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|[IELTS TASK 2]THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON THE SOCIETY WHEN THE PROPORTION OF OLDER PEOPLE IS INCREASING
Writing FeedbackKimngannguyen267 - Jul 3, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|Computers are usually claimed to be the most significant device invented by human
Writing FeedbackVCSA - Jul 6, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|ielts writing: explain some of the way in which humans are damaging the environment and solutions
Writing Feedbackhinguyn - Jul 5, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|Technology Brings Changes toward People's Interaction
4 - @rivathh Hello there, I guess you're writing a IELTS writing essay. If that so, you'd be marked down as...
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Jul 4, 2019 / bubbles117 - Jul 7, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: Hosting Olympic Games - is it good for the country?
3 - @Maria Thank you for your constructive comments. I'll be having my Ielts exam in this september and I hope...
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|Ielts writing task 2: Opinion on extra classes; one of the most challenging issues in education
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|WRITTING TEST PART 2 - TECHNOLOGICAL DEVELOPMENTS
3 - @Maria Hi Maria, I give you many thanks for helping me with this. Hope I can receive your feedback...
Writing Feedbackhoanghuuhuan248 - Jul 5, 2019 / hoanghuuhuan248 - Jul 7, 2019
|More animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on endangered list. Causes? Solutions?
4 - @totrangto Hello. I see that you're new to the forum. Welcome! I'll provide you with writing feedback. ...
Writing Feedbacktotrangto - Jul 3, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|People disagree with a school policy which forces children to learn new language. IELTS2
5 - @wyzbui Hi there! Here's some feedback on your writing. Firstly, you have unnecessarily long sentences that take...
Writing Feedbackwyzbui - Jul 5, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Is it good to increase the life expectancy?
2 - @Katherine_Tu1101 Hi there! I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. First and foremost, the structure of...
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jul 5, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinion on economic growth and its influence on the environment
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|The urban dwellers tend to live in the nuclear family nowadays
3 - @sensen thank a lot for your comment, this is the first time i have written my essay followed the...
Writing Feedbackwyzbui - Jul 4, 2019 / wyzbui - Jul 5, 2019
|Governments must invest this money in public services instead of arts. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - @trungkien2492000 Hello there! Use more appropriate transition words because the structure kind of gets lost in the process....
Writing Feedbacktrungkien2492000 - Jul 4, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|IELTS1: indicators of economic and social condition of Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire
2 - @mphuonggg Hi there. You are wasting space in your essay when you have to repeatedly mention the countries...
Writing Feedbackmphuonggg - Jul 3, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|[Essay] - Abolish death penalty forever - provide the reasons
2 - @trvaanh Hi there. The tenses of your verbs have to be approved. Always use the appropriate words when...
Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - Jul 2, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|Dealing with crimes - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
2 - @GiangNguyen1807 Hello there! Evade the usage of filler words that do not contribute substantially to your written content....
Writing FeedbackGiangNguyen1807 - Jul 2, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|American Youth and Poverty
2 - @aknutson119 Hello there! Simplify your sentences as your meaning gets a little bit lost in translation because of...
Writing Feedbackaknutson119 - Jul 1, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|How have looked the average expenditure of Australian Family between 1991 and 2001
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|WRITING TASK 1 : the total amount of gold sold in each month throughout the year of 2002 in Dubai
2 - I think your essay is pretty good. However, you have a grammatical mistake : "are measured " not "...
Writing Feedbackvieanh - Jul 2, 2019 / mphuonggg - Jul 3, 2019
|IELTS WRITING Task 1: Active participation rates in top ten sports in 1998 and 2005 in Canada
2 - I think it would be better to change some words paticipation rates ... with rates those in 1998 (word...
Writing Feedbacksensen - Jul 1, 2019 / trvaanh - Jul 2, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: A survey conducted by a university library
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|IELTS Writing Task 1: Process Diagram of Producing Reliable Forecasts
2 - Hello! Here are some advice: "... and the analysis to the sources" may sound more sensible. "With...
Writing Feedbackselinastchen - Jul 1, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 1, 2019
|Due to many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised
2 - Hi there! It is extremely important that you should check your essay carefully again to correct some spelling and...
Writing Feedbacktamtauheodan - Jul 1, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 1, 2019
|The exercise which I often do and how it get on
3 - 1. There are some spelling mistakes such as undoubtedly and every time. 2. Many of your sentences can be...
Writing FeedbackAnitaliou - Jun 30, 2019 / selinastchen - Jul 1, 2019
|IELTS task 2 : essay about self-study and study in group
4 - @oneouran Hi there! Firstly, restructure your sentences in a way that you would be able to articulate in...
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Jun 26, 2019 / Maria - Jun 30, 2019
|Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic...
Writing Feedbackchituantran99 - Jun 30, 2019 / godstar - Jun 30, 2019
|IELTS Task 2- Death Penalty is essential to control the crime rate
Writing Feedbacktonhi2002 - Jun 28, 2019 / tonhi2002 - Jun 30, 2019
|Economic growth is a way to end hunger and poverty or damage the environment
3 - @vilender Hello there. Let me provide a few comments that will hopefully help you in your writing. ...
Writing Feedbackvilender - Jun 29, 2019 / Maria - Jun 29, 2019
|Summarise the information of two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
2 - @shureoni Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I hope you find the feedback you're looking anywhere here. Next...
