, 2022
|Report on services provided by health centers
2 - Where is the list of services for comparison in the summary? The reader has no idea what you begin...
Writing FeedbackAxis0019 - Jun 12, 2022 / Holt - Jun 13, 2022
|It is said that punishment is essential to discipline children at an early age
2 - The writer does not offer a related topic paraphrasing nor a relevant extent response in the first paragraph. It...
Writing Feedbacknajaeminamerican - Jun 12, 2022 / Holt - Jun 12, 2022
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - paper, wood pulp and sawn good
2 - The summary overview is not off to a good start. It is missing important elements such as the measurement...
Writing Feedbackisls_1 - Jun 12, 2022 / Holt - Jun 12, 2022
|Use animals as food - Writing task 2 - opinion essay. for your time.
Writing Feedbackjohnny sins - Jun 12, 2022 / johnny sins - Jun 12, 2022
|IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 2: Government funding with preventive healthcare and disease treatment
3 - Not a pro but here are some tips. Sentences like numerous civilians sounds very mechanical and memorized, better to...
Writing FeedbackIncognitoRabbit - Jun 11, 2022 / Axis0019 - Jun 12, 2022
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Map - changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001
2 - Include the number of images used in the original. Even though the years that are indicated would be a...
Writing Feedbackpthli_1 - Jun 12, 2022 / Holt - Jun 12, 2022
|It is positive or negative for citizens to live alone or in a nuclear family rather than in extended
2 - The essay does not respond in the expected format. The question provides for a single opinion option with a...
Writing Feedbackbilly2508 - Jun 11, 2022 / Holt - Jun 11, 2022
|Report on the layouts of the ground floor of a museum.
3 - @Holt Your input is highly appreciated and will be considered when writing the next essay. Will it, however, receive...
Writing FeedbackAxis0019 - Jun 11, 2022 / Axis0019 - Jun 11, 2022
|The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in the process of recycling plastics
2 - The given reference of a diagram should have been changed to a flow chart in the writer's interpretation. A...
Writing FeedbackTran Thanh Tra - Jun 11, 2022 / Holt - Jun 11, 2022
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
Writing FeedbackMinhhh2005 - Jun 10, 2022 / Minhhh2005 - Jun 11, 2022
|Check my essay about alcohol abuse. its problems and solutions
4 - "This essay will discuss both the consequences ..." A better these statement in my opinion This essay...
Writing Feedbackminhhhhhhhh - Jun 9, 2022 / Axis0019 - Jun 11, 2022
|The main factors influencing a child's development these day is social factors or
5 - @William David Not a professional but here are some tips. I think you have misused the word "influency"....
Writing FeedbackWilliam David - Jun 8, 2022 / Axis0019 - Jun 11, 2022
|Damage of Hurricane Katrina
Writing FeedbackHieupham1994 - Jun 10, 2022 / Hieupham1994 - Jun 11, 2022
|Essay regarding the consumption of unhealthy food
Writing FeedbackAxis0019 - Jun 6, 2022 / hoangtran - Jun 10, 2022
|The graph illustrates the average yearly spending on mobile phone, national and overseas landline
3 - I often use the specific year (like "the year 2014", "during 2014") instead of "the fifth year of period"...
Writing Feedbackcholleyy - Jun 10, 2022 / hoangtran - Jun 10, 2022
|Ielts task 2: Do you think the development of technology is positive or negative and why?
3 - "recently due to the outbreak of the Covid-19 pandemic" this sentence sounds weird, but you can change it into...
Writing Feedbackhoangtran - Jun 8, 2022 / Chloeduong - Jun 9, 2022
|The graph presents how many grams of fish and three types of meat were consumed by European people
2 - There should not be any rush to compress data from the image. The more sentences referenced in the summary...
Writing Feedbackwynnguyen - Jun 8, 2022 / Holt - Jun 8, 2022
|Writing Task 2 : Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restriction
2 - The writer tried to exaggerate his restatement and opinion paragraph which led to a less than accurate retelling of...
Writing Feedbackluthang - Jun 8, 2022 / Holt - Jun 8, 2022
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: THE PASSED DRIVING TESTS RATE
2 - Provide an accurate number for the images given for the comparative report. That plus the correct image identifier should...
