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Motivation letter for master's in Cybersecurity for CyberMAC scholarship program

2 - Refresh this presentation since this is a historical event that took place in your country's financial world. Describe...

Lettersasif033 - Nov 24, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Technical and analytical abilities - REFERENCE LETTER TO APPLY MASTER PROGRAM OR SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This does not sound like the country head wrote the reference letter at all. It appears to be more...

Lettersannhien - Nov 24, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Sustainable Engineering- Erasums Mundus

2 - You have not done enough research on the Erasmus Mundus Sustainable Engineering program. It shows in the way that...

Scholarshiptart_Ahmd - Nov 23, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Letter of Motivation for MS in Electrical Engineering at ETH Zurich

2 - Overall, the feel of the presentation is more of an academic and academic immersion biography rather than a professional...

LettersAditya_K - Nov 23, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Motivation Letter for Master in Artificial Intelligence at VU

3 - Thank you very much for the feedback!...

Lettersbadportfolio - Nov 23, 2025badportfolio - Nov 26, 2025
Some people say that " "The busier the city is, the more unhappy its people are." Agree or disagree?

3 - Your essay shows strong vocabulary and excellent command of grammar. However, in the 1st paragraph, you may consider removing...

Writing Feedbackpvy31211 - Nov 23, 2025tksyou - Nov 28, 2025
My first research paper about government wastage and how it affects our youth

2 - The first part of this paragraph is confusing and lacking in direction. It is scattered in terms of...

Research Papersronnie2ktraash - Nov 23, 2025Holt - Nov 23, 2025
The lessons we take from obstacles - UofT One idea application

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback, what are some ways I can make this approach more interesting, can I...

UndergraduateAliyaAAAA - Nov 23, 2025AliyaAAAA - Nov 23, 2025
The aerospace industry - My career goals in my motivation letter

2 - I am unable to offer a clearer review of your career goals with regards to its relationship to your...

Lettersjoanaafedzie - Nov 22, 2025Holt - Nov 23, 2025
Agricultural drones and more - Introduction for my motivation letter

2 - Are you applying for admission to a masters course? Or are you applying to continue your undergraduate studies as...

Lettersjoanaafedzie - Nov 22, 2025Holt - Nov 23, 2025
Drafting and Peer Review: Why Physician Assisted Suicide Should Be Common Practice

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your time and your review!...

Research PapersAmberMauck - Nov 22, 2025AmberMauck - Nov 23, 2025
Autobiography for Taiwan university application

2 - I would have to say that your autobiography lacks a clear direction that would show the reviewer how your...

UndergraduateAlbert Owen - Nov 21, 2025Holt - Nov 21, 2025
Decreasing Gun Violence and Death - weakness in this essay

2 - The first and second paragraph should be merged into one. A proper first paragraph successfully introduces the topic, something...

Writing FeedbackSean B - Nov 21, 2025Holt - Nov 21, 2025
Mot. Letter - ETH Zurich - Masters in Data Science - regarding intro & narrative

4 - And to note, only the last three para `Why ETH` is polished by AI not the first three. Moreover,...

Letterscosmicmnk - Nov 20, 2025cosmicmnk - Nov 22, 2025
Study plan research laboratory of Land Improvement and Management

4 - You do not neet to present your academic history in this case. Discuss the extent of your current field...

Scholarshiparri18 - Nov 20, 2025Holt - Nov 23, 2025
'Learning to Listen: How Places and People Shaped My Architecture' - Graduate Statement of Intent

2 - The paper does not properly represent a statement of intent. This is only usable as an undergraduate application essay....

Graduatesam1012 - Nov 20, 2025Holt - Nov 21, 2025
Forensic pathology - essay for NTU mbbs- personal statement

3 - PS:paragraph 2 and 3 of ver1&2 are same,only different are 1st&4th paragraph.I am willing to hear your advices and...

Undergraduatewelton - Nov 20, 2025welton - Nov 24, 2025
leadership and service - Women in Engineering - mastercard foundation

3 - sorry, I didn't give the full prompt on the essay. "Tell us about a current idea or project...

ScholarshipAattayo_sandra - Nov 19, 2025Aattayo_sandra - Nov 20, 2025
Drafting and Peer Review Child Abuse and Neglect

3 - @Holt Thank you so much I will work on this...

Research PapersMilo2024 - Nov 19, 2025Milo2024 - Nov 20, 2025
Correct use of the semicolon in a complex list with internal commas

2 - You have written what is known as a complex series in the 2nd version. These are a series of...

Grammar, Usagedavidevans - Nov 19, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR MSc CYBERSECURITY

2 - What community is this? If it is your local community, you need to justify the risks by showing...

Letterskbomber - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Nigeria ecosystem and education - Mastercard Foundation Scholarship Program

2 - There is no sense in including a reference to your father in the essay. It does not serve a...

ScholarshipMystro_Dynamic - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Transformation of Mining Challenge into Smart Mining in Developing Country

2 - As a Fulbright scholar applicant, there are several aspects that you need to discuss in your essay. These are:...

ScholarshipImamjafarsh - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
MSC Sustainable energy system. University of Edinburgh. Mastercard foundation - Future goals

2 - The first paragraph is actually a bit interesting to read. Then you lost the focus of the Future Goals...

ScholarshipAattayo_sandra - Nov 17, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
My education in Taiwan - Study plan for scholarship in division of global commerce

2 - This will not make sense to the reviewer. If your father is your sponsor, then what was the...

UndergraduateAlbert Owen - Nov 17, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
GKS-G 2026 Personal statement for AI related major

2 - Save this in-depth discussion for your Language Study Plan essay. It is misplaced here as it does...

GraduateJoaoMansur - Nov 16, 2025Holt - Nov 17, 2025
MSc in Sustainable Energy Systems - Mastercard University of Edinburgh

2 - Your reasoning is personal, which means it lacks the professional aspect that the program requires. Based on the prompt...

Scholarshipbiggy1621 - Nov 16, 2025Holt - Nov 17, 2025
GKS G - Personal statement Human AI Interaction interest

2 - The 2nd to 4th paragraphs are superfluous when applying for a masters degree acceptance. Try to focus on the...

Scholarshipkittyts - Nov 15, 2025Holt - Nov 16, 2025
Personal statement for HKUST - Chemical and Biology Engineering program

4 - Could you possibly shorten the essay from 600+ words to something between 250 and 300 words? The essay is...

UndergraduateTreeee - Nov 14, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
Common App: Gap Year Essay

2 - I am not sure about the prompt for your gap year essay. Normally, a gap year essay requests the...

Undergraduatetimetoshine - Nov 12, 2025Holt - Nov 13, 2025
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