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My Relationship with Glasses - Common App Essay

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback! Just one question: When you say to totally skip the pre-k reference, do you...

Undergraduatemathauntie - Oct 5, 2025mathauntie - Oct 5, 2025
Diverse social networks - Chevening Relationship building and influence

2 - Focus on your relationship with iRise Hub. Expand on the background of the meeting. What was the importance of...

Scholarshiparri18 - Oct 5, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Many educational obstacles - Chevening leadership essay

2 - Kindly review the prompts again. You should focus on a single leadership problem that best highlights your leadership skills,...

Scholarshiparri18 - Oct 5, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Essay for bachelor degree in a German university - data analyst

3 - @Holt I'm applying for International Excellence Scholarship which targets international applicants with excellent academic and extracurricular achievements. I'd really...

Scholarshipmanifesting - Oct 5, 2025manifesting - Oct 5, 2025
Before humans die - (GKS_U) 2026 Media essay

2 - The essay is too imaginative in approach when it should be more direct and informative. I understand that you...

Undergraduatehinuyenthihue111 - Oct 4, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Playing freely after school or doing more organised - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - You are missing a verb here. What is it that the students should follow? More organized what? The...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Oct 4, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter in Environmental Engineering

2 - The problem with this application essay is that your high school education does not support your choice of college...

ScholarshipAndyNJ - Oct 3, 2025Holt - Oct 4, 2025
curly hair main common app essay

2 - I am not sure what common app prompt you are responding to with this essay so I can give...

Undergraduateclaudiacorsini - Oct 3, 2025Holt - Oct 4, 2025
Topic: Television's relevence

2 - The task 2 essays do not and will not ask you to come to a conclusion in your presentation....

Writing Feedbackquasal - Oct 1, 2025Holt - Oct 2, 2025
Topic: Freedom of speech on social media

2 - Please do not post essays that are collaborative in presentation at this forum. That is because I will be...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Sep 29, 2025Holt - Sep 30, 2025
Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development.

2 - The first reason that you will receive a failing score with this sort of writing is because you have...

Writing Feedbackdavies7 - Sep 29, 2025Holt - Sep 30, 2025
A plastic sheet - Chevening leadership essay

2 - When Chevening speaks of leaders in their home country, they refer to people who are contributing to the development...

ScholarshipSRaihan - Sep 28, 2025Holt - Sep 30, 2025
UK pollutants chart writing

2 - I am sorry but this report will get an automatic failing score because it failed to meet the 150...

Writing FeedbackEdukid2309 - Sep 27, 2025Holt - Sep 28, 2025
The negative impact that AI has on contemporary society

2 - Hi, I would be more than happy to review your research paper. The problem is that you forgot to...

Writing Feedbackkganci - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Natural aptitude or skill / values and behavior - Questbridge essay

2 - Do not give the reviewer a lesson in word definition and pronunciation. He will view that as insulting and...

Scholarshiplyassal - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Creating spaces outside the classroom - Questbridge essay

2 - Reviewers prefer when the students do not use exaggerated terms such as "I love". Since this is an academic...

Scholarshiplyassal - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981

2 - The summary overview lacks clarity. There should be a reference to the number of pie charts that were provided....

Writing Feedbacknguyenquynhquyen - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Suggestions needed: Statement of Purpose for Erasmus Mundus Master's Program in Public Policy (MAPP)

2 - As a masters degree student, your statement of purpose should clearly explain the next phase of your academic plans...

Graduatemsamfromjava - Sep 22, 2025Holt - Sep 22, 2025
Unexplainable universe - short application essay

2 - Your question is confusing and without direction. The only clear reference is that you want to ask a question...

ScholarshipSanaa224 - Sep 21, 2025Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Crisis in Business

2 - Are you familiar with the idiom; "There is no I in Team"? Read your reference paragraph. It is full...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 21, 2025Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Looking for Volunteer Friends - Chevening - Relationship Buildings

2 - The minute I read the word "community' in your essay, I knew that you had misunderstood the topic requirement....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025Holt - Sep 20, 2025
The Psychological Impact of Parasocial Relationships on Young Adults

2 - The professor could take one look at the way this paper was written and decide that it was written...

Research PapersAndreySolera - Sep 17, 2025Holt - Sep 20, 2025
How to improve road safety? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - You may gotten over excited by the topic that was provided for this exercise. It is overwritten at 377...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 17, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Mental health in Indonesia - Chevening - Career Plan and Impact

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll improve my essay based on your suggestions and questions....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 17, 2025FutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025
My Networking Story From Frozen Logistics to Fresh Water Solutions - Chevening Networking Essay

2 - Do not bore the reviewer with irrelevant details. There is a reason that you were given writing questions...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Education and business - Chevening Leadership Essay

2 - Try to use a more recent leadership action that you had to take. Your references are far too old...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - People should follow the local customs and traditions

2 - Your opening statement is not only off the mark in terms of restating the original concept of the prompt,...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening Networking Essay - Bridging People Through Projects

2 - Do not confuse the discussion by presenting you previous career. Focus on your current career that you hope to...

Scholarshipoutstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Leading CSR in the Midst of Natural Disaster

2 - The discussion is too fast. You need to slow down and be more specific. Since we live in the...

Scholarshipoutstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening - Teacher from Indonesia

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll recall my other experiences and rewrite another essay on leadership....

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