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Starting a music club at my school - Waterloo AIF question #2 - Community Involvement

2 - This leadership statement is too self focused. There is a lack of teamwork, consideration of the needs of the...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025
My Passion for Music - Waterloo AIF question #1

2 - The passion aspect is a bit thin in this presentation. It started off on the wrong foot as well....

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025
Undervalued at a hackathon - Waterloo AIF Question #3 - Experience Reflection

2 - While your story shows how you eventually recovered from being undervalued by your teammates, it took time for you...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025
Data analytics - KUAS enrollment essay - Why KUAS ties in with my future goals

2 - The second paragraph does not justify what will make you a good candidate for a student slot at KUAS....

Undergraduateumohon - Oct 11, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025
The Sound of His Steps - Common App Essay

2 - Please do not ask me which aspects you should cut from this essay because it is a personal decision...

UndergraduateThienAnhLe - Oct 11, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025
It is popular in many parts of the world that young people are doing research on their ancestry

2 - Do not make any reference to age in your restatement as the original prompt did not do this....

Writing Feedbackapolaza - Oct 10, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025
VIDEO RECORDS ARE A BETTER WAY TO LEARN ABOUT THE WAY OTHER PEOPLE IN THE WORLD LIVE THAN DOCUMENTS

2 - The prompt restatement is thoroughly incorrect and does not reflect the idea behind the original prompt correctly. There is...

Writing FeedbackBao Anh - Oct 10, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025
From Bangladesh to the US - personal statement for Hunter College TESOL grad school program

2 - You should not be referencing other languages in the personal statement. While you are using this to prove your...

Graduatesheriecherie - Oct 8, 2025Holt - Oct 9, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Essay on unwinding mind with video games or outdoor activity.

2 - The prompt restatement is incorrect. As the writer you are supposed to reframe the original topic, without changing the...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
NATIONAL TAIWAN UNIVERSITY AUTOBIOGRAPHY 'Ten fingers will all have different lengths'

2 - A personal statement should, in my opinion, not be more than 300 words in length. That is because the...

Undergraduatesnowblossoms - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
Younger or Older Leaders in Corporations? IELTS Writing Task 2

2 - There are 2 immediate errors that will fail this essay in terms of preliminary Task Accuracy requirements. The first,...

Writing Feedbackmquan1997 - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
Standing Behind, Seeing Beyond (COMMON APP PERSONAL STATEMENT)

2 - One thing that the applicants always make a mistake with when writing the common app essay is that they...

UndergraduateThienAnhLe - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
Passion for Game Development - Waterloo AIF Question 4 - Goals for Waterloo

2 - I reviewed your statement response several times and came to the same conclusion each time. The provided information responds...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 7, 2025
GKS-U 2026 Personal Statement - Food Science and Food Engineering

2 - Your realization comes across as a plagiarized version of the John Stewart Mills ethical theory related to Ulitarianism. Yes,...

Scholarshipgeulsseth - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 7, 2025
TOPIC: Technology in education

2 - You will not gain any points for this statement because all you did was repeat the writing instructions....

Writing Feedbackquasal - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 6, 2025
7.5 IELTS OVERALL! - IELTS WARRIOR

3 - @mquan1997 I did not remember honestly. But I tried to keep my essay simple, clear and easy for examiners...

Student TalkMr Calma - Oct 6, 2025Mr Calma - Oct 7, 2025
Undergraduate dental education in Sudan - Chevening Leadership

2 - You discussed your teaching experience. A teacher is not the same as a leader. Yes, you seem to be...

Scholarshipririavera - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 6, 2025
GLOCAL PROGRAMME - CREATIVE INDUSTRY POLICY AND ECOSYSTEM

2 - The main problem that I see with this essay is that it does not address your educational background. How...

Undergraduateu_utmaut - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 6, 2025
My Relationship with Glasses - Common App Essay

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback! Just one question: When you say to totally skip the pre-k reference, do you...

Undergraduatemathauntie - Oct 5, 2025mathauntie - Oct 5, 2025
Diverse social networks - Chevening Relationship building and influence

2 - Focus on your relationship with iRise Hub. Expand on the background of the meeting. What was the importance of...

Scholarshiparri18 - Oct 5, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Many educational obstacles - Chevening leadership essay

2 - Kindly review the prompts again. You should focus on a single leadership problem that best highlights your leadership skills,...

Scholarshiparri18 - Oct 5, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Essay for bachelor degree in a German university - data analyst

3 - @Holt I'm applying for International Excellence Scholarship which targets international applicants with excellent academic and extracurricular achievements. I'd really...

Scholarshipmanifesting - Oct 5, 2025manifesting - Oct 5, 2025
Before humans die - (GKS_U) 2026 Media essay

2 - The essay is too imaginative in approach when it should be more direct and informative. I understand that you...

Undergraduatehinuyenthihue111 - Oct 4, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Playing freely after school or doing more organised - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - You are missing a verb here. What is it that the students should follow? More organized what? The...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Oct 4, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter in Environmental Engineering

2 - The problem with this application essay is that your high school education does not support your choice of college...

ScholarshipAndyNJ - Oct 3, 2025Holt - Oct 4, 2025
curly hair main common app essay

2 - I am not sure what common app prompt you are responding to with this essay so I can give...

Undergraduateclaudiacorsini - Oct 3, 2025Holt - Oct 4, 2025
Topic: Television's relevence

2 - The task 2 essays do not and will not ask you to come to a conclusion in your presentation....

Writing Feedbackquasal - Oct 1, 2025Holt - Oct 2, 2025
Topic: Freedom of speech on social media

2 - Please do not post essays that are collaborative in presentation at this forum. That is because I will be...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Sep 29, 2025Holt - Sep 30, 2025
Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development.

2 - The first reason that you will receive a failing score with this sort of writing is because you have...

Writing Feedbackdavies7 - Sep 29, 2025Holt - Sep 30, 2025
A plastic sheet - Chevening leadership essay

2 - When Chevening speaks of leaders in their home country, they refer to people who are contributing to the development...

ScholarshipSRaihan - Sep 28, 2025Holt - Sep 30, 2025
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