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|IELTS Task 2: Should all art subjects be abandoned or not?
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|[IELTS Writing Task 2] Physical or mental strength is important for success in sport?
2 - Examiners hate it when students use terms that exaggerate the topic presentation in the original. Try to avoid using...
Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - Mar 3, 2020 / Holt - Mar 3, 2020
|IELTS task 1: Diagram on electricity generation from tides
6 - @trvaanh When analyzing the diagram, I usually try to figure out how many parts/stages are there and the function...
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Feb 18, 2020 / vuthuylinh2611 - Mar 3, 2020
|Children's education expensive. Government pay some/all costs . Advantages outweigh disadvantages?
3 - You have not really written enough words to gain a maximum scoring potential for this essay. 252 words is...
Writing Feedbackhamy0712 - Mar 3, 2020 / Holt - Mar 3, 2020
|IELTS 2 - The line graph compares the population of aged 65 or more in three different countries
5 - I think instead of using comma to connect the sentence, you had better use linking words like Also, Moreover....
Writing Feedbackiygnit - Mar 1, 2020 / trvaanh - Mar 3, 2020
|IETLS WRITING TEST 2: DIFFERENT VIEWS ABOUT THE FUNDING OF CREATIVE ARTIST
Writing Feedbackjayce - Mar 3, 2020 / vuthuylinh2611 - Mar 3, 2020
|General Training, Task 2 - Type: Direct Questions - Subject: Labour-saving and communication devices
2 - You were so focused on the rephrasing of the prompt statement that you forgot to respond directly to the...
Writing FeedbackGaucho - Mar 3, 2020 / Holt - Mar 3, 2020
|IELT Task1: the various stages of using geothermal energy for electricity generation
Writing Feedbackallen8787 - Mar 2, 2020 / allen8787 - Mar 3, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Get a job between school and university
2 - This is not an opinion essay. As such, your opinion at the end of the summary statement was not...
Writing Feedbacknguyenkimngan - Mar 2, 2020 / Holt - Mar 2, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Old buildings or new buildings?
4 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedbacks. I still have some questions regarding to the essay. Can I...
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|The different ways of investing in machinery, building, staff training, and research - Ielts 1
Writing Feedbackanhthu1609 - Mar 1, 2020 / Holt - Mar 1, 2020
|UK acid rain emissions - in millions of tones, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007
3 - Your summary overview is not changed enough to convince the examiner that you did not just cut and paste...
Writing Feedbackkhahungkts - Mar 1, 2020 / Holt - Mar 1, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 - the extinction of particular species as the primary environment issue
Writing Feedbackiygnit - Feb 29, 2020 / iygnit - Mar 1, 2020
|writing task2 : topic corona virus agree or disagree . I have just written task 2
3 - @Holt thank you examiner for clearly feedback yes , I 'm doing mysefl study and this is first time...
Writing Feedbackvanderkiller - Feb 29, 2020 / vanderkiller - Mar 1, 2020
|Comparison Essay: Me And My Brother
3 - I am not sure if you are discussing similarities and differences among basic siblings or, similarities and differences among...
Writing FeedbackVoldysGoneMoldy - Feb 29, 2020 / Holt - Mar 1, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 - What can people do to discourage increasing car ownership in big cities?
5 - @Holt Thanks for your feedbacks. I promise to be humble in the future. I got my suspension once and...
Writing Feedbackpotatowee - Feb 29, 2020 / potatowee - Feb 29, 2020
|IELTS 1 - The two images provide the layout of a school as it was in 2004 and plans for 2024
2 - WARNING ! STUDENTS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO SCORE ESSAYS !! STUDENT SCORING = SUSPENSION !!! The summary overview...
Writing Feedbackiygnit - Feb 29, 2020 / Holt - Feb 29, 2020
|Ielts task 2 - E-learning programs
2 - WARNING ! STUDENTS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO SCORE ESSAYS !!! STUDENT SCORING = SUSPENSION !!! Oops! You almost...
Writing Feedbackquanganhle11111 - Feb 29, 2020 / Holt - Feb 29, 2020
|Should governments spend more for construction of railways instead of roads for cars?
3 - The format for your essay is incorrect. The Task 2 essay always has a minimum of 2 body paragraphs....
Writing Feedbackrita973 - Feb 29, 2020 / Holt - Feb 29, 2020
|The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007
Writing Feedbackamiisareum - Feb 26, 2020 / iygnit - Feb 29, 2020
|IELTS Task I - People's expenditures on certain goods in five countries
3 - Thank you for your constructive feedback. The attached is the table. Looking forward to hear from you....
