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|IELTS Cambridge Book 1, Test 1, Writing task 1 (Survey on education)
Writing FeedbackSaraOm - Aug 25, 2021 / SaraOm - Aug 27, 2021
|In recent years, some higher education institutions have provided access to their online courses
2 - When responding to a positive or negative development prompt, the writer should take care to ensure that his opinion...
Writing Feedbacknhat_uet - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|Ielts writing task 2: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good
2 - The writer has taken the incorrect aproach to the discussion. It has been written from a personal opinion aspect...
Writing FeedbackRachel Hoang - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|Writing task 2; As well as making financial profit, businesses should also express their social role
2 - This type of presentation will warrant an immediate failing score overall. Specifically in the TA and C+ C sections....
Writing Feedbackchungoclinh2410 - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|[Writing task 2] Publicize the violent criminals' personal information or not
2 - The writer has nto understood the discussion instructions. The prompt restatement is incomplete and so are the reasoning paragraphs....
Writing Feedbackbenedictandrew - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|The reasons for water pollution and its influence on animals and humans
Writing Feedbackjennifer97 - Aug 25, 2021 / jennifer97 - Aug 27, 2021
|A number of solutions can be taken to tackle the issue of sugary beverages consumption rise
2 - In both the opinion statement and summary conclusion, the writer fails to address the reasons for his discussion presentation....
Writing Feedbackphuongthao104 - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|Task 2 - conflicting views about the purpose of films
2 - the restatement + opinion paragraph is incomplete. It does not accurately restate the prompt as the points of view...
Writing Feedbackwilloww - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|The percentages of the access to technology devices in the UK household from 1996 to 2003
2 - What the writer provided was not a trending statement but a comparative statement. A trend is a prevailing tendency...
Writing FeedbackLeakhena Bun - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 27, 2021
|Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Writing Feedbackpardis76 - Aug 24, 2021 / lemonadelemon - Aug 26, 2021
|Some countries have introduced a law to limit working for employees. Why is the law introduced.
Writing FeedbackJacksonHewitt - Aug 19, 2021 / thuthuy841999 - Aug 26, 2021
|An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their second halves
Writing FeedbackCongHung - Aug 21, 2021 / thuthuy841999 - Aug 26, 2021
|[W task 1]The pie graphs show greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030.
3 - You give clear structures. However, you should pay more attention to express you ideas transparently....
Writing Feedbackngoclinhhhh - Aug 23, 2021 / Goldengoat - Aug 25, 2021
|The contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business for the economy in UK
4 - To me, your writing is good enough. However, you may have missed the overview part. In case you have...
Writing FeedbackNHUTQUANG - Aug 18, 2021 / Goldengoat - Aug 25, 2021
|Writing task 2 about students being allowed to use their phones in schools
2 - In the opening statement, the author over presented the introduction to the point of straying from the original content.This...
Writing Feedbackaanh1009 - Aug 24, 2021 / Holt - Aug 25, 2021
|Vegetarian diet is good or not; a good idea to encourage consumers to eat more plant foods
2 - The writer's response is in the incorrect format. As this is not an extent essay, he is not allowed...
Writing Feedbackdieuanh1999 - Aug 24, 2021 / Holt - Aug 25, 2021
|(Write Task 2) Economic growth is ending world poverty and hunger or damaging environment.
2 - The writer has used a general discussion format to discuss both public opinions. Not once did he offer a...
Writing FeedbackThang Nguyen - Aug 24, 2021 / Holt - Aug 25, 2021
|The developed world is rising life expectancy and it affects whole societies
2 - The writer has the right idea when it comes to the discussion.The problem is in the presentation of these...
Writing Feedbackalexseths - Aug 23, 2021 / Holt - Aug 24, 2021
|People always hesitate when it comes to changes
2 - The writer has not provided the correct discussion response. A prompt alteration eests in the essay which will prevent...
Writing FeedbackGoldengoat - Aug 23, 2021 / Holt - Aug 24, 2021
|The profits of the top five mentioned mobile phone brands made through selling their products
Writing FeedbackGoldengoat - Aug 23, 2021 / Holt - Aug 24, 2021
|In the past, people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture.
Writing Feedbackducman9 - Aug 13, 2021 / Victo - Aug 24, 2021
|Scientists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Effects?
2 - Rather than saying "some reasons" tell the reader what the reasons are. That will help create the thesis statement...
