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Average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, Portugal

2 - Avoid the use of run-on sentences in all the paragraphs you will be writing. Your summary overview should be...

Writing Feedbackttrangthao - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Writing Task 1: The percentage of Australian men and women did regular physical activity

2 - You have over written this task. The task 1 essay should not be more than 150-200 words. That is...

Writing Feedbacktanminh123 - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Second Language a Commitment - Essay Assignment

3 - Acquiring a second language involves more than just picking up a new ability; it's a commitment that calls for...

UndergraduateSampson L - Sep 13, 2024KelvinG - Sep 16, 2024
college app essay about my mom's battle with cancer

2 - What you went through does not qualify as an obstacle, challenge, setback, or failure. This is a personal tragedy...

Undergraduatesashay - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
A gap year that created Lexibridge

2 - Unfortunately, you cannot end this essay because you have not even completed a draft version. Your ideas are good,...

UndergraduateBbaaye - Sep 12, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
The benefits of working and learning from home

2 - While your essay falls within the word requirement for a 40 minute task, your response is totally incorrect for...

Writing Feedbackduchuy - Sep 12, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
COMPUTERS ARE OFTEN ARGUED TO BE THE MOST IMPORTANT INVENTION OF THE LAST HUNDRED YEARS

2 - The essay fails to respond to the given discussion prompt. The writer's opinion is incorrectly formatted. The response should...

Writing Feedbackmaiquynh - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Letter of Motivation for M.Sc Data Science Germany.

2 - This does not come across as a motivational letter. It will be seen mostly as an essay form of...

Lettersemnikkhil - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Ielts writing task 1: the water usage

2 - Formatting is the main problem that I see with this essay. A task 1 essay should be composed of...

Writing Feedbackpthngannnn - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think this is happening?

2 - The essay does not meet the minimum 250 word count requirement. At 207 words, the deductions that will be...

Writing Feedbacktthaorrr - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Feminism and Empowerment - scholarship requirement, your own leadership examples

2 - I am guessing that you are writing this leadership essay as a part of your Chevening scholarship application. Sad...

ScholarshipRanme231 - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
In today's competitive world, many families need both parents to go out to work

2 - You have written an essay with over 500 words. This cannot be completed during an actual task 2 test....

Writing Feedbackautisumi - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 12, 2024
Bachelor in Psychology - MOTIVATION LETTER ERASMUS MUNDUS (applying again)

2 - The essay covers only the reasons you are interested in the program and the foundation of that interest (unnecessary...

Lettersmaydreams - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 12, 2024
The map below show a conference centre as it now, and plans for its development.

2 - The essay should meet the 150 minimum word count to avoid any word shortage penalties that could lead to...

Writing FeedbackUyenle123 - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
Chat with friends - lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success

2 - The story is good, nut not appropriate for the prompt. It is not supposed to tell the story of...

Undergraduateazlan69 - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old

2 - Let me call your attention to your page formatting first. You need to make sure that your presentation is...

Writing Feedbackhgiang_khh - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
Psychology journey - statement of purpose for UGRAD

2 - The approach to the statement of purpose is too simple. There needs to be more depth to the personal,...

UndergraduateArmeen - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
A whirlwind of hobbies - Personal statement

3 - @Holt Hi, Thank you for responding so quickly. I am choosing to complete the "essay of choice" option...

Undergraduatewhoopdeedoo - Sep 9, 2024whoopdeedoo - Sep 10, 2024
Dear Future Roommate and Human Alarm Clock - Stanford Roommate Essay

2 - Well, this is definitely a fun way of introducing yourself and your culture to your potential roommate. However, there...

Undergraduateaadij - Sep 8, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
(-1) + (+1) isn't equal 0. Personal statement

2 - I am not sure what this personal statement is all about. What prompt are you responding to? I have...

UndergraduateYoyo_mahgop - Sep 7, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2 - Prison sentences

2 - During a 40 minute writing task, the maximum number of words that should be written is 300 words. It...

Writing Feedbackyamitohikari2217 - Sep 7, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
The diagram illustrates various stages about making material called concrete canvas into a storage.

2 - You incorrectly described the process and in effect, failed the test from the onset. Material was created (concrete...

Writing Feedbackieltsplss - Sep 6, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
The graph shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.

3 - There are some grammar mistakes as far as I can judge. Overall, it looks good for the first paragraph....

Writing Feedbacklinh123457 - Sep 6, 2024LamiaNoshin - Sep 7, 2024
Ielts task 2: topic: the reasons for crime

2 - A more effective representation of this would have been to agree with the former opinion that was presented....

Writing Feedbackhungnothung - Sep 6, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Molecular Biology, Biomedicine, and Clinical Research (BMBIC) -Motivation letter for PhD application

2 - I believe that the case study you have chosen to present as having inspired you is too old to...

Lettersmidori13 - Sep 5, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Some people think that schools should teach young students about the role of money.

2 - The essay is too short. It does not meet the 250 minimum word count. There is a big possibility...

Writing Feedbackhongha166 - Sep 5, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
The Good Physician - PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS

3 - Thank you so much for the corrections and compliment i will make sure to work on those you point...

ScholarshipLilly FLOWER - Sep 5, 2024Lilly FLOWER - Sep 7, 2024
IELTS Task 2: An increasing number or professional leaving their own poorer countries

2 - Kindly remember that there is a minimum 250 word count for the task 2 essay. Failure to meet that...

Writing Feedbackmmatmmee - Sep 5, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Personal Statement for GKS-U 2025 - Business Administration Major

3 - Thank you for your response! The concrete business plans are included in the study plan so I decided it's...

Scholarshippgesbn - Sep 5, 2024pgesbn - Sep 6, 2024
Agree - Disagree Topic Government

2 - While you did respond to the question being asked, you did so using the incorrect format. This will...

Writing FeedbackPhuongle123 - Sep 4, 2024Holt - Sep 4, 2024
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