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|Advertisements have appeared ubiquitously in today's daily life
Writing FeedbackLe Thuy Vy - May 17, 2020 / Le Thuy Vy - May 18, 2020
|advantage and disadvantage essay - With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books.
2 - The maximum paragraph requirement of the task 2 essay is 5. You are over by 1 paragraph because you...
Writing FeedbackmywritingsTT - May 18, 2020 / Holt - May 18, 2020
|You have just spend a week with a friend for holiday. You realised you had left your wallet there.
2 - Spelling Errors: Fedex ( Proper Noun) - FedEx noddle = noodle Vocabulary Errors: Wonderfully / wonderful -...
Writing Feedbackjarodshen - May 18, 2020 / Holt - May 18, 2020
|The issue of communicating using the second language in foreign countries
4 - The essay will most definitely get a score of 1. The overall discussion format is incorrect. There is no...
Writing FeedbackKhai - May 17, 2020 / Holt - May 18, 2020
|Governments should impose heavy tax on car drivers and make improvements to public transportation
3 - I cannot deny that you have a rich lexical resource which contributes the best to rising your band score....
Writing Feedbackmarkus97 - May 17, 2020 / mywritingsTT - May 18, 2020
|Society should make efforts to save endangered species if humans affected
5 - @Holt Thank you so much for your response. I will definitely work on my content and post it again...
Writing FeedbackNamangarg147 - May 17, 2020 / Namangarg147 - May 17, 2020
|From the chart: Australians in terms of physical activity they partook in on a regular basis in 2010
Writing FeedbackLaurel Pham - May 16, 2020 / Laurel Pham - May 16, 2020
|Tourism except benefits can also pose several problems
4 - My apologies. The vocabulary explanation for a different post was accidentally attached to your essay. No worries though. You...
Writing Feedbackvlnga - May 16, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|Writing task 2 - Education is free. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - There are actually 2 discussion prompts based on your discussion topic. Since you did not provide the original prompt,...
Writing FeedbackTrinh Phon Tinh - May 16, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|The line graph illustrates the number of people aged 65 and more - over 100 years period
2 - The summary overview is complete in content. However, the presentation will not help your GRA score as you did...
Writing Feedbacknhuquinhh - May 16, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|Children watch a lot of TV and play video games - writing task 2(IELTS)
2 - The TA score for this essay will be 1. Your answer was completely unrelated to the task. You did...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 15, 2020 / Holt - May 16, 2020
|IELTS- T2: Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished?
Writing FeedbackMinhthuy1993 - May 15, 2020 / huyjunnie - May 16, 2020
|Writing task 2 - IELTS Academic - economic growth as the only way to end hunger and poverty?
3 - Thank you so much for your comments. They've helped me a lot in figuring out how I should write...
Writing Feedbackhangvu248 - May 15, 2020 / hangvu248 - May 15, 2020
|The graph illustrates the fish, lamb, beef and chicken consumptions in an European country
3 - I think the organization of paragraphs should be considered more carefully, as Holt has suggested. I would also recommend...
Writing FeedbackSally 205 - May 15, 2020 / hangvu248 - May 15, 2020
|Psychologists and color schemes
2 - Your summation of the original prompt needs more work. You did not use synonyms for the terms offices and...
Writing Feedbackkhoa1102 - May 14, 2020 / Holt - May 15, 2020
|I trust my government to take care of my life and climate change
NEW - Climate change is a big problem Government can not be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility...
Writing FeedbackIris1312 - May 14, 2020 / — -
|IELTS2 - governments, companies and people have equal responsibilities for combating global warming
Writing Feedbackylc125 - May 14, 2020 / ylc125 - May 14, 2020
|IELTS 9 wiriting task 1 : maps of an island before and after constructed
2 - I cannot properly review this essay because of 2 reasons: - You did not provide the images for...
Writing Feedbackholymolly - May 14, 2020 / Holt - May 14, 2020
|Building more sports facilities as the efficient way to promote public health. Any other measures?
