Yayz
Jul 31, 2010
Letters / recommendation letter for a job offer in the field of architecture [8]
I have a few grammar/wording suggestions but this already sounds pretty nice! =)
full- time
She hadbeen completed
that we require from our partners.
She didn't let herself discouraged, instead she asked good questions and appeared intelligent.
She did not let herself become discouraged--instead, she was very interested in the work and asked intelligent questions.Saying you "appear" intelligent kind of makes it sound as if you were only acting
Maybe "We have had the pleasure of..." or something like that
December 2009). D uring that period I saw her blossom(maybe replace that with "transfrom")from a newcomer, college student, into an equal position holder among the other senior architects in my firm.
"For start," -->At the start,
They made a good team and had an excellent dynamic for solving problems with the project...
Mrs. XXX stayed alert and provided...for the choices made
(It sounds stronger than just "was")
five different projects
She rapidly became one of the employees I knew I could rely on through her exceptional work on site visits...
In the case of hotel projects or competitions our company enrolled in, I always made sure that I included her in the new, larger groups in which she always gained respect from her colleagues and reaffirmed my respect for her.
Another colleague commented favorably about working with Mrs. XXX:He said that she got along well with her co-workers, pulled her own weight on the projects, and had the ability to compromise with other team members. He particularly appreciated her goal-driven dedication to her work.
her talent as well as her ability
hoping
I have a few grammar/wording suggestions but this already sounds pretty nice! =)
full- time
She had
that we require from our partners.
She didn't let herself discouraged, instead she asked good questions and appeared intelligent.
She did not let herself become discouraged--instead, she was very interested in the work and asked intelligent questions.Saying you "appear" intelligent kind of makes it sound as if you were only acting
We had the pleasure to work with
Maybe "We have had the pleasure of..." or something like that
December 2009). D uring that period I saw her blossom(maybe replace that with "transfrom")
"For start," -->At the start,
I could see they were making a good team in solving problems on the project by working in tandem.
They made a good team and had an excellent dynamic for solving problems with the project...
Mrs. XXX was always alert in providing explanations and arguments for choices made
Mrs. XXX stayed alert and provided...for the choices made
(It sounds stronger than just "was")
five different projects
She became one of my reliable employees either it was about site visits and mapping, doing research on rules and regulations concerning a particular program, or completion of final drawings, concept graphics for presentations and imaging.
She rapidly became one of the employees I knew I could rely on through her exceptional work on site visits...
In the case of a hotel project or a competition we enrolled, I had to make larger groups including her and she always gained respect from all of her colleagues, including me.
In the case of hotel projects or competitions our company enrolled in, I always made sure that I included her in the new, larger groups in which she always gained respect from her colleagues and reaffirmed my respect for her.
Another colleague commented favorably about working with Mrs. XXX:
her talent as well as her ability
hoping