Writing Feedback / The controversial of Trump was elected as USA president [2]

Donald trump becomes a polemic after winning the election of the president in the USA. All of the politicians got stunning when they heard related to the decision of the election. Donald Trump becomes controversy after he proclaimed to against Moslem and spoke rudely in the campaign. According to economist.com said, Donald trump has won the election because their parties (republican and independent) were voting trump to become president that peaked at more or less 85 % compared to Clinton was supported by democratic that just peaked at 23%. The other reasons. All of the white people voted trump due to the fact that Trump will uplift the white people.

Writing Feedback / Reading books help to extend knowledge without wasting much money. TED summary [3]

one of the aims of human beings is good life like happiness, full of money, and having a good relationship. a good life is tremendously crucial to be found by all of the people in the world. Lopez as speaker in TED explains how to reach a good life. He gave three steps how to get a good life. Firstly, finding a mentor. a mentor is a shortcut to broaden our knowledge. Mostly all people who are popular in the world have a mentor like Alexander the great, Bill gates, and Jackie chan. People have to find a great mentor who has 10 times ability than they are. The teacher will guide and give a shortcut to achieve the purpose. Secondly, humble and grateful have to be implemented in ourselves. Commonly, all of the people forget related to humble and grateful after reaching the purpose. It will ruin the achievement. Thirdly, reading books help to extend knowledge without wasting much money. Reading books are shortcut to broaden our knowledge in business major and social life. Everyone wants to get a good life, yet they do not want to follow the rule. Loving your life, doing all the best what you do, and beautifying your life are a motto that is given by Lopez.

Writing Feedback / I disagree that the air travel is the big cause to generate big air pollution across the globe [2]

Restricting on air travel will be the best solution to decline air pollution

Air travel is judged for the most cause that produces tons of pollution in the world. in my point of view, i totally disagree related to air travel is the most cause to generate big air pollution across the globe.

Pollution is a problem that has to solve by individuals and government to make the world be better, the best way to prevent this case is restricting air travel. At this present era, plane for air traveling is so crowded so that it produces a big amount of pollutions probably, for example, years by years, not-government-organization like Garuda and Lion adds their air crafts so that it is able to produce pollution frequently. The other reasons, Aftur the name of fuel air travel is a hard substance that can warm air circumstance easily. As result, government and individuals should regulate to prevent the bad condition. Preventing can be conducted by restriction of air travel in order to prevent blooming of aircraft that cause warm of an environment.

However, the individuals and government have to look other side condition wisely that causes of air pollution like vehicles or factories. Vehicles in the world years by years is increasing dramatically. People utilize vehicles to full fill their activities intensively. Does it make air pollution for worst ? for example, in developing countries, vehicles like a motorbike and car are blooming and it is not regulating correctly. As the result, air pollution becomes un-control and the air is not fresh again. Because of that reasons, the government should not restrict air travel, yet restriction has to be located in vehicles or factories that produce air pollution most of the time compared to air travel.

To sum up, i totally disagree related to restriction of air pollution of air travel to prevent air pollution. The government has to look the other reason that causes pollution in our environment wisely.