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|IS IT IMPORTANT TO OWN A HOME ?
Writing Feedbackmonica0407 - Aug 6, 2020 / nhiuyen - Aug 7, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : HOUSES VS APARTMENTS
3 - these are sentences you are wrong in grammar : fixed +regard to houses ,some ... +... are chosen to...
Writing Feedbacknotbythemoon - Aug 6, 2020 / nhiuyen - Aug 7, 2020
|Write sentences to answer the questions: about a teacher
3 - Many thank @Holt Firstly, my teacher has a Vietnamese name, but if the Vietnamese name is left, the English...
Writing FeedbackTungTung - Aug 6, 2020 / TungTung - Aug 7, 2020
|IELTS - Graph people who are 65 and over in Japan, Sweden, American
5 - Hi, I would like to give some opinions for your essay. Your essay is written well. Using fluctuation...
Writing FeedbackAnnaWaston - Aug 4, 2020 / kays - Aug 6, 2020
|Whether people should choose high paid jobs that they dislike or low-paid jobs that they enjoy.
Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 5, 2020 / kays - Aug 6, 2020
|IELTS- Task 2: Selection of students based on their qualifications
4 - Your opinion should not have been stated in the opening paraphrase. You should only be repeating the discussion instructions...
Writing Feedbackbaotram1812 - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 6, 2020
|It is argued that railways are taking over roads as the most important transport
3 - You are misleading the reader. YOu have changed the discussion topic and discussion slant because of your improper prompt...
Writing Feedbackgotruugotruugotr - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 6, 2020
|Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss.
3 - thank you !!!...
Writing Feedbackparadis_149 - Aug 2, 2020 / paradis_149 - Aug 5, 2020
|Ielts task2: computers are considered to be the most crucial and noticeable invention
3 - This is not a comparative essay discussion. Why did you approach it as such? You cannot "partly" agree with...
Writing Feedbackminhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Due to unemployment should students learn the work skills instead of studying?
4 - Your paragraph presentations tend to be confusing at times. The confusion most likely comes from your lack of proper...
Writing Feedbackminhthptbg - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Controversial information should be kept as secret or not.
3 - There are supposed to be 5 paragraphs for this essay: Par. 1: Prompt Paraphrase + discussion instruction Par. 2:...
Writing Feedbackemillia2003 - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Ielts Task 1: The table given depicts forest area in six distinct regions in 15 years from 1990
Writing Feedbackminhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020 / minhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020
|Whether smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.
Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 5, 2020 / Veronica11 - Aug 5, 2020
|The Intake of four different kinds of meat in a European country
4 - You should merge the first and second paragraphs to create a single presentation. That way the sentences are not...
Writing Feedbacktraitorakali - Aug 5, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Some people assume that university education should be free of charge for all students
3 - There is a minimum of 3 sentences and a maximum of 5 sentences per paragraph. Your introduction and conclusion...
Writing Feedbacklekimha1999hy - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|LIVING ALONE OR IN SMALLY FAMILY UNITS - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE ?
3 - The paraphrase you created is missing one sentence to meet the minimum paragraph requirement. You did not paraphrase the...
Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Whether it is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed
Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 4, 2020 / Veronica11 - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS Writing Part 2: HEALTH TOPIC / Walking
3 - You are using too many word fillers in this essay. You need to learn to open your paragraphs with...
Writing Feedbackjustikatanu - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS WRITING PART 2 : EDUCATION and Exams
2 - Normally, the extent essay does not accept a "partly" response because it does not create a clear opinion for...
Writing Feedbackalice06 - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|GOING OVERSEAS TO LEARN LANGUAGE AND CULTURE - AGREE OR DISAGREE?
Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Aug 4, 2020 / bdmqnh - Aug 4, 2020
|In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books
3 - It is unfortunate that our scoring services are no longer part of the free essay review service. You must...
Writing Feedbackmario95 - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|Convenience foods will replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation
2 - You have provided the discussion paragraphs for the essay. You forgot the most important part of the task 2...
