vangiespen
Dec 6, 2014
Graduate / SOP_ FOR MS in US for mechanical engineering [2]
Babandee, Both your essays are quite informative but do not follow the required information that should be contained in a statement of purpose. In order to write an effective SOP just present your responses the 4 important aspects of an SOP. These questions that you have to answer are:
1. What is your current experience in the field of interest you are applying to?
2. How will an advanced degree in this field help you professionally?
3. What current seminars or trainings have you undergone that will show the logical next step for your profession? You can briefly mention your college studies in this part.
4. What are your future plans and how will completing this degree help you achieve those goals?
These are the questions that directly relate and reveal the purpose for your advanced studies. Just answer these questions and you will have a well written and well developed statement of purpose that you can use for any master university application you wish to submit it to.
Babandee, Both your essays are quite informative but do not follow the required information that should be contained in a statement of purpose. In order to write an effective SOP just present your responses the 4 important aspects of an SOP. These questions that you have to answer are:
1. What is your current experience in the field of interest you are applying to?
2. How will an advanced degree in this field help you professionally?
3. What current seminars or trainings have you undergone that will show the logical next step for your profession? You can briefly mention your college studies in this part.
4. What are your future plans and how will completing this degree help you achieve those goals?
These are the questions that directly relate and reveal the purpose for your advanced studies. Just answer these questions and you will have a well written and well developed statement of purpose that you can use for any master university application you wish to submit it to.