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|Is the space exploring just money and energy waste?
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Sep 16, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Sep 19, 2019
|One change in the college experience
3 - @chuckmane Thank you for your feed back. Will work on elaborating the idea of how I could have improved...
Writing FeedbackSavi - Sep 17, 2019 / Savi - Sep 18, 2019
|TOEFL - Benefits of learning a foreign language in an early age - for example at the primary school
3 - Hi there, I'm also practicing for TOEFL. Personally I think your essay has a clear structure, and maybe...
Writing FeedbackGlearning - Sep 12, 2019 / yui meow - Sep 17, 2019
|We can study the behaviour of a three-year-old child to see whether he will grow up to be a criminal
2 - Hello I think it's a fairly well-organised essay. Your statement is quite clear and easy to drag out...
Writing Feedbackdaisytheflower - Sep 16, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Sep 17, 2019
|Who should control scientific researches - state authorities (governments) or private companies?
3 - I really thank for your help to me. My opinion is that scientific research should need to conduct by...
Writing Feedbacksongmekong - Sep 11, 2019 / songmekong - Sep 17, 2019
|Citadelle Laferrière - a trip or vacation to a place that influenced you some way
3 - @MariaThank you very much for your comments Maria. This is a descriptive essay for my English class....
Writing Feedbackplway2006 - Sep 14, 2019 / plway2006 - Sep 16, 2019
|(TOEFL) Maintain a small number of friends over long time or make new friends easily
5 - @habebl Hi habebl, thank you for your advice! Yeah it's better to have a longer essay. I extended the...
Writing Feedbackyui meow - Sep 8, 2019 / yui meow - Sep 16, 2019
|TOFEL: Rules in modern society are too strict to young people?
2 - I think you're doing pretty well on your essay. But the ending paragraph is too short I believe....
Writing FeedbackDylanY - Sep 15, 2019 / Krystal318 - Sep 16, 2019
|People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and fix?
4 - I think you should say: People don't have enough time to carefully take care (or look after) their children....
Writing Feedbacknupakaka - Sep 12, 2019 / Krystal318 - Sep 16, 2019
|The graph shows how population grow in two different countries over the period of 50 years.
Writing Feedbackhoangoanh0204 - Sep 7, 2019 / pleiziii - Sep 15, 2019
|Evolution - New technologies have changed the way children use their recreational activities.
2 - @Bich Ngoc 9898 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find the feedback you find here to...
Writing FeedbackBich Ngoc 9898 - Sep 14, 2019 / Maria - Sep 15, 2019
|Ielts task 2 - higher salary for medical personnel
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Sep 9, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Sep 13, 2019
|Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than foreign culture
2 - I just noticed in first paragraph instead of I disagree completely it should be I completely disagree....
Writing FeedbackNed - Sep 12, 2019 / Glearning - Sep 12, 2019
|IELTS task 2: To speak a foreign language abroad - the life in a foreign land
Writing Feedbackchloeyyy123 - Sep 11, 2019 / chloeyyy123 - Sep 12, 2019
|Computers are often argued to be the greatest milestone in the history of technology.
Writing Feedbackminhtamdav - Sep 10, 2019 / minhtamdav - Sep 12, 2019
|Ielts writing task 1, describe a graph about car ownership in Britain
2 - @Yesitsthao Hey! Welcome to this forum. I hope this feedback somehow enlightens you on what to accomplish. But before...
Writing FeedbackYesitsthao - Sep 11, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|Toefl - Do you agree or disagree? Leadership comes naturally: one can't learn to be a leader.
2 - @jasmine12 Hi, dear! Welcome here. I hope this feedback becomes helpful for your writing. First and foremost, you...
Writing Feedbackjasmine12 - Sep 10, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should be restricted
2 - @Hoang Kien Hello. Welcome to the forum! I hope that you find the platform to be beneficial for your...
Writing FeedbackHoang Kien - Sep 10, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|The charts below show the percentage of "online" time among younger and older people
2 - @Tina le Hi, dear! Welcome to the forum. I apologize for the delay. However, I hope that this feedback...
Writing FeedbackTina le - Sep 7, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|Does modern communication technology have negative effects on social relationships?