Writing Feedbackafzalmd - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|Internet against Public Libraries
2 - This is an almost excellent essay that should score above the simple passing band score. In my opinion, this...
Writing Feedbackgekani - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|The importance of art, music and drama especially at primary level
2 - Being a simple agree or disagree essay, you do not need to offer an emotional or measured response to...
Writing Feedbackfrulymuly - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|Environmental issues around the world are so severe that an individual cannot make a difference
2 - The overall discussion is sound. It is applicable to the given prompt requirement except, you offered solutions to the...
Writing Feedbackngochathanh - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|The problems and solutions of education in undeveloped countries
2 - Your paragraphs do not truly discuss the related problems within a paragraph. Neither do you present related solutions in...
Writing FeedbackPee_Tee - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|Minimizing or deafiting climate change
2 - While you did a wonderful job in responding to the prompt question and staying on point with your reasoning...
Writing Feedbackphhth - May 12, 2020 / Holt - May 12, 2020
|The issue as to whether some types of food advertisements should be prohibited remains controversial
2 - Before you start writing essays that are extremely worded, you should first make sure that you are responding to...
Writing Feedbackphoebenguyen - May 12, 2020 / Holt - May 12, 2020
|IELTS T2: The best way for government to solve traffic congestion is provding free public transport?
2 - The essay asked you to deliver an extent or measured agreement or disagreement with the given topic. Based on...
Writing Feedbackuyenton - May 12, 2020 / Holt - May 12, 2020
|The total of books read by gender at the library of Starmouth School from 2009 to the present
2 - Due to the lack of image accompanying your essay, I will be unable to review your essay for content...
Writing FeedbackKl17122004 - May 11, 2020 / Holt - May 11, 2020
|Is technology useful for education in the modern time?
4 - Since Holt has already commented extensively on your content, I'll just add a few feedback on major writing style...
Writing Feedbackrosa1310 - May 11, 2020 / anhnguyenhai333 - May 11, 2020
|More people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families.
2 - I am afraid to review this essay for prompt responsiveness because there are 2 task 2 essay prompts that...
Writing Feedbacknnminhnhu02 - May 11, 2020 / Holt - May 11, 2020
|The two maps represent some changes that were made on the island for tourism purposes.
4 - You did describe the map, but, for the essay purpose, it should have been in a more technical or...
Writing Feedbackuhthnim - May 3, 2020 / julialisboa - May 11, 2020
|Color of goods and sales - Essay - IELTS_Writing task 2
3 - The examiner will be lost when he reads your essay. You did not paraphrase the original topic, nor did...
Writing FeedbackLy Na - May 11, 2020 / Holt - May 11, 2020
|WRITING TOEIC PART 3: Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is important to work at a job
Writing Feedbackphgchi2102 - May 10, 2020 / anhnguyenhai333 - May 10, 2020
|British people to spend time on phone calls - Writing Task 1 - Bar chart
3 - @Chaunguyen As the contributor said you did not indicate the measurement type, if you did you would have noticed...
Writing FeedbackChaunguyen - May 10, 2020 / RomanKoch - May 10, 2020
|The massive number of parents are choosing to educate their children at home recent years
2 - I am confused by your presentation. Are you writing a research paper or a task 2 IELTS practice test?...
Writing Feedbackthomsuna123 - May 10, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
|Some people think cooking at home is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with?
2 - Your essay does not apparently follow the prompt discussion requirements. It omits the specific discussion topics as indicated from...
Writing FeedbackSONNOZ13 - May 10, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
|Essay Task 2 about the advantages and disadvantages of social media
4 - You are being asked to compare the advantages and disadvantages in the essay. The proper approach to this, if...
Writing Feedbackbach - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
|Discuss about sports professionals have more income than other professions
4 - The essay has 2 prompt deviations. The first is in the paraphrased statement where you offered a solution to...
Writing FeedbackDang Minh - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 10, 2020
|The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What problems and some solutions?
Writing Feedbacklanlan - May 8, 2020 / pko20 - May 9, 2020
|Enhancement of the public health by constructing more sports facilities? Ielts 2
2 - The prompt paraphrase, just like the succeeding paragraphs, requires a 3-5 sentence presentation format. Not following this presentation rule...
