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SnowWolf   
May 8, 2013
Writing Feedback / Advantage and disadvantage of 3D printing technology(argumentative, research essay) [2]

Advantage and disadvantage of 3D printing technology (working title don't know how to change it)

3D printing, a term only recently entering mainstream media, has already stir up major debates about its validity and its possible positive and negative impacts in the future. I believe that 3D printing technologies is going to have a firm hold in our daily lives and the positive benefits is going to outweigh the negatives.

3D printing is a process of making a three-dimensional solid object of virtually any shape from a digital model. It covers many different technologies that achieve similar effects, the major differences being the size of production and end product, affordability and product strength. The first 3D printing technology invented by Charles Hull was called stereolithography. The system consists of an Ultra-Violet Laser, a vat of photo-curable liquid resin, and a controlling system. A platform is lowered into the resin, such that the surface of the platform is a layer-thickness below the surface of the resin. The laser beam then traces the boundaries and fills in a two-dimensional cross section of the model, solidifying the resin wherever it touches. Once a layer is completed, the platform descends a layer thickness, resin flows over the first layer, and the next layer is built. This process continues until the model is completed.The system consists of an Ultra-Violet Laser, a vat of photo-curable liquid resin, and a controlling system. A platform is lowered into the resin, such that the surface of the platform is a layer-thickness below the surface of the resin. The laser beam then traces the boundaries and fills in a two-dimensional cross section of the model, solidifying the resin wherever it touches. Once a layer is completed, the platform descends a layer thickness, resin flows over the first layer, and the next layer is built. This process continues until the model is completed.There is also process that uses extrusion tube that flows out melting plastics or other materials that will take shape in 3D object and a process where glue or laser fuse together metal in a similar process to the stereolithography where by the plastic is replace by metal grinds.

If this technology could make almost anything, could it make a gun? More than one person have asked this question, people have designed guns and gun parts for 3D printing purposes. There are technical limitations for creating a complete gun out of 3D printing materials that is sustainable for firearms. However Cody R Wilson, a second year law student from The University of Texas School of Law seeks to change those facts. He created an organization called Defense Distributed for the purpose of Wiki Weapon project, which aims at designing a firearm that can be downloaded from the internet and printed with a 3D printer. On May 5th 2013, he achieves this goal. With the design of Liberator, a single shot pistol from the World War II era, he was able to fire a single round of bullet with a plastic gun with parts made from a 3D printer. Congressman Steve Israel, an activist for gun controls and against 3D printed weapons, issue a statement that he will propose a ban on all 3D printed weapons components and weapons the day after the successful test fire. Israel's proposal will be one additional clause in the Undetectable Firearms Act of 1988 which prohibits the manufacture, import, sell, ship, deliver, possession, transfer or receiving of any firearm that is not detectable by walk-through metal detectors, a law that was dodge by this test with the use of an simple nail as firing ping. However it is impossible to ban a technology, a Liberator was design with mass production and simple use in mind, and mass commercialized 3D printer is already on sale in Staples for merely 1299.99 dollars, so even if 3D printed weapons are ban in every corner of the globe there would be someone that can print a operating from scratch. 3D printing weapons will be the next major change in global legal systems, will it cause a global crisis leading into the banning to 3D printing? It is not a far reaching possibilities as many countries already have strict gun regulations due to many different factors, if anyone can build a gun in the privacy of their own home how could those governments or any governments regulate their citizens.

3D printing firearms might be the worst case scenario for the future of 3D printing, but there is no technology advancements without side effects, the industrial revolution destroyed cultures and environments around the world, but the industry-based economy brought about a better, stronger, and faster growing economy, it also creates more jobs that led to technological developments, better standards of housing, food, education, etc. 3D printing technology also brings benefits that outweighs its disadvantage, and I believe that these benefits makes the continuing development of 3D printing technology worthwhile.

A team of researchers at the University of Glasgow, UK is at the forefront of 3D printing drugs. This team, led by Dr. Lee Cronin, has already successfully used a digital blueprint and a 3D printer costing only $2000 to produce ibuprofen. Their design's most immediate use is a new way for chemists to discover chemical compounds, but there are more uses for this technology, using words of Cronin this is "a way of democratizing chemistry, bringing chemistry to the masses." In the article published by NewScientist and written by Katharine Sanderson, Cronin went on to discuss how the printing apparatus produce the drugs, the potential benefits and also the potential harms of it. Currently their apparatus lacks means to produce advanced drugs that require more complex chemical reactions. Mankind would greatly benefits from full implementation of this technology. In its current form, chemists will be able to discover and create new compounds. In the not so distant future, perhaps even just a few years with the helps of aid organizations, underdeveloped countries could print their own drugs with substances produced locally.