Writing FeedbackThuyPhan - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|The line graph compares and contrasts data on the changes in the proportion of Australian export
3 - The summary overview should include the list of the countries involved. Remember, this is a summary of the report...
Writing Feedbackkaisergod47 - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 The table illustrates the number of technological researchers in the five countries
3 - You presented a good summary overview. However, you should have listed the other 3 countries in a creative manner...
Writing Feedbackminhkhue16 - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2. Less sleep. Why? Effects?
3 - The prompt response is incomplete. You forgot to include the effects of lack of sleep. That is why your...
Writing Feedbackjackjixam13 - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|Many universities charge higher fees for foreign students. Why do they do this?
3 - This is not an opinion essay, this is a research paper. The length is not in accordance with the...
Writing Feedbackquynhanhvo - Aug 4, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|There is a view that reporting about celebrities by media has negative influence on teenagers
5 - @cummin gungugu As much as I would hate to comment but I believe your argument is correct to an...
Writing Feedbackcummin gungugu - Aug 3, 2020 / birto delti - Aug 4, 2020
|No values - Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
3 - You have to make sure that your prompt restatement is an accurate retelling of the original prompt. You do...
Writing Feedbackmariye - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|TASK 1: information on the percentage of people who were unemployed in the US and Japan
2 - I do not feel that you have written enough words to justify your English writing skills. Writing only 151...
Writing FeedbackThieu Quynh - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: Only people with special abilities can make art.
3 - Your prompt paraphrase is incorrect as it does not properly reflect the original discussion presentation. Rather, it contains exaggerations...
Writing Feedbackbaotram1812 - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|Nowadays it is not only large companies that can be able to make films
3 - Your discussion, though grammatically flawed, shows that you have a single focus for your discussion, which is what the...
Writing Feedbacklily6868 - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|Ielts writing about the fallen of teachers in the near future
4 - The discussion structure for this essay requires only a 4 paragraph presentation: - Paraphrase + Discussion reason enumeration -...
Writing FeedbackQuocHuu - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|Many countries are struggling with increases in crime rates
4 - I think that this essay is good. However, you should clarify your opinion, in this essay, you do not...
Writing Feedbackminhthptbg - Aug 3, 2020 / minhkhue16 - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 WRITING: WORLD'S WATER AND USE OF WATER FOR ECONOMIC SECTORS
Writing Feedbacktranngoccau123 - Aug 3, 2020 / tranngoccau123 - Aug 3, 2020
|IELTS TASK2: Nowadays, adolescents and adults constitute a vast majority of some nation's population
Writing Feedbackscottlai23 - Aug 2, 2020 / scottlai23 - Aug 3, 2020
|The long term bond with an employer
3 - You haven't really discussed the essay based on the required format. Simply writing 254 words, which is over the...
Writing FeedbackGP Phan - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 3, 2020
|Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities
2 - Your discussion is not properly developed. That is because you are not dividing the discussion paragraphs based on the...
Writing Feedbacklengoclan1512 - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 3, 2020
|Traditional music is essential, regardless of the wide acceptance of international music
2 - Your prompt paraphrase needs to outline your discussion points for the 2 reasoning paragraphs. This will help the examiner...
Writing Feedbackbirto delti - Aug 3, 2020 / Holt - Aug 3, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 - The graph shows predictions about the number of people who will study 3 languages
Writing Feedbacktrangtrangtrang - Aug 2, 2020 / Holt - Aug 3, 2020
|The diversity in perception and individual's greed has resulted in biased news broadcasted in public
4 - Please take note of the number of questions being asked in the original prompt. There are 3 questions: -...
Writing Feedbackbrandalyn leon - Aug 2, 2020 / Holt - Aug 3, 2020
|Task 2 - Ielts Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges
Writing Feedbackalina9896 - Aug 1, 2020 / ninefinger - Aug 2, 2020
|There has been a growing concern for lacking basic interactive skills among new graduated employees
Writing Feedbackninefinger - Aug 1, 2020 / ninefinger - Aug 2, 2020
|The map shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010-IELTS TASK1 (Academic) Map
Writing FeedbackElise990119 - Aug 1, 2020 / Elise990119 - Aug 2, 2020
|An inborn talent can define kids performance in a particular field. Is it true?
