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Personal statement Psychology (university track)

2 - This essay cannot be submitted to the GKS-U screening committee. I understand that you may have come across this...

ScholarshipFaith y - Jul 13, 2025Holt - Jul 13, 2025
Children's, Family's Separation at the border

2 - I hope that this essay is only a draft and you have not submitted this to your teacher yet....

Writing FeedbackKchavez2 - Jul 12, 2025Holt - Jul 13, 2025
The maps show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development

2 - While the essay is well written and does provide the information necessary for the changes, the presentation is not...

Writing Feedbackwiniari - Jul 11, 2025Holt - Jul 13, 2025
PERSONAL STATEMENT - GKS-U 2026, University Track (Keimyung University)

2 - This section should be removed since it is better suited to the Goal of Study or future plan...

ScholarshipKaelani - Jul 11, 2025Holt - Jul 13, 2025
Personal Statement GKS-U – Sociology Major (Kangwon National University)

3 - @Holt I do think that i have a good performance in university. I was in a leadership position for...

Scholarshipnika000 - Jul 9, 2025nika000 - Jul 10, 2025
"Pathological liars" - application essay

2 - The reviewer will be confused by these 2 statements. A liar is different from a jerk. You...

UndergraduateKatiec123 - Jul 8, 2025Holt - Jul 9, 2025
Essay about Travelling alone

2 - When asked to write a compare and contrast essay, you need to provide your opinion within the discussion paragraphs....

Writing FeedbackHong2012 - Jul 8, 2025Holt - Jul 9, 2025
BIO-HEALTH TECHNOLOGY GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT

2 - Expand on this aspect talk more about why this award is important. What item was sold? How was...

Scholarshipayaxri - Jul 2, 2025Holt - Jul 6, 2025
Goals of plan & study plan (psychology)

2 - This is not an acceptable Goal of Study and Study Plan because it does not provide the required information....

ScholarshipFaith y - Jul 4, 2025Holt - Jul 6, 2025
Resarch Paper - a More Controversial Nature, Concerning Conflict Between Russia and Ukraine

2 - This paper comes across more as a storytelling piece instead of an insightful look into the history of the...

Research PapersDCS24 - Jul 1, 2025Holt - Jul 1, 2025
Psychology and counseling center - Future plan after finishing GKS program

2 - You will be required top spend at least 2 years in South Korea after you graduate from the program....

ScholarshipFaith y - Jun 30, 2025Holt - Jul 1, 2025
Monash Asia Equity Scholarship - Computer Science Advanced (Honours)

2 - The essay lacks a direct connection with the programs that Monash university offers under the program you will be...

Scholarshipfierysteam - Jun 30, 2025Holt - Jul 1, 2025
"Trying new things" - Language study plan before and after Gks

2 - This is not an effective language study plan. It does not show that you have been making long term...

ScholarshipFaith y - Jun 26, 2025Holt - Jun 27, 2025
The Opioid Epidemic A National Crisis in Need of Reform

2 - While the research and opinion paper itself is well developed and presented, I feel that there is a lack...

Writing Feedbackjenniferdailyn - Jun 21, 2025Holt - Jun 22, 2025
Healthcare system - Goal of study , study plan for gks during my degree program

2 - Try to develop a more concrete goal of study. Your presentation is too generic. It shows that you do...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 21, 2025Holt - Jun 21, 2025
How to improve the vocabulary I use on essays for proficiency level?

7 - Word complexity in the essay will not help increase your score if you are using the advanced English words...

Essayszoe_lfcna - Nov 12, 2010Holt - Jun 20, 2025
Do languages matter in IR courses?

2 - Language proficiency matters tremendously if you are applying for admission to college outside of your home country. More so...

Student TalkAnvita1910 - Jun 18, 2025Holt - Jun 18, 2025
The bar charts show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign languages

2 - How are the bar charts separated? Identify the bar charts per title for the clarification of the reader....

Writing FeedbackUyen Nhi - Jun 17, 2025Holt - Jun 18, 2025
Sharing my desire to pursue nursing/personal statement for gks scholarship

2 - It appears that you are applying via embassy track with this application. I would suggest that you apply using...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 15, 2025Holt - Jun 15, 2025
The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different count

3 - @Holt Thank you for the valuable feedback....

Writing Feedbackkandetri - Jun 14, 2025kandetri - Jun 15, 2025
Learning the second language - IELTS Writing task 2: Discussion

2 - You did an almost fine job of paraphrasing the original prompt. The problem is that you retained the phrasea...

Writing FeedbackCarolinee - Jun 15, 2025Holt - Jun 15, 2025
Question: What are the environmental benefits of electric cars?

3 - I think it's a topic we should be aware of and clear about if we have to get to...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
Debate exam - ideas on the skills needed?

3 - I liked the topic. It's good to put into practice....

EssaysDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
attending a university and decide a career, which do you think should go first?

5 - It is a very interesting topic, because few people stop to encourage that thought, which is very important and...

Student Talknaixin - Dec 25, 2011Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
Writing task 2: The environment.

3 - I really liked the topic. We need to be much more aware....

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 14, 2025Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
My foundation - Language study plan before and after Gkd

5 - It is for a teacher's activity...

UndergraduateFaith y - Jun 12, 2025Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
The Benifits of Printing Press

2 - Your effort to write in English is noted. However, there are several problems that you need to address in...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025Holt - Jun 14, 2025
Why is health detector a leading initiative to help the poor easily access healthcare?

2 - The statement lacks substance. What is the product about? What does it do? How does it do it? What...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025Holt - Jun 14, 2025
What are the advantages of social media?

2 - Let us start with the basics of English sentence writing. The requirement for beginner English language learners is that...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025Holt - Jun 14, 2025
IELTS Exam - How important is it?

14 - In my opinion, it's important because this test assesses your english level at the native level, thereby letting companies...

Student Talkhamms - May 2, 2008Duekhanh - Jun 14, 2025
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