NASA is also developing its own 3D printing technology called Electron Beam Freeform Fabrication, it allows metal components to be 3D printed in space. This allows space missions to be longer and safer, if a component fail, or component they already have doesn't do the job they could easily printed out the component and replace it. NASA is also developing 3D printing technology uses their to build bases on lunar grounds using just microwaves heating up lunar dust to just below the point of melting, and use these dusts to build the base. If these two technologies success in field tests, it would allows human to explore much further and establish bases in every place human can set their feet on.

These things maybe too far away from your home. How about everyday objects? When 3D printers are fully commercialized. Small tools, jewelry, broken parts of electronics, food or any small objects could be easily printed at home. If the object is too big and the stores don't have the parts ship in for a week. A neighborhood 3D printing shop could print you the object and delivers it to you in the same day. 3D printed car URBEE 2 is approaching the markets, the major shells parts are 3D printed, meaning the car is incredibly light, fuel efficient and could be easily replace once breaks.

3D printing will also reverse the steps of industrializations by bring the complete factories closer to home. All the factories need is a big 3D printer and it will produce jobs in America that was previously outsource to other countries. It will also spark a new age of creativity as printers let you produce almost anything in your imaginations, flourishing homemade cultures once again.

All technologies can be abused, all technologies can greatly benefit mankind, the determining factors are how people use it. The lack of controls of end product by government doesn't mean we should halt the research, or the usage of 3D printing technologies. The benefits greatly outweighs the negatives when it comes to improving quality of life, bring jobs closer to home, space exploration and many more. In the end 3D printing technology will help humanity enter its next stage.
SnowWolf   
Mar 10, 2013
Undergraduate / This passion is still alive in me; TRANSFER of MAJOR (To technology management) [3]

Why do I want to transfer to the HRD/TCM program and how does this align with my career goals? (The prompt)

As technologies rapidly develop, mankind move towards information age, advance technologies are leaking into every field previously occupied by man, the result is increasing productivities , along with these new found productivities mass amount of information are being produced. The efficiency of processing these information are becoming increasingly important, organizations constantly seeks new methods and technologies to help them improve their efficiency. I would like to change my major into technology management and take up front runner position to help organizations improve their efficiency to create a better life for tomorrow.

I've long been interested in the applications of science and technologies. In my youth, whenever the family received new appliances or I received new electric toys, I loved to take them apart to see how they work. I constructed my first computer when I was 12, and I loved the experience that it gave me. there is no greater joy than seeing your own handy work coming to life.

This passion is still alive in me. I love learning and exploring the news of the latest technology and dreaming about the prospects of new technologies. It is the joy and the passion I have for the technology that bring me to apply for this major. I know my interest and knowledge of technologies to be able to assist me in my future career paths. This major would be a great outlet to expand my education and experience in this field.

The qualities to succeed and become a great manager are some that I see myself having. I enjoy the interconnectedness of human race. I love being social, communicating well, and caring very much for people that I deem as loyal to me. Leading when others are not is a task I am not afraid of. I feel that I can lead and manage well. I welcome the opportunity for self-improvements in the areas of management, it would help me grow as a character and a better person.

Careful considerations are needed before making any major decisions, and I took serious considerations when I applied for this major. No matter what the challenges or difficulties are ahead of me I am willing to accept them and do everything in my power to succeed here!
SnowWolf   
Aug 21, 2010
Undergraduate / Supplement Essay for Amherst College App " Difficulty need not forshadow ..." [6]

I really wish you could write more because your third paragraph(is it your third paragraph? the one start with

Sooner than 3 months into the course,

the format is really weird so I don't know) really leave a lot out. But I realize you had exactly 300 words so I list out the following as suggestions to what to delete.

"In addition to the subjects listed above, your daughter/ ward will be able to take the Cambridge Additional Mathematics course for..."

I began my first class with those variables in mind. The difficulty of the subject was a known fact. I was introduced to topics and problems which required deep thinking. All elementary ideas were completely replaced by complex formulas and principles.
SnowWolf   
Aug 19, 2010
Writing Feedback / SAT essay:Should schools help students understand moral choices and social issues? [4]

Should schools help students understand moral choices and social issues?
The purpose of school is to provide education to students. The definition of educate is not just to provide instruction for skill, it is also a place to develop mentally, morally or aesthetically by instruction. Without the helping students understand moral choices and social issues the school is not even fulfilling its basic requirement.

Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. once wrote an essay called The Purpose of Education. In the essay he stated that the "education must train one for quick, resolute and effective thinking, [it is also] to teach one to think intensively and critically" but also in the same essay "The most dangers criminals may be the man gifted with reason, but with no morals." So if we only teach out students with knowledge and most effective way to think, we might be equipping ill-minded people with the weapons they need to commit crimes!

School should help students understand moral choices and social issues not just because we don't want people to become sociopath. It is because we are at a time where information are just seconds away, where propagandas are also just seconds away, school need to teach their students what is right and wrong so they won't be controlled by the propagandas.

