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As countries progress, there is a trend towards living alone or in smaller family units

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Personal statement for Erasmus mundus IMSISS programme (self-founded)

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Personal Statement | GKS-G Scholarship 2024 | International Relations

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Gothic story - dont get off the train

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UF statement of intent - physical therapist

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Waterloo AIF, computational and financial management

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Today more people are overweight than ever before...

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty.

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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea

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Young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Average content of sodium, saturated fats and sugar

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Ielts writing task 2 - The Antarctic ozone hole

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NTU Scholarship Essay- Everything happens for a reason

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Statement of Purpose Master Data Science EPFL

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'I have a dream' - Why this major and university (scholarship essay)

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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters

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SOP for master application for Mining Engineering

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Letter of Motivation for Master's Degree in Cognitive Neuroscience and Clinical Neuropsychology

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GKS-G 2024| Future Study Plan

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Graduatesankook - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree ?

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TASK 2 IETLS WRITING ON EDUCATION

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Some companies block their employees from using social media networks and websites such as facebook.

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ยท TASK 2: Work from home You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

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Community service (scholarship essay)

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Personal Statement about leadership and goals for scholarship

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Should parents control their child's free time?

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Some people enjoy working alone. Others would rather work in a group. What is your preference?

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What problems do children face in the age of social media?

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The table below gives information about some of the world's most studied languages.

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people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out . What are the causes and solution

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