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Essay on the importance of use of force.

2 - Make sure to reference the author before the quotation int he paragraph. That way when you reference the...

Writing FeedbackJorge74 - Apr 19, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Waterloo Computer Engineering: Reasons for choosing your program

2 - I would avoid referencing "since I was young" in this case. Most reviewers tend to see such references as...

Undergraduateakmaster101 - Apr 19, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
a) give up to three practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connection

2 - Your reference got as far as the knowledge and skills discussion in the essay. In fact, you did this...

Scholarshipthangussh - Apr 19, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
IELTS writing: Reasons and solutions for teenagers prefering socializing online to meeting in person

2 - The essay is overwritten. You should not write more than 300 words for the task 2 essay. That is...

Writing FeedbackNnop - Apr 17, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types from 2000 and 2009

2 - It is not enough to simply repeat the first part of the directions in the summary overview. You have...

Writing FeedbackQuien - Apr 17, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other.

2 - Nobody is asking if the statement is true or not. So you do not have to indicate that...

Writing Feedbackjasanh - Apr 17, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
People are living longer lives now than they did in the past.

2 - Nobody is arguing this information with you. There is no need to provide an attestation in the paragraph....

Writing FeedbackLy Ly - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1 - national consumer spending

2 - The essay is incomplete. The summary overview does not state several considerations such as : 1. What is...

Writing Feedbackhttra - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Education at the University of Twente - motivation letter

2 - This is not a well developed motivational letter. It is short, which makes it a good draft. An acceptable...

LettersNovellaleedeman - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
News plays an important part in most people's lives

2 - The essay is due to receive an immediate failing score. Kindly look at the guide writing question again. It...

Writing Feedbackhanahahaha - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Abstract: Relationship between customers and supermarkets

2 - I think that you should avoid the mention of the Post Covid 19-era in the paper. It is not...

Writing Feedbackecho5016 - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it

2 - The first paragraph is not well developed. The idea behind the original topic got lost in the paraphrasing. The...

Writing FeedbackBAONGOC030815 - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Many women now have children later in life. What are the causes? What are the pros and cons?

2 - Avoid the use of over used and exaggerated English reference phrases such as this one. Examiners consider its...

Writing Feedbackhvnnnn - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - The essay is going to receive an immediate failing score. A quick review of the given statement shows that...

Writing Feedbackmikeelenka23 - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Preventing foreign companies from opening businesses to protect the local companies

2 - All IELTS Task 2 essays are single opinion essays unless otherwise specified as a comparative discussion. Since this...

Writing Feedbackitsismeafighter - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The Impact of Social Media on Mental Health

2 - The introduction paragraph needs more clarity. You cannot go from social media to virtual reality (VR) without first establishing...

Writing Feedbackjasminali123 - Apr 13, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
(WRITING TASK 2) Cosmetic surgery

2 - There is no need to say this. You already established the discussion parameters within the prompt restatement and...

Writing Feedbackthuyanh1910 - Apr 12, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
In some countries, many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.

2 - One of the immediate noticeable problems that will reduce your score is the way you have disregarded the English...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthuyha2001 - Apr 11, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
a huge money and time should be spent on wild animals or human population

2 - The prompt restatement is not clear. I am not sure if it is because the word choices are incorrect...

Writing Feedbackkhanhhuyen48936 - Apr 10, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Coming of Age - Personal Statement for GKS Scholarship

2 - Remove the reference to language study. There is a specific prompt that will allow you to discuss that in...

Scholarshipjayseong_id - Apr 10, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Do you think it is better to do schoolwork with other students or to work alone?

2 - I do not know where to start with the review of this essay. It is simply not well written,...

Writing Feedbackhoangokkk205 - Apr 10, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Point of view different from a teacher or employer - FIT Portfolio

2 - The tendency of your response is to be too vague. You are not making enough specific references in the...

Undergraduateelipulpo - Apr 9, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Going with EV electric cars - resarch paper

2 - You cannot make vague references in a research paper. The model, year of release, and reasons for the...

Research PapersCorey Z - Apr 9, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Living away from home during university? - Ielts writing task 2

2 - Unfortunately, the way this essay is written is quite incoherent. It will definitely get the lowest marks possible in...

Writing FeedbackDeverX - Apr 9, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The following graph shows the percentage of unemployment rates for the female in the UK.

2 - The summary overview and analytical paragraphs do not feel complete. It comes across as having missing information. There is...

Writing FeedbackHoaitam123 - Apr 9, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The Potential of Artificial Intelligence in Healthcare - AI Persuasive Research Essay for ENG102

2 - The presentation can do with a better introduction. It is important to look at the historical problems of healthcare...

Research Papersceene - Apr 8, 2024Holt - Apr 19, 2024
Writing task 1: online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010

2 - It is always best to indicate the number of images provided in the summary overview. That way the reader...

Writing Feedbacka pearl - Apr 7, 2024Holt - Apr 19, 2024
AAS - Translation Studies : Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - While you did present some good reasons in the earlier paragraphs for your master's course choice, it is not...

Graduatemiccowwy - Apr 7, 2024Holt - Apr 19, 2024
IELTS WT2: spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

2 - There is a problem in the opening paragraph. There is no real restatement. as required by the task accuracy...

Writing Feedbacktanquocnguyen - Apr 7, 2024Holt - Apr 19, 2024
In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about cultures. Do you agree or disagree?

4 - Hi there, Your essay is well-written in my opinion, the idea is fully developed and some advanced words are...

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