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|What factors contribute to teaching job satisfaction? Financial wellness and work atmosphere
2 - Kindly specify if you are reviewing for the IELTS test or just general English language writing to receive more...
Writing FeedbackJakzy - May 4, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|How ethanol fuel is produced by corn
2 - Complete your image reference in relation to the diagram.There are several types of diagrams you could have referred to....
Writing FeedbackHienle1210 - May 3, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|Ielts task 1. In chart: male and female, part-time and full-time education - ielts test exercise
Writing FeedbackJuly2004 - May 3, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|How many enquiries received in three different ways - Summarize the information
2 - It appears that you have written too many words for this essay based an the time allotment of 20...
Writing FeedbackKuang Fui - May 2, 2021 / Holt - May 3, 2021
|Government should focus on improving the economy or social services such as healthcare and education
2 - Your prompt restatement is incomplete as it represents only 1 of the 2 original discussion points. This removes the...
Writing FeedbackAlyssng - May 1, 2021 / Holt - May 2, 2021
|Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. Encouragement the use of alternative sources.
Writing Feedbacknhatminh duong - Apr 30, 2021 / Holt - May 1, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - the issue of international communication
2 - Do not alter the original theme of the discussion. The first paragraph of the task 2 essay always portrays...
Writing FeedbackQunhhoa - Apr 30, 2021 / Holt - May 1, 2021
|You bought a new HD television last week. At first it seemed to work. Letter.
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your great help and advice. I really appreciate it. I will try my...
Writing FeedbackAlishamarieng - Apr 29, 2021 / Alishamarieng - Apr 30, 2021
|Family units - Is this a positive or negative trend?
2 - Your paraphrasing is way off base. It isn't an accurate representation of the original theme and reasons that support...
Writing FeedbackHuy Ho - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 30, 2021
|Topic: Gender-specific job - IELTS Writting Task 2
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate the time you spent on checking my essay. And may...
Writing Feedbacklaamkhiee - Apr 23, 2021 / laamkhiee - Apr 30, 2021
|The bar graph illustrates the change of sales of three entertainment categories worldwide
2 - Try to avoid writing extra long sentences. While you think that you are writing a comprehensive paper and analytics,...
Writing Feedbacktung126 - Apr 28, 2021 / Holt - Apr 30, 2021
|Is it a positive trend when more workers to work from home and more students to study from home?
Writing FeedbackNuong On - Apr 28, 2021 / Nuong On - Apr 29, 2021
|A Level Media studies essay practice.
2 - You forgot to include the prompt for this essay. I assume that this is for the extended essay discussion...
Writing Feedbackabigail291 - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 29, 2021
|Proportion of water used for agriculture - writing task 1 test 1 in cam ielts practice
3 - Remember to post your thread with an image next time. The lack of image makes us difficult to give...
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|It is advised that kids should start learning foreign language early, at least from primary school
2 - The Task 2 essay requires you to clearly express your opinion, with a valid explanation within 40 minutes. That...
Writing FeedbackHanson - Apr 28, 2021 / Holt - Apr 28, 2021
|Transportation and development - Aceh Government Scholarship featuring with DAAD Germany
2 - The presentation is not as effective as it should be. It is almost as if you are writing this...
Writing Feedbackmultazam29 - Apr 26, 2021 / Holt - Apr 26, 2021
|Are the professional athletes ideal for the young people to follow?
2 - The essay has a point. However, the presentation is difficult for an English native speaker to understand. The words...
Writing FeedbackWendytrn96 - Apr 25, 2021 / Holt - Apr 26, 2021
|Camping is the ideal way of spending a holiday.
2 - The reason why you are going over the maximum word count is because you are writing the essay in...
Writing Feedbackperipetie - Apr 25, 2021 / Holt - Apr 26, 2021
|Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication?
Writing Feedbackalicebui191 - Apr 26, 2021 / Holt - Apr 26, 2021
|TOEFL : You will not learn much about life if you are always comfortable.
4 - in comfortable and in easy way: "in a comfortable and easy way" or "in comfortable and easy ways". ...
