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[IELTS] EMPLOYEES 4-WEEK HOLIDAY A YEAR

2 - Limit your writing to only 300 words for the task 2 essay. You have a total of 1 hour...

Writing Feedbackphucan9906 - Aug 26, 2024Holt - Aug 27, 2024
It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people.

3 - In the first paragraph, you should write your view 'i strongly agree' or 'i disagree' at first, that can...

Writing Feedbacknateq136 - Aug 24, 2024phucan9906 - Aug 26, 2024
Ielts writing about main fuels in the production in UK from 1981 to 2000

3 - you should add more comparative of each subject to make your response more longer. try to enhance vocabularies field...

Writing Feedbacknhatminhdeptrai - Aug 25, 2024phucan9906 - Aug 26, 2024
Molecular Biology and Public Health - Study Plan for NYCU PhD Application

2 - This is an empty study plan. It does nit tell me what the focus of your dissertation will be...

GraduateSaira Khurshid - Aug 25, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is...

2 - Kindly remember to follow the correct formatting for the written text. Each paragraph must be separated by a space...

Writing FeedbackBachHocIELTS - Aug 22, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
Applying to Columbia University Undergrad Fly-In Program for the school of Engineering,

2 - Your presentation is highly confusing and difficult to understand because you are trying to respond to several questions within...

UndergraduateBandup123 - Aug 25, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
Writing Task 2 - Competition vs Cooperation - Discuss both views and give your opinion

2 - The word "each" indicates one, singular. So the term "others" should be in singular form as well (other)...

Writing Feedbackjoohyerin - Aug 23, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
Academic Decathlon - [QuestBridge] Essay about the challenges I have faced

2 - This is a compelling story to share for your application consideration. While it is insightful, I feel like the...

Undergraduatethreeclaws - Aug 23, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
Students should learn all subjects at school, not the ones they like. Do you agree or disagree?

3 - From my perspective, I found some errors and vagued ways of your expression in the essay. - The phrase...

Writing Feedbackzenailin - Aug 9, 2024nateq136 - Aug 24, 2024
CHILDREN AND TV vs. SPENDING TIME OUTDOORS

2 - The writer's opinion did not meet the task accuracy requirements of the presentation. You only repeated the required information...

Writing FeedbackTran Bao Tran - Aug 21, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Degree in Law in South Korea - Personal statement GKS

2 - You must underscore from the very beginning that you plan to pursue a degree in international law and not...

ScholarshipHenry56 - Aug 21, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
How many exchange students from universities between Europe and Australia - IELTS 1

2 - The trending statement is a bit confusing to read. The lack of reference to what years are being indicated...

Writing Feedbackquanpham - Aug 21, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
To become a good student, what qualities are needed? Propose your specific plan for university

2 - Do not focus the discussion in the university, the course you want to take, or the program you plan...

Scholarshipueyreurysjs - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
[IELTS] Drawbacks of lacking reading and writing skill and how government deal with the problem

2 - This is not an acceptable answer. You were asked what the government can do to help the people...

Writing Feedbackphucan9906 - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Living in big city is bad for health

2 - You have written less than the required minimum of 250 words. 248 written words mean you will have some...

Writing FeedbackNhung bui - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Application Fee Waiver (cold email)

2 - The application letter does not show that you are in dire circumstances so that you cannot afford the application...

Writing Feedbackdscaisy - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Dentistry - personal statement for GKS-U Program

2 - Delete this. You have been instructed to write the essay either in full Hangul or full English. You...

UndergraduateZlppleh - Aug 18, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
The Evolution of Rock Music: From Classic Rock to Modern Influences

2 - You are missing a discussion in relation to the pioneering foundation of rock which is rock and roll. While...

Writing Feedbackshauryarug - Aug 17, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Should the goverment support artists such as painters or musicians?

2 - What opinions are these? There is no such reference in the original statement. You should only be providing...

Writing Feedbackrumia rumi - Aug 16, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Free Take Home Naloxone is not a moral dilemma, but an evidenced based life saving measure.

2 - It is best to avoid rhetorical questions when writing your introduction. Keep the focus on the information you are...

Research Papersgen2143524 - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 20, 2024
[IELTS WRITING] OBJECTIVITY IN NEWS

2 - You should avoid using direct quotes from the original prompt. This affects your LR and TA score. The...

Writing FeedbackQuynhdo - Aug 16, 2024Holt - Aug 16, 2024
The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity

2 - Which countries? This statement is not informative and will confuse the reader. It is best to write a...

Writing Feedbacknghbl - Aug 16, 2024Holt - Aug 16, 2024
The life expectancy and GDP of certain countries

2 - There is an advised maximum word count of 200 words for the task 1 essay. That is to help...

Writing Feedbackbichnhi - Aug 15, 2024Holt - Aug 16, 2024
Enrolling in UEL university with IELTS certificates

3 - @Holt Sorry for that as I uploaded a seemingly unsafe link here! Sorry for that carelessness!...

Writing Feedbackhuyendiusw - Aug 14, 2024huyendiusw - Aug 15, 2024
GKS-U personal statement ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review I'll be sure to send an updated version soon ☺️...

UndergraduateOjezeemi - Aug 12, 2024Ojezeemi - Aug 14, 2024
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations?

3 - @Holt the word "governmet" in this essay means the govermernt of poor nations....

Writing FeedbackLoganLe - Aug 13, 2024LoganLe - Aug 14, 2024
The graph below gives information about U.S. government spending on research between 1980 and 2008.

2 - This is too wordy for a Task 1 essay. It contains 231 words, which indicates that you took at...

Writing Feedbackthu153 - Aug 14, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
How does the United States political climate impact the stock market?

2 - The first 2 paragraphs are very strong in terms of explanation. You are obviously familiar with the political climate...

Research Papersanibabic - Aug 13, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
SoP for Masters in Finance / Banking

2 - Try to develop a more in-depth discussion of your background and experiences that help you believe that the...

Graduatethefrog - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
Finance background and logistic transit - CHEVENING ESSAY ABOUT CARRER GOAL

2 - This is good. Where specifically do you plan to get a job? Why there? How would your training...

ScholarshipMyma - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
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