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UK pollutants chart writing

2 - I am sorry but this report will get an automatic failing score because it failed to meet the 150...

Writing FeedbackEdukid2309 - Sep 27, 2025Holt - Sep 28, 2025
The negative impact that AI has on contemporary society

2 - Hi, I would be more than happy to review your research paper. The problem is that you forgot to...

Writing Feedbackkganci - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Natural aptitude or skill / values and behavior - Questbridge essay

2 - Do not give the reviewer a lesson in word definition and pronunciation. He will view that as insulting and...

Scholarshiplyassal - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Creating spaces outside the classroom - Questbridge essay

2 - Reviewers prefer when the students do not use exaggerated terms such as "I love". Since this is an academic...

Scholarshiplyassal - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981

2 - The summary overview lacks clarity. There should be a reference to the number of pie charts that were provided....

Writing Feedbacknguyenquynhquyen - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Suggestions needed: Statement of Purpose for Erasmus Mundus Master's Program in Public Policy (MAPP)

2 - As a masters degree student, your statement of purpose should clearly explain the next phase of your academic plans...

Graduatemsamfromjava - Sep 22, 2025Holt - Sep 22, 2025
Unexplainable universe - short application essay

2 - Your question is confusing and without direction. The only clear reference is that you want to ask a question...

ScholarshipSanaa224 - Sep 21, 2025Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Crisis in Business

2 - Are you familiar with the idiom; "There is no I in Team"? Read your reference paragraph. It is full...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 21, 2025Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Looking for Volunteer Friends - Chevening - Relationship Buildings

2 - The minute I read the word "community' in your essay, I knew that you had misunderstood the topic requirement....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025Holt - Sep 20, 2025
The Psychological Impact of Parasocial Relationships on Young Adults

2 - The professor could take one look at the way this paper was written and decide that it was written...

Research PapersAndreySolera - Sep 17, 2025Holt - Sep 20, 2025
How to improve road safety? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - You may gotten over excited by the topic that was provided for this exercise. It is overwritten at 377...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 17, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Mental health in Indonesia - Chevening - Career Plan and Impact

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll improve my essay based on your suggestions and questions....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 17, 2025FutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025
My Networking Story From Frozen Logistics to Fresh Water Solutions - Chevening Networking Essay

2 - Do not bore the reviewer with irrelevant details. There is a reason that you were given writing questions...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Education and business - Chevening Leadership Essay

2 - Try to use a more recent leadership action that you had to take. Your references are far too old...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - People should follow the local customs and traditions

2 - Your opening statement is not only off the mark in terms of restating the original concept of the prompt,...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening Networking Essay - Bridging People Through Projects

2 - Do not confuse the discussion by presenting you previous career. Focus on your current career that you hope to...

Scholarshipoutstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Leading CSR in the Midst of Natural Disaster

2 - The discussion is too fast. You need to slow down and be more specific. Since we live in the...

Scholarshipoutstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening - Teacher from Indonesia

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll recall my other experiences and rewrite another essay on leadership....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 16, 2025FutureLeader - Sep 17, 2025
RNA biology - phd position in germany motivation letter

3 - Merged: im applying for PhD at IMPRS Germany. do a critical analysis of Motivation letter for me. ...

LettersRaania - Sep 15, 2025Raania - Oct 4, 2025
GKS 2026 essay, University Track. Mechanical Engineering.

5 - You don't need to downgrade one area like education quality to elevate another. Also, instead of listing a bunch...

ScholarshipMarty - Sep 15, 2025hinuyenthihue111 - Oct 4, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Bar chart about global mobile phone sales of five brands in various years.

2 - Kindly remember that you need to properly format the report as that is a part of your task accuracy...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Sep 14, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
So my speaking and writing skill is considered low, and i need some advice, BUT

3 - Hi, I also wasn't born with English and previously graduated from a boarding school. I feel the same way...

Student Talkglorriee - Sep 13, 2025FutureLeader - Sep 16, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Essay on influence of social media on today's youth in career development.

2 - No. It is not appropriate because it does not contain any information that properly highlights how the body of...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Sep 12, 2025Holt - Sep 14, 2025
Chevening Essay - Building Network in the Creative Industry

2 - As per the discussion instructions, you need to present information about your strongest network building collaboration. Just one. Not...

Scholarshipu_utmaut - Sep 12, 2025Holt - Sep 14, 2025
Extent of active participation in Ireland as a student Essay for Goi-Ies scholarship

2 - The essay must be revised. You are quite fond of using long winded introductions that do not really help...

ScholarshipIykeibe - Sep 11, 2025Holt - Sep 14, 2025
Are museums and art galleries still important? - Opinion Essay - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - Two things are wrong in your prompt rephrase paragraph. First, you misspelled artifacts. Second, you used the phrase "I...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 11, 2025Holt - Sep 14, 2025
Cultural immersion - As a GOI-IES scholar, how will you extend yourself beyond your project/studies

2 - I believe that you should have 2 methods by which you will introduce your own culture and traditions to...

ScholarshipIykeibe - Sep 10, 2025Holt - Sep 14, 2025
A finance professional - Government of Ireland International Scholarship

2 - What is this? The reviewer is not familiar with it and he will not take the time to...

ScholarshipIykeibe - Sep 10, 2025Holt - Sep 13, 2025
Team vs. Solitary activities - Opinion Essay - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - You cannot firmly agree with the statement as you are not provided with a solid opinion discussion instruction....

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 9, 2025Holt - Sep 13, 2025
PERSONAL ESSAY - STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM (Chemistry Department & Internship Opportunity)

2 - Your background is quite strong in terms of academics. I would like to see the same strengths or, even...

Undergraduaterelovikyl - Sep 9, 2025Holt - Sep 13, 2025
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