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IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - GLOBAL MOBILE PHONE SALES BY BRAND

3 - Fascinating breakdown of global mobile phone sales trends from 2009 to 2013! Samsung and Apple saw substantial growth, while...

Writing Feedbackngocquyen - Jun 30, 2024markzily - Jul 2, 2024
IELTS Academic-Essay about whether group activities teach more important skills than individual ones

3 - Your essay makes a strong case for the valuable skills gained through group activities like communication and leadership. I...

Writing Feedbackbyn - Jun 30, 2024markzily - Jul 1, 2024
Data Science Masters - Personal Statement

2 - Kindly indicate what degree you completed in college and how it relates to Cybersecurity. How did you find yourself...

Graduateamahopeless - Jun 30, 2024Holt - Jun 30, 2024
Personal statement for gks undergraduate medical student 2025 embassy track

2 - The presentation of this essay is bordering on the dramatic, without really offering any information that would help the...

Scholarshiplegendshibawaekh - Jun 28, 2024Holt - Jun 29, 2024
IELTS Academic Writing "Persuasive Power vs. Waning Influence: Debating the Impact of Advertising"

2 - You are writing a debate paper based on the given topic. Therefore, you should have a clear thesis statement...

Writing Feedbackjckian - Jun 27, 2024Holt - Jun 27, 2024
Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face

3 - It's an interesting perspective on the value of friendships in today's digital age. While online friendships offer convenience and...

Writing Feedbackhoainhu - Jun 25, 2024markzily - Jun 27, 2024
The Essence of Parenting: Nurturing Future Generations

2 - You are discussing parenting in general terms. However, the demands of parenting differ between single parent, two parent, and...

Essaysfrankmaghler - Jun 27, 2024Holt - Jun 27, 2024
task 2 social skills should be emphasized?

2 - You chose to use your first reasoning paragraph to introduce an explanation the topic, rather than a supporting statement...

Writing Feedbackngoc khue - Jun 24, 2024Holt - Jun 25, 2024
Pharmacy chose me - Graduate Statement of Purpose

3 - Thank you for the feedback. Very much appreciated....

Writing Feedbackshegzdr - Jun 23, 2024shegzdr - Jun 25, 2024
"We do not remember days, we remember moments."

2 - You may want to expand on this discussion and find a way to make it more relatable to...

UndergraduateADITI PATEL - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
SOP for Information science focus on intersection of security and privacy with human-computer.

2 - I find the discussion to be very general in presentation. The purpose is somewhere there. You have kept it...

ScholarshipHallenjay - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
Smoking - Writing task 2: Topic- Social issues

2 - Use the first person pronoun "I" in this case. The essay will not write itself. The essay does...

Writing FeedbackThang2910 - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
Writing task 2 The media should limit how much bad news they report

3 - In addition to what the consultant has said, you may want to carefully proofread essays. You have written 'awaring'...

Writing Feedbackmelee - Jun 21, 2024mvo_rey - Jun 23, 2024
Bachelors to Direct PHD - KFUPM

3 - @Holt Thanks for valuable feedback. But as this isn't a regular PHD program it is direct PHD after 4...

Graduatemarsad1998 - Jun 22, 2024marsad1998 - Jun 23, 2024
In this complex and fast-paced world, it is essential for young people to equip basic pecuniary skil

2 - I believe that you wrote this as a part of your IELTS task 2 essay preparation. Unfortunately, you overwrote...

Writing FeedbackIamSallyNguyen - Jun 22, 2024Holt - Jun 23, 2024
Essay about ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework

2 - There are 262 words in this essay. I assume that you used more than 40 minutes to write this...

Writing Feedbackdung_284 - Jun 21, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Writing task 1 - the chart shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office

2 - Always divide your summary overview into 2 sentences. There is a 2 sentence and 40 word requirement for that...

Writing Feedbacktakaleon - Jun 21, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Essay about the money spent by British parents (Ielts writing Task 1 )

2 - Keep the task 1 essay to only 200 words. By writing 243 words, you will more than likely cut...

Writing Feedbackpthanh_0419 - Jun 20, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
computers are becoming a part lessons at school Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

2 - I don't know where to begin in terms of correcting your essay. You have 14 misspelled words, that affect...

Writing Feedbackhoangn109 - Jun 20, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Prolonging lifespan - life expectancy is increasing.

3 - "Some people would argue that longer lives could bring more positive aspects. From my perspective, in contrast, I do...

Writing Feedbackhnaht - Jun 18, 2024mvo_rey - Jun 22, 2024
The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.

2 - Your descriptive report is only 149 words. Though minimal, you will still receive a small deduction for not meeting...

Writing FeedbackLemonChi - Jun 20, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

2 - The first thing you have to learn about the task 1 essay is that you have to properly identify...

Writing Feedbackkhoivuive - Jun 19, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
ielts writing task foreign cultures introduced

2 - You focused so much on vocabulary usage in the first paragraph that you lost sight of the original topic...

Writing Feedbackduan2207 - Jun 18, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Essay on 'why should we consider you?' for a scholarship

2 - The response is a bit murky. The reviewer will not understand how you came to be exposed to this...

Scholarshipmvo_rey - Jun 18, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
IELTS Task 1 demand for electricity and how electricity is used.

2 - The summary overview must be composed of at least 2 separate sentences. You have written a run on sentence....

Writing Feedbackrubie - Jun 17, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Writing task 2 - Topic Education Study Subjects

2 - You don't have to say this anymore. The examiner will understand the writing instructions based upon how you...

Writing Feedbacktrangmon - Jun 17, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Is it better to read books on paper or digital?

2 - You have missed the point of the prompt. This is a single opinion essay. Your answer should be based...

Writing FeedbackbonnieBux - Jun 16, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Anxiety VS College Students first draft

2 - Maybe consider focusing on the audience for the research paper and the pool from which the test results will...

Research Papersisabella05 - Jun 15, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
All children should be made to wear school uniforms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - The word force is too strong for this discussion. You should be using positive words instead of negative...

Writing FeedbackHan Yujin - Jun 14, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Personal Statement for Common App Essay about Cultural Identity

2 - This is a very engaging essay that clearly shows your cultural background and what it means to your youth....

Undergraduatescnwanna - Jun 13, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
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