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Decreasing Gun Violence and Death - weakness in this essay

2 - The first and second paragraph should be merged into one. A proper first paragraph successfully introduces the topic, something...

Writing FeedbackSean B - Nov 21, 2025Holt - Nov 21, 2025
Mot. Letter - ETH Zurich - Masters in Data Science - regarding intro & narrative

4 - And to note, only the last three para `Why ETH` is polished by AI not the first three. Moreover,...

Letterscosmicmnk - Nov 20, 2025cosmicmnk - Nov 22, 2025
Study plan research laboratory of Land Improvement and Management

4 - You do not neet to present your academic history in this case. Discuss the extent of your current field...

Scholarshiparri18 - Nov 20, 2025Holt - Nov 23, 2025
'Learning to Listen: How Places and People Shaped My Architecture' - Graduate Statement of Intent

2 - The paper does not properly represent a statement of intent. This is only usable as an undergraduate application essay....

Graduatesam1012 - Nov 20, 2025Holt - Nov 21, 2025
Forensic pathology - essay for NTU mbbs- personal statement

3 - PS:paragraph 2 and 3 of ver1&2 are same,only different are 1st&4th paragraph.I am willing to hear your advices and...

Undergraduatewelton - Nov 20, 2025welton - Nov 24, 2025
leadership and service - Women in Engineering - mastercard foundation

3 - sorry, I didn't give the full prompt on the essay. "Tell us about a current idea or project...

ScholarshipAattayo_sandra - Nov 19, 2025Aattayo_sandra - Nov 20, 2025
Drafting and Peer Review Child Abuse and Neglect

3 - @Holt Thank you so much I will work on this...

Research PapersMilo2024 - Nov 19, 2025Milo2024 - Nov 20, 2025
Correct use of the semicolon in a complex list with internal commas

2 - You have written what is known as a complex series in the 2nd version. These are a series of...

Grammar, Usagedavidevans - Nov 19, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR MSc CYBERSECURITY

2 - What community is this? If it is your local community, you need to justify the risks by showing...

Letterskbomber - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Nigeria ecosystem and education - Mastercard Foundation Scholarship Program

2 - There is no sense in including a reference to your father in the essay. It does not serve a...

ScholarshipMystro_Dynamic - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Transformation of Mining Challenge into Smart Mining in Developing Country

2 - As a Fulbright scholar applicant, there are several aspects that you need to discuss in your essay. These are:...

ScholarshipImamjafarsh - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
MSC Sustainable energy system. University of Edinburgh. Mastercard foundation - Future goals

2 - The first paragraph is actually a bit interesting to read. Then you lost the focus of the Future Goals...

ScholarshipAattayo_sandra - Nov 17, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
My education in Taiwan - Study plan for scholarship in division of global commerce

2 - This will not make sense to the reviewer. If your father is your sponsor, then what was the...

UndergraduateAlbert Owen - Nov 17, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
GKS-G 2026 Personal statement for AI related major

2 - Save this in-depth discussion for your Language Study Plan essay. It is misplaced here as it does...

GraduateJoaoMansur - Nov 16, 2025Holt - Nov 17, 2025
MSc in Sustainable Energy Systems - Mastercard University of Edinburgh

2 - Your reasoning is personal, which means it lacks the professional aspect that the program requires. Based on the prompt...

Scholarshipbiggy1621 - Nov 16, 2025Holt - Nov 17, 2025
GKS G - Personal statement Human AI Interaction interest

2 - The 2nd to 4th paragraphs are superfluous when applying for a masters degree acceptance. Try to focus on the...

Scholarshipkittyts - Nov 15, 2025Holt - Nov 16, 2025
Personal statement for HKUST - Chemical and Biology Engineering program

4 - Could you possibly shorten the essay from 600+ words to something between 250 and 300 words? The essay is...

UndergraduateTreeee - Nov 14, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
Common App: Gap Year Essay

2 - I am not sure about the prompt for your gap year essay. Normally, a gap year essay requests the...

Undergraduatetimetoshine - Nov 12, 2025Holt - Nov 13, 2025
Motivation letter for admission to master program in ESIEE Paris University

2 - The motivation letter of a masters degree course does not follow the same format as a college undergraduate presentation,...

LettersMiftaaj01 - Nov 12, 2025Holt - Nov 12, 2025
Global Markets, Local Creativities - Motivation Letter

2 - Avoid giving information that makes it sound like it came from your job application resume. This appears to...

ScholarshipSeera - Nov 11, 2025Holt - Nov 11, 2025
Preserving Our Underwater Treasures: A Comprehensive Strategy for Coral Reef Conservation

2 - Avoid using sentence anchors that do not move the paragraph forward by introducing useful information to the reader....

Research PapersRayvennaKnight98 - Nov 10, 2025Holt - Nov 10, 2025
Why is Juvenile Crime Increasing? Exploring essay rough draft

2 - Get to the point. Use the 12 year old reference. There is no need to get creative in...

Writing Feedbackthreeonetwo - Nov 10, 2025Holt - Nov 10, 2025
What do you think about Quitting Social Media

2 - Kindly proofread your work. You have a wrong word usage in this case, incorrect capitalization usage, and a...

Writing FeedbackSantanaWhite78 - Nov 9, 2025Holt - Nov 10, 2025
What Do You Do? Rethinking Work, Worth, and Second Chances

2 - We have a vocabulary problem here: Stigma - a negative social attitude, stereotype, or mark of disgrace...

Research Paperscopelandekevin - Nov 9, 2025Holt - Nov 10, 2025
Buying a house ? Not a chance.

2 - There is no valid thesis statement in this first paragraph. You seem to have immediately started your conversation there...

Research PapersSarahfitz2022 - Nov 9, 2025Holt - Nov 10, 2025
English Say no to gun violence

2 - I am confused by this sentence. What exactly are you trying to say? Your thought process and idea...

Writing FeedbackQwentin1234 - Nov 9, 2025Holt - Nov 10, 2025
The Value of Trade Jobs - High school Eng 102 Essay

2 - Since this is the introduction of the topic, all references and discussions in the first paragraph must be...

Writing FeedbackPAT2256896 - Nov 9, 2025Holt - Nov 9, 2025
Fordham essay on contributing to a community

2 - It will be very possible to discuss your advocacy for human dignity and your fight against injustice without referencing...

Undergraduateilovepenguins - Nov 8, 2025Holt - Nov 9, 2025
Gun Violence: Parent or Child?

2 - While the essay is very professionally written, there is a problem with citations within the text. Where some students...

Research PapersMVerboom - Nov 8, 2025Holt - Nov 9, 2025
Letter master's Stipendium Hungaricum - Finance

2 - These are generic, run of the mill responses that could refer to your interest in any school. These...

LettersThe_Paragon - Nov 8, 2025Holt - Nov 9, 2025
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