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|UK graduate and post-graduate students in four different destinations after leaving college
Writing Feedbackwolfy69 - Dec 21, 2021 / wolfy69 - Dec 22, 2021
|IELTS Task 2: It is now becoming a trend that people prefer to meet virtually instead of physically
2 - The essay is long enough but not within the correct number of paragraphs for this discussion. Since this is...
Writing Feedbackmonicaaa0017 - Dec 21, 2021 / Holt - Dec 21, 2021
|[ Task 2 - Discussion ] Schools are no longer necessary
2 - Your prompt response is not on the mark. You are agreeing with both sides to some degree rather than...
Writing Feedbacktdcphg7900 - Dec 20, 2021 / Holt - Dec 21, 2021
|The number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office -vocabulary, grammars, structures
2 - Your specific review requirements are not covered by our free review services. Please contact me privately to discuss the...
Writing FeedbackHimynamisMaria - Dec 20, 2021 / Holt - Dec 20, 2021
|IELTS 1: the amount of hours the teenagers in Chester spend in a week for doing activities 2002-2007
3 - I apologize for my mistake. I did not intend to, really. I'm really sorry. Anyway, thank you for giving...
Writing Feedbackmonicaaa0017 - Dec 20, 2021 / monicaaa0017 - Dec 20, 2021
|Advertising money: press, cinema, outdoor, radio and TV - my essay for IELTS
3 - I suggest you to separate paragraph 1 into 2 paragraph instead. Probably it should be like this: The...
Writing Feedbackphamkhanhlinh - Dec 20, 2021 / monicaaa0017 - Dec 20, 2021
|The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city
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|Opinion about installing CCTV cameras in public places - Essay
2 - This essay failed to provide a correct restatement + opinion paragraph. It has already failed the test based on...
Writing Feedbackhiennguyen0302 - Dec 19, 2021 / Holt - Dec 20, 2021
|Warwick Postgraduate Entry - Personal Statement
2 - What exactly is your current job? Use that current job reference as the platform for your interest in...
Writing Feedbackmonicaaa0017 - Dec 19, 2021 / Holt - Dec 19, 2021
|(ielts task 1) The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services
3 - In paragraph 2, try to separate the sentence. Do not make all in one sentence. Because in general, one...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Attending Evening Courses In Both Sexes (2 Charts)
3 - for the introduction u can say. The bar chart and pie chart reveal information... Try to state clearly...
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|All students should wear uniform when going to school.
Writing FeedbackClera Nguyen - Dec 19, 2021 / Clera Nguyen - Dec 19, 2021
|How the Internet affect one's critical thinking?
4 - @Wingw Your structure is pretty clear and easy to read: Introduction - Example - Conclusion. However, it would...
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|Studying English language in an English-speaking country is best (but not the only) way to learn it
2 - In truth, your restatement is a bit off target when compared to the original. The idea behind the original...
Writing Feedbackthungan3009 - Dec 18, 2021 / Holt - Dec 18, 2021
|[ Task 2 - Discussion ] take a job before university
3 - The introduction could have a bit more work done on it. For example, the sentences are too long and...
Writing Feedbackdaisy223 - Dec 18, 2021 / kaching00 - Dec 18, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Discussion about advantages and disadvantages of GREEN ENERGY.
4 - @Wingw Thank you! I noted your comment! But can you give me some examples for the consequences of green...
Writing Feedbackthangitcbg - Dec 15, 2021 / thangitcbg - Dec 18, 2021
|Two graphs: the number of train riders and the proportion of trains that run on time to the target
3 - While the 'overall' part is fine enough on it's own, the first graph seems to have more accurately fluctuated...
Writing FeedbackBlluryFace - Dec 16, 2021 / kaching00 - Dec 17, 2021
|Chart - Anthropology students decisions and Table - salaries of the anthropologists
2 - The task 1 essay and the task 2 essay have different word count requirements. The Task 1 essay requires...
Writing FeedbackWingw - Dec 17, 2021 / Holt - Dec 17, 2021
|Nowadays, more and more older people need to compete with the younger people for the same jobs
3 - Hello, Jasmine. Hope this suggestion would help you, I used to struggle from the same problem that shown on...
Writing FeedbackJasmine Le - Dec 16, 2021 / Wingw - Dec 17, 2021
|Question 18: Some people think the government should spend more money on public services rather than
2 - To what extent? The measured response is required. You need to frame your response to show a measured...