2 - Hello Generally speaking, your essay is quite good. You are able to use a variety of sentences and...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Sep 7, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Sep 11, 2019
|Writing task 2. Man made activities increases climate temperature
3 - overall, I think it well written essay, but I believe it is better for you to avoid some sentence,...
Writing Feedbackmayangrn - Sep 3, 2019 / Hassan91 - Sep 10, 2019
|Life style -- the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
Writing Feedbacktekinirfani - Sep 5, 2019 / Hassan91 - Sep 10, 2019
|Advertisement are becoming more and more common. Is it a positive or negative development?
2 - @thaolinh Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback serves you well. Firstly, the straightforward...
Writing Feedbackthaolinh - Sep 8, 2019 / Maria - Sep 9, 2019
|The two way of measure a success; money and technical skills at a job field
2 - @mjpnidhi Hello there. Seeing as you are new here, welcome to the forum! I hope you find all of...
Writing Feedbackmjpnidhi - Sep 8, 2019 / Maria - Sep 9, 2019
|The issue of whether government should invest on railway systems more than roads or not
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Sep 4, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 8, 2019
|People naturally resist making changes in their lives.
Writing Feedbackmabubeo - Aug 31, 2019 / mabubeo - Sep 8, 2019
|Explain a risk you have taken in your life. What did you learn from it? - CBEST
2 - I don't know if this essay is a draft but there are some grammatical and punctuation errors that you...
Writing FeedbackNorbsidy - Sep 6, 2019 / tbui27 - Sep 7, 2019
|Domestic violence problem (I'm taking proficiency exam on September 3rd)
2 - @Selen can Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes beneficial for you. If you...
Writing FeedbackSelen can - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|Talk about a artificial disaster and its consequences
2 - Hi,there. I would like to give you some writing suggestions about your writing.😊😊 It would be better...
Writing Feedbackzoetrinh - Sep 5, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 7, 2019
|Many of us have a chance to study in another country to get a university qualification
2 - Hi Americana, You have good points and supported by examples in your essay. Though I have few observations, Always...
Writing FeedbackAmerianna - Sep 1, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 6, 2019
|Importance of Parks, Sports facilities and shopping malls in planning towns
2 - Nice first paragraph, although I think you should state your opinion immediately rather earlier I think your argument...
Writing FeedbackSanFer - Sep 3, 2019 / phlorem - Sep 6, 2019
|The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced by using water
Writing Feedbackvhag nguyen - Aug 31, 2019 / phlorem - Sep 6, 2019
|Should government spend more money in support of the arts than in support of the athletics?
2 - @thehowfanned Hi, I have few observations regarding your essay. Minimize writing long sentences, sometimes it makes your essay...
Writing Feedbackthehowfanned - Aug 30, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 5, 2019
|Argumentative essay- CBEST: "We succeed only as we identify in life a single overriding objective"
Writing FeedbackNorbsidy - Aug 24, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 5, 2019
|England and Wales; rented and owned accommodation - Ielts Cambridge 13, Test 2, Task 1
2 - @vunhanhoa Hi there. Next time, it would be beneficial to add the graph that you've analyzed into the given...
Writing Feedbackvunhanhoa - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : PRINTED NEWSPAPERS VS. ONLINE NEWSPAPERS
2 - @amira11545 Hello there. Thanks for your continuous support in the site. I hope that you find this feedback to...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|Scientific exploration carried out and managed by the state or by private companies?
Writing Feedbackminhthanh211 - Aug 30, 2019 / minhthanh211 - Sep 5, 2019
|The graphs show the result of a survey of computer ownership total and by education level
2 - @ashleycyw Hi there. I see that you're new here - welcome to the forum. Let me provide you with...
Writing Feedbackashleycyw - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|Writing part 2 IELTS , Average weight of people is rising and levels of health is declining
4 - @chwkao Yes you can stress the solutions in the introduction. Just like how you mentioned "I think the...
Writing Feedbackchwkao - Aug 27, 2019 / TriceLiu - Sep 5, 2019
|Adverstisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it positive or negative ?
NEW - the impact of ads In recently years , advertising is increasing more prevalent in our daily life .It...
