Undergraduate / Diversity & Change/Motivation Clarkson Honors - What can i contribute [4]

How will you contribute to the Honors Program at Clarkson University? 250 wrds max. this essay is 244

I believe that I would be a great addition to the Clarkson Honors family because I am a dedicated, energetic, hard working individual with big dreams and an immense amount of determination to back me up.

As president of the Gateway Honors Society student council, I am familiar with the responsibilities that go hand-in-hand with being a leader. My experiences in high school have taught me that individuality, inquisitiveness, and compassion lead to success but it is hard work that will point me in the right direction. At Clarkson, I can more than offer all of these life lessons that I have learned. My individuality comes from my boldness to be different. I am not afraid to stand out from the crowd or to explore new, unconventional ideas and methods to better my environment. My inquisitive mind comes from my thirst for knowledge. The more I know, the more ready I am for anything the world can throw at me. Lastly, my compassion comes from my will to always be of help to others. It is important that we all better ourselves but it is more important to help our fellow man. "Those who are happiest are those who do the most for others." â€-Booker T. Washington

To the Honors program at Clarkson University, I can offer: diversity and change through my individuality, increased motivation, through my desire to learn and finally love, by aiding my fellow students in all their endeavors.

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Undergraduate / Childhood Obesity - Sophie Davis essay #2 Major Domestic Problem [9]

Briefly describe what you believe is a major domestic problem confronting the United States - socially, economically or in health care. Indicate how you think this problem should be resolved.

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Healthy Eating in School

Occasionally, I walk into my school cafeteria and all I can think is, "Why?" We are served all sorts of tasty treats laden with sugar, oil, and fat. Almost without exception, the students who are struggling with their weight are the very students eating these foods. There are countless ways to successfully tackle the childhood obesity epidemic.

School is the best place to start.

Replacing pizza and French fries them with healthier options like rice, vegetables, and fresh fruit would prompt a significant decrease in the percentage of obese youth. My school's vending machines were once notorious for their vast array of chips, juice, and candy. One day, however, we arrived and were shocked to see a new machine stocked with boxes of fresh pineapples, carrots, apple slices, and grapes. Today, students flock to it more eagerly than they do the old vending machines. Such a simple improvement should be made in every school.

Physical education is another critical factor in the fight against obesity. All students should participate in gym every single day and take health classes periodically. Second, gym must carry real academic significance. At my school, students do not take gym seriously because they know that it will not affect their grade point averages. If all public schools counted gym on the report card, students-especially those in high school-would participate and learn the importance of diet and exercise. Finally, we need to emphasize more strongly the importance of interscholastic athletics. After-school physical activity can go a long way-children cannot relax on couches and attend softball practices simultaneously.

According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, the percentage of obese children aged 6-11 years in the United States increased from 7% in 1980 to nearly 20% in 2008. If effective action is not taken soon, the numbers will only increase. Obesity affects a child on all levels: physical, mental, and emotional. It is our collective patriotic obligation to overcome this national epidemic. Children are the most precious part of our society; we must build them up to be confident, healthy, and strong. It is imperative that we stop viewing this crisis halfheartedly and apathetically.

Undergraduate / I am truly blessed ; Drexel BS/MD Supp [3]

I have been lucky enough to have never been rushed to an emergency room, or carried away in an ambulance. I have been lucky enough to receive a great education and to live in a country that recognizes me for who I am and not for my race, my sex, or my religion. I have also been lucky enough to belong to a family that supports my dreams and urges me to be the best that I can be. I understand that I am truly blessed but I also understand that there are so many less lucky than I. My life has not been easy but I have met people in this country and in others who make the worst day I've ever had seem like heaven. Because of this, I have realized it is my duty to give back to others, and the best way I can possibly do that is by positively impacting the most important aspect of their lives, which is their health. I am fully dedicated to my goal of becoming physician. Each of us only has one chance at a beautiful life. By dedicating my life to healing others and helping them make the most of the time they have on this earth, I will have succeed.

I am applying to the joint programs with Drexel University College of Medicine because I have been reminded time and time again that the road to a medical degree is in no way shape or form an easy one. The institution at which I will pursue my dreams must be one of the best. An environment that will aid me in all my academic endeavors and provide me with great opportunities in and out of school. I have researched many colleges and universities and with this medical school's impressive: list of medical programs, graduation rate, resources for a medical education, beautiful campus, and positive things I've heard from others, I know Drexel University College of Medicine is the best place for me. I am positive that any of the combined degree programs at the affiliated schools will set me up with a spectacular education and leading opportunities to help me achieve my goal. There is no other institution where my aspirations would be better served than at Drexel University College of Medicine.

Undergraduate / LEHIGH supplements. Unique thing about Lehigh and my own university. [3]

1.) If you founded your own college or university, what topic of study would you make mandatory for all students to study and why? What would be the values and priorities of your institution and why?

If I founded my own college or university, I would make a freshman class on self-esteem mandatory. A class on improving confidence is crucial. It is absolutely impossible for anyone to reach their full potential if they are not confident in them self. Uncertainty will never get you far. If you don't believe in yourself, how can you expect others to believe in you?