Writing Feedbackiygnit - Feb 28, 2020 / iygnit - Feb 29, 2020
|Ielts task 2: environment, energy, ecology
4 - The first thing you should do is to make clear of your stance. When you write something like "I...
Writing FeedbackJuliee - Feb 27, 2020 / potatowee - Feb 28, 2020
|Spoken communication vs written communication - which one is the best?
2 - While you did write more than the minimum number of words required for the essay, you did not do...
Writing Feedbacknhileodei00 - Feb 28, 2020 / Holt - Feb 28, 2020
|Computers play a really important role since they were invented in the last century
3 - In this essay, I think you've opened a new discussion which is " Why we should not replace them...
Writing Feedbackthamng - Feb 28, 2020 / xtunx - Feb 28, 2020
|Do you agree reading book better than playing games or watching tv for children?
Writing FeedbackDung36 - Feb 28, 2020 / Holt - Feb 28, 2020
|Writing task 2: effects of technology on relationships between individuals.
2 - It will be difficult to review your essay for prompt responsiveness, clarity, and vocabulary usage because you forgot to...
Writing Feedbacktungtranson2512 - Feb 28, 2020 / Holt - Feb 28, 2020
|My Classification Essay Homework, Types of Sports.
Writing Feedbackmrclips - Feb 26, 2020 / mrclips - Feb 27, 2020
|What was your input to solving a challenge and to put into action modification or reform?
Writing FeedbackPAN - Feb 26, 2020 / PAN - Feb 27, 2020
|IELTS2 - Government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to save environment
Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - Feb 26, 2020 / Holt - Feb 27, 2020
|General Training - Task 1 - Type: Letter of Interest - Subject: Walking tour in the mountains
2 - When you indicate the range of packages, there is no need to indicate that you need price information. The...
Writing FeedbackGaucho - Feb 26, 2020 / Holt - Feb 27, 2020
|Ielts1 - report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
3 - Your second paragraph is running too long. You should be focusing on the separation of information in the essay...
Writing FeedbackGATE - Feb 26, 2020 / Holt - Feb 27, 2020
|Essay regarding the effects of online shopping on the Environment!
3 - @Holt This is for Ielts writing task 2. I wonder if you can evaluate which band this writing can...
Writing Feedbackdoublenok157 - Feb 26, 2020 / doublenok157 - Feb 26, 2020
|Using punishment to teach children good behavior? Ielts 2
3 - Some grammatical and spelling mistakes: - ... giving them a PUNISHMENT is essential. - ... be given...
Writing Feedbackvhbn - Feb 25, 2020 / Gaucho - Feb 26, 2020
|WRITING TASK 2: MANY BELIEVE THAT SCHOOL IS THE PLACE TO LEARN HOW TO BE GOOD MEMBERS OF SOCIETY
3 - The prompt paraphrase has to outline the discussion instruction as provided in the original prompt. In this rephrasing, you...
Writing FeedbackTh Nguyen - Feb 26, 2020 / Holt - Feb 26, 2020
|IELTS 2 - Relocating industries and businesses from urban industries to regional areas.
3 - Some grammatical and spelling mistakes: - I totally agree. Although ... money ON transportation COST, BUT it will...
Writing FeedbackNurulAini - Feb 26, 2020 / Gaucho - Feb 26, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: children are becoming overweight and unhealthy, who is responsible for this?
3 - There are grammar issues with your essay. "These" is the plural form of "this". Therefore, you cannot say "these...
Writing Feedbacknganthuyneu - Feb 26, 2020 / Holt - Feb 26, 2020
|How many tonnes of goods (road, water, rail, pipeline) transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002
3 - I think the first sentence should be paraphrased. And in my view, more emphasis should be put on transportation...
Writing FeedbackNguyet Tran - Feb 23, 2020 / Leo552 - Feb 26, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Reasons why eBooks are better (or not?) than printed books
3 - While your line of reasoning is correct in the essay, your response to the prompt question is improper. You...
Writing Feedbacknurizayanah - Feb 25, 2020 / Holt - Feb 26, 2020
|The power of advertising and the real needs of society in consumer goods
3 - It's a great essay and you did really well. However, I want to point out some trivial mistakes. ...
Writing FeedbackAllyStar - Feb 25, 2020 / THC1310vn - Feb 25, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2 feb 2020 Today single-use products are still very common.
