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|MANY PEOPLE FIND IT DIFFICULT TO BALANCE THEIR RESPONSIBILITY AT HOME AND IN THE WORKPLACE
6 - @Thich Thong Luc Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that you find the previous writing feedbacks to...
Writing FeedbackThich Thong Luc - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|What are my three biggest weaknesses? - Cancer Diagnosis
3 - @cmedwards Hello there! Welcome to this forum. I hope you find this writing feedback beneficial for your endeavors in...
Writing Feedbackcmedwards - Jul 28, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Group learning or individual learning is better?
5 - @ththao_99 Hello there! Welcome to the forum! I'm an active contributor here; and I hope you find all of...
Writing Feedbackththao_99 - Jul 28, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Some people think that GM crops are a positive development. Others argue that they are dangerous
2 - maybe explain what a gm crop is first, before abbreviating. it helps for people who are unfamiliar with the...
Writing FeedbackCay nho - Jul 28, 2019 / jessiemkay - Jul 29, 2019
|Nuclear energy, economy and health - Ielts task2
3 - @Maria Thank for yours advices. I'll try my best to shorten my sentence in the next essay. However, maybe...
Writing FeedbackJackson97010 - Jul 26, 2019 / Jackson97010 - Jul 27, 2019
|Waste recycling and law - Argumentative essay
5 - Thank you, @Cay nho, @numbus2k2 and @Maria for your constructive feedback, really appreciate. Additionally, how about an example sentences...
Writing Feedbackqromj19 - Jul 26, 2019 / qromj19 - Jul 27, 2019
|Allocation of public funds between road and railway projects
4 - @rivathh Thank you a lot! @Maria Can you explain more about "create more dyanism in your writing"? Thank you...
Writing FeedbackVeranda - Jul 24, 2019 / Veranda - Jul 27, 2019
|Junk food is damaged to health. Some people think education is a good solution while others disagree
2 - @Cay nho Hello there. Thanks for being back to the forum. I hope to provide you with writing feedback...
Writing FeedbackCay nho - Jul 27, 2019 / Maria - Jul 27, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: International conferences in 3 cities
4 - Thank you @stella898 and @Maria for your feedback. I'll be sure to stay active and continue to learn from...
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 24, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 26, 2019
|Equal Distribution; there should be same chances for both genders to get post-graduate studies
Writing Feedbacktinapakshad1 - Jul 8, 2019 / ThuanPhat - Jul 26, 2019
|There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home.
3 - @Maria Dear Ms. Maria! Thank for your feedback. It will help to improve my writing style. Actually, I will...
Writing FeedbackThuanPhat - Jul 26, 2019 / ThuanPhat - Jul 26, 2019
|One of the major problems we are faced with today is obesity. Kids suffer from it too
2 - @Cay nho Hello there. Thanks for coming back to the forum.. I hope you find the feedback here productive...
Writing FeedbackCay nho - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 26, 2019
|Having more money and less free time is better than earning less and having more free time?
Writing FeedbackAnn_Ng - Jul 25, 2019 / Ann_Ng - Jul 26, 2019
|IELTS writing task 1: The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.
6 - @lichien0422 Hello there. I apologize for the delay, but I'll try to provide you with writing feedback on...
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - Jul 19, 2019 / Maria - Jul 25, 2019
|Friendship with work mates - ielts task 2
3 - @Ngann Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find the feedbacks your receive here to be...
Writing FeedbackNgann - Jul 24, 2019 / Maria - Jul 25, 2019
|Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to the growth of a country.
4 - @educator0402 Hello there. I apologize for the delay. But I'm here to provide you with writing feedback on your...
Writing Feedbackeducator0402 - Jul 19, 2019 / Maria - Jul 25, 2019
|The graph shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal
5 - @nguyenle Hello there. I apologize for the delay. However, I'll still try to provide you with writing feedback in...
Writing Feedbacknguyenle - Jul 19, 2019 / Maria - Jul 24, 2019
|Is it possible that cost of fuel can tackle the environmental pollutions?
3 - @khucthutrang Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I'll be providing you with writing feedback on your essay. I hope...
Writing Feedbackkhucthutrang - Jul 24, 2019 / Maria - Jul 24, 2019
|Better to Investing more in public services rather than space programs? IELTS Task 2
Writing Feedbackjocelyn wang - Jul 18, 2019 / nguyenle - Jul 24, 2019
|IELTS task 2: Government give most support to Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics
Writing Feedbackkhoahre123 - Jul 23, 2019 / khoahre123 - Jul 24, 2019
|TOEFL Writing Do you agree if government should spend more money in support of arts than in athletic
3 - @Maria Thanks for your prompt reply. It's really a good and useful feedback! I'll keep in mind and come...
