Essays / Design of newly constructed buildings - need ideas about a topic [4]

Some people think that design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by Governments. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

I don't have any ides about this topic. Help!!! give me hints to write this topic for IELTS exam . Thank you very much!!!!

Writing Feedback / IELTS: (people worked in 4 sectors in UK) DESCRIBE A TABLE [3]

The table showed how many people worked in 4 sectors in UK between 1998 and 2006 . In both years , the total workers divided into 5 different age profile had been a significant change .

In 1998, building sector had the largest number of people , having 112565 workers in the 18-25 age profile . Technology in the 56-65 age profile was notoriously the poorest number of people with about 800 workers . Education had the most popular workers from 26-35 age to 46-55 age. Hotel and catering does not have a remarkable change in the all age groups .

In 2006, technology was the greatest number of workers , having 454375 workers in 26-35 age profile . Education continued to be have many workers provided over 100000 workers in middle groups . Hotel and catering in all age groups was not near 20000 workers .

Give me advise . I always find a difficult way when I describe a table in ielts .

Writing Feedback / IELTS ESSAY : CHILDREN ARE INFLUENCED BY THEIR FRIEND'S OPINION . [4]

Indeed , I do not have many ideas when writing about this topic . Could you help me evaluate this essay and give me some ideas .

Topic : Children are influenced by their friend's opinion . In what ways are children affected by their friend ? How can parents make sure this influence is positive ? please provide support examples .

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More and more children nowadays tend to imitate the ideas of their friends. It is easy to know that there are many ways practical ways which children are induced by their friends. In fact , None of parents can know exactly whether these ideas have a great impact on their children's minds.

The first point of this influence is that children always seek their friends whom are similar to themselves in behaviors , attitudes , hobbies. They like to play many activities with their friends . They sometimes suppose their friends can understand what they are saying and even share whenever they drop into awful situations . Another point is that children always want to behave like mature aldults. They aim to listen their friends in order to elucidate problems without advices from their parents .

In order to be sure that children are influenced in positive ways by their friends . There are several efficient methods that parents should encounter . One of all these methods is to try to instruct children to classify how reasonable their friends's opinion are . Some opinions should be learnt as a life 's experienced while others should be eliminated . Another factor which is taken into the account is respectation . Parents should let children have free opinions . Trying to listen what they are saying is dispensable. For example , the percentage of the percentage of children in my country who listen to theirparents's advice can have a marvellous evaluation of their friends .

In conclusion , two resons are the most ways hapening to students . There are also many other methods helping parents to manage their children . I believe that children , themselves , will have a good choice to help them more mature in the future .

Writing Feedback / IELTS ESSAY , WHY DO MANY PEOPLE SUPPORT THE DEVELOPMENT OF AGRICULTURE ? [3]

Topic : Many people support the development of agriculture, such as actory farming and creation of new fruits and vegetables. Others oppose to the idea. Present both sides and give your opinion .

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The investment of agriculture has become a wide dicussed topic in our society recently. Some people believe that agriculture should be taken as a main energy part of life while others think technologies should be encouraged instead. In this essay, I will elaborate on this controversial phenomenon.

All people know that health and decease always have an important impact on agriculture process. Goverment recently take care so much about the quality of agriculture product such as food anf vegetables because people can not live without these. Moreover, buisiness related agriculture reaches to improve the economic in a country. It motivates the labor market and to reduce the unemployment happening in modern life. For example, some poor countrien where many farmers are the most living uses more than 75% for developing fields instead of growing advanced technolgies.

However, there are some other people who conclude that putting a lot money to agriculture is waste. It is essential to study and to find out many new facilities in order to adapt people's interest. Furthermore , the deficit of national budget in some poor countries where agriculture activities are developing appear clearly. The productivity is ineffecient. For instance, some products such as coconuts and annatto seeds have to be grown over ten years before harvesting.

In conclusion, some people are very convenient and happy with support agriculture while others are incovenient. In my view, I hope that agricultural activities always be one of crucial role the thrive their own countries.

Undergraduate / the Petroleum Program at University of Technology in Vietnam, ESSAY FOR TRANSFER [3]

Topic : there may be personal information that you want considered as part of your admission applicants . Write an essay describing that information . You might include exceptional hardships , challenges , or opportunities that have shaped or impacted your abilities or academic credentials , personal responsibilities , exceptional achievements or talents , educational goals , ways in which you might contribute to an institution committed to creating a diverse learning environment .

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People who expect to go abroad , have to study English for a long time . For me , however , learning English is a huge challenge that I have never met after getting into the Petroleum Program at University of Technology in Vietnam . And It has been being a great impact on my life and career in the future .

When I first came to the university , I thought It would be easier to follow because I am proud of having basic knowledge. In fact , I recognized that all subjects were taught in English . At that moment , I worried about myself because I knew that I studied French in high school and have never studied English before . The transition quickly changed than I thought so that I had to struggle many problems during the first year. At this time , many worst difficulties had come along with me . For instance , the following lessons were slower because of my extremely poor writing skills . I also cannot make friends at first , read books in English insufficiently and listen to teachers speaking so fast . Therefore , I always had trouble with my listening skill that I have to spend a lot of time to practice . As a result ,the barriers have remarkably affected my GPA . I was truly embarrassed and disappointed. Sometimes I wondered whether I can go through this problem and achieve my academic purpose . After thinking many times, with a zeal for my major , I decided to make a study plan myself .

Over the year , thanks to well disciplined , I significantly improved my English skills and I also obtained many wonderful effects . The most interest feature was communication which is a catalyst to succeed in many academic programs . I not only did assignments better, but also went to the library to read materials. Hence , my GPA has gradually been increasing from the second year to today.

Transferring to Texas Tech University is a better way in which I can meet much more new opportunities and challenges in an English environment. I will have a chance to know different cultures around the world and to be an engineer later. With the high educational level , Texas Tech University is a wonderful destination for many students, who want to have a good job in the future .

Although I have yet received any objective effect, I have a lot of experience in my life and more mature. I never regret the way I chose . I always expect to be better in the future. I do believe that Texas Tech university is a good condition to develop my potential academic success and other activities. I plan on being very active and involvement at Texas Tech university. Therefore, I hope that admission officers consider my self-direction.