Writing Feedback / THE MEANING OF SUCCESS IN EVERY PERCEPTION OF PEOPLE [4]

Be a successful person is a dream for everyone in this world. People will do anything to reach their success. There are many perception of success; a few people believe that success if they succeed to raising their family, there are many people that think success is look from treasure, there are some of people also assume that success is obtain professional careers.

The first view is a number of people can say themselves reaching success with take care their family well. It is a success to raising children and caring the husband or wife. The measurement can be seen from the family that is maintained properly

Second, this is almost everyone have a outlook that look it from their wealth. Mostly they are money oriented people. The people consider the more money they get the more successful they think.

Moreover, look alike with my latest point, some of people get a sense of success from their professional goals. They will do a lot of ways to be promoted, it is an important thing more than anything. They want to be the one who is on top.

In conclusion, people must have a horizon in their way of thinking regarding "SUCCESS". They presume success is if they can build a good family, there is people just think they will be success if being rich, the last, people who have a perception of success when they get a good position in a company. Basically, for choosing to be successful is great but we have to do it in a good way.

Writing Feedback / SOLUTIONS OF BAD BEHAVIOR IN SCHOOLS TO CREATE A GOOD ENVIRONMENT [3]

There must have been few bad boys in our school a long time ago. Am I wrong? The school have many solutions for bad behavior; a school involve in create of positive working atmosphere, the teacher should have a power to punish a mischievous children, schools has to bonding a relation with their parents.

First, the solution of bad behavior in school is the school has create a positive learning area for all. It means the school set all the rules to maintain the stability of school security. Absolutely all of parties have to obey this, it works if all do it.

Second, for make a good environment in school is the teacher have strength to handle all rebellious kid. Many teachers do not want to know what their grader do. The teacher should have a participation to control naughty kid with give a penalty.

Moreover, similar with my latest point, the school should have many solutions of bad behavior for establish a nice sphere. The school must make a good connection with the parents. Due to the fact it will be a good start to make children should be careful what they to do. Schools can report what the child's fault has done anytime. The parents must have responsibility for this.

In conclusion, school should bear the burden to find solutions of bad behavior with get involved build a great circle, the teacher have a good strength to convict the rebel children, between school and parent should have a good communication. All parties have to work together for make it happen.

Writing Feedback / PROBLEMS OF EDUCATION IN DEVELOPING COUNTRY [7]

There are many problems in developing country. One of the problem is in education field it cause most of child be at work in tender age, not many schools in a particular area, education is an important key for improving the economics of the country.

First, you have to know education problems in developing country it because of child have to work in green age. They have to help financial problems occurred in their family. There is no option for not working, they must to make money for daily needs.

Second, in developing country has problem of education it cause the lack of number of schools. It makes limitation of access to get an education. This is a serious problem in developing country because no equalization availability of schools at remote area.

Moreover, identic with my latest point, education is a necessary matters for regenerate economy in developing country. If a country wants to be more developed, it has to have a good human resources. Surely it has to start from education.

In conclusion, developing country still has problems of education in it. It such as children have to work in young age , there is no dissemination of schools, education is significant point to raise economics of developing country. Furthermore, we have to find a way out of all these problems.

Writing Feedback / ZOO IS IMPORTANT PLACE YOU HAVE TO KNOW [6]

A zoo had been interesting place for most of people. Moreover, zoo is a necessary place you have to know due to the fact that zoo is a place for animals shelter, it is need to save wild animals, children can study about animals easily.

First, you have to know how important zoo it cause zoo can be animal conservation. It can be a home of many animals that help their life. For instant, there is many certain animals that are maintained individually. It should not occurred because they are supposed to be in wild nature

Second, zoo is a substantial point because it is necessary rescue most of wild species that threatened by human. There is many beast in endangered situation. For example, rhinos species it is highly threatened in Sumatera

Moreover, similar with my latest point, zoo can be a house of children that want to learn about animals further more. They will know there is many species of animal around the world that they have to know.

