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|It is argued that people should take meat out of food list and become vegetarians. Do you agree?
2 - If you notice, in the original discussion, there is no argument being presented. Only an idea is being represented...
Writing FeedbackThuTinh - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|The idea of hosting an international sports events has brought several controversies. Pros and cons.
2 - You have over written this essay. You do not need more than 300 words in the presentation since you...
Writing Feedbackphung199200 - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using intelligent robots
2 - Your first paragraph does not relate to the original topic presentation. It is not a prompt restatement but rather,...
Writing Feedbacklinh123 - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|Igcse English as a second language (0511) article writing
2 - Since you already knew beforehand that you are allowed to write only up to 210 words, why did you...
Writing FeedbackBilal786 - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|"Many people think there is an increase of antisocial behavior and a lack of respect to others."
2 - In the prompt restatement, you are offering a factual statement rather than a representation of your understanding of the...
Writing Feedbackanhtran98 - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|The number of students who are interested in education
NEW - survey responses - charts analysis The task consists of a bar chart and a pie chart. The bar...
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|Task 2 pros and cons: ocean creatures relocated in amusement parks
2 - Refrain from making factual statements in your presentations in relation to the restatements. You should not do that because...
Writing FeedbackGlenda2912 - Mar 6, 2021 / Holt - Mar 7, 2021
|IELTS2 Some people believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life
2 - Scoring is a premium service. Contact us privately. Student scoring = Ban ! Your essay misses the minimum...
Writing Feedbackyuanyuan00 - Mar 6, 2021 / Holt - Mar 7, 2021
|TEM AND SEM ANALYSIS IN TITANIUM DIOIXDE NANOTUBE AND GRAPHENE OXIDE COMPOSITE
2 - It is more difficult to analyze this presentation for correct references and illustrative points because you did not include...
Writing Feedbackmiigky990903 - Mar 6, 2021 / Holt - Mar 7, 2021
|In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. Indicate the causes and effects.
2 - - The essence of the sentence is correct, but the reference point is wrong. It is not "couples"...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvietanh26 - Mar 6, 2021 / Holt - Mar 7, 2021
|IELTS writing task 2 Advertisements are extremely successful at persuading people to buy things
Writing Feedbacklucywjj - Mar 5, 2021 / lucywjj - Mar 6, 2021
|(Task 2)Topic: Technology is being used to monitor people. Will the pros of this outweigh the cons?
2 - The first paragraph does not contain enough of a restatement presentation for it to not be judged most as...
Writing Feedbackidkwhattosay - Mar 5, 2021 / Holt - Mar 6, 2021
|In last 20 century the population city increases dramatically
2 - Sorry, no scoring unless you avail of our private review services. Students who score your essay will find their...
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|Social networks are gradually replacing the direct communication among many people
2 - Okay, I am not going to review this essay beyond the task accuracy requirements and your writing response. Since...
Writing FeedbackAnhTranDs - Mar 4, 2021 / Holt - Mar 5, 2021
|Making the band the best it can be. Is my drum major essay good?
2 - I am not really sure how good this essay is because I am not familiar with the writing requirements...
Writing Feedbackdexterletterman - Mar 4, 2021 / Holt - Mar 5, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: THE DIAGRAMS SHOW THE PRESENT BUILDING OF A COLLEGE AND THE FUTURE PLAN
NEW - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 24/10/2020 The maps illustrate future transformations of a college building compared to the present...
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|Describe a graph about the number of common Dolphins seen in Santa Barbara Channel from 1996-2001.
2 - This type of data reporting or summary presentation will not get a passing score in an actual test. Why?...
Writing Feedbacktranminhthinh - Mar 3, 2021 / Holt - Mar 4, 2021
|Informing about the latest criminal news and its impact on young members of society - IELTS 2
3 - thank you very much, I just write those sms-styled because I want to shorten it, quite lazy obliviously, therefore...
Writing Feedbackcpt_b33m0 - Feb 28, 2021 / cpt_b33m0 - Mar 3, 2021
|The global sales for five different best-selling mobile phone brands: Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG, ZTE
NEW - mobile phone sales statistic The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between...
