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Clinical experience - Erasmus Mundus motivation letter

3 - Focus on conciseness by highlighting key experiences and specific program alignment, and consider streamlining early achievements to strengthen relevance...

LettersFlorence Dambani - Oct 21, 2024alian - Oct 26, 2024
Medical field and politics - Chevening leadership essay

2 - So, This is a leadership and influencing essay where you are asked to prove that you are a person...

Scholarshipa_sm - Oct 25, 2024Holt - Oct 26, 2024
"The quarantine" - Leadership and influencing Chevening

4 - You need to make your post more fluent and connected, don't talk about irrelevant life events, and focus on...

Scholarshipalian - Oct 25, 2024a_sm - Oct 25, 2024
IELTS writing task 1: The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold

2 - Kindly be conscious of the summary overview sentence requirement. In order to score well in terms of preliminary TA,...

Writing Feedbackkamenrider2k - Oct 24, 2024Holt - Oct 25, 2024
SOP - Erasmus Mundus Joint Master in Managing Art & Cultural Heritage in Global Markets (MAGMa)

2 - It does not. You are not the the only applicant who will have this or a similar, or...

Scholarshipanujmahotraa - Oct 23, 2024Holt - Oct 24, 2024
GKS-G - love for arts and vision

2 - If you are planning to enroll via the university track, then you should be writing a shorter draft of...

Scholarshipalmukhanbetova - Oct 23, 2024Holt - Oct 24, 2024
Environment and Economics - motivational letter for University of Eastern Finland

2 - The letter is too long. A motivational letter should not have more than 400-600 words in its entirety because...

LettersShanto856 - Oct 23, 2024Holt - Oct 24, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2:People becoming interested in the history of the house or building they live in

6 - You can change the second part of the introduction to: This essay will examine the impetus behind this phenomenon...

Writing FeedbackBelinda0807 - Oct 2, 2024a_sm - Oct 23, 2024
Environment, Politics and Development - Leadership and influencing Chevening

3 - Try and shorten your sentences as there is too many uses of commas ','. This will make your work...

ScholarshipNing Jar Lawn - Oct 22, 2024Chiedu_10 - Oct 23, 2024
Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge.

2 - Do not place your personal opinion at the start of the prompt restatement. That will create a topic...

Writing Feedbackquansjd - Oct 22, 2024Holt - Oct 23, 2024
Msc Artificial Intelligence - Chevening Networking Essay Review

2 - There is a key phrase present in the writing guide that you have overlooked: The professional capacity means...

ScholarshipChiedu_10 - Oct 22, 2024Holt - Oct 23, 2024
Freedom to dress, agree and disagree

2 - I am not sure if you wrote this statement as a part of your English writing exercise or if...

Writing Feedbackhado21125 - Oct 22, 2024Holt - Oct 22, 2024
The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate of women in 6 different age groups

2 - There is a 40 word minimum requirement for the summary overview of the task 1 essay. In order to...

Writing Feedbackvietkit28 - Oct 22, 2024Holt - Oct 22, 2024
Networks for positive impact - Chevening

2 - The essay does not prove that you are capable of building a professional network. The networking essay requires the...

Scholarshipa_sm - Oct 22, 2024Holt - Oct 22, 2024
In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects.

2 - I believe that the prompt you are trying to respond to is as follows: In some secondary schools,...

Writing Feedbackbeden - Oct 22, 2024Holt - Oct 22, 2024
Journey with food - personal essay

2 - I would open the essay with a story about how my distaste for food negatively affected my health. Discuss...

Undergraduatesmerab2207 - Oct 22, 2024Holt - Oct 22, 2024
The graph shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000

2 - The summary overview is incomplete and improperly formatted. This paragraph should have a minimum of 2 sentences in it....

Writing FeedbackNguyen James - Oct 21, 2024Holt - Oct 22, 2024
Autobiography - College Essay (Taiwan)

3 - @Holt I took your advices into consideration and added this paragraph as the first one I was born...

Undergraduatejaidenrex - Oct 21, 2024jaidenrex - Oct 21, 2024
"Fascination with Architecture"- CommonApp Personal Statement Rough Draft

2 - The content of the essay is too scattered. You are trying to introduce too many facets of your personality...

Undergraduatehiwhatsup - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 21, 2024
My history with mathematics!

2 - Are you some sort of Math major? The reason I ask is that the subject you chose for this...

UndergraduateSpandy Sigdel - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 21, 2024
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool.

2 - The essay will receive an automatic failing score since it only has over 230 words in it. By not...

Writing Feedbackphanhobaoan - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 20, 2024
International tourism - Advantages/Disadvantages

2 - This response. which is not aligned with the target format for the task accuracy considerations will get the...

Writing Feedbackesswri123 - Oct 19, 2024Holt - Oct 20, 2024
"Restart" - Emerson College - what would you title your story and why?

2 - I would suggest that you use the title of the essay at the very beginning. Use a title header...

UndergraduateLicho - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 19, 2024
Don't make up more trash - Math COMMON APP

2 - I believe that you are trying to discuss the evolution and development of your interest in the Math and...

Undergraduateazuuu - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 18, 2024
Ramen noodles - Personal Essay for College

2 - Ramen noodles are supposed to be a part of the lesson that you learned during this time. However, that...

Undergraduatekidwantsknowledg - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 18, 2024
The given line graph compares the quantities of three companies' waste output for 15 years

2 - Please be guided regarding the word count when accomplishing the task 1 essay. You should be writing within the...

Writing FeedbackDinhthy - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 18, 2024
The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK

2 - Sadly the report veers more towards and automatic failing score since it does not meet the 150 minimum word...

UndergraduatePN356 - Oct 17, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Tintin comics were my favorites - common app essay

2 - I am not sure which prompt you are trying to respond to with this essay so my advice regarding...

UndergraduateAmrutaPundlik - Oct 17, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Living in a country as a non-native language speaker

2 - Avoid referring to people using pronouns in a Task 2 essay. That is because you must write from a...

Writing FeedbackYusuf Momani - Oct 16, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Electrical Engineering at TU Delft

2 - Your essay does not flow as a solid document because you have divided it into chapters or discussion points...

LettersAnastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
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