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Smoking - Writing task 2: Topic- Social issues

2 - Use the first person pronoun "I" in this case. The essay will not write itself. The essay does...

Writing FeedbackThang2910 - Jun 23, 2024 / Holt - Jun 24, 2024
Writing task 2 The media should limit how much bad news they report

3 - In addition to what the consultant has said, you may want to carefully proofread essays. You have written 'awaring'...

Writing Feedbackmelee - Jun 21, 2024 / mvo_rey - Jun 23, 2024
In this complex and fast-paced world, it is essential for young people to equip basic pecuniary skil

2 - I believe that you wrote this as a part of your IELTS task 2 essay preparation. Unfortunately, you overwrote...

Writing FeedbackIamSallyNguyen - Jun 22, 2024 / Holt - Jun 23, 2024
Essay about ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework

2 - There are 262 words in this essay. I assume that you used more than 40 minutes to write this...

Writing Feedbackdung_284 - Jun 21, 2024 / Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Writing task 1 - the chart shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office

2 - Always divide your summary overview into 2 sentences. There is a 2 sentence and 40 word requirement for that...

Writing Feedbacktakaleon - Jun 21, 2024 / Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Essay about the money spent by British parents (Ielts writing Task 1 )

2 - Keep the task 1 essay to only 200 words. By writing 243 words, you will more than likely cut...

Writing Feedbackpthanh_0419 - Jun 20, 2024 / Holt - Jun 22, 2024
computers are becoming a part lessons at school Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

2 - I don't know where to begin in terms of correcting your essay. You have 14 misspelled words, that affect...

Writing Feedbackhoangn109 - Jun 20, 2024 / Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Prolonging lifespan - life expectancy is increasing.

3 - "Some people would argue that longer lives could bring more positive aspects. From my perspective, in contrast, I do...

Writing Feedbackhnaht - Jun 18, 2024 / mvo_rey - Jun 22, 2024
The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.

2 - Your descriptive report is only 149 words. Though minimal, you will still receive a small deduction for not meeting...

Writing FeedbackLemonChi - Jun 20, 2024 / Holt - Jun 22, 2024
The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

2 - The first thing you have to learn about the task 1 essay is that you have to properly identify...

Writing Feedbackkhoivuive - Jun 19, 2024 / Holt - Jun 21, 2024
ielts writing task foreign cultures introduced

2 - You focused so much on vocabulary usage in the first paragraph that you lost sight of the original topic...

Writing Feedbackduan2207 - Jun 18, 2024 / Holt - Jun 21, 2024
IELTS Task 1 demand for electricity and how electricity is used.

2 - The summary overview must be composed of at least 2 separate sentences. You have written a run on sentence....

Writing Feedbackrubie - Jun 17, 2024 / Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Writing task 2 - Topic Education Study Subjects

2 - You don't have to say this anymore. The examiner will understand the writing instructions based upon how you...

Writing Feedbacktrangmon - Jun 17, 2024 / Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Is it better to read books on paper or digital?

2 - You have missed the point of the prompt. This is a single opinion essay. Your answer should be based...

Writing FeedbackbonnieBux - Jun 16, 2024 / Holt - Jun 21, 2024
All children should be made to wear school uniforms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - The word force is too strong for this discussion. You should be using positive words instead of negative...

Writing FeedbackHan Yujin - Jun 14, 2024 / Holt - Jun 21, 2024
The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.

2 - The summary overview is not very effective seeing as it is a run-on sentence. This should be divided into...

Writing Feedbackhynnie - Jun 13, 2024 / Holt - Jun 20, 2024
IELTS TASK 2 about focusing on endangered animal or human problems

3 - So I should give my opinion in the introduction and summarize my points in the conclusion right. And the...

Writing Feedbacknatalia3k - Jun 8, 2024 / natalia3k - Jun 17, 2024
unpaid work - compulsory or not

3 - @Holt so could you examine this essay in all 4 criteria of the ielts writing test? thank you so...

Writing Feedbackdohkyungsoofc - Jun 8, 2024 / dohkyungsoofc - Jun 13, 2024
youngsters should be required to have full-time education until they are 18. Agree or disagree

2 - I know this is a task 2 writing essay. Why are you shouting about it? You should temper...