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|To Defund or To Not Defund The Police
2 - Try to provide a backstory in the first paragraph regarding the development of the movement to defund the police....
Writing FeedbackDrippi_Jess - Mar 2, 2021 / Holt - Mar 3, 2021
|Essay about directing youngsters to be admirable global citizens
2 - Your first sentence is not in accordance with the original topic provided. There is no reference to a global...
Writing Feedbacktuinee - Mar 2, 2021 / Holt - Mar 3, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 about historical subjects
2 - - Good measured response, lacking a clear thesis presentation though. Rather than "the following reasons", providing 2 topic...
Writing Feedbackblueskysg - Mar 1, 2021 / Holt - Mar 2, 2021
|Is United States prepared for the upcoming COVID-19 Vaccine demand?
2 - -Linked in is not considered a proper academic, nor journalistic reference for any opinion or research paper. You...
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|Advantages of living in rural areas and urban areas
2 - I cannot accurately assess your work for prompt adherence due to the missing prompt requirement. The prompt gives me...
Writing Feedbackstrawberryulala - Mar 1, 2021 / Holt - Mar 2, 2021
|[Writing Task 2]Topic summarize: Some countries have many aged people. What are the effects of this?
3 - @namphong020: In my opinion, your writing is good with a lot of vocabulary. However, there are some issues that...
Writing Feedbacknamphong020 - Feb 28, 2021 / blueskysg - Mar 1, 2021
|Ielts Writing: Analyze the graph - number of visitors to Brighton attractions
NEW - Tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton The line graph illustrates the figure for the...
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|Conversations in person are gradually being replaced by internet communications through social apps
2 - You need to refer to the keyword from the original essay which is "outweigh". The missing synonym for this...
Writing FeedbackNorabui - Feb 28, 2021 / Holt - Mar 1, 2021
|Nowadays, shopping online has been spread widely over the world
2 - For band scoring, you will need to refer to our premium services where I will privately review and score...
Writing Feedbackbngauscld - Feb 28, 2021 / Holt - Mar 1, 2021
|IELTS Writing task 2- The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction
3 - @MJaylee: your essay is good with rich vocabulary. In my opinion, you should write stronger and clearer sentences instead...
Writing FeedbackMJaylee - Feb 25, 2021 / blueskysg - Mar 1, 2021
|Essay about the advantages and disadvantages of Internet for Ielts Task 2
Writing Feedbackblueskysg - Feb 28, 2021 / blueskysg - Mar 1, 2021
|IELTS Task 2: Will Computer Replace Teachers? I don't think so - they do not have emotions
Writing FeedbackTofy - Feb 23, 2021 / amiisareum - Feb 28, 2021
|Average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line services, 2001-2010
2 - Avoid run-on sentences in your summary overview. You will lose C&C points for presenting all the information in one...
Writing FeedbackPhuongtam - Feb 27, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - the production of instant noodles
2 - Basic format for this presentation is 3 paragraphs. That means there needs to be: - A summary overview +...
Writing Feedbackvallo - Feb 27, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|How can we protect biological diversity?
2 - There is a definite sense of importance to this writing. Your opening statement was imaginative, but seemingly suddenly lost...
Writing FeedbackSeanCX101 - Feb 27, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010
2 - The presentation shows percentage of change, not percentage of growth. Your reference is incorrect. It should have been restated...
Writing Feedbackkarlanguyen - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|IELTS TASK 1 The line graph illustrates how much waste produced by three companies from 2000 to 2015
Writing FeedbackTrang0502 - Feb 23, 2021 / plamEK16cqt - Feb 26, 2021
|Maths and business success - IELTS Writing Task 2 Opinion Essay
2 - There is a missing sentence in your thesis statement in the first paragraph. You forgot to indicate the measured...
Writing Feedbackphatblack - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|The high salary should be more concerned than the degree of satisfaction in job. What's your opinion
2 - When you partially advocate for the given statement, you are writing an extent essay. You are not writing an...
Writing Feedbackieltsstudent1711 - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|Writing task 1 table with a trend - visitor statistics in Australia
2 - All of your paragraphs should have a minimum of 3 sentences. This includes the summary overview. The lack of...
