Writing Feedback / Google's Got a Plan to Unify the World's Wi-Fi Hotspots [3]

Public Wi-Fi sometimes infuriates the users when it has a sudden lag even in the huge scale of any business places. According to this basis, Google attempts to get rid of the problems through establishing Internet service providers and hardware companies.

The technology of this new enterprise will ease the users as the system is independent on preconfiguration WiFi routers. Hence, users access the Internet using a single username and password without asking to the waiter in the restaurant anymore.

Following that, google has offered Internet connection facilitated through high-speed Google Fiber. Moreover, google has strive to alter New York City payphones with internet kiosk and undertaken the project with India whose state-owned rail system has been offered with Wi-Fi stations nationwide.

Google has prepared for this expansion at its best. Therefore, the company will seriously propose the Internet to public places all over the world.

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Writing Feedback / TED Talk Summary; Sandra Aamodt: Why dieting doesn't usually work [2]

Many have tried various kinds of diets but the weight they have lost always comes back. If you want to get your perfect body weight, started from now, you should give up dieting, stop worrying about your weight and eat mindfully.

Hypothalamus, the part of the body which regulates body weight provides system working to keep your weight stable as the condition changed. Therefore, It will respond to the weight loss to push your body back to what It is considered normal which means when you are fat or thin, your brain still react exactly the same to gain the normal weight. This system is called 'set point' and a successful dieting doesn't lower your set point.

To get a perfect body weight, you should do mindful eating. Give yourself permission to eat as much as you want, and then work on figuring out what makes your body feel good. Sit down to regular meals without distractions. Think about how your body feels when you start to eat and when you stop, and let your hunger decide when you should be done.

Writing Feedback / The comparison of water usage from several sectors in many different regions [NEW]

The pie charts show the comparison of water usage from several sectors in many different regions including San Diego, California, and other parts of the world. Overall, it seems clearly that high-development counties such as San Diego and California consume a great deal of water for residential purposes while the rest of counties mostly used it for agricultural functions.

Lofty use of household sector was in the San Diego three-fifth of the percentage followed by California used 39. Furthermore, agricultural resources depleted just seventeen per cent which was just around one in ten from California. At last, the remainder usage is for industry that only represented 23% and 33% in sequence for San Diego and California.

As the lowest utilisation of water in residential sector, the rest of the world showed merely 8 per cent. However, global regions consumed water for industry in the same point as San Diego County and agricultural sectors noticed the greatest used of water at 69 % from both San Diego and California.

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Writing Feedback / The table informs the figure of scholars who attend Secondary school [2]

IELTS writing task 1: Secondary School Attendance

The table informs the figure of scholars who attend Secondary school in different four types during one decade from 2000 to 2009. Overall, it is noticeable that community school is the one which increased dramatically among all of school categories that had tendencies to go down or just stagnant.

Community schools stood up at 12% as the lowest starting point. Afterwards, the proportion doubled in the middle of the decade and then these schools ended at the highest point in a half per cent. In contrast, Specialist Schools which had a same number as community schools in the beginning gradually decreased along the years and closed at one in ten.

Apart from the previous comparison, Grammar Schools and voluntary-controlled Schools seemed down gradually where the bigger decline was Voluntary-controlled Schools at 20% in the 2009 that was almost twice lower than the beginning point. Afterwards, Grammar School noted a gradual downward trend above ten per cent from 24% in 2000 to 20% in the closing year.

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