Writing Feedback / IELTS shopping is replaced by other leisure activities ,it is positive or negative [4]

In today's globalized world , shopping is been popped up dramatically and it is impossible to deny the necessity of the people's need. moreover it has got significant role in the world economy and advertisement inspire the custemers to do shopping.

Initially ,new products are available in everyday in the markets , advertisement has major role to introduce the product and influence the people through mass media .However some buy the products and others do window shopping to improve the lifestyle comfort . Nowadays people do not have much leisure time as they live in a single family and people are forced to engage more part time or full time work to achieve their personal and family requirements .Same way shopping enable the people to socialise and refresh the mind .

secondely,shopping dramatically rose the world economy ,which contribution is unavoidable aspects ,especially in today's financial climate .Ontheother hand, it has created lot of job opportunities . for instance, a shopping mole. which is the hardwork of lots of people means builders ,enginears and manymore .eventually people may pay various taxes.Which will definitely boost the countries financial states.

However shopping has few adverse effect aswell like , it may cause to decline some other activities such as sports games. while we could use our time wisely then can solve these consequence . moreover when go for shopping , people may get some walking exercise.

In the nutshell , when we go through all the effect of shopping ,it seems to me positively rather than negative.

Writing Feedback / Government should support student's or professional athelets ? Students! [3]

Government has responsibility to support students as well as professionals for their sports activities , but in my point of view , it is essential to give more priority

for students as they are future pillers.

arts and sports should be mandatory to their school subjects .Because when they grow up physical education has significant role to maintain their physical
fitness . as the theoratical knowledge may help the child for mental wellbeing Moreover it will enhance the student's self esteem which may enable the,m to cope up with any situations when they grow up.and it could be their bread as well . for instance , sachin tendulkar , an indian batman .he has achieved , money a.nd pride.

on the same way ,extracurricular activities will strengthen the qualites of life such as team work and discipline and more . Most of the adolescents are suffering from stress due to hormonal changes it may turned to suicidal tendency but it could be avoided some extent through sports and arts activites. Even our children are suffering from obesity ,this is one of the worlds burning problems,if they practise physical activities from school life , we could overcome these problem.

Ontheothadeerhand, professionals could be achieved their desired moneny by either donations or advertisement . they have oher opportunties like sponsership whereas students have no other way to fullfill their ambitons.

To conclude, i strongly believe students are more deserve to get government's supports than professional athlets.

Writing Feedback / iIelts essay;government should expand the road or car owners [4]

The number of cars keeps increasing,so road systems should be expanded.some people think the goverment should pay for it,while others think
the car owners should pay for it. what,s your opinion?

Roads are inevitable part of our daily life.Unless it is developed to accomodate increasing number of car,it will aggravate the traffic problems in

cities,however it is unfair,government is expecting the car owners to pay for new development.

Firstly,car owners are already burdend by various type of faxes,on purchase of car and on periodic basic.It will boost the tax revenue of the

government.this money should be used for the construction of new roads,flyovers,bridges.In india ideally,govenrment funds are used for new development,
but it is quite unacceptable to charge care owners to toll fee for there developments.

Further more,It is the responsibility of the wellfare state to provide basic infrastructure to the people,state should use the available international funds
such as world bank,with very low interest rate.

On the other hand,some people are argue that,It is the responsability of the car owners to pay for the expensess rather than the government,which

decline the attitude of the policymakers towards the matter.

To conclude,It is clear from the above statement,which is the absolute responsibility of government to keep well established loads other facilies.