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|IELTS: Fast food should not be allowed to advertise - all companies have the right to advertise
2 - While you word choice is good, I think your logic is lacking. First, you didn't expand your ideas clearly....
Writing FeedbackTinathanh - Jul 14, 2020 / Tama Yu - Jul 14, 2020
|GRE Argument Issue; A nation should require all students to study the same national curriculum
2 - Your potential score for this essay is a 3. The low score is based on the grammar, logic, and...
Writing Feedbackkays - Jul 13, 2020 / Holt - Jul 14, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: OPINION - SPORT as a controversial matter in school curriculum
4 - I think after discussing both views, you need to write one more body paragraph to express your own ideas....
Writing Feedbackbangbangbt - Jul 9, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 14, 2020
|Issue: whether the university should accept the balanced amount of each gender in all courses or not
5 - I think your first arugument paragraph has enough reasoning and development. However, in your second arugument paragraph I do...
Writing Feedbackjoanemily - Jul 12, 2020 / Tama Yu - Jul 13, 2020
|Young generations now spend more time and money following fashion trends. To what extend do you agre
7 - rephrase first body paragraph, It is not talking about young generation, Define a main topic to start with....
Writing FeedbackLUCAS16692000 - Jul 3, 2020 / umarfaruk - Jul 13, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: Causes and solutions for global warming
Writing FeedbackTinathanh - Jul 13, 2020 / umarfaruk - Jul 13, 2020
|Essay - The ownership of car should be restricted to one per family / climate change
Writing Feedbackumarfaruk - Jul 12, 2020 / umarfaruk - Jul 13, 2020
|The table given illustrates the data about the underground railroad's networks in six locations
2 - Kindly remember that the task 1 essay is to be comprised of 3 paragraphs. It is not comprised of...
Writing Feedbacktrongkhai - Jul 13, 2020 / Holt - Jul 13, 2020
|What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad? ielts writting task 2
2 - This is an incomplete Task 2 essay so it cannot be reviewed properly. You only provided 216 words for...
Writing Feedbackhaiirwngf - Jul 13, 2020 / Holt - Jul 13, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE CITIES IN AUSTRALIA
2 - There is a misconception that the more words you write, the more chances you have of passing the test....
Writing Feedbackyenmy - Jul 13, 2020 / Holt - Jul 13, 2020
|In the near future, most people will use driverless cars - what's your opinion on this matter?
3 - Hi, I think you should be careful with singular and plural verb using virtual driver contributes to And...
Writing FeedbackVinhhhhh - Jul 12, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 13, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : JOB SATISFACTION AND JOB SECURITY
3 - I am impressed by the level of your personal opinion and the validity by which you discussed it. However,...
Writing Feedbackzairesummer - Jul 12, 2020 / Holt - Jul 12, 2020
|Discuss about the inequality between artists and the government's interfere
Writing Feedbackpltv2004 - Jul 12, 2020 / pltv2004 - Jul 12, 2020
|IELTS task 1: Pie chart (Energy use and gas emission of Australia household)
2 - There is a lack of clarity in your summary overview. You must be specific about having 2 charts presented...
Writing Feedbackbuiquynhhuong - Jul 12, 2020 / Holt - Jul 12, 2020
|The line graph compares the amount of four different types of food consumed in Europe; IELTS 1
2 - You should try to stay within the 175-190 word count. Writing any more than that number opens your report...
Writing Feedbacknguyentananhquoc - Jul 12, 2020 / Holt - Jul 12, 2020
|IELTS Book 13 test 3 task 1 - Top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity
4 - In your first and second paragraphs, "production" and "consumption" were refrained too many time. I suppose some other synonyms...
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jul 10, 2020 / buiquynhhuong - Jul 12, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1: Employment Rates of four Countries (bar graph)
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 3, 2020 / nguyentananhquoc - Jul 12, 2020
|Discuss advantages and disadvantages of technological devices
3 - Hi, I'm an IELTS learner and here are just some personal suggestions: Firstly, I really appreciate the clear idea...
