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WRITING TASK 1 TEST 1 CAMBRIDGE 17 (TOWN OF NORBITON)

2 - The image is over analyzed. You need to write only up to 200 words for this task otherwise you...

Writing Feedbackdoquynh - Mar 7, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Motivational essay to study a bachelor degree at the Copenhaguen Business School

2 - Please edit the beginning of your essay. You should be focusing only on the motivational aspect of your interest...

Lettersoller210 - Mar 6, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
GKS - Personal statement /psychology/

2 - I am confused by this application essay. Are you applying for the U or G program? It appears you...

ScholarshipSuunzii - Mar 6, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Visitors that traveled to five countries in four years - IELTS

2 - The summary overview is incomplete and will receive a failing score. The summary of information should be represented in...

Writing Feedbackkaylin nguyen - Mar 5, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Hosting international events - IELTS writing task 2

2 - The first thing I noticed about this writing was that you only wrote 256 words. I feel that is...

Writing FeedbackAnniehoangpham - Mar 4, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
IELTS TASK 2 It is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centre

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback!...

Writing Feedbacksophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024sophiemoore62 - Mar 9, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 The graphs below show the cinema attendance in Australia and the average cinema

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback!...

Writing Feedbacksophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024sophiemoore62 - Mar 9, 2024
Why do you select New Zealand?

3 - @carpediem24h Please, identify a challenge which you think New Zealand is in advantage to help solve in Indonesia....

Scholarshipcarpediem24h - Feb 27, 2024Aroma - Mar 8, 2024
Motivation letter to Germany embassy in computer science for master degree

3 - @Nazfe73 Your motivation letter only talked about your personal interest. How does it benefit the people of Yemen; I...

LettersNazfe73 - Feb 26, 2024Aroma - Mar 8, 2024
Colors - Subject of Personal Importance -- Scholarship essay

3 - @Holt I was thinking since the prompt says to choose ANY subject of importance to me, so what I...

Undergraduatetuturu - Mar 4, 2024tuturu - Mar 8, 2024
Consumption of processed food in Australia - Ielts writing task 1

2 - Was there a mention of the inclusive years for this time frame? For accuracy purposes, the year coverage...

Writing Feedbacknhattlee - Mar 4, 2024Holt - Mar 7, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2 correction - Ragonean

2 - Thank you for letting me know that you are self-studying for the test. I will make sure to help...

Writing FeedbackRagonean - Mar 3, 2024Holt - Mar 7, 2024
Masters of science in Agriculture and food security

2 - You need to revise this essay. There should be 2 university choices presented. Either 2 universities with the same...

ScholarshipOlinga Stephen - Mar 3, 2024Holt - Mar 7, 2024
Unrestricted fresh water usage - IELTS task 2

2 - There is no need to indicate this part. You already stated that this is your opinion. It is...

Writing FeedbackJuicy_Goochie - Mar 3, 2024Holt - Mar 7, 2024
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Nuclear Energy

2 - The research paper had a very clear start and offered an exciting promise for the information to be presented....

Research Papersbamzooks - Mar 2, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
The Crucial Role of School in Shaping Lives

2 - As an essay writing guide or outline, I would have to say that this bullet listing works well. It...

Writing Feedbackshahzaibpk - Mar 2, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
IELTS writing task 2 - Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning...

2 - You are not providing a thesis statement as required in this paragraph. You must provide the reason for...

Writing FeedbackAlbyMan - Mar 1, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
IELTS Wrinting Tast1: The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in...

2 - You need to create a better summary overview. Follow the required 3-5 sentence format for that section to achieve...

Writing Feedbackdravenliao - Mar 1, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
IELTS writing task 2: personal info online

2 - The prompt restatement is barely related to the original prompt. This will be judged to be unrelated to the...

Writing Feedbackalex83 - Mar 1, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
Tet holiday is believe to be the most favourite one among Vietnamese people

2 - As an English writing exercise, I appreciate the efforts you have placed into the writing of this short essay....

Writing FeedbackPhaedramihuhuong - Mar 1, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
Freight forwarder - Why did you choose proposed course and institution - AAS

2 - The reviewer is not interested in the story of corruption in your country. He is interested in the reasons...

ScholarshipAroma - Feb 29, 2024Holt - Mar 5, 2024
3. The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked

2 - The summary overview and trending statement are clear and quite strong in this case. The comprehensive presentation of these...

Writing Feedbackmannhi113 - Feb 28, 2024Holt - Mar 5, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: "In many countries, the fast fashion industry has gained significant ..."

3 - @maidong You should address at least 2 problems and propose a solution that relates to fast fashion. In this...

Writing Feedbackmaidong - Feb 22, 2024sophiemoore62 - Mar 1, 2024
Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

3 - @phuongstella You should further explain your first point before jumping to the next one. Be specific about it. Each...

Writing Feedbackphuongstella - Feb 26, 2024sophiemoore62 - Mar 1, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: More and more people are becoming seriously overweight.

4 - @sophiemoore62 When one is thinking, one is considering all options and uncertain of the correct response. That is why...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Feb 15, 2024Holt - Mar 1, 2024
NTU Personal Statement Essay - Skills or experiences that are relevant to the programmes applied for

2 - I think there is not enough passion displayed in this essay because of the mix and match approach you...

Undergraduatekneesbees - Feb 28, 2024Holt - Mar 1, 2024
secondary students believe that a university degree is the only passport to later success in life

3 - Please Grape, you have done well in giving an explicit explanation to both side of the argument but you...

Writing Feedbackgrapes - Feb 24, 2024Aroma - Feb 29, 2024
Writing task 1: The line graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and annual hours

3 - I think this can be shortened into just one sentence and you should only mention the most significant...

Writing Feedbackamber99999 - Feb 25, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2. Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

3 - @Miyu2k7 if you often cause misunderstanding in your writing, I think it's best to state your opinion about whether...

Writing FeedbackMiyu2k7 - Feb 25, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2_ ENVIRONMENT

3 - @phuongmai123 I think generally you shouldn't ask questions in an IELTS writing task 2. Each body paragraph should contain...

Writing Feedbackphuongmai123 - Feb 26, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
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