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Jul 13, 2009
Graduate / MBA demanding/challenging situation Essay [9]
SecuringHaving secured a job at company T, a leading company in the field of communication, was overwhelming especially in athe market scenario of 2002 when there was an overall slowdown in the technology sector. Although the compensation offered was not up to my expectations, company T was still the lifeline as my family's financial position at that time was not very good, and my salary was crucial to meet the household expenses. "I will prove myself very soon to deserve a promotion and a considerable hike", I heard saying myself on the first day of my professional career.
As days went by, my professional experience turned out to be completely different than what I had expected and dreamed of during my previous predictable student life.
^the bold part does not quite gel in with the sentence. Consider revising it or just omit it.
After a month of induction training I was assigned a project in 3rd generation wireless domain, a field totally alien to me. My job was very demanding and involved writing complicated codes for advanced (3G) mobile phone applications . Since everything was new to me Iwas finding the going a tad too difficultfound things quite difficult . It was during this time that Shankar, one of my colleagues, went out of his way to help me complete my assignments and he did this without any expectation . He helped me with my work for three consecutive months. As it happens with most things in life, Eventually , this phase of challenge passed and I came up triumphant, thanks to the help rendered by Shankar.
'phase of challenge'...not quite feeling it.
how were you 'triumphant'.
At the end of the year, my contribution to the project was recognized and I was rewarded with good grades and a salary hike. I was happy that ultimately I could achieve what I aspired for but my happiness was short lived. I discovered that my friend, who had helped me during my project, had not fared well as his official contribution to this project wasvery a lot less.
I wasnow faced with the tough question, as to whether toI should report to my manager about my friend's role in my achievements or to just ignore the incidentnot . The easy way out was to sit silently and bask in my newfound glory. On the other hand there was athe potential risk of losing my hike and my reputation. I also risked jeopardizing my future growth in company T. DiscussingI discussed ]the issue at hand this issue with my parents and after a deep subsequentsubsequent deep reflection, I finally decided to go ahead and shareinform my manager about Shankar's involvement in my success . I was very nervous about how my manager reacts would react to the news . To my great surprise, my manager appreciated my honesty and courage and took steps to salvage my friend's appraisal in the light of these new revelations. I felt a surge of relief pass through me and felt that a great weight had been removed from my conscience.
I feelthat my action then was justified not only because it was the fair thing to do but also because it did a lot of good to me in the long run. Apart from gaining a trustworthy friend, it established my credentials as an honest and upright man and helped me to get many positions of responsibilities later. Apart from my personal gains, my action did a lot of good to the work environment at my office, as people realized that honesty and helpfulness were a valued attributes and that it really paid to be nice guy!!
^The double exlamation mark does show an informal approach to this essay...
This experience reinforced my conviction thatan ethical behavior is always the best option, no matter how difficult it might be in the short term.
^ethical behaviour difficult in the short term?
Few mistakes here and there. By the way, what was the challenging situation? THe project. Or telling the manager about Shankar?
As days went by, my professional experience turned out to be completely different than what I had expected and dreamed of during my previous predictable student life.
^the bold part does not quite gel in with the sentence. Consider revising it or just omit it.
After a month of induction training I was assigned a project in 3rd generation wireless domain, a field totally alien to me. My job was very demanding and involved writing complicated codes for advanced (3G) mobile phone applications . Since everything was new to me I
'phase of challenge'...not quite feeling it.
how were you 'triumphant'.
At the end of the year, my contribution to the project was recognized and I was rewarded with good grades and a salary hike. I was happy that ultimately I could achieve what I aspired for but my happiness was short lived. I discovered that my friend, who had helped me during my project, had not fared well as his official contribution to this project was
I was
I feel
^The double exlamation mark does show an informal approach to this essay...
This experience reinforced my conviction that
^ethical behaviour difficult in the short term?
Few mistakes here and there. By the way, what was the challenging situation? THe project. Or telling the manager about Shankar?