Writing Feedback / Where do you like to learn foreign language, in your country or where it is spoken? [NEW]

Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; other have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken.

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Nowadays world is forming a global village by development of new technologies. On the earth, millions of languages are spoken by people. Every country and their sub-parts have different languages. It is very important to learn a foreign language to communicate with other people.

Present necessity is people should learn other language to trade, educate, travel and knowledge transfer. Everyone has different approaches toward learning foreign language. I will prefer to learn foreign language in that country in which it is spoken. There are many reasons to learn language in spoken country.

The main reason is lacking of self-confidence in our own country. In our own country, we might feel coward to talk foreign language. It is very difficult to use language which we have less knowledge. People feel shy and they have very low confidence to read, write and speak.

Teasing also cause to decrease self-confidence. As a example, if foreigners try to speak with us, we always try to respond them in their language ; in contrast with our friends, if he talks with a foreign language we answer in our mother tongue because of low self-confidence and fear.

The second reason is accuracy in speech. In our own country, we might learn language improper and less effective. In foreign country, we can capture, listen and use their language so fast. At start, it is challenging to deal with foreigner in their language, but no other choice.

It will build confidence and reduce fear. In additional, in the spoken country, we learn new words that we never heard in own country as well as correct use of grammar.

On other hand, though, we can learn fast foreign language where it is spoken but we have to get a chance to go there.

In conclusion, there are many benefits to learn language in the country in which it is spoken as get confidence, proper pronounce, correct use of grammar . Also we will not bother other people teasing or hesitation and get knowledge in every activity in the day.

Faq, Help / Thanking moderators and everyone who gave me helpful suggestion [28]

Day after tomorrow is my TOEFL-iBT. So want to say everyone thanks for helping me.
I know still I have to improve a lots. You all encouraged me so much to improve and understand the English. After exam, I will try to continue to write and give feed back here.

Specially thanks to Kevin who helped me a lots.

Thanks

Vaishali

Writing Feedback / Most beneficail discovery in the last 100 yrs; Transportation, Communication [20]

What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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Nowadays, technology has developed vast in all area like soil, water and air. If I try to see behind 100 years what was in my country? British emperor was ruling there. Most of family was poor, dependent and helpless. People were depending on agriculture and earning inadequate money. In these 100 year lots of changes occurred in my country. My country, India has got freedom as well as developed in many technologies in last 100 year. Discovery and development in transportation, communication, entertainment, education has been most beneficial for people in my country.

The first discovery in transportation made easier for people to travel fast and many places as well as transfer material for trade. In the last century, people were using bullet cart or bicycle for traveling; it takes too long time to reach destination. But now days people are using buses, cars, trains and some times airplanes for traveling purpose. This discovery made huge beneficiary on peoples life. It became easier to travel thousands of kilometer in short period. People started often met with each other.

The second discovery is in a telephone and an internet which beneficial to communicate for people in my country. In the 100 year back there were no or very less communication among people. People were depended on postal services or a person to convey message.

Invention of telephone and internet made peoples life comfortable and personal attachment. It provides fast and reliable service.
The third discovery in an entertainment. Discovery in radio, television and movies has great influence on people life. It is very useful for entertainment, news and advertisement.

This media effected on peoples living standard. As example as watching movies people started constructing beautiful houses and younger generation learning fashion and style.
Boundaries in society reduced and people doing inter cast marriage. This media used for spread news quickly and effectively.
All discovery helped to human for their easier life.

Writing Feedback / when and where would you like to go back in the past and why? [4]

If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would you go? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

This is really interesting and turning on my past memory. I know that my past time is not good as present. I suffered a very hard time because of mistake made by me and my family.

If I get chance I would like to go back to my higher secondary school. That period was dreaming and dealing with goal of own life as well as most important educational year.

My further study depends on I achived mark or grade in higher secondary school. This period plays important role to give direction of future. There are many reasons to go to back to higher secondary school .