Writing Feedbackhoangtran - Jun 8, 2022 / Holt - Jun 8, 2022
|IELTS TASK 1: The diagram shows the process of chocolate production. Summarize the information.
3 - This essay's overall word count is insufficient to appropriately reflect the writer's reporting abilities. You can refer to other...
Writing Feedbackmetyl2945 - Jun 8, 2022 / poopie - Jun 8, 2022
|The graph shows Japanese people's average monthly salary (thousands of Yen or ¥) from 1953 to 1983,
2 - 3 problems in the summary overview alone: 1. An apostrophe or apostrophe S is not used when indicating...
Writing Feedbackelwynht - Jun 8, 2022 / Holt - Jun 8, 2022
|Wild animals have no place in 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources.
3 - Fellow student here trying to get better at writing essays. Not a professional so take my opinion as you...
Writing Feedbacknhu thao - Jun 7, 2022 / defy - Jun 8, 2022
|The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvement
7 - I'm also a student trying to get better at writing. I don't know as much as the professional writers...
Writing FeedbackHuongNg - May 21, 2022 / defy - Jun 8, 2022
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] PROBLEMS/SOLUTIONS - UNLIMITED USE OF CARS
2 - The prompt restatement is not even remotely related to the original discussion. The questions being asked as the establishing...
Writing Feedbacktypicallyarimel - Jun 7, 2022 / Holt - Jun 7, 2022
|TASK 2: Advantages and disadvantages of working or traveling for a time before higher education
Writing Feedbackmetyl2945 - Jun 7, 2022 / metyl2945 - Jun 7, 2022
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] BAR CHART - GLOBAL MOBILE PHONES SALES BY BRAND
Writing Feedbacktypicallyarimel - Jun 7, 2022 / typicallyarimel - Jun 7, 2022
|Practicing writing essays | TOPIC: Students should be required to take physical education courses
2 - There are 2 ways to approach the riting of this essay. These are: 1. Prompt restatement + personal opinion...
Writing Feedbackdefy - Jun 7, 2022 / Holt - Jun 7, 2022
|Illustration the process of making traditional wooden shoes called clogs
2 - The procedural report is short by one paragraph even as the word count was met. There should be 3...
Writing FeedbackNgHH - Jun 7, 2022 / Holt - Jun 7, 2022
|WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss both view - should spend money on bicycle or public transport?
3 - I appreciate your help! thanks a lot:) Actually, I'm a beginner, so I will definitetly make a lot of...
Writing Feedbacktuan1618 - Jun 7, 2022 / tuan1618 - Jun 7, 2022
|(IELTS WRITING) Governments should ban dangerous sports? Discuss and give your own opinion
2 - Representing a statement of concern was totally unnecessary since this was not represented as such in the essay. It...
Writing Feedbackthaole2901 - Jun 7, 2022 / Holt - Jun 7, 2022
|Task 2: academic writing: what factors affect food choices
3 - Thank you so much for giving me meaningful advice. I will try to review my essay and write it...
Writing FeedbackTran Thi Linh - Jun 6, 2022 / Tran Thi Linh - Jun 7, 2022
|People claim that in the upcoming years, printed publications will be replaced by online materials
2 - Do not make claims that are not present in the original version so as not to negatively affect prompt...
Writing Feedbackpoopie - Jun 6, 2022 / Holt - Jun 6, 2022
|Some people believe that learners should be taught what is necessary for their expertise
2 - The first sentence in this presentation is a prompt topic deviation but not an opinion misrepresentation. Placed in the...
Writing FeedbackPhan Son - Jun 6, 2022 / Holt - Jun 6, 2022
|The question is whether specialized data should be widely available or not
2 - The prompt paraphrase is not going to receive passing considerations for 3 reasons: 1. The writer indicates a...
Writing Feedbackthaishaf - Jun 5, 2022 / Holt - Jun 5, 2022
|Many subjects are dropped at school, leading multiple changes for students.
3 - @Holt thanks a lot !!!!!! i'll keep practicing and preventing myself from making these mistakes....
Writing Feedbacknhu thao - Jun 5, 2022 / nhu thao - Jun 5, 2022
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