Writing Feedback / TASk 2: Computer can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations [3]

Question: Computer can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations. Do you think your children should spend more time learning basic mathematics or advanced computer technology. Give your views.

Nowadays, computer plays crucial role in facilitating children to figure out the number. It can solve the problem of calculation, whether basic calculation or complex formula. I believe that focus on learning basic mathematics is very important to children because they will learn the formula and improve their brain.

The complicated formula is parts of basic calculation. There are combinations of arithmetic. Teachers teach systematically in schools that influence students to learn deeper about this concept and understand the function. For instance, the arithmetic curriculum is made for them based on age to make them understanding clearly. This helps them to solve the calculation manually. So they do not depends on tools to compute the number

Another fact is stimulating the brain. Counting the quantity trains our brain to memorize and think fast. They will remember some multiple numbers that has good effect on their brain. In addition, math stimulates logic and imagination. Some questions related to daily activity such as shopping and buying needs calculation need imagination to understand and push the brain to find the number. As a result, the brain works effectively.

In conclusion, it is undoubted learn manually has significant improvement for the children. children should learn the basic calculation to maximize and develop brain performance in growing age, and they can count the number without having to depend on computer.

Writing Feedback / Writing Task 2: Most successful inventions do not rely on complicated technology. [2]

Most successful inventions do not rely on complicated technology. In fact, some of the world's greatest invention have been very simple things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cutting-edge advance on user-friendly technology application is effective to attract consumers. I strongly agree that simply design and invaluable feature have a significant impact in successful of a new product.

There is no doubted that many new products accepted by the consumer because of simplifying the features Many high-tech companies compete to make the sophisticated design. Firstly, telephone manufacturing company such as Blackberry, Nokia and Siemens produced their cell phone with a keypad; however, Apple launched iPhone first generation with a minimalist design which has flat LCD and only a button, so the consumer was fond of this smartphone. This concept is breakthrough the handphone concept all the time; hence, others develop new gadget with less button and to standardize of the smartphone. Secondly, Camera Company invents mirror lens camera. This model is a combination of professional camera feature and compact camera design, so this camera has a professional features with less height and space on the bag that is easier to bring in some conditions. Many photographers, even professional, adore this new idea. So not only function is important but also the design has significant role as customer choice

However, many products, which is popular now, was difficult operation before. For Instance, computer had a great size and plenty of buttons at first launched. Although the machine size was same as a desk and only can few function such only calculation, many big companies bought high price.

In conclusion, I agree that The phenomenal invention is a combination of elegant design and easy to use tend to successful in the market. So companies innovate their product dramatically