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IELTS-TASK2: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

3 - @Holt Thank you for your help, Im truly appreciative and I will find ways to fix it. Just one...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Dec 28, 2023caohuyen93 - Jan 18, 2024
Design: an art and a science - Personal statement for GKS-G scholarship

3 - Okay please. Will work on it...

Scholarshipkerchscholar - Jan 7, 2024kerchscholar - Jan 17, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR M.SC IN ARCHITECTURE AND URBAN DESIGN IN MILAN

3 - I really love how you take account of the feedback from the consultant and how you shape your already...

GraduateSupreena - Jan 14, 2024himca - Jan 17, 2024
IELTS task 1 report on Dairy products

3 - @Holt I want to say thank you so much for your assessment. Would it be fine if I create...

Writing Feedbacksummerchilld - Jan 13, 2024summerchilld - Jan 14, 2024
Learning and Creativity - advice SOP for masters

2 - Refrain from mentioning the 8th grade in this essay. You are applying for admission to a masters course....

GraduateAkshay66 - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Family and friends - ideas UBC personal profile

2 - You are spending too much time talking about how you influenced your friend. That is the longest aspect of...

UndergraduateIssacLee16543663 - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Visitors to Ashdown Museum: IELTS - Describe table and charts

2 - What was the rate for the extremely unfulfilled visitors? You did not indicate the percentages for that section of...

Writing Feedbackthienji - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum, for BSCS (undergraduate),Pakistani student

2 - You first indicated that your reason for applying to the scholarship is the positive experience of your friend. You...

LettersManahilFatima - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 Question: some people argue that university students should be free to choose

2 - Your first sentence in the first paragraph is misleading. There is no fiery discussion sparked across the globe. A...

Writing FeedbackLinhw - Jan 13, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
International Applicant applying for West Point seeking feedbac, Explain Why you want to attend USMA

2 - The essay response does not indicate if you will go back to your home country and serve as an...

Undergraduatesapper5446 - Jan 13, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR MASTERS IN PUBLIC HEALTH FOR GKS

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I felt is not very necessary to explain in details, but I know better...

ScholarshipGlorychi - Jan 3, 2024Glorychi - Jan 13, 2024
IELTS what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

3 - Your introduction is irrelevant to the topic - you are supposed to paraphase the topic in your own words,...

Writing Feedbacknguyendf - Jan 7, 2024Lyth - Jan 13, 2024
BRAZILIAN EMIGRATION (essay for an exam)

3 - @Holt Hi, Holt! Thank you very much for your feedback. I carefully read your response and I will try...

Writing Feedbackgmt16 - Jan 12, 2024gmt16 - Jan 13, 2024
Modern technology makes people less creative?

3 - @Holt thank you so much, but can you elaborate on more about anchor topics? i actually find this term...

Writing Feedbackwalk0nastarry9 - Jan 7, 2024walk0nastarry9 - Jan 13, 2024
[IELTS Writing task 2] Countries are becoming more and more similar

3 - I think your ideas are a little seperated. Instead of listing different reasons, try to elaborate on only one...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Jan 4, 2024Lyth - Jan 13, 2024
The impact of enterprises - GKS-G GMBA | Goal of study and study plan

3 - @Holt Thank you for the review but my whole essay got edited its just the introduction part my whole...

Graduatesankook - Jan 11, 2024sankook - Jan 13, 2024
KU Leuven 2024 Bachelor of Philosophy Mot. Letter.

3 - @Holt Greetings, Halt. The fact that you said that this text was made with the help of an AI...

Lettersssennyyaa - Jan 6, 2024ssennyyaa - Jan 13, 2024
Personal Statement for Master of Behavioral Science program at UPenn

2 - The response to the essay is totally incorrect. You are discussing your personal interest in behavioral science and how...

Graduatehimca - Jan 12, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Task 2: There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company.

2 - You have an under developed essay presentation. The first reasoning paragraphs that explains the reason for money as a...

Writing FeedbackLyth - Jan 12, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities

2 - The original prompt indicates pie charts, plural form (+S) so in your representation, you should mention the number of...

Writing Feedbackhanaaa - Jan 12, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Communication is essential - GKS-G | Language Study Plan | GMBA

2 - Remove the references to the other languages in the essay. Those are not necessary to the discussion and will...

Graduatesankook - Jan 11, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Cancer research is important to me - UBC PERSONAL PROFILE APPLICATION

2 - Wel... Yes and no. Yes, you answer the question with a hyper focus on cancer, but I do not...

Undergraduatesuzan11 - Jan 11, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
My quiet balcony - why you chose the academic program- NCSU Prompt

2 - You are taking too long to get to the point. This creative writing exercise will lose the interest of...

Undergraduatemonogatari - Jan 11, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Online shopping: do the pros outweight cons? - ielts essay - estimated score and advice

2 - Your essay is over discussed. You only need have presented 2 reasons for your opinion. Believe me, you did...

Writing Feedbacktteruchan65 - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Obtaining a Postgraduate degree through a Scholarship - how to answer this question?

2 - This is basically a 2 paragraph essay response. You have to consider the first part, which is yourself, and...

Essaysevanscoffie - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
GTE to Australia study abroad

2 - I am not confident about your financial status in relation to your application. You are automatically assuming that you...

UndergraduateAnn_Bui_29 - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations.

2 - The essay is more than 300 words long, This could pose a problem during the actual test if you...

Writing Feedbackphanuyen2156 - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
My Electrical Engineering Motivational letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - Remember that Hngaricum Stipendium is an international scholarship that hopes to have their graduates make a difference in their...

LettersAndern - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
data on expenditure on the needs of older people in Australia

2 - While the essay meets the appropriate number of words to be considered for high marks per scoring section, the...

Writing Feedbackahmad irfan - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
The miniEnterprize Youth Business Conference - UBC Sauder School of Business - Personal Profile

2 - I like the way you approached the discussion. I did not like that you avoided discussing what you learned...

Undergraduatestudent_88 - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
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