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|All youngsters should do volunteer work in their leisure time to support the community?
2 - This is an incorrect response. The provided discussion instruction pertains to the extent of your (dis) agreement with...
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|WRITING TASK 1 - BAR CHART ABOUT DIVORCE RATES IN FINLAND AND SWEDEN FROM 2011 TO 2015
Writing FeedbackHuy Vo - Nov 18, 2021 / irvan - Nov 21, 2021
|The number of telephone calls minutes in Finland in three different categories (period of 9 years)
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|The average amount of carbon dioxide emitted per each individual person in four European countries
2 - Be mindful of the writing time deadline. Practice writing with a timer in an actual exam set-up. By doing...
Writing Feedbackquynhmai - Nov 20, 2021 / Holt - Nov 21, 2021
|The bar chart compares the number of 15-year old students chose to study French and Japanese
2 - Selecting to study what? The summary must be clear about its reference to the age group in relation...
Writing FeedbackMai 123 - Nov 20, 2021 / Holt - Nov 21, 2021
|Writing task 2 - A look into students poor behavior; parents support importance
2 - The prompt restatement is over presented to the point where the author already shares personal insights on the topic....
Writing FeedbackJIV - Nov 20, 2021 / Holt - Nov 21, 2021
|The developments along Olive Drive before and after the construction of new facilities 1980-2010
2 - The writer opted to identify the changes based on the year representations of the urban plan and design presentations....
Writing Feedbacktrang12345 - Nov 19, 2021 / Holt - Nov 20, 2021
|Discuss both view about learning with teacher and learn by internet
2 - This is a failing essay had this been an actual test. The prompt restatement + personal opinion is tremendously...
Writing Feedbackvannhan - Nov 19, 2021 / Holt - Nov 20, 2021
|Writing task2 - Team/group activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities
2 - This is a personal reflection of the author. It is not an accurate prompt restatement. Kindly remember that...
Writing Feedbackellenchen - Nov 19, 2021 / Holt - Nov 20, 2021
|Identify the adverse impacts of online learning and propose solutions.
NEW - Identify the adverse impacts of online learning and propose solutions Please refer to our private editing services by...
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|The importance of learning English
3 - It is not recommended to describe a topic or explain it to somebody while comparing it with other topics....
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|There is an argument about whether we should protect all the fauna or not
2 - When you are asked to give both views and provide your opinion, the writing method of the task totally...
Writing Feedbackministran - Nov 18, 2021 / Holt - Nov 19, 2021
|[IELTS Task1] The proportion of women's and men's driving test pass rates in one Asian country
2 - Go for a more complex sentence structure in relation to the time measurements. Itis more impressive to say" ......
Writing Feedbackclairewuwu - Nov 17, 2021 / Holt - Nov 18, 2021
|Discuss the merits and dismerits of online learning among students in the context of COVID 19.
2 - As this is an advantage versus disadvantage discussion, you are not obliged to give a personal opinion. In...
Writing Feedbackmyphan123456 - Nov 17, 2021 / Holt - Nov 18, 2021
|A survey about how people in five Australian cities bought their coffee and tea (IELTS 1)
2 - Never indicate an image position to help you avoid any referencing errors. Always assume that the reader does...
Writing FeedbackAgnes Yang - Nov 17, 2021 / Holt - Nov 18, 2021
|[IELTS task 1] The line chart compares the demand for 4 different types of meat and fish
4 - @Holt Thank you very much! I have combined my writing style from many sources, and I've always tried to...
Writing Feedbackchristian281 - Nov 14, 2021 / christian281 - Nov 17, 2021
|IELTS 1: How much waste was collected by a recycling centre over a period of 5 consecutive years
2 - The presentation is mostly acceptable except, the writer did not proofread the report. There is a missing period at...
Writing Feedbackbinhan - Nov 16, 2021 / Holt - Nov 17, 2021
|#ielts Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. What is your opinion?
2 - The first few errors that caught my eye in the first paragraph are the LR and GRA mistakes. she...
Writing Feedbackbangbang83 - Nov 16, 2021 / Holt - Nov 17, 2021
|My IELTS Practice Essay: I really need to improve my work on the gap year
2 - You are not writing a mesearch paper. You are writing a personal opinion paper of no more than 300...
Writing Feedbackemm234 - Nov 16, 2021 / Holt - Nov 17, 2021
|[IELTS Task 1] The chart shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country
2 - For the summary overview. the proper approach would have been to describe itas a comparison of players vessels watchers.That...
