Writing Feedback / Most Americans Think Burgers Are Healthy [3]

Surprisingly depressed news comes from nutritionist examining 1.767 Americans who had ordered a tasty burger instead of healthful sandwich from a restaurant in the last three months. As much as 62 percent from the respondents of the survey obviously choose fatty burger than fresh sandwich, while 82 percent realize that sandwich is healthier. Moreover, their reason appeared because they think burger is not only a delicious glut meal but also cooked and served with an amount of vegetables, meat, and bread contains good sources needed by the human body; such as protein, iron and vitamin B12. However, it comes with a lot of problems than it seems which made of fatty meat, sugary ketchup and refined grain buns. Therefore, the World Health Organization (WHO) just proclaims the processed meat is a carcinogen and red meat likely causes cancer which all contained in the burger instead of healthy sandwich.

Sources : time/4345052/burgers-healthy-red-meat/?iid=sr-link1

Writing Feedback / Multiple outdoor and indoor activities - The purpose of all tourists visiting New Zealand [2]

International Visitors to New Zealand - Reason for visit - IELTS Task 1

The bar chart provides information about the purposes of all tourists visiting New Zealand and is measured in percent. There are two types of holidaymaker reasons visiting New Zealand those are to do some outdoor and indoor activities. On the whole, the data shows the most reason of the holidaymaker came to New Zealand is for doing the outdoor activities.

The chart gives several outdoor activities as the tourists' purposes those are walking around the New Zealand, enjoying the sightseeing, visiting volcanos, and riding boat. Walking around is appeared on the top of the list of the outdoor activity and at once is the most reason of traveler visiting New Zealand. Second, as much as 75 percent traveler aims to enjoy the New Zealand view. Having an experiment to ride boat is the third reason appeared on the chart and has a 5 percent margin different with paying a visit to the volcanos mountain which has 50 percent. However, the indoor traveler purposes is commonly to visit the historical building such as museum and it has 40 percent.

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Writing Feedback / Al Gore stressed the importance of being aware of the climate change [2]

AL-GORE: New thinking on the climate crisis

Al Gore points are to stress the importance of being aware of the climate change. According to his speech the main environment challenges currently emerging is divided into two areas which are global and regional problems. First, the global problems contain air pollution, water pollution, and hazardous waste dumps which are a problem for almost all countries nowadays. Second, the regional problem is the appearance of acid rain happened from Midwest to the Northeast, and from Western Europe to the Arctic, and from the Midwest out the Mississippi into the dead zone of the Gulf of Mexico. Under these circumstances, one of the biggest climate change impacts that he gave as an example is the fact that after over 28 years the melting ice of the Arctic has threatened Greenland. Overall, in his opinion, global warming has an impact on all aspects of life. So in respond to these issues, Al-Gore urges us to build a worldwide, global mobilization for renewable energy, conservation, efficiency and a global transition to a low-carbon economy mobilized by politics. On the whole, his speech is stating that politics nowadays can tackle the climate change issues.

Writing Feedback / The relationship between sovereignty and the law is relatively straightforward. When it comes to pol [2]

Issue appeared in Britain politics these days is dominated by the way to withdraw the control the sovereignty which is addressing to the relationship between the United Kingdom and the European Union (EU). For more than decades, the United Kingdom has become an important member of the European Union (EU). Conversely, Britain is not feel the same way in which they think they have lost their power as a sovereign European Country so that the Brexit agenda that want to leave European Union comes up. Unfortunately, there are misconceptions in analyzing the idea of not having control of their own country as well. As Jean Bodin, the French political thinker, says sovereignty can be shared in this modern political days. In addition, his idea supported by others political analyst such as Hobbes and Rousseau. However, on the whole, what we need to underline is the whole sovereignty misunderstanding caused by the complicated political events happened yet cannot be determine.

Writing Feedback / The result from a recent survey revealed the lack of geopolitical skills among American youth [2]

Most Young Americans Can't Pass a Test on Global Affairs-Can You?

A surprising result comes from a recent survey on American youth nowadays revealed the lack of geopolitical skill that they have. Even though they can answer the primary geographic questioned, they failed to respond on the currently fundamental issues; such as the impact of US dollar on today's economic, the United Nations structure, and the US current politics. Generally, they are unable to associate both cultural and demographic content in a comprehensive statement.

A total of 75 questions the survey given to 1,203 American young adults shows only among 18-to-26-year-olds youth who once took college which has average score, about 55 percent. It turned out that a failure to acknowledge the economics and trade, demographic, and cultural issues have an impact on a person's political choice. This also happened in the Brexit vote case. However, Richard Haass, president of the Council on Foreign Relations, argues that the inability to understand this geopolitical issue as an open door to give a proper education regarding the geopolitical current issues because the American young adults were eventually understand how important it is to know these things.

Writing Feedback / International Visitors to New Zealand: Country of Origin [4]

The pie chart explains the homeland of international tourists visiting New Zealand and is measured in percent. It shows three groups of the origin of the international visitors; those are the English speaking nations, the East Asian, and the other. Overall, the majority of international tourists homeland comes from the English speaking countries.

The English speaking nations that have travelers often visited New Zealand contain Australia, United Stated of America, and United Kingdom. Australia has almost a half of the total percentage, while respectively United Kingdom has 12 percent and United State of America has 9 percent.

The East Asian countries mentioned by the chart are China, Japan, and South Korea. However, the East Asian percentage is lower than 15 percent. It shows China has the highest tourists visited New Zealand among other East Asian nations. Meanwhile, South Korea has smaller percentage than Japan. In addition, there are several other countries as much as 27 percent mentioned.

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