I would like feed backs like what I should or can add, thanks a lot =D
SnowWolf   
Jun 16, 2010
Speeches / the Class of 2010: A Little Help With My Graduation Speech [5]

and this day is a celebration of our collective achievement.

would it be better if you say "and today we celebrates our achievement"?

Nice essay, I can't spot anything as the essay progress, good luck with your speech =D
SnowWolf   
Jun 16, 2010
Undergraduate / "reaching out to others has benefited me" - Peace Corps admission essay help :) [6]

I always had a strong curiosity of going to unfamiliar places, pushing myself to travel and engage with others from different backgrounds.

I don't understand what are you trying to say in this sentence, I think it would be good if you make a good connection between two parts.

Though Pakistan is a country under conditions of hardship,

Would it be better if it says "country under hard conditions"?

Sorry, I am not a native speaker, so my suggestion would probably suck, I hope I had help =D, and good luck
SnowWolf   
Jun 16, 2010
Letters / How to write a good recomendation letter? (MS Program) [19]

I need help on writing/getting a recommendation letters for college

I don't even know if this thread should go here. It probably fits the student talk part.
Anyways, I am high school junior going on to senior, I am wondering how do people get their recommendation letters, is there any preparation to be done or do you just go up to your teacher/whoever to ask for the letters?
SnowWolf   
Jan 3, 2010
Undergraduate / How A Book Influenced You -- The Game -- Brown Supplement [5]

I am sorry that I can't see any grammar flaws that I can think of, my English skill are pretty bad, but I do notice that your first paragraph flows smoothly into your second paragraph, if you are still looking for something to shorten that would seems like a good place to do it, also the third paragraph does seemed...em...useless?? toward your point, your could probably shorten it to just one sentence. Like em...

One time when I was studying in the Vancouver Public Library I noticed that an adorable looking...

I hope that helps... good luck...
also I like that quote... :D
SnowWolf   
Jan 3, 2010
Undergraduate / China on the streen - Looking out the window. What do you see?.....Williams essay [6]

It is frosty winter. I draw the curtains in the morning,

Sounds.. a bit odd i would say
When I draw the curtains in the morning during the frosty winters.

I will not pretend that I don't see the deep grief of the poverty-stricken people. I will use my education for the indigent

It is just like another essay I just comment on couple minutes back, you have build some strong tone, use it to your own advantage, ending it with just "I will use my education for the indigent"(By the way indigents) doesn't sounds so strong anymore.

and by the way, a little bit of personal question: are you Chinese???... you name doesn't sounds like any Chinese names that I am familiar with... and good luck(forgot add that :P)...
SnowWolf   
Jan 3, 2010
Undergraduate / USc - I made a choice about studying abroad [3]

em...what is the prompt? Or is there a prompt, I am a high school junior that are worry free of college apps so I don't know the format very well.

Studying abroad without the family was a real tragedy for me as 11 years old international student;

Do you really want to use the word tragedy? Since tragedy means more about incidents that are caused by outer forces, miserable maybe a good word choice?

Therefore, I never gave up and now I cross the line too far to give up.

You have build some really strong emotion there, use it, say like ...give up getting into college or something.

I hope those comments help, it look good other wise, at least way better than my writing =P good luck :D
SnowWolf   
Dec 29, 2009
Undergraduate / What don't you know?- Brown Supplement! [7]

I don't know about you, but if is me, I would start writing stuff like...em..."however small I am, with the knowledge that I've learn from this college, I am still able to change the world with my speeches or saving a patients life."

Em...that is a suggestion...I hope it helps :D and I hope you get in to Brown
SnowWolf   
Dec 25, 2009
Undergraduate / "Santa Claus" Common Application Essay [9]

This comment may be stupid or.... whatever because I've never write a application essay before, but look upon the requirements, don't you want to expand more on the issue of academic interests? Because colleges want to see if you are able to take on the pressure of the field of study that you want to enter in and won't just quit half way though your semester.
SnowWolf   
Dec 23, 2009
Writing Feedback / Some people are born with certain talents.. [3]

Hi there,
I would say that you essay seemed very good to me, but I think you would need more example to support your argument even though you may have not taken any side in the argument. Like for example you can write about a valedictorian of a very competitive high school, how he is able to take various all AP course and manage to get 100s in all of them.

I hope that helps :D
SnowWolf   
Dec 22, 2009
Faq, Help / Help to understand one of the rules (You get what you give!) [11]

This is about rule number 4, "You get what you give! Click "Unanswered" and read some essays by other people! When you see an essay that impresses you, offer lots of corrections and suggestions, and then ask that person to review YOUR essay. This is a great way to make friends and get help from lots of different students."

I found it very difficult to do that, since I am not a native english speaker and I've only learn some basic grammar. Does that mean I will get my account suspended very soon after I submitting couple of essays?
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