Writing FeedbackKimkimsuzi111 - Jun 12, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in

2 - The essay is short of the minimum requirement by 2 words. That is too bad. You will still receive...

Writing FeedbackNglinh177 - Jun 12, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
towns constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable for residents.problem and solution

2 - Decades does not properly reflect a synonym for centuries. Centuries equivalent words that you could have used are...

Writing Feedbackslowenie - Jun 11, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS QUESTION: Are GMOs as a viable solution to feed the increasing population?

2 - Complete the statement. What are the 2 downsides you are most concerned about? Create an accurate thesis statement...

Writing FeedbackSakuradesu - Jun 11, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
in many cities, people these days know little about their neighbors and lack a sense of community.

2 - The essay is simply too long for a 40 minute writing task. You need to learn to write in...

Writing Feedbackjenny_0507 - Jun 11, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Living in big cities is bad for people's health

2 - The main problem that this essay will encounter in the preliminary scoring consideration is the lack of clarity in...

Writing Feedbackhabitien0108 - Jun 10, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do u think it's a positive or negative development?

2 - I am not sure if you can actually write this essay using the same number of words during the...

Writing FeedbackMinhAnkFam - Jun 10, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
BODY TASK 1 the salary of Anthropology

2 - With only 136 words written, this task 1 essay will automatically get a failing score. You have to write...

Writing Feedbackthanh2509 - Jun 10, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001.

2 - There is a minimum 2 sentence requirement for the summary overview. You wrote a run-on sentence instead. Unfortunately, the...

Writing FeedbackThomasDickson - Jun 9, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Many city dwellers these days don't get enough physical exercise. Write causes and solutions

2 - This does not have the same meaning as physical activities or physical exercise. You must improve your English...

Writing FeedbackLuktcong - Jun 9, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

2 - The report is too long and repetitive. You are over stretching the report in an effort to use as...

Writing Feedbacklitherine - Jun 8, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS Essay about the necessary of recycling laws

2 - The writer's opinion is an integral part of the preliminary task scoring requirement. Therefore, it is imperative that you...

Writing FeedbackCTA - Jun 8, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

2 - I cannot say if you did a good job with writing a response to the prompt without reading the...

Writing FeedbackKIMANHLE - Jun 7, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ( TOPIC CRIME )

2 - Oops! You made a mistake in your writer's opinion presentation. Let's compare the original question with your response: ...

Writing Feedbackthhoa - Jun 6, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
TASK 2: Government regulation in competition

2 - Do not over discuss your presentations. Keep in mind that there is a 40 minute writing limit for the...

Writing Feedbackdinhtrang2905 - Jun 5, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Ielts 2 - Traveling to other places - Agree/Disagree

2 - There are 2 reasons that this essay will receive a failing score. The first is in relation to the...

Writing FeedbackBaoNgocPham - Jun 4, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Task 1 Cam 10 Test 1 picture in the book or internet

2 - The summary overview should be composed of at least 2 sentences, covering at least 40 words. Your presentation does...

Writing Feedbacktranhishere - Jun 3, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies

2 - Unfortunately, your essay does not meet the minimum word requirement. So you will not manage to get a passing...

Writing FeedbackUrmom123 - Jun 3, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone.

2 - You should be clearer when referencing this term. It would have been better to use the term "despite"...

Writing Feedbackhhvy - Jun 3, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELT WRITING TASK 2: competition for university

2 - There is no reference to opinions being divided in the original discussion topic presentation. You cannot use that...

Writing FeedbackMalaila - Jun 3, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instruments

2 - The reporting of the information is accurate. It is well presented and shows that the image was truly analyzed...

Writing Feedbackthaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
THE VIEWS OF GIVING HOMEWORK TO CHILDREN

2 - This is an incomplete prompt restatement. You cannot just say that you will show the 2 views, you...

Writing Feedbackeirlys - Jun 2, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Task 2: Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV

2 - An argument is not the same as a belief. The original prompt referred to the belief of some people,...

