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|Writing task 2 - Essay about public healthy and the growing presence of sports facilities
2 - The main reason that this essay will receive an overall failing score has to do with the lack of...
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|IELTS writing task 2 about a work-life balance: related problems and the best solution
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|IELTS writing task 2 - topic: who should be accountable for the environmental protection?
3 - hi, I'm not a professor, but I'm hoping this will help you. Your essay includes too many details and...
Writing Feedbackmymyhannah - Aug 6, 2022 / pngnnn21 - Aug 6, 2022
|The proportion of car trips made by male and female drivers for 8 purposes in the year of 2005
2 - The trending statement is over extended. A trend is a singular measurement of one activity or action. As such,...
Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 6, 2022 / Holt - Aug 6, 2022
|Evaluate my ielts writing task 2 essay about health and diet topic
3 - The first one is the mistakes with vocabularies. : sedentary lifestyle, and it usually goes with lead a sedentary...
Writing Feedbackhuyenanhmcqn - Aug 6, 2022 / Iloveielts - Aug 6, 2022
|The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 200
Writing Feedbacktranvanson2001 - Aug 5, 2022 / tranvanson2001 - Aug 6, 2022
|In today's world, urban life has been associated with many persistent issues
3 - The first thing is the misbalance between 2 bodies: extending the roads and improving the quality of public transports...
Writing Feedbackxuanvietmc123 - Aug 3, 2022 / Iloveielts - Aug 5, 2022
|IELTS TASK 1 THE MOST POPULAR ACTIVITIES IN TWO COUNTRIES
Writing FeedbackLa Da - Aug 5, 2022 / La Da - Aug 5, 2022
|Problems living in big cities and whether the government should encourage more people to relocate
2 - The topic restatement is highly confusing. If it is a suggestion, then why did is suddenly turn into a...
Writing Feedbackalice05 - Jul 24, 2022 / Holt - Aug 5, 2022
|IELTS Task 2 - Essay about whether they will choose traditional materials or read online freely.
2 - The writer obviously misunderstood the discussion requirement for the essay. He has not responded in the manner that will...
Writing Feedbackviethoangpham - Aug 1, 2022 / Holt - Aug 5, 2022
|Task 1: different types of waste disposed of in one country
2 - The trending paragraph should be simpler in presentation. It should not a total report paragraph unto itself as is...
Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Jul 30, 2022 / Holt - Aug 5, 2022
|A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited and have same rights as humans
2 - Wow! A dictionary exploded all over this statement. It is like the student decided to look up word descriptors...
Writing Feedbacktrong - Aug 4, 2022 / Holt - Aug 5, 2022
|The outcomes of a survey on coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
2 - The summary overview does not identify the type of image nor the number of images. The listing of cities...
Writing FeedbackHomayoun khan - Aug 4, 2022 / Holt - Aug 5, 2022
|Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of being famous individual
2 - The opening sentence would have better served the presentation had it been used as the introduction to the personal...
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|Task 1 : production of vegetables in 5 different countries.
2 - The trending statement is overextended. There needs to be only one trend presented since the amount of potatoes produced...
Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 1, 2022 / Holt - Aug 4, 2022
|Task 2: Several laborers are struggling to achieve the work-life balance
2 - The essay is heavily reliant on word and phrase fillers to meet the word count. These are what made...
Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 2, 2022 / Holt - Aug 4, 2022
|Sources in the overall energy - IELTs writing task 1: Chart summary
2 - While the word count is impressive, the lack of proper sentence structuring and sentence type representation will hold back...
Writing Feedbackkhanghoang - Aug 4, 2022 / Holt - Aug 4, 2022
|Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, causing many health problems
2 - Try to limit your writing to 300 words. That will allow ample time for proper editing and finalization of...
Writing Feedbacktanuzky - Aug 3, 2022 / Holt - Aug 4, 2022
|It is often said "when in Rome, do as the Romans do." Do you think people should adapt and accept...
3 - "hands-waving in Greek..." you mean hand-waving since you use only one hand while waving. Also better to use either...
Writing Feedbackngnnthu - Aug 2, 2022 / Axis0019 - Aug 3, 2022
|Is the only reason for learn languages is to travel and work overseas or not. Discuss both views.
2 - The writer shows incorrect punctuation usage in the presentation. Any student of written English knows that the basic punctuation...
Writing FeedbackEsther Lee - Aug 3, 2022 / Holt - Aug 3, 2022
|The usage of electrical devices and the number of hours used for housework per household; IELTS 1
2 - Please post only one version of the essay next time. Multiple postings in the same thread will result in...