Writing Feedbackquynhnga2903 - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|It is difficult for people living in cities today get enough physical exercise. Causes & solutions.
2 - The better approach to this essay would be to indicate how well you understood the topic in the prompt...
Writing Feedbacklanlan - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible - the loss of cultural norms
3 - You did not properly rephrase the prompt. You must make sure that you do not offer too much of...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment
5 - You make some typos (capable, producing bottles, etc.) Your ideas are not clear and well documented. ..., they are...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 6, 2020 / lanlan - May 9, 2020
|Causes and solutions of teenager's bad behavior which get them into trouble.
Writing Feedbackngocbich31 - May 8, 2020 / lanlan - May 9, 2020
|University graduates in Canada - IELTS WRITING Task 1 Question and Answer
3 - Do not rush when writing your report. Always take some time towards the end to review your work. This...
Writing Feedbackpanatagama51 - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|Coffee and banana sales - TEST 2 CAMBRIDGE IELTS 10
2 - Your essay cannot be marked because you did not upload the image and discussion instructions for this task 1...
Writing Feedbackhandauiu - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|Is the financial support from developed countries to those poor nations satisfactory?
8 - @RomanKoch Right, I didn't actually answer the prompt. The things I mentioned are mostly good starting points I think...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 7, 2020 / anhnguyenhai333 - May 8, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Acceptance / Unsatisfactory Lives (IELTS Cambridge 14)
2 - You have totally changed the parameters of the topic. You have turned a discussion into a debate, a dual...
Writing Feedbackthecursedpencil - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch regular TV
2 - Whenever you see the word OR in a prompt, that means this is a single opinion discussion. You cannot...
Writing Feedbackthanishka - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. IELTS task 2
3 - You have to learn to divide your thought process into individual sentences. That must be done so that you...
Writing Feedbackishaha - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|The bar chart and table below give information about health care resources and life expectancy
4 - Make it a regular practice to review your essays prior to submission. This is so that you can catch...
Writing FeedbackNhu Ngoc - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experiment with knowledge gained from books.
Writing Feedbackpko20 - May 7, 2020 / pko20 - May 8, 2020
|Both physical and mental strenght are necessary to reach success in a sport
3 - @Holt I really thank you for your comment. I have some questions! In the 3rd paragraph, should I present...
Writing Feedbackmichelletran10 - May 7, 2020 / michelletran10 - May 8, 2020
|IELTS task 2 CAM 14 about bad situation - try to make it better, or leave it how it is
Writing Feedbackmitchpham458 - May 7, 2020 / mitchpham458 - May 7, 2020
|Ielts writing task 2: A cap on citizens' salary or not?
3 - I think you should put your personal opinion right in the introduction paragraph like a signal for examiners so...
Writing Feedbackbee_linhtinh - May 6, 2020 / lehoang1294 - May 7, 2020
|Some high schools forced their students to do volunteer work in order to graduate. Give your opinion
3 - I am uncertain as to what the actual, complete prompt for this essay is. There are actually several topics...
Writing FeedbackChauAnh2312 - May 7, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of the country
2 - The first thing I noticed about this essay is that it does not follow the standard IELTS prompt for...
Writing Feedbacklanlan - May 7, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|Peace comes from within, do not seek it without.
3 - This is a confusing story. Though it tries to be insightful in approach, the total lack of character background...
Writing FeedbackBilltwill - May 6, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|Topic: Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes
3 - You should always make sure to review the discussion question / instruction after you have drafted your response. That...
Writing Feedbackhuongdottt - May 6, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 + 2: The amount of electricity produced from different energy sources
2 - @lehoang1294 I believe there should be only one essay per post. Also for Task 1 you should upload the...
Writing Feedbacklehoang1294 - May 6, 2020 / RomanKoch - May 6, 2020
|It is hard to imagine how people live without friends
Writing Feedbackvtat1902 - May 6, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
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