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| I chose to write about my orchestra experience playing the violin - CommonApp activities essay
Undergraduate2010nbailey - Jul 21, 20092010nbailey - Jul 29, 2009 |
| 'long-established tradition of academic excellence' - Yale's Secondary: School of Medicine
Undergraduatevietfun2k - Jul 27, 2009Liebe - Jul 29, 2009 |
| UF application essay. 461 words. Critiques? Comments? Good/Bad?
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| How my gay father, family and community have shaped who i am today - uc prompt
Writing Feedbackx country 001 - Jul 22, 2009Janie Tine - Jul 29, 2009 |
| True Friendship Essay (living without friends)
Writing FeedbackAlexbig - Jun 29, 2009Janie Tine - Jul 29, 2009 |
| [TOEFL] Global events
Writing Feedbackjohn6503 - Jul 28, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 29, 2009 |
| "BALLS UP," his voice echoes through my ear canals ; Essay on tennis
Undergraduatevip747 - Jul 27, 2009vip747 - Jul 29, 2009 |
| Krannert and the Purdue - SOP for Phd in Finance
Graduatecinderellaaa - Jul 28, 2009cinderellaaa - Jul 29, 2009 |
| [TOEFL] Being creative rather than planning.
Writing Feedbackjohn6503 - Jul 27, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 29, 2009 |
| "Pursuit of knowledge" - My SOP for Software Engineering
GraduateMahabub - Jul 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 29, 2009 |
| GRE essay: Sadness and happiness
Writing Feedbacksoarer - Jul 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 29, 2009 |
| Illegal Aliens and Their Quest to Stay in the United States
Writing Feedbackswatson - Jul 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 29, 2009 |
| motivation letter (engineer in mechanical engineering)
Lettersmohamed22 - Jul 28, 2009kenziii - Jul 28, 2009 |
| Tiny Amherst Essay: Anything to Tweak?
Undergraduatekenziii - Jul 26, 2009kenziii - Jul 28, 2009 |
| "My Own Dr. 90210" - common app essay
Undergraduatetal105 - Jul 27, 2009tal105 - Jul 28, 2009 |
| O'connor, "Good Country People" - fixing my Thesis statement
Book Reportscrimson - Jul 27, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 28, 2009 |
| "the bureaucratic mechanism" poem Review
Poetryfractalnode - Jul 27, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 28, 2009 |
| Diversity, my different background - UM diversity esssay
Undergraduateimmefrank - Jul 27, 2009immefrank - Jul 28, 2009 |
| Is the content too cynical for the common application?
Undergraduatetiantian12 - Jul 28, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 28, 2009 |
| "valuable traits", "photographer" - Need help on revising two application essays
UndergraduateOrchid19 - Jul 23, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 28, 2009 |
| "Panic. Chaos. Insanity." - Stanford Roommate Essay
Undergraduateaan027 - Jul 14, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 28, 2009 |
| Reasons why people listen to music
Writing Feedbackfearistheenemy - Jul 23, 2009john6503 - Jul 28, 2009 |
| "Significant Experience" essay - need advice on the content of this essay
Undergraduatenike - Jul 18, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 28, 2009 |
| "Fleeting memories" - Are there any significant experiences you have had....
Undergraduatekura - Jul 18, 2009tal105 - Jul 27, 2009 |
| "Want to be a doctor" - Penn State, personal statement
UndergraduateMichele1248 - Jul 17, 2009tal105 - Jul 27, 2009 |
| Introductory speech about myself, my family, my job
16 - This thread should come with a warning! I just about spewed my Coke all over my computer. It will... Speechessandya - Jul 6, 2009Notoman - Jul 27, 2009 |
| Basic advises...for Clep Essay
EssayskristenAnn - Jul 20, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 27, 2009 |
| "my peers' views" - admission essay-common app
Undergraduatextlraptor - Jul 24, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 27, 2009 |
| Work alone or in groups
Writing Feedbackfearistheenemy - Jul 21, 2009john6503 - Jul 27, 2009 |
| 'Student-run clubs' - Johns Hopkins Short Answer
16 - Okay, then yes, your essay is fine. I just wanted to see the exact prompt, because you could have... Undergraduate10tlala - Jul 25, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 27, 2009 |