Writing Feedbackrilakkukkuma - Jul 24, 2019 / rilakkukkuma - Jul 24, 2019
|Home work has disadvantages, but it's helpful for students
5 - it seems that you have quite a number of vocabulary but just don't know how to connect them correctly....
Writing FeedbackCamVan2411 - Jul 17, 2019 / rilakkukkuma - Jul 24, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: More good news on the media
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 23, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 24, 2019
|Impact of modern communication means to people's social lives and relationships
4 - @Kaze Vo Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I hope you find this...
Writing FeedbackKaze Vo - Jul 22, 2019 / Maria - Jul 23, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2; Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life
3 - @thaonguyen1st Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback on this essay. I hope this somehow helps you along...
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen1st - Jul 23, 2019 / Maria - Jul 23, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: living in foreign countries and language issue
3 - @linhchin Hello there. Let me provide you with writing feedback on this essay. Firstly, I would improve on...
Writing Feedbacklinhchin - Jul 23, 2019 / Maria - Jul 23, 2019
|Best way to resolve the problems of big traffic and pollution by introducing higher price of petrol
2 - @rivathh Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback on your content. Firstly, I commend the fact that...
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Jul 23, 2019 / Maria - Jul 23, 2019
|Sharing scientific / business / academic information - pros and cons - ielts
3 - @Maria Thanks for your advice, I will try to improve the problems you mentioned. This really means a lot...
Writing FeedbackStyles - Jul 22, 2019 / Styles - Jul 23, 2019
|My Opinion of Job Satisfaction
Writing FeedbackJoycechen - Jul 22, 2019 / Joycechen - Jul 23, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : THE STUDENT'S DILEMMA - STUDYING AT UNIVERSITY OR GETTING A JOB
2 - @thaonguyen1902 hello there, 1. a grammar mistake in the second paragraph: "starting a job straightly after school" 2. "they...
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen1902 - Jul 22, 2019 / rivathh - Jul 23, 2019
|People in huge cities either live alone or in small family units instead of a large, extended family
Writing FeedbackDoan Ngoc - Jul 21, 2019 / Doan Ngoc - Jul 22, 2019
|Governments should focus on economic progress or other types of improvement are equally important?
Writing FeedbackYHLin - Jul 22, 2019 / YHLin - Jul 22, 2019
|IELTS2- the pursuit of student working or traveling in a gap year
2 - @s410377088 Hi there. I'll provide you with writing feedback Firstly, ensure that you maintain an academic tone for...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Jul 22, 2019 / Maria - Jul 22, 2019
|Soulmate Friends - Compare and Contrast Essay (point by point method)
2 - @Kimdash Hello there. Let me provide you with writing feedback on this essay. Firstly, try to make concise...
Writing FeedbackKimdash - Jul 21, 2019 / Maria - Jul 22, 2019
|TOFEL Writing test_Do you agree with that in twenty years there will be fewer cars?
2 - @ClaireQQ Hi there. Let me provide you with writing feedback. First and foremost, ensure that the forms of...
Writing FeedbackClaireQQ - Jul 21, 2019 / Maria - Jul 22, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 2 - OBESITY IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM WHICH AFFECTS MANY
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen1902 - Jul 20, 2019 / thaonguyen1902 - Jul 21, 2019
|Some people predict that, because of the spread of internet news, newspaper will disappear
3 - Hi @leduongminh02 Be sure to check your spellings carefully when typing. There are some minor mistakes: "other stuffs" -...
Writing Feedbackleduongminh02 - Jul 18, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 21, 2019
|Nowadays, most people would purchase ready-made food than cook at home.
4 - @DarthPhaedr Thank you so much for your suggestion. It is really helpful to me !! @Maria Thank you...
Writing FeedbackCherry may - Jul 20, 2019 / Cherry may - Jul 21, 2019
|Student attendance in four schools - WRITING TASK 1
3 - @Longan Hello there. I don't know if it's just me, but I cannot actually see the graph you have...
Writing FeedbackLongan - Jul 20, 2019 / Maria - Jul 21, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Young people should be leader or the old ones?
2 - @Dang Khoa Hello there. I hope you're doing well. I'll try my best to help you in this essay....
