Writing Feedback / Should I read one book daily? Why? - Tai Lopez TED summary [3]

Tai lopez said that Mentors have the power to be the role model. In Hollywood, everybody wants something but not everybody gets what they want. He tried to find somebody who is going to show him how to make money. That was what his uncle suggested. Finally, he found his business mentor, mike steinback. He, mike steinback, was amazed when he knew that tai will learn more about what he knew without any compensation. Tai continues his journey in travelling, finding the mentors and reading which are his keys of success. About reading, he read a book per day. He found in his research of his path that mentor is the biggest predictor of the success in life.

Writing Feedback / Air pollution and planes. The government should look for a solution in the industrial sector instead [2]

Restricting air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution. Do i agree or disagree?

This world has modern transportation models these days. One of those is air transportation which is commonly known by using airplane. Some people think that it causes air pollution and it should be restricted, while the others believed that air travel has not big effect in air pollution problem, so that cannot be prohibited.

There are several reasons why air transportation should not be restricted. First, talking about air pollution, the airplanes use aviation fuel for their fuel. Aviation fuel is the lightest one. It is more like water from the others such as oil and gasoline, so it does not give big negative impact in pollution.

An airplane flies more than 30.000 feet from the ground. That area is more clear, so people do not get the bad effect from that.

The last is that factories are the biggest problem for world pollution, not only in air pollution but also in environment pollution. Building a factory should have a large area, so it is needed to cut so many trees and plants. It gives more dangerous side for all creatures. How about air pollution? When making some products, factories have to burn so many things, this burning process produces big smoke, and that is the big problem in air pollution.

However, some people think that air travel activities should be reduced. The reason is because there are so many airplanes fly around the world. Although a plane produces small air pollution, it will be different when a hundred planes travel around every day. More air pollution will be occurred.

In conclusion, an opinion said that restricting air transportation is the best way to reduce air damage while another opinion argues that it is not the biggest air problem so it cannot be restricted. I think that air travel is important, it will move everything faster than the other transportation models. The government should look more about factories activities. They should make so many rules for them to reduce more pollutions.

Writing Feedback / Problems of crime rise and how to solve those [2]

Crime is one of big problems in this world which bother peace on earth. These days, the crime level always increases year by year. In this article, I will explain about several reasons why it significantly rises and how kind-hearted people stand to avoid that.

In my opinion, there are 3 points of view of this problem. First, religion factor, there is no religion which teach its followers to do anything bad, especially crime. In the other hand, not all people do what their religion teach, even some of them shrink from their religion. And that is the biggest problem. When someone is far from his faith doctrine, he or she will get their freedom. Because no one even the religion forbid him or her. The more freedom he get the more he wants to do either good or bad.

The second is economic factor. Some countries just focus on their big cities economic. They open more job opportunities there. So people in remote areas are difficult to get the opportunities. There is an unequal economic development. Because of that problem, some people think that they have to do something illegal to reach their life. That is a crime.

The last is corruption which becomes a habit in government internal. Nowadays, government in all countries try to reduce poverty. They want to make equal economic system, but because of corruption, that fund which is sent to remote areas decrease significantly. So the people do not the situation and try to find a way to continue their life. And finally the crime condition is spread.

Several views to decrease crime rates are government should think people in remoter areas more than in big cities. They should make an equal economic system. Second, all people should hold their faith and teach that to their family. The last is helping each other. Rich people should help the poor and support him to improve his life.

In conclusion, although the crime rate always rises every year, there are several ways to reduce even to relieve that. As good people, we should bring peace to everyone. We should remind everyone we meet if he has bad behavior.

Writing Feedback / The educated people are afraid to show their creativity. Do schools kill it in them? [2]

Do schools kill creativity?

Sir Ken Robinson said that creativity is an important thing in literacy education. He told that if someone who was not prepared to be wrong he never came with anything original. Companies these days stigmatized mistake. National education systems set that mistakes were the worst thing that everybody could make. The result was that educating people were afraid to show their creativities. Every education system hierarchy of subjects and mathematics and languages were on the top of it. He thought that dance was as important as mathematics in education. According to UNESCO, in the next 30 years, more people worldwide will be graduating through education than since the beginning of history. He argued that there were three things about intelligence : Intelligence was diverse, Intelligence was dynamic, and the third was that intelligence was distinct.

Writing Feedback / Connection between language and culture. Communication is important. [4]

Language is the most important way of communication. Either human or other creatures speak with their language. People talk with language to know each other's mean. The world has so many languages and has so many different cultures too. And there is connection between language and culture.

Nowadays, in this modern era, people are able to go somewhere easily, from place to the other. They will meet other people who are native resident there. Everyplace have different cultures even in one country. Communication is important here. The native will tell us the resident habit. We cannot know what they told until we know their language or we ask someone to be our guide and translate all what the people said. Even we have same language with them but sometimes it has different meaning too. For example, In UK, people said that football is common sport that we see at the TV,but in The US football means rugby game. If an England goes to The US then talk about football with the native so he or she will explain about rugby. Soccer means football at there.

However, it is a little bit difficult to someone to know about other languages. This time, many people travel to many places around the world, from one city to other cities, from one country to the others even to other continents. So the simplest way is ask or hire someone who is native resident to be a guide.

Finally, we live in this world with other people who live near or far from us. In some situations we know that we have different culture with them, so we have to learn about them especially in culture. I think if we want to go somewhere we have to know their common language although we only know a little bit vocabularies.