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What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - There is an LR problem in the first paragraph. There is a big difference between damage and desctruction. Damage...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 25, 2025Holt - Aug 25, 2025
Obese people overwhelm the healthcare system? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - The reference in the sentence is incomplete. Where are the sessions to be added? It is stated in...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 24, 2025Holt - Aug 25, 2025
IELTS writing task 2- difference between working from home and working in office.

3 - Can you please tell me how can I write the first paragraph properly from this essay?...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Aug 21, 2025faiqaFARHEEN - Aug 24, 2025
Mass Deportation Effects on the Economy's Well-Being

2 - You are over using the phrase mass deportation. It results in reader fatigue as one progresses with reading your...

Research PapersRivera1011 - Aug 24, 2025Holt - Aug 24, 2025
An essay titled Social Media and Teen Mental Health

2 - Revise the first paragraph to be more of a proper thesis statement. Follow the correct format by providing an...

Writing FeedbackCJohnson1052 - Aug 24, 2025Holt - Aug 24, 2025
Human Condition in India - Pitzer essay

3 - thank you. i agree, now that i have a section view, the intro isn't super relevant other than...

Research Papersilovepenguins - Aug 24, 2025ilovepenguins - Aug 24, 2025
Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world.

2 - The opening statement will receive a failing task accuracy score because you did not respond to the questions...

Writing Feedbacktt1405 - Aug 18, 2025Holt - Aug 21, 2025
Clean technology and sustainable innovation - Statements for Study loan

2 - You need to be comfortable with fully revealing your family's financial situation to the reviewer. That means, you need...

ScholarshipQaishhh - Aug 18, 2025Holt - Aug 21, 2025
Mechanical Engineering - Statement for Study loan

2 - I strongly recommend that you revise the start of this essay. The last thing a reviewer wants to read...

ScholarshipQaishhh - Aug 18, 2025Holt - Aug 21, 2025
---- Sleep Woken Poem -----

2 - Your incorrect use of English grammar in this stanza makes your intentions difficult to understand. One cannot plummet upward....

Poetryian_park - Aug 18, 2025Holt - Aug 21, 2025
The positive effects of child-parent communication

2 - Please indicate the tools by which you obtained your research material. How you used the research material. What...

EssaysJinaLee - Aug 18, 2025Holt - Aug 21, 2025
Research paper over teenage and adolescent depression and anxiety.

2 - Try to create a more solid thesis. You are not taking an IELTS test but writing an academic...

Research PapersMentswritespaper - Aug 17, 2025Holt - Aug 21, 2025
Looking Back at the US Civil War

2 - Remove the term infamous. There is no need to exaggerate the American Civil war. Nor is there a...

Writing FeedbackWinstonRa - Aug 17, 2025Holt - Aug 17, 2025
Mental game - three areas of weakness or the description of the research paper project

2 - 1. I do not believe that the research paper should indicate a focus on Beach Volleyball because the discussion...

Writing Feedbackabbiemunro06 - Aug 16, 2025Holt - Aug 17, 2025
Essay about the fact that celebrities earn more money than politicians, the reasons and opinions!-fb

2 - The first problem with your essay is the incorrect restatement of the original prompt. You are referring to information...

Writing Feedbackmybutmy - Aug 16, 2025Holt - Aug 17, 2025
PERSONAL STATEMENT - GKS-U TOUR MANAGEMENT

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback on my personal statement. It means a lot. I will...

Undergraduateweeathers - Aug 14, 2025weeathers - Aug 15, 2025
Poisoned Waters: How Microplastics Pollute What We Drink

2 - This citation is presented too soon in the essay. You need to establish your personal interest in the...

Research PapersADR2220340 - Aug 14, 2025Holt - Aug 14, 2025
IS taking regular health check-ups unnecessary if one feels healthy?

2 - You overwrote this essay. With only 49 minutes to craft a properly worded and coherent essay, you are expected...

Writing Feedbackngocbich022 - Aug 11, 2025Holt - Aug 14, 2025
Research, data exchange, or public health innovation - PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS-U 2026

2 - Who said this? This is a direct quote from whom? Do not use a quotation as a hook...

Scholarshipscholarshiphun - Aug 10, 2025Holt - Aug 11, 2025
GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT (astronomy and space science)

2 - It is too early in the discussion for you to introduce this topic. You may state this later...

UndergraduateAndyNJ - Aug 10, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Is History repeating itself - treatment of immigrants

2 - Please provide examples of the previous treatment that has carried on to modern times or has been updated...

Research PapersDanielmgue - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Essay on time travelling to work or school

2 - While this essay is composed of 280 words, it does not follow the proper compare and contrast discussion for...

Writing FeedbackDUC TRAN - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Equality in governments and politics (IELTS WRITING TASK 2)

2 - There are only 2 reasons that you will be discussing, you m ust indicate these as a solid...

Writing FeedbackBrian Nguyen - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Climate Change's Role in Undermining Global Food Security

2 - The main problem with this essay is the lack of insight from the writer. All of the major paragraphs...

Writing FeedbackStrayKids07 - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Activities - film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances

2 - Kindly remember to use a minimum of 2 sentences in the summary overview. You must summarize the information in...

Writing Feedbackdreamfulcherry - Aug 7, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Finding Purpose - personal statement

2 - Unfortunately, your deeply personal essay does not follow the actual writing prompts for the GKS scholarship. You need to...

Scholarshiptoquillax - Aug 8, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Changing rates of three different areas of crime in Newport city

2 - The presentation is well within the word count consideration for high scores in all categories. However, the lack of...

Writing Feedbacklinhchi0330 - Aug 8, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
IELTS task 2 - problems-solutions about ecotourism's effects on local cultures, people, environment.

2 - You have over written this essay. You cannot write more than 300 words for the presentation because you are...

Writing FeedbackBeamlee123 - Aug 6, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
IELTS writing task 2- opinion essay on physical and mental strength

2 - The prompt restatement is missing in this presentation. The first paragraph is expected to represent your understanding of the...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Aug 5, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Research Essay - Why Toys R Us Failed.

2 - Who is this person and why should I believe her information? Remember to properly cite the source. Include...

Research Papersangx6758 - Aug 5, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
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