Writing Feedbackstevehere - Nov 16, 2021 / Holt - Nov 17, 2021
|Writing task 2: The main reasons to make people spend most their time working
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|The chart reperesents the amount of males and females passing their driving test
2 - First time Task 1 writers tend to limit their word count to exactly or just a little over the...
Writing Feedbacktranhin - Nov 15, 2021 / Holt - Nov 16, 2021
|Question about the advantage and disadvantage of working from home.
2 - Do not make reference to current events in your restatement. The original topic is not connected to this...
Writing FeedbackNhido - Nov 15, 2021 / Holt - Nov 16, 2021
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women
3 - @hanhnguyennn you can use another vocabulary to explain film types. such as genre, category, etc...
Writing Feedbackhanhnguyennn - Nov 11, 2021 / aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
|IELTS 1 - The expenditure on consumed goods. The data was collected in France and the UK in 2010
Writing FeedbackDason - Nov 1, 2021 / aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
|Today's schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today.
2 - The prompt paraphrase and opinion paragraph has deviated from the original topic and required response format. The restatement should...
Writing Feedbacknhatlam6306 - Nov 15, 2021 / Holt - Nov 16, 2021
|The bar charts show the comparison of salt intake between men and women in different ages in America
3 - I think that your sentences using humans as the subject are too much in your essay. Use more like...
Writing FeedbackMay55 - Nov 11, 2021 / greencoconut - Nov 16, 2021
|The energy produced by France in the course of two years (1995 and 2005)
Writing Feedbackkhangngudot - Nov 14, 2021 / khangngudot - Nov 15, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: IS GOVERNMENT RESPONSIBLE FOR TAKING CARE OF CITIZENS' HEALTH and diet?
3 - 1. I think your thesis statement in the first paragraph should not just have your opinion but also the...
Writing Feedbackkimkhue - Nov 13, 2021 / Khushi123 - Nov 15, 2021
|Some have a strong preference for studying alone while others tend to go for learning in a group
2 - The essay asks for your direct opinion. So the examples must be based on first person,rather than 3rd party...
Writing Feedbackthungoc13 - Nov 14, 2021 / Holt - Nov 15, 2021
|New student enrollment in Top Australian university and their applications majors
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|There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food.
2 - It is not necessary to define what genetically modified foods are to the reader. The task 2 essay...
Writing FeedbackPHAMNGOCHUONG - Nov 13, 2021 / Holt - Nov 14, 2021
|Writing task 2: Students should be primarily taught academic subjects so that they can pass exams
4 - @beloyal Thank you. Can you give me some particularly example about conjuction words in this essay?...
Writing FeedbackTranThanhLuy - Nov 9, 2021 / TranThanhLuy - Nov 14, 2021
|Some believe that importing foreign movies and TV programs is beneficial for their country's culture
Writing Feedbackslintii_302 - Nov 12, 2021 / slintii_302 - Nov 14, 2021
|Is maintaining public libraries a waste of money since the Internet is now replacing their function?
2 - Review the writing instructions. The writing is to be based on "to what extent" a response that you...
Writing FeedbackNathan531 - Nov 12, 2021 / Holt - Nov 13, 2021
|Data on Australia exports to four regions: Japan, US, China, and India, over the period of 22 years
2 - This is a confusing statement as there are no categories enumerated in the line graph. Percentage points we...
Writing Feedbackngthuylinh1011 - Nov 11, 2021 / Holt - Nov 12, 2021
|More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number...) for everyday (ielts
2 - Good restatement but it should have had a direct reference to the indicated channels where the use of...
Writing FeedbackPham Ngoc Anh - Nov 11, 2021 / Holt - Nov 12, 2021
|Social Media on the Brain and Mind
2 - The introduction to the topic will be helped if a previous paragraph is presented showing the history of human...
Writing Feedbackhan2206320 - Nov 11, 2021 / Holt - Nov 12, 2021
|"Today many people are spending less and less time at home". What are the reasons and effects?
Writing Feedbackanonyhoang - Nov 10, 2021 / Emperor Penguin - Nov 11, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Celebrities' viewpoints on a wide range of matters
4 - @Holt Dear Holt, I did read samples of Ielts regarding 'Is this a positive or negative development?' before writing...
Writing FeedbackEmperor Penguin - Nov 9, 2021 / Emperor Penguin - Nov 10, 2021
|New technologies have changed the way children spend their time
2 - Refrain from changing the original topic presentation by offering a testimonial about the topic. Proving the veracity of...