Writing FeedbackNhatKRK - Jul 11, 2020 / buiquynhhuong - Jul 11, 2020
|People should learn about the past despite some drawbacks of studying history
4 - it were written they were invention of penicillin have has can now trying try would more proud...
Writing FeedbackTuanAnh123 - Jul 11, 2020 / Waterloop - Jul 11, 2020
|Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals. IELTS TASK 2
2 - Okay. So, you did not meet the minimum word requirement for this essay. There are percentage points that will...
Writing FeedbackJohnJake - Jul 11, 2020 / Holt - Jul 11, 2020
|IELTS TASK2 - limit the use of cars
2 - This is a pretty effective discussion. You show that you have a clear understanding of the discussion topic and...
Writing Feedbackleerose111 - Jul 10, 2020 / Holt - Jul 11, 2020
|Government: Conserve endangered species or human being is more important. Both views and opinion?
Writing Feedbacknguyenhoangtung - Jul 8, 2020 / nguyenhoangtung - Jul 10, 2020
|Reading newspapers and books online - CAM 15 | Test 2 | Writing Task 2
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|Getting promotion is one of the biggest drives for people - factors which lead people to work hard
Writing FeedbackTinathanh - Jul 8, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 10, 2020
|The line graph indicates how the birth rates of China and the USA fluctuated from 1920 to 2000
Writing Feedbacknguyentananhquoc - Jul 9, 2020 / nguyentananhquoc - Jul 9, 2020
|Ielts task 2: the impacts of punishment in moral education and the right way to punish children
4 - It appears that you totally misunderstood the original prompt for this essay. The discussion pertains to the necessity of...
Writing Feedbackbuiquynhhuong - Jul 8, 2020 / Holt - Jul 9, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2 - Appearance or Work Quality? Discuss both views.
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 8, 2020 / Holt - Jul 9, 2020
|CASHLESS TRANSACTIONS ESSAY- IELTS TASK 2
4 - The third reasoning paragraph is unnecessary since you are not being asked to discuss the possible drawbacks, repercussions, or...
Writing FeedbackPtp03 - Jul 8, 2020 / Holt - Jul 9, 2020
|The changes in the emission of carbon in four countries in the period from 1967 to 2007
2 - Hi, there :) I think it's better to put your overview into your intro paragraph. That way, you can...
Writing Feedbackleerose111 - Jul 9, 2020 / ravatrav - Jul 9, 2020
|TASK 2: Animal Extinctions - causes and solutions
4 - In truth, the way that you wrote the essay does not really offer clarity in the discussion. You are...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 9, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: SHOULD THE GOVERNMENT CARRY AND CONTROLL SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH?
2 - You make some relevant points and provide some specific examples to support your arguments, while there are some redundant...
Writing Feedbackththao_99 - Jul 8, 2020 / leerose111 - Jul 9, 2020
|IELTS: people pay to enter museums can help conserve artworks and facilitate sustainable development
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jul 7, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 8, 2020
|IELTS 2 - Diagrams about the life of the salmons - from "fry" to the adult salmons
5 - Thank you so much for your kind advice! I will paraphase next time, have never realised the importance...
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jul 6, 2020 / Waterloop - Jul 8, 2020
|Opinion essay: the university is not better than a training center in the process of knowledge
4 - @jhhh11 I'm grateful to hear your contributions. It's really helpful for me <3 @Holt I appreciate all of...
Writing FeedbackTuHuynh051001 - Jul 7, 2020 / TuHuynh051001 - Jul 8, 2020
|Older people struggle with use of modern technology. Reasons and solutions
5 - Clearly you have written under the required word count, and it is likely that you will be penalized for...
Writing FeedbackGATE - Jul 2, 2020 / Ptp03 - Jul 8, 2020
|IELTS Academic 14, test 2: one of the biggest problems of our time is the loss of particular species
6 - I think you should write one more paragraph before the closing to directly give your opinion about this problem....
Writing FeedbackTama Yu - Jul 6, 2020 / ththao_99 - Jul 7, 2020
|TASK 1: Plastic Bottle Production Process
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|IELTS Task 1 - Birth and death rates in New Zealand
2 - Hi @lynn1851010065, - Your paraphraph 2 and 3 are quite short (only 2 sentences each) --> You should write...
