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IELTS QUESTION: People should only buy locally grown food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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agree or disagree with people have forgotten the meaning of tradition festivals

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I wish I could live in Alice's Wonderland

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Undergraduateana03 - May 2, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
TASK 2: it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems

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Motivation Letter For Kazakhstan Government Scholarship

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Lettersraffyqurtuba - Apr 30, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
ielts writing essay about Should governments give more financial support to local film industries

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AAS Statement Purpose - I chose Master of Public Policy and Management

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Scholarshipaisen7725 - Apr 29, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
our contribution to air pollution

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Research PapersAmiles4508 - Apr 27, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
Family interventions are best when finding ways to help a child impacted by parental substance abuse

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Research Paperssammimhmrio - Apr 27, 2024Holt - May 3, 2024
Some people think that shopping has become easier because of modern technology

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employee

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Writing FeedbackHuongdang - Apr 26, 2024Holt - May 3, 2024
Young people commit crimes should be treated same as adults by authorities. Agree or disagree

2 - The prompt restatement is highly confusing. It does not properly restate the original topic. It indicates a totally different...

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Newspapers are having enormous influence on people ideas and opinions. Why is this the case?

2 - This does not respond directly to the writing prompt guide so your writer's opinion is incomplete. Always provide...

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative?

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Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise.

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GKS U 24/25 - Applying to PNU Business Administration via University Track

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Gks 2024/25 Politics and International Studies

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UndergraduateDamilola christ - Apr 24, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
Waterloo Computer Engineering: Engineering Interests and goals

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Undergraduateakmaster101 - Apr 23, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
Being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers

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Challenges and barriers that you expect you may face in applyins skills and knowledge.

2 - Do not focus solely on gender discrimination in your response. You have to expand on the answer by considering...

ScholarshipLayson Manga - Apr 22, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
An animal person - Why I apply for AAS essay

2 - You are applying for a non-undergraduate related course under AAS. Try to explain how a degree in agriculture will...

ScholarshipLayson Manga - Apr 22, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
My proposed course and institution? - Bachelors of Law/BIT (AAS essay)

2 - Limit your response to 200 words maximum. The system will cut off your response at the 200 word count,...

ScholarshipNsimbi - Apr 22, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
What skills should the teenagers have to face stress and pressure?

2 - The format of the essay is not properly presented even though it meets the word count requirement. I am...

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IT usage - reasons why I am proposing to these institutions (AAS)

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Being dependend in the modern world

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Motivation Letter for Master's program in "Advanced Systems in Automation and Information Technology

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Medical and wellness services - your purpose course and Institution (AAS, Master of Public Health)

2 - There is a specific prompt that asks you to discuss how the courses you have chosen will help you...

ScholarshipYuayu7 - Apr 21, 2024Holt - Apr 21, 2024
A persuasive essay topic on why its best to prioritize a healthy lifestyle

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Research Papersaspenswick - Apr 21, 2024Holt - Apr 21, 2024
International arbitration and environmental law - Motivation letter for master admission

2 - What you have written is a personal statement. There is very little motivation focus in the letter so this...

LettersLeila321 - Apr 20, 2024Holt - Apr 21, 2024
A traditional South-Asian household - Application for Waterloo Fermat Workshop

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