mussy
May 27, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS; In our society child's education have never been a simple task [9]
Dumi has said everything. Good job dude.
Dumi has said everything. Good job dude.
mussy
May 26, 2013
Writing Feedback / "If at first you don't succeed, try and try again" - TOEFL essay [9]
Your essay looks good. What I think is wrong with it has been discussed already. Keep your head high.
Your essay looks good. What I think is wrong with it has been discussed already. Keep your head high.
mussy
May 26, 2013
Essays / WHY ANTICIPATE OVER TOMORROW? [4]
Need help on making this poem better. criticism is welcomed
That tomorrow brings a better day,
Its all in God's hand
Then why anticipate over what the future has in stock for you.
The moment is all you've got and you have all you have to spend the moment lavishly so that the future won't come as a surprise to you.
Need help on making this poem better. criticism is welcomed
That tomorrow brings a better day,
Its all in God's hand
Then why anticipate over what the future has in stock for you.
The moment is all you've got and you have all you have to spend the moment lavishly so that the future won't come as a surprise to you.
mussy
May 26, 2013
Essays / BANGING statement needed for introduction/ Is communication the solution? [3]
You can start off with words or phrases that move the reader and quotes are also welcomed.
You can start off with words or phrases that move the reader and quotes are also welcomed.
mussy
May 26, 2013
Writing Feedback / Lincoln Paper - Introductory Paragraph [11]
Yes, he has those leadership qualities.
Yes, he has those leadership qualities.
mussy
Mar 17, 2013
Essays / Should the mother tongue be the medium of instruction in South African schools? [2]
Wow, you have presented awesome points in your writeup.I will research for what I will present though. I have not seen anything bad with what you've presented.
Wow, you have presented awesome points in your writeup.I will research for what I will present though. I have not seen anything bad with what you've presented.
mussy
Mar 11, 2013
Undergraduate / I live by the Performance equation rules ; Upenn Suppliment. Life realization. [2]
Ben Franklin rightly said: `human beings are divided into three classes-those that are immovable,those that are movable and those that move'.
what a quote to begin with, you try to go deep into the thesis of the quote itself. In the course of that you enumerate your experience.
Ben Franklin rightly said: `human beings are divided into three classes-those that are immovable,those that are movable and those that move'.
what a quote to begin with, you try to go deep into the thesis of the quote itself. In the course of that you enumerate your experience.
mussy
Mar 8, 2013
Essays / struggle through the tides; Need help for me to improve my inspirational book [5]
Themes are sense of self:hopelessness and hope. any suggestion will be welcomed.
Themes are sense of self:hopelessness and hope. any suggestion will be welcomed.
mussy
Mar 7, 2013
Essays / struggle through the tides; Need help for me to improve my inspirational book [5]
yes any idea will be welcomed
yes any idea will be welcomed
mussy
Mar 6, 2013
Essays / struggle through the tides; Need help for me to improve my inspirational book [5]
It has been a long time since I have come to this site. I want to write an inspiring book to encourage student of my school and any student in Nigeria, I need ideas on points to write about and any idea on how my research can be done will be welcomed. I hope someone will offer me assistance.
It has been a long time since I have come to this site. I want to write an inspiring book to encourage student of my school and any student in Nigeria, I need ideas on points to write about and any idea on how my research can be done will be welcomed. I hope someone will offer me assistance.
mussy
Dec 15, 2012
Undergraduate / Simplest things are often the Catalysts of Development;Intellectual Vitality-Stanford [4]
Reading... i will get back to you
Reading... i will get back to you
mussy
Jan 19, 2012
Essays / Why do humans we fail - help on writing the book [4]
I have been struggling with writing a book this year on reasons why people fail. I need help on writing the book.
I need points under the following points below.
- procastination
- inadequate planning
- accepting negative criticism
- low self esteem
- fear of failure
- lack of preparation
I need good points under this to develop my point, and any title that will attract readers will be gratefully accepted.
I have been struggling with writing a book this year on reasons why people fail. I need help on writing the book.
I need points under the following points below.
- procastination
- inadequate planning
- accepting negative criticism
- low self esteem
- fear of failure
- lack of preparation
I need good points under this to develop my point, and any title that will attract readers will be gratefully accepted.
mussy
Jan 19, 2012
Writing Feedback / People who do not accept criticism from others cannot be successful at working [2]
Nice work there. Try to develop your paragraphs.
Nice work there. Try to develop your paragraphs.
mussy
Jan 19, 2012
Writing Feedback / Some people could be famous if they try and train [4]
The importance of hardwork, will to succeed and perseverance is being expressed in your essay.
What I discover about it is that your points are plain and you also have good sentence fluency. Good work there.
The importance of hardwork, will to succeed and perseverance is being expressed in your essay.
What I discover about it is that your points are plain and you also have good sentence fluency. Good work there.
mussy
Dec 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / Ruling The World With Ideas [3]
Thanks farina Ahmad, I am from Nigeria. I need you to suggest books that will enhance my writing ability.
Thanks farina Ahmad, I am from Nigeria. I need you to suggest books that will enhance my writing ability.
mussy
Dec 11, 2011
Essays / How to write essays, articles, and inspiring speeches? [8]
Thanks for your advice arya 16. Pls can you check "ruling the world with ideas" that I posted now. Pls give your comments about it and help me in correction and pls who are the Authors of those books you mentioned.
Thanks for your advice arya 16. Pls can you check "ruling the world with ideas" that I posted now. Pls give your comments about it and help me in correction and pls who are the Authors of those books you mentioned.
mussy
Dec 11, 2011
Writing Feedback / Ruling The World With Ideas [3]
I want to post this piece to my hub. I need corrections on this piece below. I also want my sentence to flow. Pls after the correction i will want your observations about the piece. Happy reading ahead
Ruling The World With Ideas.
