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Ielts writing task 2: To what extent has the internet made life more convenient?

2 - This is your personal opinion as the writer of this essay. It is not referred to in the...

Writing FeedbackMintlev - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 25, 2024
Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.

2 - This is an automatic failing essay since it only has 247 words in it. The main word requirement is...

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Writing Task 1: Daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004

2 - Please remember the basic rule when it comes to writing a sentence. A sentence is composed of 1 idea...

Writing FeedbackYashainu - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 24, 2024
ENG102 Research Paper - Dog Breeds and why it's Important That you Choose the Right Breed!

2 - You need to follow the correct MLA formatting in specific instances for the research paper. The fault of your...

Research Paperskhowdyy2088750 - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 24, 2024
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

2 - The summary overview needs one more sentence, that would help the paragraph achieve a 40 word presentation, to qualify...

Writing Feedbackleehyy - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 24, 2024
The Impact of Divorce on Children and How it Affects their Childhood Development

2 - The presentation is mostly based on theories and academic studies. What we actually need more of in this presentation...

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Many think that in today's world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

4 - Your essay does not meet the requirement of 250 words in Ielts Writing task 2 and try to improve...

Writing Feedbackvuthuha19 - Jul 17, 2024Yashainu - Jul 21, 2024
DSM-5 (Depressive Disorder) English 102 research essay

2 - The first paragraph is always the introduction to the topic. That is the place where you can give a...

Research Papersamarieonn - Jul 20, 2024Holt - Jul 20, 2024
Personal statement. Major: fashion design for embassy track undergraduates gks 2024/25

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Study Plan/ SoP for Canadian study permit

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you so much for a swift response! I know it was quite difficult to read...

Letterscccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024cccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024
How convincing is my narrative for my motivation statement for CERN's administrative student program

2 - This is supposed to be a motivational letter, It is not a paragraphical form of your work related experiences....

Letterswannabdiplomat - Jul 19, 2024Holt - Jul 19, 2024
Soccer journey - an identity, an interest, or a talent that defines them in an essential way.

2 - The essay is too long. I found myself becoming bored by the third paragraph and wishing you would get...

Writing Feedbacknadine_pf - Jul 18, 2024Holt - Jul 19, 2024
What problem does cyber insecurity cause? How to solve it

2 - This term does not exist in the English vocabulary. Either you mean "hyper-connected" or "cyber connected". This lack...

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high school entrance exam - the most difficult time in your life

2 - Is this a statement meant to respond to an English writing task or are you writing this as an...

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The prison industrial complex and the effects on minorities

2 - You are discussing modern slavery in the form of illegal immigrapht prisoners right? You should establish that right from...

Research Paperslegarretacesar - Jul 19, 2024Holt - Jul 19, 2024
Writing Task 1 - The chart below ahows the percentage of female members of parliament in 5 European

3 - I think once the information in your paragraph matches the information in the graph, you will be set. You...

Writing Feedbacktikafebriyani - Jul 18, 2024nadine_pf - Jul 18, 2024
Foundation in Korean language - GKS study plan. Pusan national university

2 - Do not prolong the before arrival plans. You are focusing too much on pre-arrival plans that have yet to...

ScholarshipEzinne - Jul 17, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people

2 - Your essay is over discussed and will not be completed within the 40 minute time frame. Aside from that,...

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the net

2 - The paraphrasing of the original topic is incorrect. You have not provided the correct field of focus for...

Writing FeedbackTong Phuong Anh - Jul 16, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Computer study / electronics - Personal Statement

2 - The personal statement is not a long discussion of your academic interests. Rather, it is an introduction to your...

UndergraduateSyke - Jul 17, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals

2 - The question provided for the discussion is "To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement provided?"....

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Gks study plan for Undergraduate for law 2024/25

2 - Your pre arrival language preparations must be of the ongoing kind rather than the future preparation kind. It is...

UndergraduateBrownie j - Jul 16, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase.

3 - In fact, many -> Many part in -> part of police stations of Viet Nam -> police...

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Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases.

3 - health care -> the health care known fatal in past time -> known as fatal in past time...

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Personal Statement: Can a cat teach a seagull how to fly?

3 - @jarkish U made use of the word passionate when you shouldn't. instead of saying that you're passionate explain how...

Undergraduatejarkish - Jul 16, 2024Ezinne - Jul 17, 2024
How would the specific programmes of study in Ireland - response essay

2 - How many words have you been given to respond to the question? Your answer is not effective at all....

Graduatesenay - Jul 16, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athlete

2 - You are altering the original statement. There is no controversy. There is only a statement of fact. This...

Writing Feedbacktaurus - Jul 16, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
why you should leave everything and move to the beach!

2 - I seem to read a contradiction in this presentation. You are discussing living by the beach right? Living by...

Research Papersjamz - Jul 15, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative

3 - Your essay contains several grammatical mistakes, you also relies too much on providing example instead of explain your points...

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How an island has change before and after the construction of tourist amenities

2 - The problem with this analysis is that you are not completely analyzing the before aspect of the map illustration....

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