Writing Feedbackhaiyen0903 - Aug 3, 2022 / Holt - Aug 3, 2022
|TOPIC: The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors (in thousands) to three different area
2 - The essay will get a failing score due to the poor writing abilities of the writer. He has obvious...
Writing FeedbackWangne - Aug 3, 2022 / Holt - Aug 3, 2022
|IELTS1: Bar Chart: international students graduating from universities in various Canadian provinces
2 - The summary overview fails to properly recognize the type of graph provided because it used a cut and paste...
Writing Feedbackpthtnh - Aug 2, 2022 / Holt - Aug 3, 2022
|In some cultures, the old is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Both views
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|Ielts writing task 2 topic hobbies; Industrial revolution 4.0
3 - On the one hand, people who greet new things outside are more creative, not only seize the opportunities for...
Writing Feedbackchauminh - Jul 30, 2022 / Iloveielts - Aug 2, 2022
|Some people believe that keeping pets is beneficial while others believe that it is a bad idea
5 - In my opinion, having pets is an overall positive practice due to the great psychological advantages enjoyed by owners....
Writing Feedbackjasmine4 - Jul 29, 2022 / Iloveielts - Aug 2, 2022
|The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education.
5 - @Harry06 You need to use more conjunctions. Also, I can see that you didn't outline ideas and supporting ideas...
Writing FeedbackHarry06 - Jul 27, 2022 / Jared26 - Aug 2, 2022
|Some people argue that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree.
2 - Do not refer to recent technological advancements in the discussion since there was no such reference in the original...
Writing FeedbackCarolina Harris - Aug 2, 2022 / Holt - Aug 2, 2022
|The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment IELTS2
2 - The opening sentence of the restatement fails to accurately give the writer's version of the original topic. It does...
Writing FeedbackQuang Bao - Aug 1, 2022 / Holt - Aug 2, 2022
|The flow chart illustrates the procedure of recycling plastic containers
2 - Always keep in mind that there is a 20 minute time limit for perfecting the information presentation in this...
Writing Feedbackngocdiep10806 - Aug 1, 2022 / Holt - Aug 2, 2022
|Parents expenses on their children's sports and the number of children who participated in 3 sports
5 - First is the wrong of grammar: ... parents spend on children's sports steadily increasing over each years. ==>...
Writing Feedbackdongnn - Jul 29, 2022 / Iloveielts - Aug 1, 2022
|Essay about changing jobs or not
4 - Firstly, it is the misbalance of your essay. The opening is quite short. Try to extend your opening: For...
Writing Feedbackkhanhhuyennguyen - Jul 29, 2022 / Iloveielts - Aug 1, 2022
|IELTS 2: buildings which were recently constructed should follow the form that used in old ones
4 - I think your example sentence needs connecting. "Take Hoi An... as an example, local people... style" should be the...
Writing Feedbackthuyetdongoc - Jul 27, 2022 / Quang Bao - Aug 1, 2022
|Media should place emphasis on good news or bad news? IELTS writing task 1
2 - The essay will qualify for an automatic failing score. That is an accurate assessment based upon how the writer...
Writing FeedbackThaokett2005 - Aug 1, 2022 / Holt - Aug 1, 2022
|Comparing the proportion of leisure activities that older people had done in their spare time
2 - The writer has not completed an analysis that will suit the 20 minute writing time allowance. By writing almost...
Writing Feedbackhaidangcr113 - Aug 1, 2022 / Holt - Aug 1, 2022
|Companies are increasingly inclined to adopt offices with open space in lieu of separate rooms
4 - I think what he means is that when you write "do advantages outweigh the disadvantages" essay, you should prove...
Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Jul 24, 2022 / viethoangpham - Aug 1, 2022
|task 1: Pie chart : The question in the picture
Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Jul 27, 2022 / Iloveielts - Jul 31, 2022
|task 1 : The topic was given in the picture (car ownership in the UK)
3 - Honestly, after looking through the essay, I have some certain feedback about this essay. - Firstly, you need to...
Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Jul 24, 2022 / huyjunnie - Jul 31, 2022
|A dispute whether the computer was the most critical breakthrough in modern civilization
2 - The reference to the timeline from the original needs to be more specific and related. "Modern Civilization" could refer...
Writing FeedbackCharles Le - Jul 31, 2022 / Holt - Jul 31, 2022
|Olympic Games- Some people think it has positive effects while others argue it is a waste of money
2 - I have constantly cautioned the students about opening the prompt restatement with an unrelated piece of information. In this...
Writing Feedbackcherryblossom - Jul 30, 2022 / Holt - Jul 31, 2022
|Today's people are increasingly seeking the historical values of their houses
4 - Adding a background sentence for the statement will help your essay more logical, (but bare in mind it's just...