The main reason is to correct my mistake. In my school life I had a dream that I will be independent person. I wanted to complete my parents dream which they have seen for me.

My family was very rich and engaged in many legal battle against the relatives, friends and government. Though we had sufficient agriculture land and income from those, that money goes to lawyer and other expenditure. I wanted to become a lawyer or police inspector or engineer which I can help to resolve our problem. Instead of doing handwork, I was always in dreaming and like to sleep too much. I never thought that I wasted my time in sleep and other unnecessary things. As a result I didn't get good marks and didn't get admission in engineering college. Now I have everything. I have money, peace and loving husband but still something is missing. I tryed to find that reason which indicate me that I am not able to help my parents and I didn't complete their dreams. If I get chance to go back to school, I will study hard and try to fulfill their dream.

Writing Feedback / leader you think is important [9]

India has a great history of leader who played crucial role in Indian revolution. Many leaders like Mahatma Gandhi, Jawallal Nehru, Shivaji Mahraj helped country to be protect from outside invasion. In all those leaders, an important leader for me is Savitribai Poole. She is not much famous in the world but she is definitely famous in India mostly in the Maharashtra State. She contributed in women education, widow remarriage and social reform. There are many reasons that I do believe that she is an important leader for me.

The main reason is she graduated in a difficult situation. When she was born, British was ruling in India and people were backward. People believed on religion and many superstition. In that time, women couldn't take any decision herself; man used to beat and gave trouble to women. In difficult social situation she had completed her education. She got married and after marriage continued her education. Though she had opposition of family and society, her husband Mr. Joytiba Poole who encouraged her to complete her further education.

The second reason, she was first female teacher in first female school. She not only educated herself, she also took part in teaching other women and gave direction to their life. In her time women were not allowed to go out and do any outside activities. Women treated as maid and dependent on family. Savitribai lead to liberate women, gave education and encourage them. Backward thinking people gave her trouble in many ways. They thrown egg, tomato, cow dung to her face but also she didn't stop her work.

The third reason is she took effort on removal of untouchability. She helped her husband in revolution for untouchable people. In her school she taught all cast student together and treated to lower cast student same as upper cast.

She had struggled for women for equal rights in male dominant society. Now people are changed and encouraging their daughter or sister for education. Nowadays we, women are free and going outside without a fear for education, shopping and all other reason because of her strive.

Writing Feedback / 'Digital life' -The 21st century has begun. What changes this new century will bring? [7]

During every era human being have discovered and invented new things. Human being have curiosity about world and human origination, as well as invented new things for humans comfort. In the 19th century humanity discovered the many things like car, airplane and so many faster way of transportation. In 20th century, innovation in technology like the computer, digital boosted as well as development in various field like medicine and science took place. As I believe that 21st century will be ahead among those development and give beneficial changes in our life.

The first change will bring in Robot mechanism. Nowadays, people are educated and want a carrier in mentally work rather than physical work and want to earn more money. Day by days it is very difficult to get people for regular work like cooking, cleaning and other physical hard work. So scientists have the challenge to find an artificial machine which is helpful to all kinds of work. Robot concept was introduced in 20th century but it will be carry out spectacularly in 21st century. Robot will help people in house, office and field. It will not only work physically but also it will use memory and take proper decision in difficult situation. Some time robot will help us in our mental work like calculation and solving difficult mathematical problem.

The second change, I am expecting is a adventure trip on another planet. Scientists are working very hard to find faster and cheaper way to another planet. Now only astronauts can possible to go to another planet but soon people will open their resorts and motels there. Now we like to visit Australia or Us or other places in the world but soon we should be expecting to go to another planet.

The third change, I am considering is the environment. The 20th century was faced a critical problem to the environment. All countries tried to control on various pollution and introduced people about global warming. The 21st century will find the solution on it. As technology is developed in all areas, it will be developed for improvement on environment.

