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Common App Essay—Grandfather's watch

7 - @vamin007 It is definitely engaging. That said, I agree with the other commenters: your essay should focus primarily on...

Undergraduatevamin007 - Oct 17, 2024woodg - Nov 3, 2024
My Determination and Inspiration for Mathematics in High School (Common App Prompt 1)

3 - What I like about this essay is its simplicity. You are able to convey your love for mathematics in...

Undergraduateessayhelp77 - Nov 3, 2024gigi_aa - Nov 3, 2024
My first personal statement: Multidisciplinary PhD Program in Biomedical Sciences at Rutgers School

5 - Thank you very much for the consideration, I will work on it....

Graduatelucaszanusso - Nov 2, 2024lucaszanusso - Nov 3, 2024
Relationship-building in a professional capacity - Chevening

6 - 1. You need to show your Leadership and Influence skill on the professional level. 2. Use STAR Framework to...

Scholarshipabdulrahmanaahma - Oct 30, 2024essaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024
Biology, mathematics, and technology - academic objectives and your long-range goals

5 - You need to show the specific things university of Toronto had that would help you align with your Long-range...

Scholarshipnourmohamed_1 - Oct 20, 2024essaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024
Chemical Engineering - If you are not awarded the Scholarship, what are your plans?

2 - Do not over reach with your response. Offer an explanation only for the plans as required should you not...

ScholarshipIlovecats365 - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
The actions of humanity in polluting the earth - a reference letter for yourself describing yourself

3 - @Holt Thank you so much, I gladly appreciate it...

ScholarshipAnamoRice - Nov 2, 2024AnamoRice - Nov 3, 2024
"Unity in Diversity" - How to become a good candidates for GLOBAL UGRAD ESSAY

2 - While your discussion about your growth and development as a community leader is admirable, you have missed out on...

UndergraduateDhani_ja23 - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
The podium in Panama - University of Toronto Computer Science Supplemental Question

2 - This is a good response but it is not an accurate response. The prompt is focused on having you...

Undergraduatewoodg - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
The importance of Preschool Education

2 - One way of improving this paper would be to introduce the importance of pre-school education in a historical context....

Writing FeedbackTICL - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
My Passion for Helping Children in Need (350 words) - Boston University Supplemental Essay

2 - Use a more relevant hook in your opening scenario. You are trying to set up the essay to focus...

Undergraduategigi_aa - Nov 2, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
Mechanical Engineering to be my professional career

6 - @Pallaz The essay is generic. You need to focus on a direct career path that outlines what you want...

UndergraduatePallaz - Oct 29, 2024woodg - Nov 3, 2024
ERASMUS MUDUS SCHOLARSHIPS ON EUROPEAN PUBLIC HEALTH MASTER. Europubhealth+

2 - The requirement for the statement of purpose is that you have a desire to attend 2 universities instead of...

ScholarshipSolex4chew - Nov 2, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
The Ideological and Emotional Interconnectedness of Humanity: Common App Main Personal Statement

4 - @gigi_aa Sorry if im too late! After reading this through, I really believe that this an Ivy-league tier essay....

Undergraduategigi_aa - Oct 30, 2024franksredhoteats - Nov 2, 2024
Why data science - personal statement (650 words limit)

3 - This essay is great, but considering that this is your Common App essay, I'd suggest focusing on a topic...

Undergraduateundvmn - Oct 30, 2024gigi_aa - Nov 2, 2024
Information Engineering - Letter of Motivation for Bachelor

3 - Focus more on skills and experience directly tied to embedded systems rather than general IT knowledge....

Lettersjashimuddin - Oct 25, 2024jasminee - Nov 2, 2024
A young Bangladeshi Muslim woman - Chevening leaders or influencers

3 - The closing paragraph could be more impactful by briefly summarizing your vision for Bangladesh, particularly how you plan to...

ScholarshipNazifan - Oct 30, 2024jasminee - Nov 2, 2024
AI markets - Chevening Study in the UK Essay

6 - You mention wanting to meet specific professors, but consider adding a sentence on how you plan to engage with...

UndergraduateChiedu_10 - Oct 23, 2024jasminee - Nov 2, 2024
Reserach on The Role The United States Has In The Palestinian Genocide

3 - @Holt Thank you so much will take you advise move forward with my next draft have a wonderful day...

Research Papersd1360 - Nov 2, 2024d1360 - Nov 2, 2024
Empowering Innovation Through Connection: My Path to Chevening

2 - You have not shown any actual use for these so-called networks that you think you have created. You are...

Scholarshipjasminee - Nov 2, 2024Holt - Nov 2, 2024
Navigating Leadership Challenges: A Journey of Growth in Biology Education and Research (Chevening)

2 - Your experience as a practicum coordinator does not reflect a potential for your growth as a future leader and...

Scholarshipjasminee - Nov 2, 2024Holt - Nov 2, 2024
Motivation letter for CERN 2025 Technical Student Internship programme for civil engineering.

4 - thanks @jasminee i have make suitable improvement kindly check it on my new threads Thank you again : )...

Lettersmilan123 - Nov 2, 2024milan123 - Nov 2, 2024
Nuclear power - Erasmus Mundus Sarena motivation letter

6 - @milan123 Noted. Thanks...

LettersKinami1 - Oct 29, 2024Kinami1 - Nov 2, 2024
Collaboration, service, and change - Chevening Leadership

5 - Yeah your eassy sounds good. The most important thing that you have maintained a natural tone of writing that...

ScholarshipElam - Nov 1, 2024milan123 - Nov 2, 2024
Research paper on Fish Hatcheries

2 - It is best to assume that the reader is not familiar with the topic you are discussing at...

Research Paperstsherbourne - Nov 2, 2024Holt - Nov 2, 2024
The Right to Choose - Abortion Research Paper

3 - the last two paragraphs should be combined they both seem like they are building to a conclusion, but it...

Research Papersjsbenne822 - Nov 1, 2024tsherbourne - Nov 2, 2024
Ietls writing about the consumption and production of potato

2 - Since you are giving a summary of the information provided, you always need to be specific about regional...

Writing FeedbackCrimsonHydra - Nov 1, 2024Holt - Nov 2, 2024
Nigeria and Doctors - CAREER GOALS; CHEVENING

2 - The reviewer will not be interested in reading the research paper that you have included in this essay. In...

Scholarshipfaisalidina - Nov 1, 2024Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening - Studying in the UK

3 - In all your conclusion, always try and reference Chevening and how the scholarship will aid you....

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024Chiedu_10 - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening-Career plan (Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan)

2 - You have shown a tendency to overshare in all of your essays. You are not properly focused, nor actually...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024Holt - Nov 1, 2024
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