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|Task 2 - Ielts Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges
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|There has been a growing concern for lacking basic interactive skills among new graduated employees
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|The map shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010-IELTS TASK1 (Academic) Map
Writing FeedbackElise990119 - Aug 1, 2020 / Elise990119 - Aug 2, 2020
|An inborn talent can define kids performance in a particular field. Is it true?
2 - Your prompt restatement should indicate each point of view as an individual sentence. That will help you show your...
Writing Feedbackminhkhue16 - Aug 2, 2020 / Holt - Aug 2, 2020
|Task about the 4 main functions Vietnamese people used with mobile phone in three years
2 - Your paragraphs all do not contain the minimum to maximum sentence requirement of 3-5 sentences. These have resulted in...
Writing Feedbackbangquyen2003 - Aug 2, 2020 / Holt - Aug 2, 2020
|Children targeted marketing can have several disadvantages, but it should't be completely banned
2 - Your essay suffers from a lack of clarity in the presentation. Your discussions tend to be composed of incomplete...
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|Ielts task2 - Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects
2 - You have a formatting error in this essay. You accidentally turned it into a single opinion essay when the...
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|Ielts part 2 - Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
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|TASK 1 - the variances in terms of four online sales sectors in Canada in two years 2005 and 2010
3 - Essay ratings are not part of our free review service. You may request for a private essay review (email...
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|Three types of unhealthy nutrients in each meal in the USA - IELTS TASK 1 (Academic) Pie Chart
Writing FeedbackElise990119 - Jul 29, 2020 / Elise990119 - Aug 2, 2020
|Ielts writing task 1 - a climograph about rainfall and temperature
6 - Coherence&cohesion seems less valued,it might be better if you add linking words into the essay. Good work on the...
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|A longer lifespan can cause some problems for both individuals and society, but these are fixable
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Speeches over Writings?
2 - Scoring of essays are a part of our private review and URGENT review services. It is no longer part...
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|IELTS Writing task 2. Mental or physical strength in sports?
2 - This is an analytical essay response. Your opinion must show a consideration of the 2 public points of view...
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|Task1: The number of hours spent in British University
2 - In the summary overview, you should have indicated 2 things: 1. The measurement was done in percentages. 2. The...
Writing Feedbackclara2608 - Jul 31, 2020 / Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|IELTS T1 The charts below show the banana export in 1993 and 2003, the pie chart reports costs
3 - The main problem of your essay is not the content. You did well in the reporting aspect. The problem...
Writing FeedbackDolly Doloris - Jul 31, 2020 / Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|TASK 1:The graph illustrates the number of Chinese, Japanese and Indian students who enrolled ...
3 - I find this "the period in question" somewhat confusing. You might change it as "the same period", or the...
Writing Feedbackdinhquynhmai - Jul 30, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|We are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose
4 - You essay, I believe, lacks words to meet the word limit requirement. Try adding one more counterargument paragraph before...
Writing Feedbackbobi1102 - Jul 30, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|IELTS 2 - humans should not exploit animals - it is morally wrong and it harms animals
3 - I think your essay exceeded the word limit for an IELTS Writing Task 2. Try leaving out the two...
Writing Feedbackchaugiang - Jul 31, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|IETLS Task 1 - The graph includes the proportion of households owned and rented in England and Wales
4 - I believe you have wrongly used the tense, which should have been past simple instead of present simple....
Writing Feedbacktom726 - Jul 29, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|Nowadays, many high school graduates opt for a gap year instead of continuing higher education
5 - thank you guys so much for spending time reading and giving feedback to my essay. I really appreciate all...
Writing Feedbacklinhngan118 - Jul 30, 2020 / linhngan118 - Jul 31, 2020
|The number of a country's exports in a different categories and changes in each type of exports
2 - Try to write at least 175 words for the data reporting presentation. 151 words meets the minimum word requirement...
Writing Feedbackjimzz - Jul 30, 2020 / Holt - Jul 31, 2020
|WRITING TASK 2: ADVERTISING IS SUCCESSFUL OR NOT?
2 - You did very good work on this essay. You properly discussed both points of view with clear explanations and...
Writing Feedbackmonica0407 - Jul 30, 2020 / Holt - Jul 31, 2020
|Adverts all around us. Opinion on whether advertising is positive to our lives.
3 - @Holt First, I want to thank you so much for giving me assesment on my essay. Second, I'm still...
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|IELTS Writing Task 1 (The production and consumption of electricity for ten countries in 2014.)
2 - You should try to present a consolidated report of the bar chart. This would lead to a shorter and...
Writing Feedbackyiz888 - Jul 30, 2020 / Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Students education with a vast combination of subjects, or specialization on one subject with depth
2 - You have written 402 words but only 126 words are actually applicable to the prompt discussion. These relevant discussion...
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|IELTS task 2:Wearing diferent clothes is a positive or negative developement
2 - Overall Band Scoring is reserved for our private consultation and URGENT services. You may contact us via our email...
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|Many people believe that teacher should not give students tasks to do at home, others disagree
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|IELTS task 2:Traditional cultures will be lost as technology develop.Do you agree or disagree
2 - Sadly, I cannot give your request to score you on each criterion and deliver an overall band score. Those...
Writing Feedbackjohnnguyenpham - Jul 30, 2020 / Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|TOEFL: it has become an issue of whether advertisements make products seem more appealing or not.
2 - Your reasoning paragraph and closing statement are good. However, in the opening statement, you actually said that you prefer...
Writing FeedbackLavender0723 - Jul 29, 2020 / Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents.