2 - Realistically, you can only write a total of 300 words for this essay. You are writing without timing yourself...
Writing FeedbackSophieMetropolis - Feb 25, 2020 / Holt - Feb 25, 2020
|Sustainable development, urbanization in the cities
7 - You should include in your introduction a parphrase of this opening sentence. "These days, people ..." 2nd paragraph...
Writing Feedbackieltswriting - Feb 21, 2020 / SophieMetropolis - Feb 25, 2020
|Is it worth forcing children, who lack artistic talent, to learn art-based subjects?
Writing FeedbackTHC1310vn - Feb 23, 2020 / Angie62 - Feb 25, 2020
|Ielts Task 2: Should school children not be given homework by their teachers?
3 - I believe that your essay had discussed both views. Yet, as mentioned by the first comment, it would be...
Writing Feedbackhieuluckyxu - Feb 23, 2020 / SophieMetropolis - Feb 24, 2020
|IELTS task 2: More people should be encouraged to do vocational training. Agree or Disagree?
Writing Feedbackhuy655vn - Feb 23, 2020 / huy655vn - Feb 24, 2020
|General Training, Task 2 - Type: Cause and Effect - Subject: Children's obesity in wealthy countries
2 - The main reason why this essay will not reach your target band score is because of the evidence you...
Writing FeedbackGaucho - Feb 24, 2020 / Holt - Feb 24, 2020
|Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree?
3 - I am not impressed with your written work because you did not respond to the prompt requirement in the...
Writing Feedbacklephuong0806 - Feb 24, 2020 / Holt - Feb 24, 2020
|IELTS 2: Taking a university degree is no longer as a determinant of a person's success
4 - @THC1310vn You were right! It took me almost 56 minutes to finish it. Thank You for pointing out my...
Writing FeedbackSophieMetropolis - Feb 24, 2020 / SophieMetropolis - Feb 24, 2020
|The benefits of the domestic travel
3 - @Holt First of all, thank you for your valuable advice and for spending your time to correct my essay....
Writing FeedbackESK2013 - Feb 22, 2020 / ESK2013 - Feb 23, 2020
|TOEFL Independent writing: Advertising makes people buy things that they don't need.
Writing Feedbackdavidben - Feb 23, 2020 / davidben - Feb 23, 2020
|Turtles in India (four different species) - IELTS Writing Task 1, line graph
3 - This represent (Noun - Verb agreement) an increase of 30 turtles "In contrast, LeatherBack ... and 90 turtles."...
Writing Feedbackjoseipg - Feb 17, 2020 / Nguyet Tran - Feb 23, 2020
|Task 2 IELTS famous brand purchase tendency
Writing Feedbackxtunx - Feb 22, 2020 / xtunx - Feb 23, 2020
|IELTS task 2 essay Should teachers teach the values of good and bad?
Writing Feedbackserbinax - Feb 22, 2020 / huy655vn - Feb 23, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2 ESSAY crime prevention, government or individual
4 - Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate that and will work harder for my essay....
Writing Feedbackhellohellohello - Feb 22, 2020 / hellohellohello - Feb 23, 2020
|IELTS 2: education on junk food overconsumption. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion.
3 - There are some problems with grammar: In your first sentence you used the perfect participle incorrectly, because this sentence...
Writing Feedbacksandyhsu - Feb 22, 2020 / serbinax - Feb 22, 2020
|Ielts Writing Task 1: the distribution of employment among agriculture, services and industries
Writing Feedbackuyennhi1 - Feb 21, 2020 / Nguyet Tran - Feb 22, 2020
|Self Study Ielts Task 1: Population for different type of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012
Writing FeedbackNguyet Tran - Feb 20, 2020 / Nguyet Tran - Feb 22, 2020
|Newspapers information is more reputable and trusted than the news on the internet
3 - 1.need to avoid using contraction such as don't, can't ,etc. ----> use "do not" "can not" 2.try to use...
Writing FeedbackUyuylamha02 - Feb 21, 2020 / sandyhsu - Feb 22, 2020
|England and Wales - household and accommodation 1981-2001
4 - Do not use terms of uncertainty in an essay that requires you to be precise with your data presentation....
Writing Feedbacknqnson - Feb 21, 2020 / Holt - Feb 22, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1: The government expenditure in 2010 and 2015
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|IELTS essay task 2 Success in life depends on hard work and determination
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