Writing FeedbackDuc Manh - Aug 23, 2021 / Holt - Aug 24, 2021
|It is rather usual these days for undergraduates to study overseas as part of their degrees. Ielts 2
Writing Feedbackhaiph1805 - Aug 11, 2021 / salami - Aug 23, 2021
|It is believed that colleges should equip students with the knowledge and necessary skils
5 - A particular thing I noted is the presence of numerous grammatical errors either in spelling or syntax. These are...
Writing Feedbackbebe123 - Aug 12, 2021 / salami - Aug 23, 2021
|Strict controls should be applied to lessen the noise for better living environment.
4 - In my opinion, the essay is a great example for me to study for its diverse ideas. However, you...
Writing Feedbackthuong278qn - Aug 20, 2021 / Goldengoat - Aug 23, 2021
|Some Countries Allow Old People To Work To Any Age That They Want.
2 - The writer is not responding to the discussion question in the opinion response sentence. A choice needs to be...
Writing Feedbackhanhhnah - Aug 22, 2021 / Holt - Aug 23, 2021
|The graph compares the consumption of six different energies in the USA from 1980 to 2030 prediction
2 - The student needs to review his indefinite article usage. "A" is used before consonant sounds while "an" is used...
Writing Feedbackthanhtra - Aug 22, 2021 / Holt - Aug 23, 2021
|Essay about opinion on donating a fixed sum from income to charity - IELTS writing 2
2 - Keep the sentence presentations simple. The writer is trying to unsuccessfully write advanced format and complicated word usage. The...
Writing FeedbackSuskie11 - Aug 22, 2021 / Holt - Aug 23, 2021
|Writing task 1: the line graph shows the number of enquiries received in one city in 2011
Writing Feedbackanhquynhnguyen22 - Aug 21, 2021 / Holt - Aug 22, 2021
|The line graph illustrates both fossil fuel energy and clean energy consumption in the USA
Writing FeedbackKiu1007 - Aug 4, 2021 / Chubii - Aug 21, 2021
|The column chart gives information about the places visited by people living in Australia
Writing FeedbackLammm - Aug 9, 2021 / Lammm - Aug 21, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The line graph shows the number of single-family homes in the United States...
4 - The phrase A glance at the graph reveals that sounds unnatural and informal in a Writing task 1 since...
Writing Feedbackkwuynh - Aug 13, 2021 / hahalolo - Aug 21, 2021
|Students' mandatory volunteering in their free time to serve the communities
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your comment. I will try to improve the mistake in another essay!...
Writing Feedbacklyvlyv - Aug 19, 2021 / lyvlyv - Aug 21, 2021
|Traditional subjects or a more modern approach to prepare students for today's world challenges
3 - @Holt I'm really grateful to you for your advice, I'll do my best to improve my above-mentioned faults....
Writing FeedbackBacher - Aug 19, 2021 / Bacher - Aug 21, 2021
|The chart show the ratio of male and female teachers in UK schools at different education levels
Writing FeedbackLiny - Aug 19, 2021 / Liny - Aug 20, 2021
|Writing Task 1 - the number of Vietnamese students studying abroad in three countries
Writing FeedbackKhanh Trang - Aug 19, 2021 / huyjunnie - Aug 20, 2021
|Movie fans in different age group who went to the cinema once a month in the UK
2 - There is a redundant word presentation in the essay that affects the clarity and GRA considerations. The word "...
Writing FeedbackQuynhnhu123 - Aug 19, 2021 / Holt - Aug 20, 2021
|Preserve old buildings whenever possible or construct new buildings
Writing FeedbackBetrug - Aug 18, 2021 / Betrug - Aug 20, 2021
|More and more students study abroad. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
3 - On the other hand, learning oversea leads to some problems. The primary one is that the students... This...
Writing FeedbackThee - Aug 15, 2021 / gintoki7 - Aug 19, 2021
|IELTS Writing task 2: Living in a modern world brings both positive and negative outcomes
4 - keep going! it's going well! but remember all the tips @Holt told you, it will be very helpfull!...
Writing FeedbackKim2989 - Aug 18, 2021 / miriyome - Aug 19, 2021
|Recently, more emphasis has been put on when to commence teaching foreign language to children
Writing FeedbackKanu - Aug 18, 2021 / Kanu - Aug 19, 2021
|Evolution of horses' hooves. How to use vocabulary more professionally in science essays?
2 - The writer has an incorrect image identification in the summary paragraph. Rather than a diagram, a physical illustration was...
