Niam01
Jan 21, 2016
Writing Feedback / A Breakdown of Household Consumption [2]
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A breakdown of the proportion ofthe average of household consumptionspending local country in 1950 and 2010 is presented in pie charts. At first glance, the highest number of homely activityexpenditure were housing and ...
... as the subject of household activity [coma]need S,V .
... was the biggest number of householdconsumptionexpenditure .
However, 1950 [coma]consumedexpenses three times more housing than 2010.
However, education wasconsumed expenses in 2010 smaller than ...
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A breakdown of the proportion of
... as the subject of household activity [coma]need S,V .
... was the biggest number of household
However, 1950 [coma]
However, education was