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Dec 17, 2009
Undergraduate / Which communities of UPenn interest you, and how will you contribute to them [6]
I entirely changed my first half of the essay and parts of the second half.
This should be my final draft.
(The first couple paragraphs are so personal that I would not like to share)
... Another aspect of the SEAS that attracted me is its Engineering Entrepreneurship program. I believe this program will turn my dreams into realities by preparing me to be a successful member of the business world.
Like Nobel Prize laureates George E. Smith and Harald zur Hausen, I hope to bestow what I have profited from University of Pennsylvania to the world. I will utilize the results from my engineering research to help humanities by acquiring practical solutions to arduous and troublesome problems in society.
A good engineer must possess excellent creative problem-solving abilities. One enjoyable way to develop and improve this skill is by playing the competitive sport of chess. I have been an avid player since third grade. Some considered me unusual for replacing video games with chess for recreation, but I truly enjoyed the thought-provoking environment created while playing this ancient Indian board game. Not only could I develop my logical thinking and exercise my mind, but at the same time, I could also have fun. While playing, I felt like I'm an artist; my imagination and creativity ran wild with all the different possible arrangements I can accomplish. When learning that University of Pennsylvania has a chess club, I was elated. I couldn't wait to show other chess enthusiasts this new strategy I figured out on my own.
In the future, I plan to promote this interacting and salubrious Olympic sport by informing others of the health benefits as well as skills gained from playing this combative activity for the mind. Hopefully, I am capable of bringing in new members interested in this prosperous organization.
An engineer and a chess player have many characteristics in common. They both have numerous intellectual abilities, detail-oriented abilities, and sharp analytical aptitudes. Possessing all these qualities, I am the ideal candidate for the University of Pennsylvania SEAS and the chess club.
I entirely changed my first half of the essay and parts of the second half.
This should be my final draft.
(The first couple paragraphs are so personal that I would not like to share)
... Another aspect of the SEAS that attracted me is its Engineering Entrepreneurship program. I believe this program will turn my dreams into realities by preparing me to be a successful member of the business world.
Like Nobel Prize laureates George E. Smith and Harald zur Hausen, I hope to bestow what I have profited from University of Pennsylvania to the world. I will utilize the results from my engineering research to help humanities by acquiring practical solutions to arduous and troublesome problems in society.
A good engineer must possess excellent creative problem-solving abilities. One enjoyable way to develop and improve this skill is by playing the competitive sport of chess. I have been an avid player since third grade. Some considered me unusual for replacing video games with chess for recreation, but I truly enjoyed the thought-provoking environment created while playing this ancient Indian board game. Not only could I develop my logical thinking and exercise my mind, but at the same time, I could also have fun. While playing, I felt like I'm an artist; my imagination and creativity ran wild with all the different possible arrangements I can accomplish. When learning that University of Pennsylvania has a chess club, I was elated. I couldn't wait to show other chess enthusiasts this new strategy I figured out on my own.
In the future, I plan to promote this interacting and salubrious Olympic sport by informing others of the health benefits as well as skills gained from playing this combative activity for the mind. Hopefully, I am capable of bringing in new members interested in this prosperous organization.
An engineer and a chess player have many characteristics in common. They both have numerous intellectual abilities, detail-oriented abilities, and sharp analytical aptitudes. Possessing all these qualities, I am the ideal candidate for the University of Pennsylvania SEAS and the chess club.