The priorities of my institution would be to not only produce intelligent workers, but influential leaders. Making this class mandatory will help the students both in and out of school. They will gain the ability to walk into every classroom knowing that they are capable of doing well. Before every test, paper, project, or interview they will tell themselves they will do well, and with hard work, they will. Marcus Garvey once said "With confidence, you have won even before you have started." Every students will understand that a high self esteem is the key to success.

When my students have graduated and must prove to the CEO of a company or the staff of a medical school, that he or she is worthy of the position, they will speak with certainty and a humble confidence that will make them stand out from the rest of the applicants.

The motto of my school will be, "Believe in yourself, and the rest will fall into place. Have faith in your own abilities, work hard, and there is nothing you cannot accomplish."

2.What unique aspect of Lehigh most interests you?
Lehigh first caught my eye when I saw a poster of the schools University Center on the wall of my college counselors office. "Wow" I said to her "Lehigh looks great!" "Yes it is. They also have your BS/MD program. You should definitely look it up " From that moment on I was hooked.

The BS/MD program offered by Lehigh certainly enticed me to learn more about the school. It is my ultimate goal to become a medical doctor and of my long list of undergraduate schools, Lehigh is at the very top. Though the BS/MD program is a major plus, one aspect of Lehigh that interested me most was the vast amount of clubs and organizations present in the school. I have gone through the entire list and I am already excited. Two clubs that I am particularly interested in are LUAMSA and Leadership Lehigh. I am fully dedicated to becoming a doctor; however, I want to make the most out of my college experience and have an positive impact on the Lehigh community.

I had plans to visit Lehigh sometime in November but due to hurricane Sandy those plans had to be postponed; however, I have visited the galleries on the Lehigh website countless times and statements from past students have convinced me that at Lehigh I can accomplish my dream of becoming a doctor while giving back to the community and becoming a successful leader.

Undergraduate / "Ms Tutu! Ms. Tutu, I need help!" ; EXTRACURRICULAR / Tutoring [5]

"Ms Tutu! Ms. Tutu, I need help!" "Me too! I need help too!" "No I need help more!" These sincere calls for help are nothing new to me. Many days of the week I find myself surrounded by eager young faces seeking help for everything from their ABC's to their algebra homework, from their bible verses to their coloring pages. Tutoring is one of my favorite things to do out of school. There is a lot of pressure on me to do well in school and because there is always someone around to help me out, I like to give back to my community and help other students. Even though I took up tutoring in order to help students, I constantly find that they are the ones who help me. They have taught me to be assertive, compassionate, and unwaveringly patient. This symbiotic relationship has certainly taught me that in life when you give, you also receive. The opportunity to serve and help the children in my community has made me a better person, while spreading smiles and knowledge.

Undergraduate / 'Malaria' -Common app essay - experience at a Nigerian hospital which changed my life [6]

500 word max (this is exactly 500)
prompt: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.

The summer of my freshmen year, I followed Dr. Akin around for a few weeks at Royan Hospital in Lagos Nigeria. We saw numerous patients but there was one that I will never forget.

As we walked into the hospital room, my eyes met a young girl, around my age, sitting on the examination table. As the adults spoke, the girl sat motionlessly then all of a sudden, she glanced over at me and began to cry.

After we left the room Dr. Akin told me the girl, Bola, had a bacterial infection called Actinomycosis, but due to poor conditions her village, she also had Cerebral Malaria. "Sadly, she wont be able to go back to school," he said. "She was an exceptional student. In her home there is an entire cabinet dedicated solely to her awards and certificates, everything from music to science. I have met many talented students but she was truly gifted. She would have accomplished extraordinary things."

Would have. Those words burned deeply in my mind the entire summer. Why did it have to be would have? This young girl could have grownup to be something great; if only she lived in a better environment, if only she lived the life I lived. Bola was undoubtedly upset that day I met her; however, I believe the reason she began to cry so suddenly when she looked at me, was because I reminded her of herself, or rather, I reminded her of who she used to be.

For the first time I realized just how lucky I was to live in the United States, but still my heart ached for Bola. Two days later, my family and I left Lagos, Nigeria, for the long journey back to the good ol' U. S. of A. While on the plane, I thought of her and how she had aspirations just like me, but had them all ripped away in that hospital room. I realized that with good health, knowledge, and dedication I had the whole world in the palm of my hand, just waiting for me to make a move. So somewhere over the Atlantic ocean, at 30,000 feet, I decided I would become a doctor. I would dedicate my life to every person who ever had their dreams crushed in a hospital room.

It truly pains me to know that there are children all over the world who will never get a chance to experience the wonders of their childhood. I strongly believe that everyone, especially children, deserve a beautiful life and sickness should never hold anyone back from their full potential. I pursue a career in healthcare because I desire more than anything, to create a better future by saving lives and saving dreams in the special way only healthcare professionals can. I have worked extra hard all through high school to achieve this noble dream and I know that with hard work and the memory of that poor girl, my dream will become reality.