Writing FeedbackWashiDJ - Aug 18, 2021 / Holt - Aug 19, 2021
|Working and studying away from home due to affordable and available technology
2 - "Is" refers to a third person indicative reference. Person refers to singular reference. The phrase " bevy of advantages"...
Writing Feedbacknameduong2004 - Aug 18, 2021 / Holt - Aug 19, 2021
|It is argued that parents ought to be heavily punished for letting their offspring to be fat
2 - The first reasoning paragraph is obviously researched and does not meet the public knowledge or personal insight into the...
Writing FeedbackFelix Dang - Aug 18, 2021 / Holt - Aug 19, 2021
|ielts writing task 2: TOO MUCH OF A GOOD THING CAN BE BAD - overwhelming number of choices
2 - Some task questions tend to sound like research prompts, but they are not. These are all mere personal opinion...
Writing Feedbacksalsal0403 - Aug 17, 2021 / Holt - Aug 18, 2021
|Global warming is increasing day by day. What are the causes of global warming and what can be done
2 - The prompt paraphrase and thesis statement paragraph will be considered too elementary in presentation. It lacks at least an...
Writing FeedbackELENA210395 - Aug 17, 2021 / Holt - Aug 18, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: Should countries invite foreign companies to open their branches to boost the economy?
2 - When presenting a comparison + personal opinion essay, the writer must not be seen as trying to convince the...
Writing Feedbackngtchi - Aug 17, 2021 / Holt - Aug 18, 2021
|Cars and cycles mixed on the same roadway might cause some problems
Writing Feedbackillusion311 - Aug 17, 2021 / Holt - Aug 18, 2021
|The graph demonstrates the variation in the birth rates of two countries, namely China and the USA
Writing FeedbackDungBui - Aug 17, 2021 / Holt - Aug 18, 2021
|Children are facilitated to learn the second language at the early age
2 - The question posed for this topic is: "Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?" The response of the...
Writing Feedbackchi150901 - Aug 17, 2021 / Holt - Aug 18, 2021
|The advent of TV cannot make live performance loss its value
4 - You should include include the topic accurately so that the readers can know which type of essay is required....
Writing FeedbackTrong Anh - Aug 15, 2021 / declanshelby - Aug 18, 2021
|I am struggling with this essay : Agree or disagree "Watching TV is a waste of time for children" ?
3 - drawbacks that we do not know. After watching television for a long time , of course, children so they...
Writing FeedbackMinieChoco - Aug 10, 2021 / gintoki7 - Aug 17, 2021
|In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because they have more children.
3 - leads to people experiencing differences in lifestyle Being a member of a large family from other individuals as...
Writing Feedbacktranthimylinh93 - Aug 10, 2021 / gintoki7 - Aug 17, 2021
|The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.
3 - You need to add the picture of the line graph beside your essay, which will help to understand your...
Writing FeedbackLeminh23 - Aug 15, 2021 / skinnypeter - Aug 17, 2021
|Happiness is difficult to define because it is different/distinctive to each individual person
2 - It is important that the writer does not indicate any statements of fact or truth in the topic Islaliment....
Writing Feedbackrosigenious - Aug 16, 2021 / Holt - Aug 17, 2021
|Tourism is becoming a good source of revenue to many countries. Discuss advantages and drawbacks.
2 - The essay is 243 words and does not meet the word requirements for the task. An addition to that...
Writing Feedbackngaaaaaaaaa - Aug 16, 2021 / Holt - Aug 17, 2021
|These days, admiring celebrities are assumed to make many postitive effects on fan's living. IELTS 2
2 - The writer has offered a diplomatic response without considering that there is a scoring criteria for opinion clarity. There...
Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen123 - Aug 16, 2021 / Holt - Aug 17, 2021
|TASK 1: The line graph compares the amount of waste produced by three companies over fifteen years
Writing Feedbackluffyonepiece - Aug 15, 2021 / luffyonepiece - Aug 16, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : The average house expenses in England and its capital city – London
2 - When more than one image Is provided, the writer needs to properly identify and differentiale between the Images in...
Writing Feedbackhahalolo - Aug 15, 2021 / Holt - Aug 16, 2021
|Food/drinks/tobacco;clothing/footwear and leisure/education - Ielts 1: "Table" essay
2 - The data analysis will be scored down immediately due to the lack of proper page formatting. The examiner is...
Writing Feedbacktuananhbmt012 - Aug 15, 2021 / Holt - Aug 16, 2021
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