Writing Feedbackdinhminhhai - Feb 25, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Free education irrespective of personal wealth
2 - This is not an extent essay. Therefore, your discussion approach, which is, "to an extent' response is incorrect. There...
Writing Feedbacklingling40hrs - Feb 25, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|Children must be a good members of society. What the parents and school can teach it?
2 - This is actually an IELTS Task 2 practice prompt. Were you writing in preparation for that test? Or is...
Writing FeedbackIndriani - Feb 25, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|IELTS"Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet"
Writing FeedbackDinhHuong - Feb 19, 2021 / vannn - Feb 25, 2021
|Essay about banning mobile phone during schoolday
3 - @hglingg I think that you should not use word 'whatever' because it is informal. Also, you can write off...
Writing Feedbackhglingg - Feb 21, 2021 / vannn - Feb 25, 2021
|The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.
Writing Feedbacknguyenanhduc1998 - Feb 24, 2021 / nguyenanhduc1998 - Feb 25, 2021
|Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more popular
3 - @Holt thank you very much for your detailed and comprehensive feedback! You showed a really interesting point of view,...
Writing FeedbackGia_geeya - Feb 25, 2021 / Gia_geeya - Feb 25, 2021
|"Teenage Driving Statistics" - Driving Licenses for People Under Eighteen Years Old
Writing Feedbackbader215 - Feb 24, 2021 / Holt - Feb 25, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: Investing in science education
Writing Feedbackthienthieny13 - Feb 23, 2021 / thienthieny13 - Feb 24, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: Traveling to work is a negative or positive development. Discuss both views.
Writing Feedbackchicky1608 - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 24, 2021
|Two given maps demonstrate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010
NEW - Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 1 Writing Task 1 - road network Two given maps demonstrate the road network...
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|Help for Correction my essay . Academic essay _ IELTS Academic Task 2 on a consumer society
2 - Good restatement with the slight problem of you still using the phrase "which possessing" in the presentation. The best...
Writing FeedbackMakferayd - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|The affordable care act and what the solution is
2 - This is a very timely essay. However, it tends to get confusing to read because of the constantly diverting...
Writing Feedbacki90kaee - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2:Discuss pros and cons for the young between gap year and starting university studies.
Writing Feedbackcath1803 - Feb 22, 2021 / cath1803 - Feb 23, 2021
|IELTS1: The given line graph displays the number of alumni in Canada within fiveteen years 1992-2007
3 - @Holt Hi, thank you for taking your time to evaluate my writing, but I don't fully understand what you...
Writing Feedbackkane1101 - Feb 22, 2021 / kane1101 - Feb 23, 2021
|PRACTICE WRITING D1 - (Paragraph) Volunteer work
2 - In order to properly write the response paragraph, you first have to understand what response method you have to...
Writing Feedbackpeachfully - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Instead of finding measures to solve climate change problem we should find some ways to live with it
2 - Why do you totally disagree? What are the reasoning topics you will be discussing? Present the outline of topics...
Writing FeedbackNhungmeow246 - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Oil consumption of four different major consumers - Ielts task 1 - line graph
2 - The task allows only 20 minutes for total writing, that includes editing and proof reading. So the standard writing...
Writing FeedbackHainguyen88 - Feb 21, 2021 / Holt - Feb 22, 2021
|Is it true that the vegetarian diet is more beneficial for health than eating meat?
2 - The subject proposed for this prompt is not being presented in an argumentative form. It is presented as an...
Writing Feedbackella_lyly - Feb 21, 2021 / Holt - Feb 22, 2021
|MULTIPLE ASPECTS OF SPACE EXPLORATION AND THE PREDICTION OF ITS CHANGE IN THE FUTURE
3 - There are some position and spelling mistakes in your essay. Using 'occurred' instead of 'occured'. The 'obviously' stands in...
Writing Feedbackgingin3001 - Feb 21, 2021 / ella_lyly - Feb 21, 2021
|Tell about the most interesting film you have seen recently
2 - The problem is your lack of familiarity with the English language. Specifically, how to write a movie review. You...
Writing FeedbackAlya_TS - Feb 20, 2021 / Holt - Feb 21, 2021
|Cheaper international travel and more countries welcome foreign visitors. Adv outweigh disadv?
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