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Research advice on TOEFL, SAT, IELTS, GRE and other academic essays (page 2)

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The bar charts compares the percentage of Australian men and women who do regular exercise

Writing FeedbackChi Han - Oct 16, 2017 / AliminHamzah - Oct 18, 2017
IELTS Task 2: Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 16, 2017 / AliminHamzah - Oct 18, 2017
The unpaid community service is not necessary to be a compulsory program in high school

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[IELTS] We lived in a world of technology these days. Opinion essay.

Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Oct 17, 2017 / itsme2216 - Oct 17, 2017
Nowadays, a lot of new, big supermarkets are appearing every day - what about local business?

Writing Feedbackjust_writer - Oct 17, 2017 / TJLuschen - Oct 17, 2017
[IELTS Task2] learning a different language benefits our lives apart from working and traveling

Writing Feedbackkatty1234600 - Oct 5, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Oct 17, 2017
Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school.

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The developments of West Park Secondary School, from 1950 when it was erected, to 2010.

Writing FeedbackNanadinh - Oct 17, 2017 / Holt - Oct 17, 2017
IELTS WRITING TASK II - TRADITIONAL AND MODERN MUSIC; each type has different purposes and style

Writing FeedbackLUBR2310 - Oct 16, 2017 / Holt - Oct 17, 2017
[Task 1] The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Jul 25, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 17, 2017
I disagree that university should accept same number of men and women in each subjects.

Writing FeedbackChi Han - Oct 16, 2017 / Holt - Oct 17, 2017
[IELTS] The percentage of female employees in major tech companies in the US

Writing Feedbacknamibdesert - Oct 12, 2017 / Chi Han - Oct 16, 2017
Writing Task 1: incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transport

Writing FeedbackFlashBanG - Oct 16, 2017 / Holt - Oct 16, 2017
ielts task 2 : - People should work a fixed number of hours per week

Writing Feedbackvipy411 - Oct 2, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Oct 16, 2017
writing task 2 : some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree

Writing FeedbackAliminHamzah - Oct 16, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Oct 16, 2017
[IELTS] Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem.

Writing FeedbackJimmy879873 - Oct 12, 2017 / AliminHamzah - Oct 16, 2017
The essay about nature and nurture kind of talent

Writing Feedbackakesha06 - Oct 14, 2017 / akesha06 - Oct 15, 2017
There are many reasons why people should choose a specified job

Writing FeedbackAAriel - Oct 15, 2017 / sgassani - Oct 15, 2017
TOEFL: Advertising causing people to impulsively buy things

Writing FeedbackWriter2037 - Oct 13, 2017 / Writer2037 - Oct 14, 2017
TOEFL - either you choose the same job as your parents do or enter a new field

Writing FeedbackFan0203 - Oct 13, 2017 / Fan0203 - Oct 13, 2017
IELTS Writing task 2: Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result.

Writing FeedbackAliminHamzah - Oct 10, 2017 / hiimsandra - Oct 13, 2017
Social networking is a double-edged sword - people become more selfish or narrow in their lives

Writing FeedbackLingMei - Oct 13, 2017 / Holt - Oct 13, 2017
Should working hours be reduced?

Writing Feedbackrubychautran - Oct 12, 2017 / rubychautran - Oct 13, 2017
Agricultural land productivity - IELTS-Cambridge 8- test 1

Writing Feedbackhiimsandra - Oct 12, 2017 / hiimsandra - Oct 13, 2017
Co-ed college? Which esbetter for students - single-sex school or a co-ed counterpart

Writing Feedbackfurqanrahmat12 - Oct 13, 2017 / Holt - Oct 13, 2017
Changing job; my writing should score 6 for IELTS, can you help me to improve my writing ability

Writing Feedbackintern0410 - Oct 11, 2017 / intern0410 - Oct 13, 2017
The multi-stage process of creating a coffee (Task 2)

Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Dec 6, 2015 / irfan727 - Oct 13, 2017
The perseverance can bring us through the most difficult times. Narrative essay correction.

Writing Feedbackbenh44 - Oct 12, 2017 / Holt - Oct 13, 2017
Is paying taxes enough? Writing IELTS Task 2 attempt

Writing Feedbackayibram - Oct 12, 2017 / ayibram - Oct 12, 2017
More People Would Like To Pay More Attention To The Famous People. This Is A Positive or negative?

Writing FeedbackMili5464 - Oct 12, 2017 / Holt - Oct 12, 2017
Writ. task 1: the pie chart provides information on 5 major purposes for student to study in Britain

Writing FeedbackNhu Vu - Oct 12, 2017 / Holt - Oct 12, 2017
City - for the young / Rural - for the old? Living in small community or not?