Writing Feedbacksherrydn - Jun 2, 2024 / Holt - Jun 9, 2024
WRITING PART 1 - PARTICIPATING IN REGULAR ACTIVITIES

2 - Is there a chance that you could write all of this information in a shorter manner during the actual...

Writing Feedbackvananh1009 - Jun 2, 2024 / Holt - Jun 9, 2024
It is important for children to learn the difference thing between right and wrong at an early age.

4 - In your introduction and conclusion, I believe that you should state your opinion and main ideas. In addition, more...

Writing Feedbackktin152 - May 30, 2024 / CTA - Jun 8, 2024
[Writing Task 2] At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively...

3 - I think you should have a topic sentence in your paragraph 1 in clear, and then based on this...

Writing FeedbackTeddyDua123 - Jun 1, 2024 / nhim3607 - Jun 7, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1] The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

2 - You cannot complete 266 words in 20 minutes. You have written a task 2 essay in this case. You...

Writing Feedbacktloc354 - Jun 1, 2024 / Holt - Jun 6, 2024
[PART2] In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries

2 - The second paragraph strayed from the comparison discussion. It entered into a government responsibility discussion instead. So you cannot...

Writing Feedbackchloepham - May 31, 2024 / Holt - Jun 6, 2024
Young people today don't give enough time to help their community. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - Your opening sentence is practically a cut and paste of the original statement. You did not alter it enough...

Writing FeedbackNeez - May 30, 2024 / Holt - Jun 6, 2024
advantages and disadvantages of encouraging corporations moving from major cities to regional areas.

2 - You over discussed the essay without actually addressing the discussion topic properly. Therefore, regardless of the content of your...

Writing FeedbackTUV - May 30, 2024 / Holt - Jun 6, 2024
countries should produce food for their populations to eat and import as little as possible

2 - It is not important to the reviewer that you explain why people might support the point of view that...

Writing Feedbackhiuhiu - May 29, 2024 / Holt - Jun 6, 2024
Writing task 1: The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money

3 - there are some errors in your writing such as "an rise" . The overall plays an important part in...

Writing Feedbacklilinhxk - May 27, 2024 / thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - WASTE OUTPUT

3 - There are some plural errors in your writing as the phrase "both company" should be changed into "both companies"....

Writing Feedbackvananh1009 - May 28, 2024 / thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
WRITING TASK 1: THE DRIVING TEST PASS RATE

4 - there are some spelling errors in your writing. "periodd" and " double" should be rewritten to "period" and "doubled"....

Writing Feedbacktrinhnguyen20304 - May 29, 2024 / thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - Fast food should be taxed or not? Do you agree or disagree?

3 - Hi I think you repeated the word "impose" many times, try to paraphrase it in different ways...

Writing Feedbackviscaria - May 29, 2024 / vananh1009 - Jun 2, 2024
Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and travel. Discuss

3 - The idea and brainstroming very good but i think it too long and not sure you can write this...

Writing Feedbackthuy18181 - May 20, 2024 / Phuonglynnh - Jun 1, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - technology imporoves communication and transport

3 - Hi, I just a student and i can just give you feedback about ideas development, and kinds of that...

Writing Feedbackits_dylan - May 23, 2024 / viscaria - May 29, 2024
In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products

2 - There is no need for a measured response in this statement. You are only being asked to agree...

Writing Feedbacknhat1303 - May 24, 2024 / Holt - May 28, 2024
Success: Hard Work Or Luck

2 - Rather than reviewing this as a task 2 essay, I will review it as an English grammar practice essay...

Writing FeedbackOksipyzh2 - May 21, 2024 / Holt - May 27, 2024
Burmese Value and Christian Education

2 - The paragraph is missing vital information that would make it a valid, acceptable, and informative paragraph. You need to...

Writing FeedbackZoro2000 - May 21, 2024 / Holt - May 27, 2024
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later

2 - I am not sure what you are trying to say with this point of view. What authenticity? The...

Writing FeedbackNghi Nguyen - May 20, 2024 / Holt - May 27, 2024
Rough Draft. Enhancing Critical Thinking online learning environments

2 - You could further develop the content of this paragraph by continuing to explain what activities can be used...

Writing FeedbackVeloz73 - May 19, 2024 / Holt - May 27, 2024

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