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SOP for scholarship application in plant health in sustainable cropping systems

2 - Your story shared at the beginning of this essay is way too simplistic in approach. It does not even...

ScholarshipNazysazy - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
Impossible to make a significant contribution without strongly influenced by past achievements

3 - @dixitswarnika Your essay makes a strong argument for the importance of learning from past advancements while encouraging innovation. With...

Writing Feedbackdixitswarnika - Aug 8, 2024Vera24 - Aug 13, 2024
Improving my language skills and culture - language study plan

3 - @omoju precious Your narrative effectively showcases your deep passion for Korean culture and language. To enhance it, consider emphasizing...

Scholarshipomoju precious - Aug 8, 2024Vera24 - Aug 13, 2024
To become a good student, what qualities are needed? Propose a specific plan for university

2 - A screenwriter writes for films. A copywriter does scripts for advertising. You might want to change the title...

Scholarshipuyenmynguyenle06 - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 12, 2024
"Social Media's Dangerous Link to Disordered Eating"

3 - One thing that's obvious is offering possible solutions as stated by Holt. A nother thing is. instead of outrightly...

Research Paperssamavis - Aug 9, 2024Uzor - Aug 12, 2024
Consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world

3 - It's Obvious you need to restructure the essay into paragraphs. I fell you should start the paragraph in a...

Writing Feedbacklinhblk - Aug 11, 2024Uzor - Aug 12, 2024
Colwich Arts Centre - IELTS WRITING TASK 1

2 - I only see the today image for this presentation. Did you forget to upload the before illustration? Anyway, I...

Writing FeedbackNorton - Aug 10, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
The funding - Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

2 - In this case, being number specific would help since each pie chart references a different information presentation. You...

Writing Feedbacknateq136 - Aug 9, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
The Escalating Threats of Climate Change to Coastal Regions

2 - I believe that what is missing in this research paper is an actual focus on climate change and how...

Writing Feedbackjhomero92 - Aug 8, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison

2 - There are 2 images presented in this analytical paper. There is a bar graph, which was generically identified as...

Writing Feedbackleanguyen - Aug 8, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
Part 2 of study plan After Arriving in Korea

4 - Okay. there is a huge, glaring problem with your application. You are planning to study Korean Law, which will...

ScholarshipVera24 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
GKS-U Personal Statement Psychology / university track

5 - Personally I feel stating your scholarship with the Brazil government is irrelevant, not so irrelevant but the way you...

ScholarshipEduarda - Jun 29, 2024omomoh_peace - Aug 10, 2024
GKS-U personal statement (PNU - tourism and convention)

4 - @starssssy Your statement is strong in terms of personal motivation and connection to Korea. However, to make it more...

Scholarshipstarssssy - Aug 3, 2024Vera24 - Aug 8, 2024
Gks-U medical major personal statement

4 - @Beacon of hope Focus on making the essay more concise by emphasizing the key moments that shaped your passion...

ScholarshipBeacon of hope - Aug 7, 2024Vera24 - Aug 8, 2024
numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia

2 - Good formatting for the summary overview. You correctly attached the trending statements with the summary overview. You will get...

Writing Feedbackchidung - Aug 7, 2024Holt - Aug 7, 2024
[IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1] Participants for activities in a social house in Melbourne

2 - Try to keep your task 1 essay to under 200 words. Never cut into the writing time for the...

Writing FeedbackPikes_2006 - Aug 7, 2024Holt - Aug 7, 2024
The final race of an athlete - UBC Personal Profile

2 - You do not have to introduce yourself and the origins of your family in Canada. That is not required...

Undergraduateitsmedavis - Aug 6, 2024Holt - Aug 7, 2024
Do store knowledge on the internet outweigh stored knowledge in books?

2 - It is unfortunate that you have only written 232 words for this topic. The minimum word count is 250...

Writing FeedbackTHANHNGAN241 - Aug 6, 2024Holt - Aug 7, 2024
College Essay on my journey and passion towards Health, Safety and Environment

2 - Do not close the essay with a reference to Cornell and Professor Nellie Brown. This is a personal statement....

UndergraduatePrial - Aug 5, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

2 - There is a lack of coherence and clarity in your presentation based on these 2 problem references....

Writing Feedbackhihihihithu - Aug 5, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
How people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK - IELTS Writing task 1

2 - "Almost" means "not quite or very nearly". It is not the same meaning as "most" greatest in amount,...

Writing Feedbacklee2nhw - Aug 5, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1 IELTS] THE DIAGRAM SHOWS HOW LIVERTON DOCKS CHANGE SINCE 1980

2 - There are only 2 illustrations provided for this report. One from 1980 and the other, is present day....

Writing Feedbackmal880 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What are the problems and solutions?

2 - This is your personal opinion which is not reflected in the original discussion. You cannot make such claims...

Writing Feedbacklamlinhlinh - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
GKS-G KOREAN LANGUAGE MAJOR, PERSONAL STATEMENT

4 - @vivibimil I'd recommend focusing more on your transformative experiences in Korea, detailing how they shaped your academic and personal...

Scholarshipvivibimil - Jul 15, 2024Vera24 - Aug 4, 2024
2025 GKS-U Study Plan on how to improve foreign language

3 - @kumaaa Your essay shows a thorough and proactive approach to learning Korean, emphasizing cultural immersion and practical application. Your...

Scholarshipkumaaa - Jul 23, 2024Vera24 - Aug 4, 2024
Addiction and Substance Abuse

2 - 1. The research paragraphs should not end with in-text citations. These references must have additional discussions included. The insight...

Research PapersJlentz13 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
English and Korean Languages - Study plan for the gks

2 - You have very good pre-arrival plans for both English and Hangul language proficiency presented in this essay. The problem,...

ScholarshipVera24 - Aug 3, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Task 1 - The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia had a baby

2 - Avoid using a run-on sentence for your summary overview. Concise references rely on your ability to present one idea...

Writing FeedbackUnessayforum - Aug 3, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings

2 - This is an incomplete thought. There is a missing verb here that would have completed the sentence idea...

Writing Feedbackkeylie tran - Aug 2, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Essay for a low income student scholarship about learning something new

2 - The discussion of EcoTech is not aligned with the prompt requirements. That total paragraph can be removed without affecting...

Undergraduatelofpty - Aug 1, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
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