Writing FeedbackAliminHamzah - Oct 12, 2017 / Jimmy879873 - Oct 12, 2017
The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and Fonton, which is a neighboring town - development

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Oct 11, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 12, 2017
Public celeberations such as festivals, holidays... shouldn't be financed by governments

Writing FeedbackThao Huong - Oct 11, 2017 / Thao Huong - Oct 12, 2017
Topic: The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

Writing Feedbackvuthanhhoa - Oct 11, 2017 / Holt - Oct 12, 2017
The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization.

Writing FeedbackWriter2037 - Oct 11, 2017 / Writer2037 - Oct 12, 2017
IELTS Task 2 - Support opinion - Why is physical education important?

Writing FeedbackTran Minh Hien - Oct 6, 2017 / AliminHamzah - Oct 12, 2017
[TOEFL] Do students learn much when they work together on assigned projects.

Writing Feedbacksajastu - Oct 5, 2017 / sajastu - Oct 11, 2017
Memoir writing draft about my memories in Korea

Writing FeedbackChocomint777 - Oct 11, 2017 / Holt - Oct 11, 2017
History HW - One Object that Can Reflect Modern Civilization

Writing FeedbackSherrywu - Oct 10, 2017 / Holt - Oct 11, 2017
[TOEFL independent task] What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult?

Writing Feedbacksophia1942 - Oct 10, 2017 / Holt - Oct 11, 2017
I am more inclined to study with group of students rather than preparing to test alone [TOEFL]

Writing FeedbackKenChen - Oct 10, 2017 / KenChen - Oct 10, 2017
Only by challenging existing knowledge, we are able to expand our thinking about the universe

Writing Feedbackimpatient101 - Oct 10, 2017 / Holt - Oct 10, 2017
Parent should not pressure their children to choose particular profession.

Writing FeedbackLiAnSoh - Sep 28, 2017 / lamphuongta - Oct 10, 2017
Contrast high schools and universities - Contrast Essay

Writing FeedbackHue Nguyen - Oct 1, 2017 / lamphuongta - Oct 10, 2017
[IELTS writing task 1] Table: Underground railway information summary

Writing Feedbackhgianghgiang - Sep 26, 2017 / AliminHamzah - Oct 10, 2017
Describe a strong memory based upon a smell

Writing Feedbackdvhanh - Oct 9, 2017 / Holt - Oct 9, 2017
Television is one of the most wonderful inventions of human. And how it influence our children?

Writing Feedbacklamphuongta - Oct 9, 2017 / Holt - Oct 9, 2017
TOEFL: Children should play and study rather than help do the household chores?

Writing FeedbackSunnyLai - Oct 9, 2017 / Holt - Oct 9, 2017
More time and effort on improving the world now than it was in the past?

Writing FeedbackSunnyLai - Sep 29, 2017 / SunnyLai - Oct 9, 2017
IELTS Task 2 - Should the past criminal record be presented to the jury?

Writing Feedbackrubychautran - Sep 28, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 9, 2017
IELTS Task 1 _Description of Graph - spending time on the phone calls

Writing FeedbackIELTSWARRIOR - Sep 18, 2017 / eddies - Oct 9, 2017
TOEFL: invest in infrastructure and physical plant V.S. invest in keeping the faculty satisfied

Writing Feedbackdiligentwriter - Sep 20, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 8, 2017
[task 1] The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Oct 8, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 8, 2017
Moving abroad - challenge in your life that helps to overcome weaknesses and broaden horizon

Writing Feedbackneox3 - Oct 8, 2017 / Holt - Oct 8, 2017
Task 2: Exams - the best method of assessing educational achievement, does they?

Writing Feedbackvanslogy - Oct 8, 2017 / Holt - Oct 8, 2017
Effect of Single-gender schools - wrtiting task 2 for IELTS

Writing FeedbackIELTS_Academic - Oct 7, 2017 / IELTS_Academic - Oct 7, 2017
The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Oct 6, 2017 / LadyOfClockwork - Oct 6, 2017
Social networking is an usefull thing if you use it in the right way.

Writing FeedbackEmyviadolorosa - Oct 5, 2017 / Emyviadolorosa - Oct 6, 2017
TOEFL: Nowadays working fast has more value than high precision at job?

Writing Feedbacksasan_91 - Oct 4, 2017 / Chichi9 - Oct 6, 2017

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