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Government's interference with human rights

2 - Kindly remember to clearly format your essay presentation based upon the regular expectation of the examiner. Each task 2...

Writing Feedbackdieulinh731008 - Sep 16, 2024Holt - Sep 17, 2024
Second Language a Commitment - Essay Assignment

3 - Acquiring a second language involves more than just picking up a new ability; it's a commitment that calls for...

UndergraduateSampson L - Sep 13, 2024KelvinG - Sep 16, 2024
Personal statement for non degree study at Hunter College School of Education

3 - I have no doubt that the non-degree programs at Hunter College will enable me to accomplish my career goals...

Graduatesheriecherie - Sep 15, 2024KelvinG - Sep 16, 2024
Requesting Advice on the Flow and Structure of My Essay

2 - It is always a struggle to write essays. Each topic and writing style has a different focus which makes...

EssaysKelvinG - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
God's plan for me - Gks undergraduate personal statement for medicine

2 - Remove the reference to medical television shows as inspiration for your desire to become a doctor. Reviewers prefer that...

ScholarshipOctavia_20 - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Today children spend much time playing computer games and less time on sports.

2 - The last 2 sentences in the first paragraph do not meet the task accuracy requirements of the essay. Since...

Writing FeedbackVu Ha Chi - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
Quality Communication Can Improve Patient-Centered Health Outcomes Among Older Adults

2 - It is not customary for a research paper to begin by immediately presenting researched information in the introductory paragraph....

Research Paperscboykin - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax

2 - This does not add clarity to your writer's opinion. Since you already gave the correct measured response in...

Writing FeedbackSUNSHINE2k7 - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, Portugal

2 - Avoid the use of run-on sentences in all the paragraphs you will be writing. Your summary overview should be...

Writing Feedbackttrangthao - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Writing Task 1: The percentage of Australian men and women did regular physical activity

2 - You have over written this task. The task 1 essay should not be more than 150-200 words. That is...

Writing Feedbacktanminh123 - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
college app essay about my mom's battle with cancer

2 - What you went through does not qualify as an obstacle, challenge, setback, or failure. This is a personal tragedy...

Undergraduatesashay - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
A gap year that created Lexibridge

2 - Unfortunately, you cannot end this essay because you have not even completed a draft version. Your ideas are good,...

UndergraduateBbaaye - Sep 12, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
The benefits of working and learning from home

2 - While your essay falls within the word requirement for a 40 minute task, your response is totally incorrect for...

Writing Feedbackduchuy - Sep 12, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
COMPUTERS ARE OFTEN ARGUED TO BE THE MOST IMPORTANT INVENTION OF THE LAST HUNDRED YEARS

2 - The essay fails to respond to the given discussion prompt. The writer's opinion is incorrectly formatted. The response should...

Writing Feedbackmaiquynh - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Letter of Motivation for M.Sc Data Science Germany.

2 - This does not come across as a motivational letter. It will be seen mostly as an essay form of...

Lettersemnikkhil - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Ielts writing task 1: the water usage

2 - Formatting is the main problem that I see with this essay. A task 1 essay should be composed of...

Writing Feedbackpthngannnn - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think this is happening?

2 - The essay does not meet the minimum 250 word count requirement. At 207 words, the deductions that will be...

Writing Feedbacktthaorrr - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Feminism and Empowerment - scholarship requirement, your own leadership examples

2 - I am guessing that you are writing this leadership essay as a part of your Chevening scholarship application. Sad...

ScholarshipRanme231 - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
In today's competitive world, many families need both parents to go out to work

2 - You have written an essay with over 500 words. This cannot be completed during an actual task 2 test....

Writing Feedbackautisumi - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 12, 2024
Bachelor in Psychology - MOTIVATION LETTER ERASMUS MUNDUS (applying again)

2 - The essay covers only the reasons you are interested in the program and the foundation of that interest (unnecessary...

Lettersmaydreams - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 12, 2024
The map below show a conference centre as it now, and plans for its development.

2 - The essay should meet the 150 minimum word count to avoid any word shortage penalties that could lead to...

Writing FeedbackUyenle123 - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
Chat with friends - lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success

2 - The story is good, nut not appropriate for the prompt. It is not supposed to tell the story of...

Undergraduateazlan69 - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1] the number of enquiries in one city over a six months

5 - I suggest a new overall to make your essay more interesting, you could write: Overall, the number of inquiries...

Writing FeedbackDo Duy Hai - Aug 21, 2024pthngannnn - Sep 11, 2024
In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old

2 - Let me call your attention to your page formatting first. You need to make sure that your presentation is...

Writing Feedbackhgiang_khh - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
Psychology journey - statement of purpose for UGRAD

2 - The approach to the statement of purpose is too simple. There needs to be more depth to the personal,...

UndergraduateArmeen - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
A whirlwind of hobbies - Personal statement

3 - @Holt Hi, Thank you for responding so quickly. I am choosing to complete the "essay of choice" option...

Undergraduatewhoopdeedoo - Sep 9, 2024whoopdeedoo - Sep 10, 2024
Dear Future Roommate and Human Alarm Clock - Stanford Roommate Essay

2 - Well, this is definitely a fun way of introducing yourself and your culture to your potential roommate. However, there...

Undergraduateaadij - Sep 8, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
(-1) + (+1) isn't equal 0. Personal statement

2 - I am not sure what this personal statement is all about. What prompt are you responding to? I have...

UndergraduateYoyo_mahgop - Sep 7, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2 - Prison sentences

2 - During a 40 minute writing task, the maximum number of words that should be written is 300 words. It...

Writing Feedbackyamitohikari2217 - Sep 7, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
Men and women should not share the same responsibilities

4 - @nghiadeptrai123 Well, from my own experience, I think that you should have to fix some grammatical errors: - "taking...

Writing Feedbacknghiadeptrai123 - Aug 22, 2024yamitohikari2217 - Sep 7, 2024
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