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jul 21, 2019 / Maria - Jul 21, 2019
|Social celebration and money spent
Writing Feedbackathachng2002 - Jul 19, 2019 / athachng2002 - Jul 21, 2019
|Advantages of reading online - cheapness, convenience, and portability
3 - @tranphuongnhi Hello there. While quite late, I'll try my best to provide you with a bit of writing feedback...
Writing Feedbacktranphuongnhi - Jul 17, 2019 / Maria - Jul 20, 2019
|IELTS writing task 1: Elaborate the changes of Queen Mary Hospital since its construction
3 - @lichien0422 Hello there. I'll provide you with additional writing feedback. I think that, generally speaking, the flow of...
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - Jul 20, 2019 / Maria - Jul 20, 2019
|IELTS1- household owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Jul 19, 2019 / s410377088 - Jul 20, 2019
|It is often argued that brutality in media stimulates brutality in the real life. My opinion. IELTS2
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jul 19, 2019 / Dang Khoa - Jul 20, 2019
|ENGLISH - VIETNAMESE BACON!
2 - @buiminhese Hello there. I'll try my best to provide you with writing feedback. If you can separate a...
Writing Feedbackbuiminhese - Jul 19, 2019 / Maria - Jul 20, 2019
|Make a writing about short video " what's inside?" Jubilee
2 - @Anthony Ho Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. Please be cautious of the structure of your...
Writing FeedbackAnthony Ho - Jul 18, 2019 / Maria - Jul 20, 2019
|Ielts Task 1: The graph illustrates the amount of money spent on research by US government
4 - 1. It is clear that US government expenditure on all categories of research increased. 2. Also, the cost of...
Writing Feedbackbuihieu2705 - Jul 18, 2019 / s410377088 - Jul 19, 2019
|It is disputed whether parents of overweight kids should be blamed on causing offspring to be obese
5 - @jocelyn wang @lichien0422 thanks for both of your correction @Dang Khoa thx for the compliment as for your 2nd...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Jul 18, 2019 / s410377088 - Jul 19, 2019
|What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?
3 - @jocelyn wang Thank you for spending time and giving detailed feedback for my short essay. I will try my...
Writing FeedbackK1nJ - Jul 18, 2019 / K1nJ - Jul 19, 2019
|IELTS2 - Changes in family structures and family roles; fewer household members and working parents
4 - @Patryk0206 Hello there. I'll provide you with extensive feedback on your writing. Firstly, I suggest attempting to simplify...
Writing FeedbackPatryk0206 - Jul 17, 2019 / Maria - Jul 19, 2019
|Information about how much of carbon dioxide is discharged in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal
4 - Thank a lot !...
Writing Feedbackntk150700 - Jul 18, 2019 / ntk150700 - Jul 18, 2019
|The expanded use of motorbikes and cars is rising the rates of air pollution
3 - I just try to improve my writing skill because it quite bad. It now for Ielts or tofel though...
Writing Feedbackjohnathanpham - Jul 18, 2019 / johnathanpham - Jul 18, 2019
|IELTS writing task 1 (1) The table gives information about changes in modes of travel in England....
2 - It's a wonderful essay! Here are some edits that I prefer: long-distance traveled significantly The taxi...
Writing Feedbackttttiffanyyyy - Jul 18, 2019 / learner20199 - Jul 18, 2019
|The widespread use of the internet has affected people life in mostly positive way.
Writing Feedbackmartinasp - Jul 17, 2019 / ttttiffanyyyy - Jul 18, 2019
|The chart below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.
5 - @Maria Hello There. Thank you for your information! I will improve my writing skill, day by day. Because I...
Writing Feedbacktruong123456 - Jul 8, 2019 / truong123456 - Jul 17, 2019
|People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world, what measures can be taken?
2 - Hello vital the natural surroundings are of many causes, and there are several actions that ... I have some...
Writing Feedbackkimmy2105 - Jul 16, 2019 / tranphuongnhi - Jul 17, 2019
|IELTs Writing Task 2 - would life be simpler with just few languages in the world?
Writing FeedbackYHLin - Jul 16, 2019 / YHLin - Jul 17, 2019
|Water heating and greenhouse gas - IELTS chart
Writing Feedbackshellawillyam - Jul 16, 2019 / shellawillyam - Jul 17, 2019
|Whoever controls the media, have the power to control people. IELTS WRITING TASK 2
3 - Hi, it's just my suggestion I would think that in the third paragraph, you should give reasons why "the...
Writing Feedbackjocelyn wang - Jul 16, 2019 / kimmy2105 - Jul 16, 2019
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