In conclusion, people should know how big important a zoo is. It is necessary for animal protection, be conservation's spot of endangered animals and place for a child knows about animals. We always have to support zoos and tell to our child.

Writing Feedback / BE VEGETARIAN FOR BETTER ANIMAL LIFE [2]

This times, being a vegetarian is the current trend. Furthermore be vegetarian is good for animal life it cause make healthy meals is possible without eating meats, it is no need to kill animal for food, many people pick to be a vegetarian for moral reasons.

First, be vegetarian is better for animal life because make some good foods is enable without eating foods. People can cook some meals with another ingredients such as fruits, vegetables, nuts, soy and even more. You can use vegetative material for make a healthy food.

Second, people can safe animal life with be vegetarian it cause no need to kill animal for make a meal. You can substitute animal protein with vegetable protein that have in common for in its usefulness. Vegetable protein has equal number of protein rather than animal protein.

Moreover, identic with my latest point be vegetarian is good, due to the fact that most of people choose for being a vegetarian because of moral reasons. Animals is one of creation of GOD that we have to respect their life.

In conclusion, people should be vegetarian for animal life. We can eat well without make animals for diet, people can shift animal protein because it is not necessary to kill animal, for some people kill animals is inhumane. Maybe it is hard to us, but we have to think twice regarding this matter.

Writing Feedback / TED SUMMARY: SARAH CAIN THE INTROVERT PERSON [4]

Sarah Cain said that introverted person are different from being a prude. They just want to take less risks of whatever they do and happen to them. They tend to responded all things slowly. It is a nightmare for an introverted person because they are tough enough to socialize in school or work area. Based on fact, an introverted person more careful than an extroverted person to deliver a message when they work with their co-worker.

Three points from Cain; do not push introverted person to excite their feelings cause they have their own way to do the job, an introverted person please be wilderness for feeling something, lastly take something good from your own "suitcase" and start speak softly.

Writing Feedback / CONSUMERISM CULTURE IS BEHIND ADVERTISING [5]

Did you ever see a repetitive advertisement that played 3 times or more in sequence? It must be stuck in your head. Therefore, people should beware of consumerism culture among us it cause the industry engage the potential consumer to buy their new product for make us pleased, the cunning one of advertising put on fabulous and fancy figure, sometimes kid force their parents to buy them things.

The ads aims to persuade people for buying a product will make them happier. Generally they offer a lovely dream in it that consists of delight. The truth is, it would not happen like that.

One of the trick that used by industry they take fabulous, fancy and éclat figure; artist, celebrity, singer, entrepreneur and public figure. It means, actually the figure is already good even without that product.

The worst, children put pressure on their parents to buy them a product that showed by the advertising. Not sure the parents have money for buy them that thing.

In conclusion, as the evidence shows, consumer promised an enjoyment by the industry in order to buy their product, put a public figure as a representation of the product, moreover youth force their parents to buy thing. They so persuasive in many ways to urge us for buying their product. It is a shameful if we just accept what advertising does to us.

Writing Feedback / TIME FOR KNOWING BEFORE TRAVELING. [2]

Globalization makes every single land getting closer. Traveling is to be a top list every people in the world, it is such a trend among us. People mark their map to find a new leisure experience. Consequently, before taking a holiday you should know a few of informations behind traveling due to the fact that there are positive and negative in traveling.

The positivity of traveling are walk overseas can open your minds. You could see other cultures that can broaden the horizon of nation diversities and even their personality. Tourists splurge much money that is good for raising the prosperity of people around the tourist destination.

Lastly, even though traveling have some positive it have negativity on the other side. Tourism can affect natural environment. Vandalism occurs happened to coral reefs at Bali's see recently. Local culture threatened with foreign culture brought by overseas tourists. It cause local citizens have to adapt inevitably.

In conclusion, among of the positive and negative have a same portion of effect. Tourism can bring some advantage and disadvantage for nature and people. So, please don't do negative activity and please traveling wisely.