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Personal statement for master in information technology with artificial intelligence specialization

2 - Since this is a personal statement, it should not touch on your academic and professional exposure. The personal statement...

Graduateuserc - Feb 15, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Short statement of purpose for RSM MSc about entrepreneurship and Climate Change.

2 - My opinion is that you do not really respond to the question being asked. Your introduction is confusing and...

Graduateantoinebernzrd - Feb 14, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
The graph below gives information on the performance of a train company in October and November

2 - When you mention the type of image, it would be best for your score if you immediately include information...

Writing Feedbackhaminhuynh - Feb 14, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS TASK 1] Numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after it was refurbished

2 - The most ideal word count for a task 1 essay would be 175 words. That would assure you of...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Feb 13, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Essay for MS application (Topic: Comparison between two types of Electric Vehicles and their future)

2 - Unfortunately, I am not impressed by the writing level you have presented in this essay. Rather than sounding like...

ScholarshipHassan007 - Feb 13, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Personal statement in Plant Pathology Ph.D. for KGSP scholarship 2024

2 - You are already applying for a PhD scholarship. One of the highest levels of academic study. So application information...

Scholarshipaya ibrahim - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Sonography program essay for application

2 - The story about your grandma and how she inspired you to become a sonographer is the worst story you...

UndergraduateMallorykight - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
For Review- Letter of motivation for Global Scholarship under Lund University, Sweden

2 - Paragraph 5 should be further developed. That paragraph offers you the opportunity to further enhance your qualifications as a...

Lettersnafiz33 - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
YSEALI essay application: The Future of Mental Health In Southeast Asia (2024 theme)

2 - You need to set up an actual scenario in the response to the prompt. The situation has to be...

Undergraduatehmaily - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of households

4 - For the overview: I recommend you to look at the tendency of all keys, you should also be able...

Writing Feedbacksandy21709 - Jan 31, 2024caohuyen93 - Feb 18, 2024
Benefit of playing video games. Give reasons and examples

3 - When you write an essay, do not use contractions ( don't) , and after "such as", you do not...

Writing Feedbackannchf - Feb 5, 2024caohuyen93 - Feb 18, 2024
Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

3 - The question simple asks you to name and explain some pros and cons of the situation. So you should...

Writing FeedbackErik79 - Feb 6, 2024caohuyen93 - Feb 15, 2024
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

5 - Not only indicating the start and the end year, you should also mention the measurement in the introduction, which...

Writing Feedbackmylinh3001 - Jan 20, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.

4 - Since this is a single opinion essay, you should concentrate on your opinion. You can consider other sides' arguments,...

Writing FeedbackLouis Tran - Jan 24, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
[TASK2] As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. AGREE OR DISAGREE?

3 - Since this is a single opinion essay, you should concentrate in your opinion. You can consider other sides' arguments,...

Writing Feedbackchloepham - Jan 30, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
[WRITING IELTS TASK 2] Topic Social

3 - You should paraphrase the topic to improve your LR score. Take the introduction for example: People's reveling in entertainment...

Writing Feedbackmeadow - Feb 7, 2024snackara - Feb 13, 2024
GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR MS IN ARTIFICIAL

2 - The essay lacks in required substance overall. It does not provide information as required by the list of writing...

Graduatefxkimji - Feb 11, 2024Holt - Feb 11, 2024
The power of teaching others - Networking Essay for Chevening Scholarship

2 - Your networking essay is too busy. It is without a clear and accurate direction that would show how your...

Scholarshipommar - Feb 10, 2024Holt - Feb 11, 2024
Motivation letter on why I should be given the AXEL ADLER SCHOLARSHIP.

2 - Do not waste the time of the admissions officers with petty information such as how to address you. That...

Lettersbenadine30 - Feb 10, 2024Holt - Feb 11, 2024
Personal Statement for GKS-Graduate Scholarship for MBA

3 - Thank you for your guidance. I understand your feedback and will make the necessary changes. Your feedback has provided...

ScholarshipSS21 - Feb 6, 2024SS21 - Feb 10, 2024
Turkey Scholarship-Biotechnology, biology

2 - Remove the reference to your academic background. That should not be included in a motivational letter. The story about...

ScholarshipTungaa123456789 - Feb 9, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Fluency in Korean - Global MBA STUDY PLAN

2 - Your language study plan is incomplete. You have introduced your pre arrival preparations but not your post arrival language...

Graduatekrishna26 - Jan 31, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Women like shopping, some are even shopping addicted. State your points of view

2 - I am not sure why you are using an unrelated historical viewpoint for this discussion. You are expected to...

Writing Feedbackleanbinh - Feb 8, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities

2 - Your Task Accuracy score will not meet the preliminary passing standards. While you did write a pretty acceptable restatement,...

Writing Feedbackruakahan - Feb 8, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Motivation letter for Erasmus mundus program in Applied Ecohydrology

2 - There are so many things wrong with this letter that I do not know where to begin. I guess...

LettersOkpokwu - Feb 6, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
The bar chart below shows the estimated world illiteracy rates for regions and by gender in the past

2 - While you have written more than the required word count to get major scoring points for your presentation, the...

Writing FeedbackMayrie - Feb 6, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GKS IN PROSTHODONTICS (DENTISTRY)

2 - Your essay is very wordy but not really very informative. The reviewer does not have the time to read...

Scholarshipdanidanj04 - Feb 5, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
transfer statement essay on econ/math passion USC - improvements

2 - A college transfer is usually based upon the student's intent to learn above the scale that is currently offered...

Undergraduatepengster - Feb 5, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Writing task 1 (The process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products)

3 - I suppose that if the task doesn't explicit clearly the number of stages, you should not infer them yourself...

Writing FeedbackNgocmai0311 - Jan 30, 2024ruakahan - Feb 7, 2024
Letter Of Intent For Turkey Burslari Scholarship - Human Behavior

2 - Your intent to study Human Behavior in Turkey, through this scholarship is not one that will impress the reviewer....

LettersSibgha - Feb 4, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
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