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Jan 12, 2010
Undergraduate / College teachers are not all the same. [7]
abd85
may I point out that this is in the wrong forum?
though i'm not an english teacher...far from it, i'd still like to give my opinion, if you don't mind.
well, if your teacher's dr. sarah smith, you deserved to fail.
if your teacher's john miles...it's still not a surprise that you failed
if your teacher's none of the above...i see every reason why he/she's failed you.
think about it, would you give a student a high mark for an essay that insults one of your own colleagues?
COME ON! you never ever name teacher names in essays; generalization is an art. Judging specific teachers will get you absolutely nowhere since you 1.don't have the credibility to judge an established professor, 2.your teacher is probably laughing with the person you judged right now, and you've made yourself 1 more enemy.
Now, the essay itself isn't that bad. It's analytical, although rather childish, and has good syntax and grammar.
again, what killed you is naming the teachers and judging them negatively-or actually, judging them at all!
abd85
may I point out that this is in the wrong forum?
though i'm not an english teacher...far from it, i'd still like to give my opinion, if you don't mind.
well, if your teacher's dr. sarah smith, you deserved to fail.
if your teacher's john miles...it's still not a surprise that you failed
if your teacher's none of the above...i see every reason why he/she's failed you.
think about it, would you give a student a high mark for an essay that insults one of your own colleagues?
COME ON! you never ever name teacher names in essays; generalization is an art. Judging specific teachers will get you absolutely nowhere since you 1.don't have the credibility to judge an established professor, 2.your teacher is probably laughing with the person you judged right now, and you've made yourself 1 more enemy.
Now, the essay itself isn't that bad. It's analytical, although rather childish, and has good syntax and grammar.
again, what killed you is naming the teachers and judging them negatively-or actually, judging them at all!