Writing Feedbackishamsh789 - Apr 23, 2021 / alicebui191 - Apr 26, 2021
|Living in a media-rich society. Essay about the influence of the media on our lives.
3 - I think instead of "it can't be denied", you can say "It is undeniable that..." "Firstly, it's pretty helpful...
Writing Feedbackphuongnguyen0610 - Apr 19, 2021 / alicebui191 - Apr 26, 2021
|Everybody should travel since there are many clear advantages that traveling provides
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|Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program
3 - In my opinion, the sentence can be rewritten "To begin with, unpaid community service enables students to ..." ...
Writing Feedbackphammai2309 - Apr 24, 2021 / alicebui191 - Apr 26, 2021
|TOEFL: We should not allow children to play games. Below reasons and examples
3 - Essay sounds good to me! Yet one thing, you mentioned your cousin does not live in reality anymore, you...
Writing Feedbackhabibka - Apr 21, 2021 / Emma19 - Apr 26, 2021
|Should TV channels give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?
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|Is it true that hard work and determination bring success in jobs?
2 - The original prompt requests that you discuss the topic based on a 3 paragraph format. It clearly states: Discuss...
Writing FeedbackNgochuyen - Apr 24, 2021 / Holt - Apr 25, 2021
|IELTS Task 2 - Topic: Environmental problems & loss of species of animals and plants
2 - Your essay comes across as a solely general opinion presentation. You are not using the correct format for the...
Writing Feedbackthanhvu94 - Apr 24, 2021 / Holt - Apr 25, 2021
|Write a news: A Poor Old Man returned 1 Billion VND
2 - The farmer is from the commune, where did he find the bag? What were the circumstances when he...
Writing FeedbackShijueding - Apr 23, 2021 / Holt - Apr 24, 2021
|The main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species
2 - Incorrect sentence structure. A comma, rather than a period is required in this presentation as the current prior...
Writing Feedbackphamlinh99 - Apr 22, 2021 / Holt - Apr 23, 2021
|TOEFL: It is more important to set realistic goal than ambitious goals.
Writing FeedbackEmma19 - Apr 21, 2021 / Dipsana - Apr 23, 2021
|I agree with the statement that it's more important to set the realistic goals than ambitious goals
3 - Hello Pallavi. You have written an excellent essay. Did you check the time and the word count? The advice...
Writing FeedbackPallavi Kumari - Apr 21, 2021 / alfaibtprep - Apr 22, 2021
|The widely held opinion is that some governments are investing too much money in the arts
2 - Your response to the prompt question is incorrect. As you can see below: OQ: To what extent do...
Writing Feedbackkitana2505 - Apr 21, 2021 / Holt - Apr 22, 2021
|WRITING TASK 2: Unsatisfactory job, shortage of money or Improve and try
4 - the conclusion should be written in 2 sentences. the first one to gather the ideas in your essay and...
Writing FeedbackLalalala012 - Apr 17, 2021 / hglingg - Apr 21, 2021
|Some people are regarded to be born with certain talents, and others are not
4 - i think you should give more evidence about children are born with natural abilities. don't give only examples. and...
Writing Feedbackyendao - Apr 17, 2021 / hglingg - Apr 21, 2021
|The graph illustrates carbon dioxide emitted per person on average, in four different countries
2 - The summary overview is a run-on presentation. The first sentence should have ended after the inclusive years were presented....
Writing Feedbackblackjack - Apr 13, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|On Travelling to DaLat Trip
2 - I would have to say that the format for the presentation is improper. You are using a poetry based...
Writing FeedbackTientranvn2001 - Apr 9, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|Teenagers should have the opportunity to hold a part time essay
2 - If I were not to consider this based on Task 2 essay requirements, since you did not specify if...
Writing FeedbackCupcake023 - Apr 9, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|IELTS writing task 2: Punishing children at an early age, agree or disagree?
2 - Your essay response format is incorrect. The prompt paraphrase and response to the direct questions have altered the response...
Writing Feedbackkiro14893 - Apr 1, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|IELTS-WRITING TASK 2 about Water Pollution (causes and effects)
2 - Did you time yourself when you wrote this essay? Assuming that you wrote 376 words before the 40 minutes...
