Writing Feedback / IELTS - mobile phones and youngstars-a necessary evil [4]

HI!! frends hope u like it

Mobile phones have become a need for each a every human . Mobile phones before were used a talking device but nowadays they are used for messaging , chating , and everything else that we have'nt thought of . With no. of facility added to the mobile the demand for the mobile increases day by day. Mobile has been popuralised among the youngstars.

In todays date not only youngstars but also teenager prefar this.It has become a part of new trend of fashion. children demand for new sets or new model of mobile phones . A child make him/herselp busy in playing game , sending SMS , chating seeing nusance etc and parents don't at all pay a little attention towards it and hence the child waste time and lose his/her parts of studies. And so it happens in youngstar they too do the same. Nowadays Parents too encourage them ,by saying to get a mobile phone or some sort of gagets if they keep good marks or achive in something .But before parents use to gif a pen or a watch or a book .So,we can say parents are too responsible for there lose in studies

so as a result it is an evil dead not only for the student but also for the youngstars

*kindly ignor if some mistake are present as it is my first essay and do appreciate to write more in order to encourage me
THANK YOU....your heena33

Writing Feedback / 'equality, responsibility and oneness' - dress code should be implemented [4]

Dress code is designed to maintain uniformality in dress. The skul or colleges passes sound legislation for all the student to wear one colour pant and one colour shirt so that they will be easily distingushed from other students .At times outsides non-collegiates students enter the college and creat disturbance . Beacause of uniform they will be easily distiguised from the other student.

Unformity in the dress will retard inferiority complex from the minds of poor children. they will feel equal with the rich students in the skul. The narrow mindedness in them will get vanished. Instead they feel oneness. In consequence the bond among them will increase, love and understanding, sharing of joy and sorrow ,standing up for each other attitude grows.This instead crops up good will,great will and united spirit.

Dress code is a credit of a student. As khaki is the dress code and symbol of policy, spotted grey dress is the credit of millitary, white garments benifits politicians .In the similar manner a uniform dress code fits to a student. As a police man wears his/her uniform . he/she gets aware of his/her duties and responsibilites so as we students.

Dress code is quite indispensable in an educational institution.It qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institution. It brings end to disparity & division.

All heads of the institution should implement it for the interest of the student.

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Writing Feedback / When money speaks , Truth is silent [6]

article 14 of the constitution provides:- "The State shall noy deny to any person equality before the law or the equal protection of the laws within the territory of India"

That mean no man is above the law of the land and that every person whatever be his rank or status , is subject to the common law and amenable to the juridiction of the ordinary tribunal. Sounds superb,isn,t it ? But over the years we find that this article is confined and seldom put into practise .

When money speak , Truth is silent is not new to our soil. Money is synonymous with power , influence, and also corruption. Mases knew that all the petitions and cries don't fall to the deaf ears of the judges but here the power of money works and ultimately truth hides.

When money speak , Truth is silent
ears are deaf and eyes r blind .
Powerful person keep on whistling ,
downtridden gets not even a trifling.
Who has a time to listen abt masses ,
When everyone is involved in his own clashes.
All real value have gone waste,
they r no more societies taste .
bt lets hope time will change,
as nothng in this world has a stable stage.
... ...hope frends u like it...bye

Research Papers / Should Hindi (the language) be compulsory? [4]

Each nation has its own national language through which nation iss characterised.Other contries donot face lingua problem as there are no multitude language in their countries.In England they hav own type of english speaking in each and every state and village but belive me in India the language changes from place to place.If i start talking abt my own state "odisha" which is in India . We "odias"(odias are people who all leave in odisha) we talk in odia bt the way of talking varies place to place and village to village .

So,wat I feel India should atleast hav one language known by everyone thats hindi so that when tourists visit their state atleast we can understabd them and they can understand us.