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Anxiety VS College Students first draft

2 - Maybe consider focusing on the audience for the research paper and the pool from which the test results will...

Research Papersisabella05 - Jun 15, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
All children should be made to wear school uniforms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - The word force is too strong for this discussion. You should be using positive words instead of negative...

Writing FeedbackHan Yujin - Jun 14, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Personal Statement for Common App Essay about Cultural Identity

2 - This is a very engaging essay that clearly shows your cultural background and what it means to your youth....

Undergraduatescnwanna - Jun 13, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
people should be able to keep all the money they earn and not pay tax to the state. agree or not

3 - While the idea of keeping all earned income sounds appealing in principle, it's important to consider the broader implications....

Writing Feedbacknorah14 - Jun 13, 2024markzily - Jul 6, 2024
The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.

2 - The summary overview is not very effective seeing as it is a run-on sentence. This should be divided into...

Writing Feedbackhynnie - Jun 13, 2024Holt - Jun 20, 2024
youngsters should be required to have full-time education until they are 18. Agree or disagree

2 - I know this is a task 2 writing essay. Why are you shouting about it? You should temper...

Writing FeedbackKimkimsuzi111 - Jun 12, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in

2 - The essay is short of the minimum requirement by 2 words. That is too bad. You will still receive...

Writing FeedbackNglinh177 - Jun 12, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
A short motivation letter for studying mathematics - 400 to 500 words, but involves change of fields

2 - This letter is very weak. It is not the kind of motivational letter that would catch the attention of...

Lettersraj8799 - Jun 11, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
towns constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable for residents.problem and solution

2 - Decades does not properly reflect a synonym for centuries. Centuries equivalent words that you could have used are...

Writing Feedbackslowenie - Jun 11, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS QUESTION: Are GMOs as a viable solution to feed the increasing population?

2 - Complete the statement. What are the 2 downsides you are most concerned about? Create an accurate thesis statement...

Writing FeedbackSakuradesu - Jun 11, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
in many cities, people these days know little about their neighbors and lack a sense of community.

2 - The essay is simply too long for a 40 minute writing task. You need to learn to write in...

Writing Feedbackjenny_0507 - Jun 11, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Living in big cities is bad for people's health

2 - The main problem that this essay will encounter in the preliminary scoring consideration is the lack of clarity in...

Writing Feedbackhabitien0108 - Jun 10, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do u think it's a positive or negative development?

2 - I am not sure if you can actually write this essay using the same number of words during the...

Writing FeedbackMinhAnkFam - Jun 10, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
BODY TASK 1 the salary of Anthropology

2 - With only 136 words written, this task 1 essay will automatically get a failing score. You have to write...

Writing Feedbackthanh2509 - Jun 10, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001.

2 - There is a minimum 2 sentence requirement for the summary overview. You wrote a run-on sentence instead. Unfortunately, the...

Writing FeedbackThomasDickson - Jun 9, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Many city dwellers these days don't get enough physical exercise. Write causes and solutions

2 - This does not have the same meaning as physical activities or physical exercise. You must improve your English...

Writing FeedbackLuktcong - Jun 9, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
unpaid work - compulsory or not

3 - @Holt so could you examine this essay in all 4 criteria of the ielts writing test? thank you so...

Writing Feedbackdohkyungsoofc - Jun 8, 2024dohkyungsoofc - Jun 13, 2024
IELTS TASK 2 about focusing on endangered animal or human problems

3 - So I should give my opinion in the introduction and summarize my points in the conclusion right. And the...

Writing Feedbacknatalia3k - Jun 8, 2024natalia3k - Jun 17, 2024
The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

2 - The report is too long and repetitive. You are over stretching the report in an effort to use as...

Writing Feedbacklitherine - Jun 8, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS Essay about the necessary of recycling laws

2 - The writer's opinion is an integral part of the preliminary task scoring requirement. Therefore, it is imperative that you...

Writing FeedbackCTA - Jun 8, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

2 - I cannot say if you did a good job with writing a response to the prompt without reading the...

Writing FeedbackKIMANHLE - Jun 7, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ( TOPIC CRIME )

2 - Oops! You made a mistake in your writer's opinion presentation. Let's compare the original question with your response: ...

Writing Feedbackthhoa - Jun 6, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
TASK 2: Government regulation in competition

2 - Do not over discuss your presentations. Keep in mind that there is a 40 minute writing limit for the...

Writing Feedbackdinhtrang2905 - Jun 5, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Ielts 2 - Traveling to other places - Agree/Disagree

2 - There are 2 reasons that this essay will receive a failing score. The first is in relation to the...

Writing FeedbackBaoNgocPham - Jun 4, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Task 1 Cam 10 Test 1 picture in the book or internet

2 - The summary overview should be composed of at least 2 sentences, covering at least 40 words. Your presentation does...

Writing Feedbacktranhishere - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies

2 - Unfortunately, your essay does not meet the minimum word requirement. So you will not manage to get a passing...

Writing FeedbackUrmom123 - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone.

2 - You should be clearer when referencing this term. It would have been better to use the term "despite"...

Writing Feedbackhhvy - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELT WRITING TASK 2: competition for university

2 - There is no reference to opinions being divided in the original discussion topic presentation. You cannot use that...

Writing FeedbackMalaila - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instruments

2 - The reporting of the information is accurate. It is well presented and shows that the image was truly analyzed...

Writing Feedbackthaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
THE VIEWS OF GIVING HOMEWORK TO CHILDREN

2 - This is an incomplete prompt restatement. You cannot just say that you will show the 2 views, you...

Writing Feedbackeirlys - Jun 2, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
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