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Jan 10, 2013
Undergraduate / Religion, the watchful protector along the path; Harvard/ Topic of Choice [21]
After reading your essay, it didn't seem like you were just interpreting the same religion in a way different than you parents. It seemed as if you were taking on some sort of new religion. Knowing now that you simply possessed an alternative take on God, I can see the basis for your essay. It just wasn't immediately clear. Even with knowing that you have formulated a different perspective for seeing things, what am I supposed to take away from that? I know that things can be interpreted in different ways. While I think that open-topic essays should be unique, they should be unique in terms of idea rather than execution and content.
As far as my thoughts on religion:
I'm not really a religious person. I agree that each person should interpret things in the way they see fit. I don't really align with my parents religiously, but not in the same way as you. Religion isn't something I think about frequently - I just ignore it and embrace all the other aspects of life.
After reading your essay, it didn't seem like you were just interpreting the same religion in a way different than you parents. It seemed as if you were taking on some sort of new religion. Knowing now that you simply possessed an alternative take on God, I can see the basis for your essay. It just wasn't immediately clear. Even with knowing that you have formulated a different perspective for seeing things, what am I supposed to take away from that? I know that things can be interpreted in different ways. While I think that open-topic essays should be unique, they should be unique in terms of idea rather than execution and content.
As far as my thoughts on religion:
I'm not really a religious person. I agree that each person should interpret things in the way they see fit. I don't really align with my parents religiously, but not in the same way as you. Religion isn't something I think about frequently - I just ignore it and embrace all the other aspects of life.