Writing Feedbackhoangtamanh - Dec 15, 2021 / Holt - Dec 15, 2021
|The bar chart shows the employment rate of males and females in South Africa, Chile, Finland, Norway
2 - When you write the summary overview, of which the trending statement is included, you will need to limit the...
Writing FeedbackKevin Huy - Dec 15, 2021 / Holt - Dec 15, 2021
|Essay on Prince Edward Island, Colonel Gray Highschool and reasons why you want to enter this school
2 - While the prompt seems to indicate that you should use an outline format to respond to the questions, the...
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|The printed newspapers or books will become obsolete because everything will be available online
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|TASK2 Nowadays, more and more people choose to be parents later. Several reasons and various effects
2 - The prompt restatement is extremely weak. The first sentence, which is the prompt restatement, does not carry a logical...
Writing Feedbackliviaaa - Dec 14, 2021 / Holt - Dec 14, 2021
|TASK 1 - RADIO AND TV; the proportion of the audiences in the UK of radio and TV throughout the day
2 - You are misinforming the reader about the image information. You are using the terms morning and dinner time, when...
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|ielts 2: The substitution of one-government of the world for the individual countries governments
Writing Feedbacklamliinh - Dec 13, 2021 / liviaaa - Dec 14, 2021
|"How to Popularize Electric Car?" only the third paragraph
2 - Well, it is certainly difficult to review this paragraph for proper development and weak points without reading the first...
Writing Feedbackskw - Dec 14, 2021 / Holt - Dec 14, 2021
|Some specialists think that learning a foreign language at primary school is more vital for children
2 - The prompt indicates: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. It does not indicate: Do you think the advantages outweigh...
Writing FeedbackKelly Wang - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 14, 2021
|[WRITING TASK 1] The chart shows the employment status of adults in the US in 2003 and 2013
2 - For the summary overview, you need to learn to use individual sentence references for each thought or idea presentation....
Writing Feedbacktdcphg7900 - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 14, 2021
|Essay task 1: the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.
2 - Excellent work on the summary overview and the trending statement. You have presented a well summarized report that shows...
Writing Feedbackphoenix lee - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|The amount of waste that people in one European country disposed of in 3 different ways
2 - You did not complete the image identification. While this is a graph, it needs to refer to the...
Writing Feedbackdollia - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|The digital revolution has fundamentally changed the way that people absorb and transfer information
Writing Feedbacktrinhtthuy2589 - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|Nowadays, robots do more and more jobs instead of humans.Does this development have more advantages
2 - While there is a strength in the way that you restated the prompt topic and you gave an acceptable...
Writing FeedbackIngridSelena - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|What type of music are you keen on? What are the songs you often listen to?
2 - In order for this quotation to be effective in your speech, you need to provide the actual name...
Writing Feedbackhntrucquynh - Dec 12, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|Encouraging youth, that if they do their best, they can be successful and gain anything as expected
2 - The writer has displayed a well developed sense of logic and reasoning in the presentation. The prompt was clearly...
Writing FeedbackSamuel643 - Dec 12, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|IELTS Opinion Essay Writing Task: "Prevention is better than cure".
3 - @Holt I initially thought I could agree with both ("preventive measures and proper cure are both equally important"),...
Writing Feedbackalx301 - Dec 12, 2021 / alx301 - Dec 12, 2021
|WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss both views : Economic growth
2 - Kindly remember that you have to create a strong and convincing personal opinion. This needs to be based upon...
Writing Feedbackstuckwith - Dec 12, 2021 / Holt - Dec 12, 2021
|IELTS essay: Living in villages has both pros and cons
2 - Your prompt restatement does not make a clear connection with the original prompt. The original discussion simply stated that...
Writing FeedbackAliceC - Dec 11, 2021 / Holt - Dec 12, 2021
|TOEFL essay What will you study
2 - While the writing allowance is 30 minutes, you are not expected to use all of that time just writing...
Writing Feedbackaiai_312 - Dec 11, 2021 / Holt - Dec 12, 2021
|Traveling purposes and problems related to the traveling public of Americans in the year 2009
2 - Since you did not provide a copy of the charts, I cannot accurately consider the information you are...
Writing Feedbackphhieuanh - Dec 11, 2021 / Holt - Dec 11, 2021
|What may be the causes of food shortage in the future? What can be done to prevent it?
