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Friendship: Is It Really THAT IMPORTANT? - UBC Personal Profile

2 - The essay does not come off as explaining why friendship is important to you. Instead, it reflects that communication...

UndergraduateEleana - Feb 15, 2025Holt - Feb 15, 2025
Communication - What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your study programme?

4 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback! The character limit for what i can write is 1200 character...

Scholarshiplotuslilly - Feb 14, 2025lotuslilly - Feb 15, 2025
The two tables compare the number of exchange students from Europe to Australia and from Australia

2 - You have overwritten this analytical essay. The word requirement for this essay, that falls within the 20 minute writing...

Writing Feedbackbaoanh97 - Feb 14, 2025Holt - Feb 15, 2025
Social stereotype - Yale Young Global Scholars

3 - @TracySifaMagambo I don't think this text is suitable for the question you had to answer. Throughout the whole first...

ScholarshipTracySifaMagambo - Feb 13, 2025clauana - Feb 15, 2025
Proposal Essay: Is Social Media a Negative Impact on Mental Health?

4 - You should first make your opinion on the essay prompt clear. Only then should you bring in contextualization with...

Writing Feedbackchr2420661 - Feb 12, 2025clauana - Feb 17, 2025
Think Tanks and Promotion of Bilateral Collaborations - Future Plan - GKS-G

3 - @Holt I appreciate the insight and will rewrite it....

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 10, 2025clauana - Feb 13, 2025
Study Plan for Political Science Master's Degree - GKS-G

4 - @Holt I've rewritten part of this essay trying to align it with your advice. If you have time, please...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 9, 2025clauana - Feb 15, 2025
GKS-G - Language Study Plan - My road with korean language

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback!...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 9, 2025clauana - Feb 12, 2025
Master of Public Policy (MPP) - Manaaki scholarship

6 - @Febri0402 Looking at your essay, I agree with other commentors. Rather than describing what you want to learn, you...

ScholarshipFebri0402 - Feb 8, 2025ngai07 - Feb 20, 2025
My cultural identity - Temple University Personal Statement/ College essay

3 - That was a great essay from my point of view. You got the reviewer to smoothly understand your personal...

Undergraduaterintezar - Feb 8, 2025clauana - Feb 9, 2025
IELTS WT2 - Socialising online or in person

3 - Hii Gwen, I feel like your first paragraph lacks a real sense. It's too short and vague without...

Writing FeedbackGwenVu - Feb 7, 2025clauana - Feb 10, 2025
A circus artist and a scout - GKS graduate program personal statement

2 - There are 2 considerations that should help you decide the focus of your discussion. These are: 1. Are...

Scholarshipgabucee - Feb 6, 2025Holt - Feb 7, 2025
Argument research paper: Community Fluoridated Water and Policy Reform

2 - The research paper effectively transmits the researched information to the readers. However, merely delivering this information is not enough....

Research PapersPayne186 - Feb 5, 2025Holt - Feb 6, 2025
"it ain't over till it's over" - gks personal statement draft

3 - @Holt Thankyou for your advice.. I'll correct my mistakes sir....

ScholarshipIanKookoo - Feb 3, 2025IanKookoo - Feb 4, 2025
LPDP Essay - Personal statement and paragraph about background reasons and skills

2 - When applying for any scholarship, you must provide a strong academic foundation in terms of research skills, academic achievements,...

Scholarshipbonaventura_bb - Feb 3, 2025Holt - Feb 4, 2025
Applying scholarship GKS essay in teaching language field

2 - One of the main questions that your essay should address is "Why study a Masters in French in Korea...

Scholarshipnguyenleminh - Feb 3, 2025Holt - Feb 4, 2025
Public Admin - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? AUSTRALIAN AWARDS ESSAY

2 - You need to improve your academic choices discussion. Provide more details beyond the cut and paste information from the...

ScholarshipMaxie0326 - Feb 1, 2025Holt - Feb 2, 2025
From Acting to Action: How Theater Shaped My Path to Management - UBC Personal Profile

3 - Hi Eleana, your essay seems a little off topic from the prompt. You begin your first paragraph with...

UndergraduateEleana - Feb 1, 2025clauana - Feb 11, 2025
Write a short story. Imagine you wake up in a completely different city

3 - @Holt I appreciate your detailed feedback and will apply your practical advice to make the story more engaging. I...

Writing FeedbackChuyen97 - Feb 1, 2025Chuyen97 - Feb 2, 2025
Education in Biology - to achieve scholarship in DGIST

5 - Your study plan is strong, but it could benefit from improved flow, clarity, and conciseness....

Scholarshipabdurraffidaffa7 - Feb 1, 2025Vault - Feb 22, 2025
I am a 17-year-old girl trying to figure the world out as she goes - common app essay

2 - Are you by any chance writing about a topic of your own creation? That is the only reason I...

Undergraduatethelatecomer - Jan 31, 2025Holt - Jan 31, 2025
The traditions and customs relating to the food we eat and the way we eat are changing.

2 - You have tried to put together an intelligent sounding essay which failed to deliver. While you chose to use...

Writing Feedbackhienphuongxinh - Jan 29, 2025Holt - Jan 30, 2025
Guarding Against Online Shopping Scams

2 - These are considered phrase fillers. These do not help to move your paragraph forward. There is no...

Writing FeedbackPadin - Jan 26, 2025Holt - Jan 26, 2025
The graph gives information about employment categories of a country in 2003 and 2013.

2 - You must do a correct image identification in the summary overview to achieve maximum scoring consideration for that section....

Writing Feedbackisoldelin - Jan 26, 2025Holt - Jan 26, 2025
CAM 19: The proportion of the urbanites in 4 selected Asian countries

2 - Remember that you have a 29 minute writing time limit for this analytical report essay. Therefore, the advised length...

Writing Feedbackcinnamonanh - Jan 22, 2025Holt - Jan 22, 2025
Epidemiology and politics - Summer science program application Highschool

2 - The response is very technical and professional. You have developed a good summary of the information required within a...

Undergraduateaneetsandhu - Jan 21, 2025Holt - Jan 22, 2025
Fossil fuels are killing our planet - ENG 102 MLA format

2 - I think it would be best not to assume that the reader is automatically familiar with the effects of...

Research PapersDevon1542 - Jan 21, 2025Holt - Jan 21, 2025
Breaking The Chain - An essay on the opioid epidemic and what we can do to fix it

2 - I hope that you have presented the draft of the essay for our review. This is nowhere near the...

Writing Feedbackrac2209 - Jan 19, 2025Holt - Jan 19, 2025
The Immoral Implications of Animal Testing and its Necessity in the Advancement of Medicine

2 - I am not sure what paper format you are supposed to be using for this paper. The way that...

Research Papersprincess23 - Jan 18, 2025Holt - Jan 19, 2025
Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.

2 - This is an over discussed essay that provides too many words to actually accomplish within 40 minutes. The essay...

Writing Feedbackquan2222 - Jan 18, 2025Holt - Jan 19, 2025
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