3 - There is a 5 sentence maximum, 3 sentence minimum, for all paragraphs. Your first reasoning paragraph is over this...
Writing Feedbacksarinburritos34 - Jul 29, 2020 / Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|IELTS T2 View on shopping becoming a hobby instead of a routine domestic task
4 - I believe that your discussion is in error. You discussed the act of creating goods for shopping and its...
Writing Feedbackliz012 - Jul 29, 2020 / Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Task 2 - Youngsters spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons?
Writing Feedbacksarinburritos34 - Jul 27, 2020 / Huong22082001 - Jul 30, 2020
|It has become an issue of whether it is more beneficial to travel in our own country or not
7 - Your essay is good, but it is too long and the explanations is not clearly in the second reason....
Writing Feedbackradish327 - Jul 28, 2020 / Huong22082001 - Jul 30, 2020
|Nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online
Writing Feedbacklivetostudy123 - Jul 28, 2020 / Holt - Jul 29, 2020
|The Lion King - my favorite movie (computer-animated American musical drama)
Writing FeedbackHuong22082001 - Jul 28, 2020 / Huong22082001 - Jul 29, 2020
|Everything has two sides to it, and no except to cycling. Let's consider its pros and cons.
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|Computers are considered as the most vital intention of the last decade
Writing Feedbackandynguyen96 - Jul 28, 2020 / andynguyen96 - Jul 28, 2020
|Many people believe, that authorities are unnecessarily investing money on the arts
3 - 1/ your essay have a range of vocabularies but the word "redefine" means " give sth a new meaning",...
Writing FeedbackMindfulIELTS - Jul 28, 2020 / monica0407 - Jul 28, 2020
|Spending a lot of time at work - positive or negative?
Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Jul 28, 2020 / bdmqnh - Jul 28, 2020
|The students need to decide whether they want to choose the social science group or a science group
3 - Even though you wrote 328 words, your essay still failed to fully address the prompt requirements. Being a 5...
Writing FeedbackAngel Yang - Jul 28, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population
2 - The summary overview is incomplete. You need to include the source of the information as indicated in the image....
Writing Feedbackchems - Jul 28, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|Survey about people's consumption behavior of purchasing coffee and tea in several Australian cities
3 - You would have failed this test because you wrote too many words. The Task 1 essay only uses 150-190...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa - Jul 28, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|Classification of schooling subjects has always cast doubt on numerous educators
2 - Your overall essay does not properly respond to the prompt requirement which is: Subjects such as Art, Sport...
Writing FeedbackMindfulIELTS - Jul 28, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|More funds to science education rather than other disciplines for the country's development
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|Problems of having domestic animals - IELTS task2
5 - Essay scoring services are now only offered within our private review and URGENT services. Scoring is no longer part...
Writing Feedbacknegar7495 - Jul 27, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|Criminal Reoffence - Causes and Solutions
2 - Outline the response to the questions. The format is : Restatement + Response State the original prompt in...
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|Discuss: COMPUTER INTELLIGENCE
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|The number of people who opt to live alone are increasing in many countries around the world
4 - Hi. Sau đây là một vài suggestions của mình nha ^^: - ...being hindered or disturbing disturbed -...
Writing Feedbackdinhquynhmai - Jul 22, 2020 / Tracy Tram - Jul 28, 2020
|IELTS- Task 2: How to reduce car use
Writing FeedbackTracy Tram - Jul 28, 2020 / bdmqnh - Jul 28, 2020
|Teaching discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, or it's parents duty?
7 - Hi. In my opinion, you should eliminate the last paragraph. The 4th paragraph is more suitable to become the...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 23, 2020 / dinhquynhmai - Jul 28, 2020
|Solutions to reduce car use. What can be done to discourage people from using their car?
5 - @Holt You are so kind and meticulous because not only have you told me my deficiency but you also...
Writing FeedbackTracy Tram - Jul 27, 2020 / Tracy Tram - Jul 27, 2020
|Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems, is this +ve/-ve ?
Writing Feedbackkeithkwan14 - Jul 26, 2020 / keithkwan14 - Jul 27, 2020
|Nowadays the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?
3 - Since you are not being asked to determine the validity of the given discussion, you do not need to...
Writing Feedbackkimk - Jul 27, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Some say that domestic waste is not recycled well, therefore, authorities should make relevant laws
3 - For better TA scoring, always outline your discussion reasons in the paraphrase. This will allow the first paragraph to...
Writing Feedbackluivy567 - Jul 27, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|The modern parents almost don't take their free-time to enjoy their children's companies
3 - This prompt is used for an English language test. Specifically, it is used in as an old prompt in...
Writing FeedbackNgocnguyen777 - Jul 26, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Which is more important for a sport, is it mental strength or physical strength, and explain why.
4 - This is a 3 reasoning paragraph presentation. While you did an acceptable paraphrase of the given discussion, and you...
Writing FeedbackITW - Jul 26, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Whether traveling on our own or with a group headed by a tour guide is better remains controversial
2 - Hi, I found your supporting examples interesting. However, in the topic it mentions " travel in a group led...
Writing FeedbackBettie Orion - Jul 27, 2020 / ITW - Jul 27, 2020
|[IELTS-T2] Using smart phones and online platforms leads to lack of human face-to-face communication
6 - The prompt paraphrase should represent the topic statement, the response to the question, and a direct response to the...
Writing Feedbackthao_nguyen - Jul 24, 2020 / hoangtotk6 - Jul 26, 2020
|High wages are believed as a prominent part of delighted life rather than a sense of satisfaction
7 - Agree you showed a very wide range of vocabulary use. However, it seems to me some vocab are not...
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