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The prison industrial complex and the effects on minorities

2 - You are discussing modern slavery in the form of illegal immigrapht prisoners right? You should establish that right from...

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Soccer journey - an identity, an interest, or a talent that defines them in an essential way.

2 - The essay is too long. I found myself becoming bored by the third paragraph and wishing you would get...

Writing Feedbacknadine_pf - Jul 18, 2024Holt - Jul 19, 2024
What problem does cyber insecurity cause? How to solve it

2 - This term does not exist in the English vocabulary. Either you mean "hyper-connected" or "cyber connected". This lack...

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high school entrance exam - the most difficult time in your life

2 - Is this a statement meant to respond to an English writing task or are you writing this as an...

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Writing Task 1 - The chart below ahows the percentage of female members of parliament in 5 European

3 - I think once the information in your paragraph matches the information in the graph, you will be set. You...

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Foundation in Korean language - GKS study plan. Pusan national university

2 - Do not prolong the before arrival plans. You are focusing too much on pre-arrival plans that have yet to...

ScholarshipEzinne - Jul 17, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people

2 - Your essay is over discussed and will not be completed within the 40 minute time frame. Aside from that,...

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Many think that in today's world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

4 - Your essay does not meet the requirement of 250 words in Ielts Writing task 2 and try to improve...

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Computer study / electronics - Personal Statement

2 - The personal statement is not a long discussion of your academic interests. Rather, it is an introduction to your...

UndergraduateSyke - Jul 17, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals

2 - The question provided for the discussion is "To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement provided?"....

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the net

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Gks study plan for Undergraduate for law 2024/25

2 - Your pre arrival language preparations must be of the ongoing kind rather than the future preparation kind. It is...

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How would the specific programmes of study in Ireland - response essay

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athlete

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Personal Statement: Can a cat teach a seagull how to fly?

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Undergraduatejarkish - Jul 16, 2024Ezinne - Jul 17, 2024
why you should leave everything and move to the beach!

2 - I seem to read a contradiction in this presentation. You are discussing living by the beach right? Living by...

Research Papersjamz - Jul 15, 2024Holt - Jul 17, 2024
GKS-G KOREAN LANGUAGE MAJOR, PERSONAL STATEMENT

4 - @vivibimil I'd recommend focusing more on your transformative experiences in Korea, detailing how they shaped your academic and personal...

Scholarshipvivibimil - Jul 15, 2024Vera24 - Aug 4, 2024
Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase.

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How an island has change before and after the construction of tourist amenities

2 - The problem with this analysis is that you are not completely analyzing the before aspect of the map illustration....

Writing Feedbacklanadelrey - Jul 15, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Moving Toward Zero Waste Research Essay

2 - What exactly are you referring to here? You need to properly introduce example to your reader by way...

Research Paperslcolon - Jul 15, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Short statement of purpose for Lund MSc about accounting and management control

2 - I do not really see how the program will be helping you further your training in the aforementioned sections....

GraduateJunefish - Jul 14, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases.

3 - health care -> the health care known fatal in past time -> known as fatal in past time...

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[ WRITING TASK 1] The charts below show annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in

2 - Your summary overview should be at least 2 sentences long. You should add an enumeration of the sources of...

Writing Feedbackhana115 - Jul 14, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The Mental Affects Of The Pandemic Were Worse Than The Actual Illness Itself

2 - Why not consider indicating that the Corona virus lockdown created 2 instead of just 1 pandemic? One is...

Research PapersANG2405743 - Jul 13, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The diagram below shows how recycled paper is made. Summarise the information.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative

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criticism on the quality of letter of motivation for aerospace engineering masters

2 - Oops. This is too much of an exaggeration. You cannot fly a plane at the age of 8....

Graduatemegamind1 - Jul 12, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think

2 - This type of discussion requires you to use a comparison point of view for each reasoning paragraph. You must...

Writing Feedbacktheanh1204 - Jul 12, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo...)

2 - You have actually spent too much time justifying the causes of extinction as caused by man when you should...

Writing Feedbackevelynsayhii - Jul 12, 2024Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

2 - Avoid writing in run-on mode for your summary overview. You are given a sentence allowance of 3-5 sentence per...

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