2 - Please offer clear responses to the questions provided. The examiner has no use for your empty repeat of...
Writing Feedbackphuongthao0411 - Dec 11, 2021 / Holt - Dec 11, 2021
|The impact of information technology on the way people treat each other today
2 - This particular reference is no longer necessary in the presentation. You provided a strong prompt restatement in the...
Writing Feedbackarthurpham - Dec 10, 2021 / Holt - Dec 11, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: Men and women should share equal responsibility for doing household chores
2 - As this is a restatement of the original topic, the writer is not allowed to add information to...
Writing Feedbacknobibis - Dec 10, 2021 / Holt - Dec 11, 2021
|There is an increasing number of students who decide to quit high school. Cause and solution ?
2 - Avoid the use of non-academic, memorized phrases such as this one. It is not only an exaggeration of...
Writing FeedbackMianhDo1802 - Dec 10, 2021 / Holt - Dec 11, 2021
|What are the advantages of travelling by air?
Writing FeedbackEiravk - Dec 10, 2021 / tinhdeptry - Dec 10, 2021
|Cambridge,Test 3 - the figures of four destinations of the graduates and postgraduates in England
2 - The summary overview must always include the number of images provided and how the information is divided within the...
Writing Feedbackwyshushu - Dec 10, 2021 / Holt - Dec 10, 2021
|IELTS 1: The percentage of numerous functions that mobile phone owners took advantage of
2 - Mention at least 4 of the functions in this place. That way, when you mention 3 more functions...
Writing Feedbackashleytran05 - Dec 10, 2021 / Holt - Dec 10, 2021
|Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful
2 - Kindly contact me privately for a scored review. That is a more intricate and comprehensive review that is not...
Writing FeedbackSonnguyenzzz - Dec 9, 2021 / Holt - Dec 10, 2021
|I started learning English for a good job in the future
2 - The paragraph is written in reverse. The topic sentence, regarding what you will be writing about should be first...
Writing Feedbacktinhdeptry - Dec 9, 2021 / Holt - Dec 10, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss both views: Fictional violence
2 - Normally, this kind of writing would get an automatic failing score. You only wrote 227 out of 250 words,...
Writing Feedbackthuha_12345 - Dec 9, 2021 / Holt - Dec 9, 2021
|CPE-Read the two texts below. Write an essay summarizing and evaluating key points from both texts.
Writing FeedbackAnh Tho 123 - Dec 9, 2021 / Holt - Dec 9, 2021
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] A gap year instead of moving immediately to university to work or to travel
2 - We do not offer public scoring services as our scoring method is only an estimate of what score you...
Writing Feedbackjaden712 - Dec 9, 2021 / Holt - Dec 9, 2021
|Children should grow up in a nurturing environment that allows them to develop their sense of self
3 - Thank you for your feedback! I am going to take a careful look at the task 2 requirement, and...
Writing FeedbackSerena Tran23 - Dec 9, 2021 / Serena Tran23 - Dec 9, 2021
|Holding an international sporting events benefits a country, or has negative consequences?
Writing Feedbackhaan - Dec 8, 2021 / haan - Dec 9, 2021
|Should computer skills be added to primary subjects in elementary school? - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
2 - We do not publicly score IELTS practice tests as the scores are meant for private assessment purposes. You may...
Writing Feedbacktramy02 - Dec 9, 2021 / Holt - Dec 9, 2021
|Advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world? (ielts writing)
2 - Incorrect response. You are not being asked to give an opinion on the topic. You are asked to...
Writing FeedbackSonny Tran - Dec 8, 2021 / Holt - Dec 8, 2021
|Families that suffered from poverty in Australia - ielts writing tast 1
Writing Feedbacktrangtit - Dec 8, 2021 / Sonny Tran - Dec 8, 2021
|Provide university education for a large proportion of students?
3 - @Holt Thank you for your detailed feedback ^^ However, it's my fault that I forgot to include that this...
Writing Feedbackvbnghi - Dec 8, 2021 / vbnghi - Dec 8, 2021
|CHAPTER 4 about the cost of money: BOOK REVIEW: Predictably Irrational
Writing Feedbackbenbussey87 - Dec 8, 2021 / Holt - Dec 8, 2021
|[WRITING TASK 1] IELTS Writing essays about where doctors should work.
2 - Good work on the prompt restatement aspect. However, your opinion response is failing. Due to the direct question requirements...
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