Writing FeedbackNguyenviet - Jul 30, 2022 / KieuOanh151202 - Jul 31, 2022
|The best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs
Writing Feedbackcherryblossom - Jul 28, 2022 / Iloveielts - Jul 30, 2022
|Descriptive Paragraph on Floods
2 - When writing a descriptive paragraph, the author must remember to consider the audience that he is writing for. The...
Writing Feedbackriz110 - Jul 27, 2022 / Holt - Jul 28, 2022
|Ielts Task 1 - the table shows the output of two factories in their toy production from 2003 to 2007
3 - In writing task 1, there is no requirement to make a prediction like "The cause of the decrease of...
Writing Feedbackthanhthanh15202 - Jul 26, 2022 / cherryblossom - Jul 27, 2022
|Task 2: Some people think that playing video games is bad and it just wasting your time
3 - The language you are using is not academic one and instead, often seen in daily conversations. Phrases, phrasal verbs...
Writing Feedbacktaczwrld - Jul 27, 2022 / cherryblossom - Jul 27, 2022
|The growth of the Internet makes it easier to purchase goods online. Discuss pros and cons.
Writing Feedbacktrongld1124 - Jul 26, 2022 / trongld1124 - Jul 27, 2022
|Price increase of fattening foods will solve overweight problem
2 - Do not overstate /exaggerate the discussion. Where in the original prompt does it make reference to a worldwide obesity...
Writing Feedbackcherryblossom - Jul 26, 2022 / Holt - Jul 26, 2022
|Opinion about learn news through newspapers or other media
3 - You followed the format of a "discuss both views and give your own opinion" instead of a "to what...
Writing Feedbackhominichan - Jul 24, 2022 / cherryblossom - Jul 26, 2022
|Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings
2 - There is no platform indicated in the original prompt for the subject provided. The writer should not have indicated...
Writing FeedbackDaniel Do - Jul 26, 2022 / Holt - Jul 26, 2022
|A family outing - Describe a memorable memory in my life
Writing Feedbackwinter1234 - Jul 25, 2022 / cherryblossom - Jul 26, 2022
|The main aim of advertising campaign is to increase sales of a certain product
2 - Stop over discussing the essays. The standard format requires only 4 paragraphs: Par 1: Restatement + Opinion +...
Writing Feedbackcherryblossom - Jul 25, 2022 / Holt - Jul 26, 2022
|Countries should try to produce all the food and import as little food as possible
2 - Good work on the prompt restatement and writer's opinion paragraph. It is well developed and follows the expected format...
Writing Feedbackcherryblossom - Jul 25, 2022 / Holt - Jul 26, 2022
|Many children today have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for it.
2 - There are 2 errors in the prompt restatement presentation: 1. The thesis statement should come at the end of...
Writing Feedbacknhu2102 - Jul 25, 2022 / Holt - Jul 26, 2022
|Essay about the idea of study university for free - feedaback
3 - The writer's position is not very clear, you should affirm again your extent of disagreement or agreement in your...
Writing Feedbacktoantruong - Jul 25, 2022 / cherryblossom - Jul 25, 2022
|Problem and solution Ielts essay: Stress-related illnesses caused by overworking:
3 - I think you have an understanding of how to make your paragraphs connected. However, there must have been a...
Writing Feedbacktuyettrinh123 - Jul 25, 2022 / cherryblossom - Jul 25, 2022
|Describe what you will be doing in the next 5 year and in the next 10 year
Writing Feedbackngocanhnguyen - Jul 25, 2022 / Holt - Jul 25, 2022
|Business ventures - University of Michigan Application Essay #1
2 - The writer should bring the last paragraph up and use it as an introduction that will seamlessly transition into...
Writing Feedbacklaineyblack - Jul 24, 2022 / Holt - Jul 25, 2022
|There is no reason why people should try to prevent extinction of animal species. Do you agree?
2 - Okay, the writer is obviously trying to gain a higher LR score in this essay by using advanced English...
Writing FeedbackThuy Tran 07 - Jul 24, 2022 / Holt - Jul 25, 2022
|Why it is not easy to interpret the concept of happiness and what can contribute to a contentment?
2 - The writer should not have represented the reasons for the discussion at the start of the paragraph. The first...
Writing Feedbacknhatquynhhazel - Jul 24, 2022 / Holt - Jul 25, 2022
|Reading books on the internet for free instead of printed books or newspaper
2 - The writer has a problematic representation of the topic because of a confusing idea presentation in the topic sentence....
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