Ideas are creative imaginary picture either right or wrong impressed on the mind of an individual. Creative people are actually the master of positive ideas. So it takes a great man to have a positive idea.
In order to create a positive idea that will rule our world, we have to pay attention to our skills. Our skills is the ability to do things in an exceptionally different way. We say we have talents, we have toknow that these talents cant take us anywhere except except we act on it to produce skill, which is actually what people are looking for anywhere they see great people with great talent.
To be a skillful being we have to depend on our strength. When i say strenth, it does not mean physical strength, it means those activities we engage in that brings us strength,things that bring out the best in us, things that adds to our self-esteem. Activities that require no extra energy are our areas of strength. In later post, i will post a piece on "Realising Our Strengths".
In addition our thoughts matters alot. Paying attention to our thoughts is actually the raw material to where we want to be in life. We have to understand the concept of thoughts that will pull us back and thought that will push us forward.
The right thought will push us to where we want to be in this world but the right thought is very difficult to be implemented and the wrong thought on the other hand will pull us back. Giving in to the wrong thought in our lives is very easy but there will be difficulties at the end of the road.
Consequently, paying attention to things that challenges our mind to produce reasonable ideas. The mind has the ability to expand and the capacity of the mind can never be underestimated.
We need to engage in profitable association if we want to rule the world with ideas. These are things that bring about things that helps in profitable association,such reading books from great Authors. Profitable association and going to the right place in order to have ideas that challenges our mind, as a great man once said and I quote "who you become in the future are based on three things, the books you read, people you associate with and the places you go".
Try to remember this points I have shared with you if you want to rule the world with ideas. Looks out for my next post in this hub Thanks for reading.
(Please I need corrections)
I want to post this piece to my hub. I need corrections on this piece below. I also want my sentence to flow. Pls after the correction i will want your observations about the piece. Happy reading ahead
Ruling The World With Ideas.
Ideas are creative imaginary picture either right or wrong impressed on the mind of an individual. Creative people are actually the master of positive ideas. So it takes a great man to have a positive idea.
In order to create a positive idea that will rule our world, we have to pay attention to our skills. Our skills is the ability to do things in an exceptionally different way. We say we have talents, we have toknow that these talents cant take us anywhere except except we act on it to produce skill, which is actually what people are looking for anywhere they see great people with great talent.
To be a skillful being we have to depend on our strength. When i say strenth, it does not mean physical strength, it means those activities we engage in that brings us strength,things that bring out the best in us, things that adds to our self-esteem. Activities that require no extra energy are our areas of strength. In later post, i will post a piece on "Realising Our Strengths".
In addition our thoughts matters alot. Paying attention to our thoughts is actually the raw material to where we want to be in life. We have to understand the concept of thoughts that will pull us back and thought that will push us forward.
The right thought will push us to where we want to be in this world but the right thought is very difficult to be implemented and the wrong thought on the other hand will pull us back. Giving in to the wrong thought in our lives is very easy but there will be difficulties at the end of the road.
Consequently, paying attention to things that challenges our mind to produce reasonable ideas. The mind has the ability to expand and the capacity of the mind can never be underestimated.
We need to engage in profitable association if we want to rule the world with ideas. These are things that bring about things that helps in profitable association,such reading books from great Authors. Profitable association and going to the right place in order to have ideas that challenges our mind, as a great man once said and I quote "who you become in the future are based on three things, the books you read, people you associate with and the places you go".
Try to remember this points I have shared with you if you want to rule the world with ideas. Looks out for my next post in this hub Thanks for reading.
(Please I need corrections)
mussy
Dec 11, 2011
Undergraduate / 'nature and science in harmony' - columbia supplement short essay [6]
What appeals to me most is "my dream is to grow and help others grow" this is really interesting. You can develop on your points if you like but what you have written is alright.
What appeals to me most is "my dream is to grow and help others grow" this is really interesting. You can develop on your points if you like but what you have written is alright.
mussy
Dec 11, 2011
Graduate / "Always continue to climb" - SOP for MS in finance [4]
Hello,
That is a really interesting piece, you are my role model in this forum. What actually did you study? You write like a professional. Can you suggest any book that will make me effective in writing, I want to write an inspirational book next year, post things in my blog and do so many things. I will be grateful if you can be of help. Once again your writing really inspired me.
Hello,
That is a really interesting piece, you are my role model in this forum. What actually did you study? You write like a professional. Can you suggest any book that will make me effective in writing, I want to write an inspirational book next year, post things in my blog and do so many things. I will be grateful if you can be of help. Once again your writing really inspired me.
mussy
Dec 11, 2011
Essays / How to write essays, articles, and inspiring speeches? [8]
Thanks prettywings, what book do you actually want me to have on essay writing.
Thanks prettywings, what book do you actually want me to have on essay writing.
mussy
Dec 11, 2011
Essays / How to write essays, articles, and inspiring speeches? [8]
Thanks for your advice arya 16 should I practice writing everyday.
Thanks for your advice arya 16 should I practice writing everyday.
mussy
Dec 10, 2011
Essays / How to write essays, articles, and inspiring speeches? [8]
Hi everyone i am new to this forum. I want to know how to write essays, articles, and inspiring speeches that will be very good with good sentence flow, although i have lots of books on essay,articles and letter writing. Pls i am indebted to all of you that will actually contribute. I need to learn how to write perfectly before we resume back to school
Hi everyone i am new to this forum. I want to know how to write essays, articles, and inspiring speeches that will be very good with good sentence flow, although i have lots of books on essay,articles and letter writing. Pls i am indebted to all of you that will actually contribute. I need to learn how to write perfectly before we resume back to school