Writing Feedback / The percentage of people in each age group who watched a film in cinema regularly (1984-2003) [2]

cinema attendance data

The line graph below illustrates how many people in each age group who watched movie in cinema at least once each month over a period of 19 years starting from 1984

It is clear that the age of 15-24 people had the high frequency of going to theatre and the opposite was true for people who were 35 or over 35 years old . Another noticing thing is that the figures for all age group increased significantly, despite fluctuations

To be more specific , the rank order was 15-24 years old with nearly 20% , 7-14 age group with exactly 10% , 25-35 group and finally 35 and cover group with only around 1% at the beginning respectively. Over this period , this rank order rarely changed but there were a few times when the proportions of 15-24 years old and 7 -14 age group were the same. Over a half of people who aged from 15 -24 in 2003 went cinema at least once a month .

Of the other age group , the figure for oldest group was around 10% more than that of the beginning , while the percentage of both 7-14 years old and 25-35 years old were 30 in the year 2003

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Writing Feedback / Writing task 1 : top ten countries which have the highest number of Internet users [2]

ten countries with the highest number of Internet users

The table outlines the specific data off ten countries which have the highest number of Internet users in 2016.
Overall, the most populated country in the world China took the first place with a considerable gap and the country that had the highest percentage of people accessing the internet is the United Kingdom.

To be more specific, there were more than 700 million Chinese using the Internet which were over a half of its total population. Whereas, India have approximately 460 million inhabitants connecting to the Internet which were 240 million people less than that of China . In short, the rest 8 countries were US , Brazil ,Japan ,Russia , Nigeria , Germany , UK and Mexico respectively.

It is noticing that 9 out of 10 Americans or British are Internet connecters according to this statistics and the ninth place with 60 million users was belonged to Britain which had the total population of 65 million people .

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Writing Feedback / In the near future, car without drivers can be created. Do you think this development is positive? [2]

non-driver car future

It is predicted that non-driver car will be invented in the next few decades. From my perpective, i tend to reckon that this advent of technology is beneficial for humanity

Obviously, some people may confuse that whether letting computers or technological devices drive our car is safe or not. There is a fact that most of modern devices in this advanced society were checked carefully and errors do not usually appear . Furthermore, there are tons of tragic car accidents everyday and the cause behind of these incidents is humans . Humans sometimes can make mistakes when driving and thus traffic jams are one of the most problematic issues in many parts of the world. Therefore ,using auto-driving vehicles is not as dangerous as we thought since artificial intelligence devices often do a very good job in its tasks.

Another compelling explanation for my belief is that humans will create a better traffic system,if these kinds of vehicles are created . Transport system in some countries such as Vietnam, India and so on are too much chaotic and complex . In the future, There will be a high possibility that these cars can function and run smoothly and if this is true ,our world will not face with traffic problems anymore .

In conclusion, the safety of using technological products and its convenience are the reason why i believe that these cars will be helpful for mankind