2 - Your prompt restatement should indicate each point of view as an individual sentence. That will help you show your...
Writing Feedbackminhkhue16 - Aug 2, 2020 / Holt - Aug 2, 2020
|Task about the 4 main functions Vietnamese people used with mobile phone in three years
2 - Your paragraphs all do not contain the minimum to maximum sentence requirement of 3-5 sentences. These have resulted in...
Writing Feedbackbangquyen2003 - Aug 2, 2020 / Holt - Aug 2, 2020
|Children targeted marketing can have several disadvantages, but it should't be completely banned
2 - Your essay suffers from a lack of clarity in the presentation. Your discussions tend to be composed of incomplete...
Writing FeedbackNgoc Lucia - Aug 2, 2020 / Holt - Aug 2, 2020
|Ielts task2 - Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects
2 - You have a formatting error in this essay. You accidentally turned it into a single opinion essay when the...
Writing Feedbackjokerxx11 - Aug 1, 2020 / Holt - Aug 2, 2020
|Ielts part 2 - Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Writing Feedbackzulay9595 - Aug 1, 2020 / zulay9595 - Aug 2, 2020
|TASK 1 - the variances in terms of four online sales sectors in Canada in two years 2005 and 2010
3 - Essay ratings are not part of our free review service. You may request for a private essay review (email...
Writing Feedbackllinh3186 - Aug 1, 2020 / Holt - Aug 2, 2020
|Three types of unhealthy nutrients in each meal in the USA - IELTS TASK 1 (Academic) Pie Chart
Writing FeedbackElise990119 - Jul 29, 2020 / Elise990119 - Aug 2, 2020
|Ielts writing task 1 - a climograph about rainfall and temperature
6 - Coherence&cohesion seems less valued,it might be better if you add linking words into the essay. Good work on the...
Writing Feedbackdieulinh09611 - Jul 24, 2020 / Dolly Doloris - Aug 1, 2020
|A longer lifespan can cause some problems for both individuals and society, but these are fixable
Writing Feedbackhanyin - Aug 1, 2020 / hanyin - Aug 1, 2020
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Speeches over Writings?
2 - Scoring of essays are a part of our private review and URGENT review services. It is no longer part...
Writing Feedbackhyperephania - Aug 1, 2020 / Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2. Mental or physical strength in sports?
2 - This is an analytical essay response. Your opinion must show a consideration of the 2 public points of view...
Writing Feedbackjackjixam123 - Aug 1, 2020 / Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|Task1: The number of hours spent in British University
2 - In the summary overview, you should have indicated 2 things: 1. The measurement was done in percentages. 2. The...
Writing Feedbackclara2608 - Jul 31, 2020 / Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|IELTS T1 The charts below show the banana export in 1993 and 2003, the pie chart reports costs
3 - The main problem of your essay is not the content. You did well in the reporting aspect. The problem...
Writing FeedbackDolly Doloris - Jul 31, 2020 / Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|TASK 1:The graph illustrates the number of Chinese, Japanese and Indian students who enrolled ...
3 - I find this "the period in question" somewhat confusing. You might change it as "the same period", or the...
Writing Feedbackdinhquynhmai - Jul 30, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|We are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose
4 - You essay, I believe, lacks words to meet the word limit requirement. Try adding one more counterargument paragraph before...
Writing Feedbackbobi1102 - Jul 30, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|IELTS 2 - humans should not exploit animals - it is morally wrong and it harms animals
3 - I think your essay exceeded the word limit for an IELTS Writing Task 2. Try leaving out the two...
Writing Feedbackchaugiang - Jul 31, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|IETLS Task 1 - The graph includes the proportion of households owned and rented in England and Wales
4 - I believe you have wrongly used the tense, which should have been past simple instead of present simple....
Writing Feedbacktom726 - Jul 29, 2020 / hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
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