Writing Feedback / It is now possible for scientist and tourist to travel remote natural environment eg. the south pole [3]

It is now possible for scientist and tourist to travel remote natural environment such us the south pole
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Tourist and Natural Environment

Presently, travel to the rural area not as impossible as in the past. Many tripper even scientist can be easy to visit those region. By this condition there is merit and demerit that possibly happen and will explain clearly in this essay.

Travelling now have become one of great lifestyle by some people. It such an important necessity to visit unique place which is usually in the rustic area. Unfortunately some visitor lack of knowledge about the place that will be visiting and also lack of preparation for the journey, as the impact those traveler will get problem both in terms of health and equipment. i believe do travelling in the rural area is not just bring our self and imagine the spectacular scenery and spectacular picture that will get, but the more important is how all the fittings already manage well.

In addition, do travelling in the suburb area makes any impact to the environment, it clearly seen what happen in Everest since it can visit by tripper who do hiking there. People now are free to do what they want to do without take any attention to the environment. While there are so much mortal that should be preserve

To sum up, travel should be prepare well before the journey begin, because good preparation will lead to the good condition also. I personally believe that traveling to the rural is good but we should also keep our environment

Writing Feedback / Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people [4]

Wrting Task 2. Control Media

Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Over recent years the number of using media keep increase as the essential thing of human being. It is pretty evident that the media plays an important thing in society's life. However, a discourse for make any regulation by manage opinion has been concerned on many people. It is interested to examine this idea.

It can not be denied that the use of media already influent denizen in many perspective of their life. Admittedly it can be affected the way people think and act. For these case, government already provide regulation by the use of those media to make balance between right and responsible. Due to the fact that people are not allow to respond many thing in the free way. For instance, inhabitant can not post the thing such a negative thing that can lead to the schism, it is good that the way people give comment will be more polite that can make the word much more valuable.

However, every people need information from others to make compare in some of the thing. It is important because those people can manage what they desire. For example, in advertising side costumer will not believe directly in the picture by what they want to buy. They need some of opinion by other people who already know about their product. Despite the fact that people seldom use a negative word to give any comment in one product.

To conclude, it is already discuss two perspective about an issue which is about management idea. I personally believe that control media by the government already exist and society also should support it by use the media properly.

Writing Feedback / Writing Task 2. Small Village and City Center [3]

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else.
Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in small community?

people still prefer to live in urban area

Just a few time ago, inhabitant live in the remote area who can be easy to socialize each other. this time, as a growing of population, dweller live in city center who is hard to know each other. this essay will explain merit and demerit by staying in a small clan.

Most people believe that the social condition in the hutment is more delicate which is related to the atmosphere that where many denizen believe it is more quite and calm. Even farther it is affected to the social environment. For instance, in the rural we still can enjoy fresh air without any pollution. As a result, some people hard to leave their place because it's comfortably for them

However, it doesn't mean that live in the burg is always good, the infrastructure in the rural still not build good yet and the impact, it is hard if something bad happen for example the facilities of the medical still lack, however dweller should go to the city center to get better cure. It is also applied for the education system which is many teenager prefer to continue their study in the town. We can not denied that city give more good community service.

To sum up, it is evident that there are several good reason why people still prefer to live in urban while there are also several bad thing of it. In my opinion people are free to choose whenever they want to live as long as they can adjust the condition.

Writing Feedback / Kids can learn from the very first days by their parents, but other say it's the task of the school [3]

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

from a child to an educated person

Children is an essential thing which is someday will continue the task as a society, several people believe that they can learn from the very first in their parents, but other say it's actually the task of the school. This essay will explain the comparison either children should get study from their parents or school

As we know, parents are the first teacher in children life which is gives them first knowledge about life it self. This is because, until 5 years children still take care by their parent, so all of basic knowledge also from their parents, include how to involve in the environment. For example Jokowi who is the president of Indonesia, he get his main knowledge from their parents which now he practical it to socialize with his inhabitants. As a result, children can be easy to keep in touch with other without feel uncomfortable, because they already get the role model from their parents. That's why father and mother have a big responsible to manage their son

However, some parents gives their believe to the school, to give basic knowledge for their son, it because they already believe about the systems that apply. Some of parents say that school is the best place to get more knowledge even in a different criteria such us lesson, how to be polite, socialize with other etc. as the result, school should manage the gives of the lesson and how children can interact with other. That's why some people believe it's good for children to get knowledge in the school.

To conclude, it's evident that people has their own choose about their children to get involve in the society. I strongly believe that parents still have responsible for their son, and school should support by give them the best knowledge on how to act in the environment.