Writing Feedbackshureoni - Jun 29, 2019 / Maria - Jun 29, 2019
|Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation. Others want to try and improve them.
2 - -This may not only bring benefits to only themselves but ...Besides, a problems solved ... -if an applicant...
Writing Feedbackviviantruong1120 - Jun 29, 2019 / vilender - Jun 29, 2019
|Which one is better: STEM or STEAM?
3 - @solivagant Hello! Generally speaking, your writing profile is sufficient in terms of providing the bare minimum necessary content...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|High salaries for some individuals - discussion essay.
2 - @luna21 Hello. Firstly, the structure of your essay needs more work. Tinker and tamper with the body paragraphs....
Writing Feedbackluna21 - Jun 28, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Parents and some teachers recommend naughty and disobedient learners to be taught separately
3 - @tranphuongnhi Hello there. First and foremost, work on the structure of your essay. Notice how the transition in...
Writing Feedbacktranphuongnhi - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Causes and solutions of reduced family ties nowadays
3 - @nguyentran9795 Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Let me try my best to provide you with substantial feedback...
Writing Feedbacknguyentran9795 - Jun 28, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|It is better for young students to learn English with Vietnamese teachers than native teachers
5 - @tranphuongnhi Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that you find substantial feedback here that you're looking...
Writing Feedbacktranphuongnhi - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Increasing travel between countries enable people to learn different cultures or increase tension
3 - @murph Hi there! Try adding more dynamism to your writing through incorporating a more structured and yet complex...
Writing Feedbackmurph - Jun 14, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|ARE TAXES FOR AVIATION INDUSTRY APPROPRIATE?
2 - @Mikoliver Hello there! I see that you're new to the forum. Welcome! I hope that you find the...
Writing FeedbackMikoliver - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Development of economy required for fight against hunger and poverty. Threat for environment?
4 - Hello @Sun241 I hope my feedback will be useful for you you should try to avoid repetition as much...
Writing FeedbackSun271 - Jun 26, 2019 / tranphuongnhi - Jun 27, 2019
|Comparing two maps showing a difference regarding road access to a city hospital
4 - I've revised my writing. I'll appreciate a lot of anyone will like to give me some advice. _____ ...
Writing Feedbackselinastchen - Jun 25, 2019 / selinastchen - Jun 26, 2019
|IELTS-2 : Should we let old languages die?
7 - English has became become the .. live a place which can not cannot connect ... own language dies out,...
Writing Feedbacknaomi1993 - Jun 10, 2019 / oneouran - Jun 26, 2019
|The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and report
NEW - The diagram demonstrates the process of making chocolate. Overall, The process has ten parts which is begun from the...
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|IELTS Task 2- Developed and developing nations should both combat climate change
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jun 23, 2019 / Katherine_Tu1101 - Jun 25, 2019
|The price of 800 grams of four kinds of bread in a particular European country
4 - @Sangdoan Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Firstly, try to use words that would help you compress...
Writing FeedbackSangdoan - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Essay about the problem of stress
6 - @Maria Thank you very much for giving me such useful feedbacks! I will try to write better essay following...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 24, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS Task 2 regarding impact of modern technology
NEW - Topic: Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think is making them less...
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|Making people believe in Arts - IELTS task 2-- discussion Essay
Writing Feedbackluna21 - Jun 25, 2019 / agungbachruddin - Jun 25, 2019
|The amount of time spent by telephone in the UK, in three categories, over the seven-year period
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Jun 24, 2019 / oneouran - Jun 25, 2019
|[IELTS TASK 2] Advantages and disadvantages of genetically-modified foods
Writing Feedbackphamhieu98 - Jun 23, 2019 / phamhieu98 - Jun 25, 2019
|The population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
Writing FeedbackThao Huynh - Jun 24, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: A BAR CHART SHOWS IRRITANTS FOR THEATER-GOERS
4 - @thaley Hi there! Firstly, try minimizing the usage of words that are unnecessary. I repeatedly mention this to...
Writing Feedbackthaley - Jun 21, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|Animal experiments to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products
Writing Feedbacksandyhsu - Jun 23, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|The bar chart illustrates the proportion of overweight men and women in Australia
2 - @myronpage Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I...
Writing Feedbackmyronpage - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|Reasons affecting farmland degradation over the world
2 - @LUNA94 Hello there. First and foremost, I highly recommend that you try to be more concise with your...
Writing FeedbackLUNA94 - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|Room for Improvement - Rhetorical Essay Comparison and Contrast
2 - @Martinez1011 Hello there! Let me do my best to provide you with substantial feedback on your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackMartinez1011 - Jun 21, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|IELTS Part II: Should we invest in science education only for the country development.
Writing Feedbackvietcti - Jun 20, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 22, 2019
|IELTS task 1: pie charts about the average percentages of nutrients
3 - Hi, I personal think that your first and second paragraph can be combined as the first paragraph. ...
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Jun 22, 2019 / LUNA94 - Jun 22, 2019
|The pie charts below compare 2 years in terms of online sale in retail sectors in Canada
Writing Feedbacknochu307 - Jun 20, 2019 / nochu307 - Jun 21, 2019
|The invention of computers is one of the most significant inventions all the time. Academic IELTS
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|Positive & Negative to actions to effect environment
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|IELTS Writing Part II: Essay about the positive and negative development of tourism in some country
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