mayfl0wer
Jan 2, 2013
Undergraduate / 'Mother's relocation to Georgia' - Common Application Personal Statement [2]
Struggling to accept every school I applied to rejected me, I chose to fabricate a story where limited financial aid was my sole reason for not attending college. Stuck in this victim mentality that was typical of myself and high school at the time, I continued to believe no high-achieving university wanted a senior who scored roughly a 1400 on his SATs and graduated-just barely-in the lower half of his class.
accept THAT.
"typical of myself and high school" - high school cannot have a victim mentality.
This is all good until the last paragraph when you say "your school."
Which is 'your school?' Because this is the common app, all schools will think that you think it's good to be transferred to however many schools you applied for.
Don't be so specific and instead say 'change of scenery / environment' or something.
Help with mine?
Struggling to accept every school I applied to rejected me, I chose to fabricate a story where limited financial aid was my sole reason for not attending college. Stuck in this victim mentality that was typical of myself and high school at the time, I continued to believe no high-achieving university wanted a senior who scored roughly a 1400 on his SATs and graduated-just barely-in the lower half of his class.
accept THAT.
"typical of myself and high school" - high school cannot have a victim mentality.
This is all good until the last paragraph when you say "your school."
Which is 'your school?' Because this is the common app, all schools will think that you think it's good to be transferred to however many schools you applied for.
Don't be so specific and instead say 'change of scenery / environment' or something.
Help with mine?