In conclusion, the 21st century will bring many changes. It will be a beautiful world which will find not only comfort for human being, but also consider development of other creature on the earth. This century will bring adventure, peace and comfort for all.

Writing Feedback / It is impossible for a man to stay alone - groups are part of human's life [9]

Groups or organizations are an important part of some people's lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Nowadays every areas have organizations and groups. A group might be formed by small or large number of people but has a common interest or goal as an example group of manufacturing people, group of labor or group of religion. Groups are an important part of some people's lives. There are many reasons people like to join or stay with groups.

The main reason is human being like to form a society. As an simple example, everyone likes to stay with family and family is a one group, it might be small or large number of people. Second example is every person belongs to some religion, which we can say community and follow some rule and regulation. In society, different people stay together, some of them have good manners and some of them follows wrong ways like theft, murder. To constrain the bad manners and crime we need to form a community and establish some rules and regulations.

The second reason is humanity like to share experience and translate knowledge. Every person has an interest in some aspect. Some people like to art, some people like to physical activities. These interesting field's knowledge they like to share to other people. It can mostly possible when there is a group of common interest people as an example a group of camping people, a group of an engineer. That is why people form groups and translate their knowledge and experience with each other.

The third reason is getting success with working together. Groups are very important to people because many works can complete with groups only. In big organization, there are many small groups working together. As an example of manufacturing car, many groups involved in manufacturing car like a group of labors, a group of painters, a group of marketing peoples.

In conclusion, it is impossible to man to stay alone, group are part of human life. Human belongs many groups with knowingly and unknowingly. It helps people to spend their life with someone companion and share thoughts, knowledge and experience. Though some people like to stay alone because of their scare of dominant people and their discouragement but they are still belonging to some groups knowingly and unknowingly; they don't have other choice.

Writing Feedback / Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? [8]

students teachers relationship

Nowadays education is a very important in everyone's life. Someone gets chance to learn but someone unlucky. Whom gets chance to learn they should get proper guidance and a good teacher. Teacher plays an crucial role in students life, so teacher should be well educated, good knowledgeable and having capability to explain and teach subject which can understand them. It is my personnel opinion that students can judge their teachers in useful way. There are many reasons for my personnel opinion on above statement. Students to evaluate their teachers reasons involve teacher's teaching techniques, teacher's partiality and students understanding level.

The main reason is that each teacher's teaching style involves different techniques. Some teachers read just book without knowing students understanding level. Some teachers teach with smaller important point to most important point, some teachers teach with examples and jokes, some teachers teach with diagrams. The teacher assumes that their teaching techniques are good and understood very well by students but its not true. It depends on how students like the teacher's teaching method. If we allow students to evaluate their teacher they will point out the benefits or drawbacks their teaching techniques.

The second reason is teacher's partiality. Might be you are thinking what is partiality? Partiality means a teacher's behavior is different depending on students. Some students are favorites and some are dislike by teacher, so the teacher's behavior depends on his liking of some students more than others. Some students are really deserve for it because they are talented and obey teachers instruction but some student try to flatter their teacher. It affects the student morality. If school asked student to evaluate their teacher then teacher can treat each student same way.

In addition, each student level of understanding is different, so school can make divisions depending on student's understanding level and teachers' teaching methods. Some students are very sharp and some students have low understanding levels. If teachers teach subjects with methods that accommodate very low levels of understanding, intelligent students get bored and might be destructed. Evaluation of teachers from students may help schools to make proper decisions.

Furthermore, new ideas and new teaching methods will be introduced by students if school gives a chance student to evaluate their teachers. In evaluation process school can ask students their opinion about teacher and suggestions. Some teachers teaching techniques are very interesting but some students want more thing from their teachers. As an example my computer teacher taught very well from book but I was expecting more examples for home work which help me explore my logic.

In conclusion, to make successful educated students and to establish students and teachers friendly relationship with proper teaching styles and getting new teaching idea's from students and students level of understanding, schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers.READ BELOW