Writing Feedbackshof13 - Apr 18, 2021 / Holt - Apr 18, 2021
|IELTS writing task 1: the estimated oil capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day.
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|We need to take an action - daily diet and physical activities to reduce the number of obese kids
2 - The essay is based on your general knowledge about obesity and its effect on children. That is how the...
Writing Feedbackbinh - Apr 4, 2021 / Holt - Apr 17, 2021
|Relationship Between Anxiety And Motivation in College
3 - In your intro you mention your own struggles in a way that feels out of place. The wording is...
Writing FeedbackJordanMKnapp - Apr 14, 2021 / carlieh - Apr 16, 2021
|A Look Into Climate Change Skepticism
2 - Provide a factual, evidence supported example of this climate change. A particular region of the world where the...
Writing Feedbackhebasaad32 - Apr 16, 2021 / Holt - Apr 16, 2021
|The maps below show the development of a particular area from 1965 to the present day
3 - Your overview may causes reader confusion, as you describe specifically. The amount of information of the last two paragraphs...
Writing Feedbacklahieuu63 - Mar 30, 2021 / tung126 - Apr 15, 2021
|A hobby or interest can change from time to time as a reflection of trends and fashions
2 - Your first reasoning paragraph is over explained. It is too wordy and forced you to write over 300 words,...
Writing FeedbackRachael12345 - Apr 14, 2021 / Holt - Apr 15, 2021
|The change in percentage of the population - IELTS Writing Task 1: Table
2 - Since you are trying to help the reader create a mental picture of this table, you should include the...
Writing Feedbacktung126 - Apr 14, 2021 / Holt - Apr 15, 2021
|These days youngsters mimic among others their favourite sports personalities.
2 - You are being asked to respond to a direct question: Question: Do you believe professional athletes make good...
Writing FeedbackHarleneisme - Apr 13, 2021 / Holt - Apr 14, 2021
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year
3 - For one thing,you did't answer the question directly because you changed the question from advantages and disadvantages to pros...
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen2910 - Apr 11, 2021 / blackjack - Apr 13, 2021
|IELTS Formal Letter: college cafeteria lunch
2 - The first sentence in the letter is too abrupt. You need to have a formal and cordial opening paragraph...
Writing Feedbacknkoksokbaby - Apr 11, 2021 / Holt - Apr 13, 2021
|IELTS: Formal Letter: School renovation and volunteering
2 - The letter is unclear regarding the reason for your visit to the local school. Were you there as part...
Writing Feedbacknkoksokbaby - Apr 11, 2021 / Holt - Apr 13, 2021
|Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?
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|People buy things such as books, air tickets and groceries on the internet
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|THE MIGRATION FROM RURAL AREA TO CITIES IS INCREASING
2 - You have made a serious error in the prompt restatement presentation. The instructions asks you to present a thesis...
Writing Feedbackkhanhdoan_1110 - Apr 10, 2021 / Holt - Apr 11, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Discussion - The study of food science and its preparation
2 - This is a 5 paragraph discussion essay. The format for the information presentation should be based on a 2...
Writing Feedbackphatblack - Apr 9, 2021 / Holt - Apr 10, 2021
|Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment. There's nothing we can't do.
3 - Hi. As @Holt said, I believe it would have been better if you had outlined the reasons for your...
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|These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers in secondary schools
Writing Feedbackhaavyy - Apr 4, 2021 / phatblack - Apr 9, 2021
|Celebrity lives in the media - ( to what extent do u agree or disagree )
2 - As this is an extent essay, your actual opinion must be presented in the paraphrasing section to help represent...
Writing Feedbackhuathduoc - Apr 8, 2021 / Holt - Apr 9, 2021
|Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Explain why.
2 - I cannot continue to review this essay as it falls under the minimum word count. Out of 250 words,...
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|Reasons to support the idea of having new teachers each year
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|Funds for system that provides people with various kinds of transportation to commute
2 - Your discussion is short by 2 words of the minimum 250 word count. There will still be a minimal...
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