Writing Feedbacklynn1851010065 - Jul 7, 2020 / jhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020
|TASK 1: Maps of the Olive Drive Area
2 - You did a wonderful job in the summary overview. However, you forgot to indicate which year represented the increase...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking and baking.
3 - Never start a paraphrase with the phrase "It is true..." because that removes the objectivity of your essay presentation....
Writing Feedbackducpronehaha123 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|Reasons why local people don't visit these locations as frequent as tourists
Writing Feedbackiamieltstaker - Jul 7, 2020 / Dattranvan1811 - Jul 7, 2020
|Online communication platforms reach out across the globe and befriend others from different nations
3 - You did an acceptable job in the paraphrase section. The only problem that I have with it is that...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 6, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|Essay about teenage problems
3 - The first problem that heavily weighs down your essay is the lack of proper formatting. Your second paragraph is...
Writing FeedbackJackie08 - Jul 6, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - HIGHER EDUCATION FOR THE PUBLIC
Writing FeedbackHuongGiangNguyen - Jun 30, 2020 / ducpronehaha123 - Jul 7, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: what do you think - are entertainers worth their fortune?
Writing Feedbackblitzer101 - Jul 5, 2020 / blitzer101 - Jul 7, 2020
|GRE Argument Essay : skateboarding prohibition at Central Plaza
NEW - skateboarding's impact on businesses nearby ESSAY The letter conveys that due to increased popularity of skateboarding and increased...
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|IELTS writing task 2 about government's investment
4 - a deveoped country stable economy stabilise Korean wave were was Korean drama and Korean song. On...
Writing FeedbackElsa - Jun 26, 2020 / Waterloop - Jul 6, 2020
|Writing task 2: discuss about the extinction of animal species
3 - the extinction of animals should be obligated by countries and individuals -> Countries and individuals should shoulder their responsibility...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Jul 2, 2020 / Waterloop - Jul 6, 2020
|The investments of many governments in the arts are pointless and should be reallocated elsewhere
3 - In my opinion, I am very interested in your ideas as it very clear, but there are some things...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 6, 2020 / Ellen Trang - Jul 6, 2020
|IELTS writing task 2: Teenage and adult life as the happiest time of lives
3 - The justification paragraphs are not properly formatted. While you did good work in referencing second person pronouns, you should...
Writing Feedbacknaufal abiyyu - Jul 5, 2020 / Holt - Jul 6, 2020
|Essay about reasons and keys to recent situations of local attractions
5 - Your second and third paragraphs need more development. The second paragraph should focus on the reason why people from...
Writing Feedbacknhuquynh20 - Jul 5, 2020 / Holt - Jul 6, 2020
|IELTS: Globalization has both advantages (economy) and disadvantages (diseases)
Writing FeedbackTinathanh - Jul 2, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 5, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: provide almost all young adults with access to tertiary education
2 - You did not need to include irrelevant information in the opening paraphrase. Use only the information located in the...
Writing Feedbackbangbangbt - Jul 4, 2020 / Holt - Jul 4, 2020
|How has technology improved our daily lives?
Writing Feedbackbadboiz - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|Statistics of people who used Internet among the USA, Canada and Mexico citizens (1999-2009)
2 - You have an acceptable presentation. All the facts are there and the essay can be considered informative for something...
Writing Feedbacktrangianghuongli - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|IELTS Writing Test 2 Part 2 Book 14 Cambridge: Environmental Problems
2 - There are several environmental prompts for the Task 2 test. Without a specific reference to the correct prompt, I...
Writing FeedbackCaoquanbao - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|IELTS: BOTH VIEW - Some people say that there is no need to go the Cinema
2 - You may want to reconsider your word count for the Task 2 essay. As you are required to proof...
Writing FeedbackChloeee - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: RECRUITMENT ( INNOVATION OR TEAMWORK )
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|IELTS TASK 2 : Business and marketing, promotion funds (which makes people buy their products)
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|The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicyles
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