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Moving Toward Zero Waste Research Essay

2 - What exactly are you referring to here? You need to properly introduce example to your reader by way...

Research Paperslcolon - Jul 15, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Short statement of purpose for Lund MSc about accounting and management control

2 - I do not really see how the program will be helping you further your training in the aforementioned sections....

GraduateJunefish - Jul 14, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
[ WRITING TASK 1] The charts below show annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in

2 - Your summary overview should be at least 2 sentences long. You should add an enumeration of the sources of...

Writing Feedbackhana115 - Jul 14, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The Mental Affects Of The Pandemic Were Worse Than The Actual Illness Itself

2 - Why not consider indicating that the Corona virus lockdown created 2 instead of just 1 pandemic? One is...

Research PapersANG2405743 - Jul 13, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The diagram below shows how recycled paper is made. Summarise the information.

2 - Yes, an image was provided. It may be considered a picture. However, since it explains a 4 step...

Writing FeedbackHoangPhuong2010 - Jul 13, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
criticism on the quality of letter of motivation for aerospace engineering masters

2 - Oops. This is too much of an exaggeration. You cannot fly a plane at the age of 8....

Graduatemegamind1 - Jul 12, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think

2 - This type of discussion requires you to use a comparison point of view for each reasoning paragraph. You must...

Writing Feedbacktheanh1204 - Jul 12, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo...)

2 - You have actually spent too much time justifying the causes of extinction as caused by man when you should...

Writing Feedbackevelynsayhii - Jul 12, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

2 - Avoid writing in run-on mode for your summary overview. You are given a sentence allowance of 3-5 sentence per...

Writing Feedbackdaohientrang - Jul 10, 2024Holt - Jul 14, 2024
It is predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century free time

2 - You did not respond to the given writing prompt. There is a question and request for reasons that...

Writing Feedbackpnhphuong - Jul 10, 2024Holt - Jul 14, 2024
Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music must being rejected from the school.Do you agree or disagree?

2 - The severe shortness of this discussion will ensure that it gets a failing score. Aside from the word count,...

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Common App Essay Draft - 12 PM: Overcoming a challenge

2 - This is a highly personal essay. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your struggle was real and it...

Undergraduaterubyh18 - Jul 10, 2024Holt - Jul 13, 2024
the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

2 - Well, your essay would get an automatic failing score because you wrote less than 250 words, did not follow...

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Supporting statement for Master's degree in Advanced Control and Systems Engineering

2 - Your supporting statement tends to jump around in terms of information sharing, without actually building to a solid finish....

GraduateFikri26 - Jul 8, 2024Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Reasons and effects of income disparity between celebrities and politicians nowadays (IELTS task 2)

2 - Do not make boastful claims like these. There are some who would oppose this statement and say that...

Writing Feedbackhann130002 - Jul 7, 2024Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Discuss pros and cons of working or studying at home

2 - This is a misleading statement. There is no information nor reference in the original prompt that would indicate...

Writing FeedbackPerthy - Jul 7, 2024Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalization

2 - What? You did not offer a writer's opinion with a thesis statement in the first paragraph. You did...

Writing FeedbackHarryNguyen041 - Jul 6, 2024Holt - Jul 6, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : Many young people today change their jobs or careers every few years.

2 - Your English competency level is that of a beginner and yet, you are trying to use an advanced sentence...

Writing Feedbacklucyle0802 - Jul 6, 2024Holt - Jul 6, 2024
people should be able to keep all the money they earn and not pay tax to the state. agree or not

3 - While the idea of keeping all earned income sounds appealing in principle, it's important to consider the broader implications....

Writing Feedbacknorah14 - Jun 13, 2024markzily - Jul 6, 2024
Machine Learning - Statement of Purpose for an exchange Program

3 - Thank you so much for the feedback. I have taken it into consideration and made the required changes....

Undergraduatebikraj2 - Jul 4, 2024bikraj2 - Jul 5, 2024
The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income

3 - The chart highlights changes in how families allocated their weekly income in a specific country between 1968 and 2018....

Writing FeedbackAngrycat - Jul 3, 2024markzily - Jul 5, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2- Some people think young people should be required to have full time education

2 - The term younger generations is too vague. Be more specific and limit the description to one closer to the...

Writing Feedbackdinhhieu2910 - Jul 4, 2024Holt - Jul 4, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - MAP OF CENTRAL LIBRARY 20 YEARS AGO AND TODAY

2 - The summary overview should have at least 2 sentences in it. The image identification is lacking. You are indicating...

Writing Feedbackngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
write paragraph about avantages of playing sports

2 - There is no need to write a conclusion statement when you are being asked to develop a paragraph based...

Writing Feedbacklinda2 - Jul 2, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - Essay on computers being the most important invention of the last century or not

2 - Kindly refrain from writing more than 300 words for the task 2 essay. This essay is composed of 440...

Writing Feedbackminhduc0806 - Jul 2, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - UNEMPLOYMENT

2 - Your report is difficult to read due to the lack of punctuation usage. The GRA score for this essay...

Writing Feedbackclaserpy - Jul 1, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
2025 GKS mass media major. Pusan national university

2 - Considering that you are Nigerian and not Korean, it will seem implausible for you to be so focused on...

UndergraduateEzinne - Jun 30, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
SOP/Motivation Letter for Design Academy Eindhoven

3 - Your statement of purpose for the Master's of Design program at Design Academy Eindhoven showcases your passion for art...

GraduateLamiaNoshin - Jun 29, 2024markzily - Jul 3, 2024
Ielts writing task 1: average CO2 emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, Portugal

4 - The overall essay is good, but I recommend you compare the data of the countries rather than just stating...

Writing Feedbackkvpa915gstn - Jun 26, 2024ngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (PIE CHART) - TRANSPORTATION

3 - The lengths of your 2 paragraphs are not balanced, probably because of your approach to divide the information. I...

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