Writing Feedbackasdadwds28 - Nov 9, 2021 / Holt - Nov 10, 2021
|The line graph illustrates the number of tourists travelling to an Caribbean island (2010 to 2017)
2 - The essay is over-analyzed at 127 words. With a writing time allowance of 20 minutes, this should have no...
Writing FeedbackLinh Tran 119 - Nov 9, 2021 / Holt - Nov 10, 2021
|WRITING TASK 2 - should phones be forbidden for youngsters during the school time?
Writing Feedbackxuming - Nov 5, 2021 / Emperor Penguin - Nov 9, 2021
|lELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Televised trials shared in public
Writing FeedbackEmperor Penguin - Nov 4, 2021 / Emperor Penguin - Nov 9, 2021
|Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods?
2 - The first paragraph is called the prompt restatement + opinion for a reason. It has to accomplish 2 things:...
Writing Feedbackchibi2004 - Nov 8, 2021 / Holt - Nov 9, 2021
|Many people argue that rather than reducing climate change, we should find a way to adapt to it
Writing Feedbackaugenstern16 - Nov 6, 2021 / augenstern16 - Nov 9, 2021
|WRITING TASK 2: INTERNATIONAL SUPPORT FROM INTERNATIONAL COMMUNITY FOR LESS DEVELOPED COUNTRIES
Writing Feedbackcynthiavu1709 - Nov 7, 2021 / Holt - Nov 8, 2021
|Ielts graph about gold sales in Dubai during the year of 2002
2 - The currency of sales needs to be mentioned in the summary overview. As the writer, you need to let...
Writing Feedbackkunstpm - Nov 7, 2021 / Holt - Nov 8, 2021
|Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others
2 - When using the 2 paragraph format for this comparative discussion, you must provide your point of view for each...
Writing Feedbackleira1709 - Nov 7, 2021 / Holt - Nov 8, 2021
|In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the govern
2 - The prompt restatement is totally inaccurate. It fails to refer to the original statement as it adds a discussion...
Writing Feedbackmea1304 - Nov 7, 2021 / Holt - Nov 8, 2021
|How Covid-19 have negative impact on my 12th marks
3 - Thank you Mr. Holt, I changed it a little bit ,pl. comment There was anxiety in the environment,...
Writing Feedbackawdheshp - Oct 22, 2021 / awdheshp - Nov 8, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: Youngsters have problems but the government ignores this. Give solve problems?
4 - 'Adult in the house impose children their ...' This sentence is quite confusing, maybe due to the grammatical...
Writing FeedbackYu Yu - Nov 4, 2021 / Emperor Penguin - Nov 8, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Negative effects of fast food
Writing FeedbackEmperor Penguin - Nov 4, 2021 / Emperor Penguin - Nov 7, 2021
|IELTS Task 2: Advantages and Disadvantages of consuming organic food
2 - There is a time reference confusion in the first paragraph. refers to most recent events over the...
Writing Feedbackbon12351 - Nov 6, 2021 / Holt - Nov 7, 2021
|The given bar chart illustrates the number of people visiting four certain museums in London
2 - The 4 museums have reference names in the chart. For summary compliance , you have to mention the...
Writing Feedbackninhnb05 - Nov 4, 2021 / Holt - Nov 7, 2021
|Vietnamese blockbusters and Hollywood blockbusters
2 - The original topic basis is not clearly interpreted in the first paragraph.The writer opens with an opinion about cinematography,...
Writing Feedbacklinh_592002 - Nov 6, 2021 / Holt - Nov 7, 2021
|TRAFFIC CONGESTION IS BECOMING INCREASINGLY PROBLEMATIC IN MAJOR CITIES. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES?
2 - Avoid providing a personal opinion in the restatement paragraph. By changing the purpose of the orginal topic presentation...
Writing Feedbackhaneii10 - Nov 5, 2021 / Holt - Nov 6, 2021
|Task 2 question: Some people believe it would be better to build houses in existing towns....
2 - These should be restated in the paragraph.That is why it is identified as the topic restatement paragraph. The...
Writing FeedbackNguyenfromhanoi - Nov 5, 2021 / Holt - Nov 6, 2021
|ESSAY - Failure and desire. It is believed that failure is the consequence of ambitions shortage
2 - Is someone else other than you writing this essay? No? Then why are you referring to yourself in...
Writing Feedbackcallmenatie - Nov 5, 2021 / Holt - Nov 6, 2021
|Writing task 1: The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to four London museums.
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