Writing FeedbackSUZU1234 - Sep 5, 2019 / — -
|Soil degradation - ielts writing task 1 pie chart and table
3 - thank you very much for your useful advices (sorry for not replying you sooner).I will try to improve my...
Writing Feedbacknohope123 - Aug 20, 2019 / nohope123 - Sep 4, 2019
|Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups.
3 - Hi there. I think I can give you some writing suggestions about your conclusion.😊😊 It would be better...
Writing FeedbackDebbie0123 - Aug 30, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 4, 2019
|The pie charts illustrate the water usage for six different regions around the world
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Aug 31, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 4, 2019
|Write a paragraph about the advantages of shopping online
NEW - Shopping online is a hot topic that everybody concerns about Obviously, it plays an important role in the modern...
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|Traffic accidents - the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age
Writing Feedbackchristine amelia - Aug 30, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|You worked part time for a company in the past and now see an advertisement for full time
2 - @kev2 Hi, I'm going to show you my personal ideas. Hope these suggestions are useful. - struggle with/against (not...
Writing Feedbackkev2 - Aug 29, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|Some people hold the view that young generation is proper for important positions in governments
3 - Hi Trangxi Thanks a lot for all the nice comments and suggestions. I learn a lot from you. Hope...
Writing FeedbackHelen Neleh - Aug 24, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|Vertical and horizontal cities evaluation
Writing FeedbackHelen Neleh - Aug 24, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|IELTS Task2: Recycling of waste materials
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Aug 30, 2019 / rivathh - Sep 3, 2019
|Ielts writing 2 - people may face certain difficulties when they move outside their home country
2 - Hello ! @poyiyeung Welcome to this platform. I appreciate your clear ideas and structure in your writing, and...
Writing Feedbackpoyiyeung - Sep 2, 2019 / rivathh - Sep 3, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: THE NUMBER OF EMPLOYEES AND FACTORIES IN ENGLAND AND WALES
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Sep 2, 2019 / amira11545 - Sep 3, 2019
|Life is an adventurous journey that one cannot predict any obstacles having in the future.
2 - You repeat the word 'one' too many times in your essay. Try to rewrite your sentences using other words....
Writing FeedbackHOANG17 - Aug 30, 2019 / amira11545 - Sep 2, 2019
|How to become successful in sports?
2 - @alexyale Hi there. I'll be providing you with feedback on your essay. I hope that this will somehow help...
Writing Feedbackalexyale - Aug 28, 2019 / Maria - Sep 1, 2019
|Reply to an e-mail sent by the marketing director of the Classical Shakespeare Theatre of Bardville
2 - @jaypark00 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing endeavors. ...
Writing Feedbackjaypark00 - Aug 28, 2019 / Maria - Aug 31, 2019
|IELTS 2: Will all jobs eventually be done by artificially intelligent robots? Human vs machine.
2 - @TriceLiu Hi there! Let me provide you with feedback on your writing. You do quite well to list...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Aug 29, 2019 / rivathh - Aug 30, 2019
|IELTS Task 2: it is important to build more public parks and sport facilities than shopping centre
3 - @kev2 Thank you very much for your help. I have a terrible tendency of randomly changing the sentence tense....
Writing Feedbackhoaiduc2010 - Aug 29, 2019 / hoaiduc2010 - Aug 29, 2019
|Some think that people need to have simpler lifestyles in order to solve the environmental problems.
5 - Hello there, I appreciate for your ideas in the essays! Here are my suggestions. Feel free to change your...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 25, 2019 / rivathh - Aug 29, 2019
|IELTS - TASK1: The diagram below shows the various stages involved in the production of beer
2 - @phminh271 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful in any way. The...
Writing Feedbackphminh271 - Aug 26, 2019 / Maria - Aug 29, 2019
|The proportion of the most popular sports played by boys and girls in New Zealand (IELTS 1)
2 - @kirstenlee Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing endeavors. ...
Writing Feedbackkirstenlee - Aug 25, 2019 / Maria - Aug 29, 2019
|Senior-level workers - IELTS Writing Task 2- Opinion Essay
2 - Hi there, You have demonstrated a decent vocabulary and command of grammar in the essay. However, the...
Writing Feedbackthekingmindaugas - Aug 26, 2019 / TriceLiu - Aug 29, 2019
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